VeeBa FF 'King Of my world' Part 45 pg 109 - Page 15

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"King of my world"

Part_12

Baldev went away, she stood still. He then returned and took her

hand

Baldev; mere saath aa..pr ankhen mat kholna.

he took her a few steps ahead and then said

Baldev; aankhen khol.

She opened her eyes
,
there was a message written with colored

chalk,two colors were used and one color was in excess the other

used for a few letters, it was under a shade so the rain could not

wipe it off, it read

" meri zindagi me tha andhera, us andhere me tu ne bhara ujala,
tere mulayam ye haath, bhujate hen mere dil ki aag
teri moti jesi aankhen, badhati hen dekhne ki maang
tere meve jese honth, bhujate hen mere man ki pyas
tujhse milne ki aas, le aati he mujhe tere pass
kya kahun tumse dilruba, tu he meri sab se badi ardaas"

Veera saw the letters in pink color standing out, tears formed in her

eyes. She read the whole thing and was touched even more, Baldev

hugged her from behind.

Baldev; I..love..u... (he said close to her ear in his intense voice slowly

and subtly) tu meri jaan hai veera, mera sabse bada khazana, tere

liye me kuch bhi chod skta, kuch bhi tod skta hun, kuch bhi mita

skta hun, khud bhi mit skta hun tere liye, i love u veera, tu nhi aati

to shayad tera sher ghoot ghoot kr mar,

she turned quickly and put her hands on his lips.

Veera; chup kr..esi baten mat kr..maren tere dushman

Baldev put his hand on her lips.

Baldev; oye kamli..khud ko kyun baduayen de rhi he..meri wadi

dushman bhi to tu hi he..aur tera wo veer

Veera smiled,

Baldev; acha, ab tu bol.

Veera blushed and lowered her eyes, she pushed him and ran away,

he ran behind her

Baldev; oye kithe ja rhi he veera.

Veera stood on the highest rock available and spread her arms

wide, looked up then closed her eyes, baldev reached there, the rain

pouring hard on her face.

Veera; (on the top of her voice) I Love You Baldeva..I love u...(she

opened her eyes and jumped he caught her and they were in a

hugging position with straight heads)..i love u baldeva..jabse me ayi

hun tujhpe lattoo hogai hun..jb tere raja hone ka pta chala to dil

toot sa gya mera, pr tu to wesa he hi nhi jesa sab smjhte hen, khas

kr mere liye, itna pyar krta he tu mujhse ke tu agar ab kaatil bhi

banjayega to bhi me tujhse pyar krna nhi chod paongi..i love u mere

jungli khoonkhar pr bade dil wale masoom sher.

Baldev hugged her tightly now, tears developed in his eyes too.

Baldev; meri sherni...bas iske ilawa aur kuch nhi chahiye menu.

Veera; menu bhi

he kissed her neck, cheeks and forehead.

Veera; pagal bas kr..menu sharam a rhi he

Baldev; oye hoye meri sharmeeli sherni.

Veera walked to the area where he wrote the message.

Veera; wese maanna padega boht hi acha andaz tha tera confess

krne ka...pr itni shayari tenu ayi kese?

Baldev; me shayar to nhi (he sang) magar e haseen (he took her hand

and danced) jab se dekha mene tujhko mujho shayari aagai

they danced in the rain. Then he sat on his knee and took out a ring,
veera gave her left hand and he slipped it on her ring finger.

Baldev; apni mehnat ki kamai se laya hun tere waaste, iliye ziada

mehngi nhi la paya

Veera; mehnat ki kamai?

Baldev; mene bohot dinon se chup chup ke kuch kaam kiya pind se

bahar

Veera; konsa kaam?

Baldev; wo na amritsar me ek wada function hona tha..uske intizam

me madat krdi..mera kaam inna wadhiya tha to menu milne to 6,000

the pr 7,000 milgaye..to mene tere waste ye khareed li

Veera was touched,

Veera; tune e sb kyun kiya baldev

Baldev; wo in sb logon ke pese se me tenu tohfa wo bhi pyar ka

tohfa nhi dena chahta tha

Veera hugged him tightly again

Veera; oh baldev..tu itna acha kyun he

Baldev; oye menu acha mat bol, log hasenge tujh pr

Veera; to haste rahen, me darti thodi hun

Baldev; haan meri sherni, acha ab andar chal, bohot bheeg gai he tu,

bimaar pad jayegi.

He picked her up and took her inside.


Edited by overactor - 10 years ago
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Speechless 🤗
Ballu ki shaayari amazing,rock pe pyaar ka aylaan karna <3
Naughty Ballu ke naughty kisses😉 "meri sharmeeli sherni" hayeee Ballu <3
Khud bhi mit jataa,,Awww <3
Baldeva ka pyaar <3 unmatchable...

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