VeeBa FF 'King Of my world' Part 45 pg 109 - Page 45

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Very late just read PART:25 Now
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No words to tell how nice de story is... Sonu di ye ff tho supperr se uupperrr waala tha!!!!!!
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aww nice update😊
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OMG today I read all parts of your OS... It was really amazing fabolus hats off for you šŸ‘ aik part agr super tha to dosra super duper aur tesra super duper hit chota part to super duper hit sy b oper tha and than so on... every part has to much twists and interesting story... aur veera k dream to sach m ufff hi tha m ny wo song phealy b suna howa hai but ab jo maza ata hai wo phealy nahi ata tha isi waja sy pora din m wo song y to sunti rhyti hun y gungunati rhyti hun šŸ˜› kuch parts to itny touch thy na k meri akhon m anso a gay thy specially baldev ko veera k chor jana, balveer k chand ko dekh kr fying kiss krna ar us kiss k Delhi sy hoty howy pritumpura ponch kr baldev ko touch krna it was just awww 😭 I think veera serial k sary writers ko bye khy dyna chaiy aur apko warmly wlcm khyna chaiy phr to veera serial ki TRP sb sy oper a jay gi šŸ‘šŸ¼ plzzz plzzz plzzz nxt part jaldi sy update kr dyn bilkul b wait nahi ho rha and if easy for u plz snd me pm 😳
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Originally posted by: cuteBiya

OMG today I read all parts of your OS... It was really amazing fabolus hats off for you šŸ‘ aik part agr super tha to dosra super duper aur tesra super duper hit chota part to super duper hit sy b oper tha and than so on... every part has to much twists and interesting story... aur veera k dream to sach m ufff hi tha m ny wo song phealy b suna howa hai but ab jo maza ata hai wo phealy nahi ata tha isi waja sy pora din m wo song y to sunti rhyti hun y gungunati rhyti hun šŸ˜› kuch parts to itny touch thy na k meri akhon m anso a gay thy specially baldev ko veera k chor jana, balveer k chand ko dekh kr fying kiss krna ar us kiss k Delhi sy hoty howy pritumpura ponch kr baldev ko touch krna it was just awww 😭 I think veera serial k sary writers ko bye khy dyna chaiy aur apko warmly wlcm khyna chaiy phr to veera serial ki TRP sb sy oper a jay gi šŸ‘šŸ¼ plzzz plzzz plzzz nxt part jaldi sy update kr dyn bilkul b wait nahi ho rha and if easy for u plz snd me pm 😳

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"King of my world"

Part_26

Veera brought their breakfast in the room as bansuri and balwant

had gone out. Veera was about to feed Balveer but Baldev opened

his mouth too.

Balveer; meri mom pehle mujhe khilayegi dad back off.

Baldev; chup kr, meri veera pehle menu khilayegi

Balveer; no, me, mom say it

Baldev; oye Veera, dekh tenu pehle mujhe hi khilana hoga bas

Veera; main dono ko nahi khila rahi, ek dusre ko khilao menu boht

kaam he.

She put the tray on the bed and stood up.

Veera; aur haan agar bed pe kuch bhi gira na to tum dono dekh lena

Baldev and balveer looked innocently at each other. Veera was

leaving Baldev ran behind her and caught her arm.

Baldev; acha tu sheru ko khila de main khud kha lunga wo chota he

Veera; kyun tu khila na bada baap bana phirta he, menu to khichdi

nhi khilane aati na aur tu sim, kaho na papa ko aweseome, khilaynge

tere papa tujhe sab, me ja rhi hun.

Balveer came running and caught her legs.

Balveer; sorry mom please mat jao na

Baldev; oye tu itne bhao kyun kha rhi he, jab dekho jaane ki dhamki

deti rehti he, tujhe nafrat hogai he na mujhse shadi kr k bachta rhi

he na tu, ja bhad me chod sheru teri maa ka dil bhar gya he humse.

He picked up Balveer and went to sit on the bed. Veera got worried

she went to balveer and baldev and held her ears.

Veera; sorry Baldev, me ghar se jane ki baat nhi kr rhi thi, bas kamre

se bahar ja rhi thi, (she started crying) mera dil kese bhar skta he

apni jaan se pagal, esa kese keh skta he tu, Baldev.

Baldev looked at her, she was sitting on the floor her hands on

Baldev's knee. He caught her hand and made her sit on the bed,

then he wiped her tears.

Baldev; tu hamen tang kr skti he pr hum kuch kahenge to tu rone

lage gi, meri sherni kahan he?

Balveer hugged her.

Balveer; sorry mom

Veera; aww baby teri galti thodi he.

Baldev; puttar is pind me galti sirf ek insan se hoti he aur wo he tera

pyo Baldev Singh.

Veera; sorry na

Baldev; acha acha ro mat, ab me tenu khilata hun, tu bhi kya yaad

kregi.

He fed her and she licked his fingers.

Baldev; oye ki kr rhi he

Veera; kyun? ab pta chala, kesa lagta he

Baldev; acha, krti reh sanu ki

Veera blushed, she started feeding Balveer. Balveer ate quietly

because he didn't want Veera to get upset again.

Baldev; ab tu royi na to dekh lena.

Veera; kya kr lega tu

Baldev; main bhi rone lagoonga

Veera smiled.

Balveer; mom dad, you fight like my day care friends

Veera and Baldev laughed.

Baldev; fiqr mat kr tere bhi din ayenge puttar

Veera; baldev! bacha he

Baldev; haan to

Veera; chup kar

They heard a voice from downstairs. It was Billa.

Billa; paaji neeche ao kuch kaam hai.

Baldev left the room, Veera went down to do the dishes.

Baldev; bol kya hua

Billa; paaji wo aap ne kaha tha sari property ke kaagaz le aaon badli

karwani hai kuch

Baldev; haan tu waqeel se baat krle na

Billa; changa main kal hi baat krta hun us se

Billa left, Veera heard everything and got worried she came to

Baldev.

Veera; kya badli karwani hai?

Baldev; wo na tu challi gai thi aur hamari shadi ka kisi ko pta bhi nhi

tha, to mene kagazon me apna waris nhi likhwaya, is ke chalte menu

kuch hua to sari zameen jayedaad papaji ko hi milegi pr agr mujhse

pehle unhe kuch hua to sari jayedad na trust walon ko jayegi isiliye

ab Balveer hai to use hi apna waaris likhwa deta hun na

Veera started sweating, she talked hesitating

Veera; tu kesi galan kr rha he, kuch nhi hoga tenu, tu...tu chad ye

sab, aur..tenu kuch hoga to...nhi esa soch bhi mat, tere bina ye sb

nhi chahiye...Baldev tu chad ye sb...menu dar lagta he

Baldev; are Veera, ye to kagzi karwai he sab krwate hen, papaji ne

bhi kra rakhi he, to unhe kuch hogya kya, pagal tu ese kyun ghabra

rhi he

Veera; nhi...nhi tu mat kra na tabdili chad na, meri khatir..please

baldev

she held her hands and begged him, crying and panting
Baldev hugged her and tried to calm her down

Baldev; acha acha, dekh abhi nhi karwata bas ro mat. Pagli. Aur ab

karwane ki zarurat hi nahi he, wese bhi kanooni tor pe Balveer hi

mera waris he.


Veera; Baldev...plx tu kisi aur ko nominate kr de na,

Baldev; are kamli par kyun, dekh ab Balveer aur hamare duje hone

wale bachon ka hi to hai sab.

Veera; par iski waja se kisi ne unhe nuqsan pohnchane ki koshis ki

to

Baldev; to unhe milega kya? Kuch nahi, haan par unke baalig hone

tak sb tera hoga

Veera pushed him.

Veera; isiliye keh rhi hun, please kisi aur ko nominate krde please

main haath jodti hun Baldev, mujhe mat kar please.

Baldev; veera tenu achanaq ho ki gaya hai

Veera sat on the floor and cried, baldev was unable to understand,

he sat with her and hugged her again

Baldev; acha theek hai, jab tak Balveer balig nahi hta tab tak main

Ranvi aur gunjan ko krdun? rishte daar ko krna lazmi he wrna so

khuwariyan krwate hen

Veera; haan haan tu veerji aur gunajn bhabhi ko kar de, par menu

nhi

Baldev; acha bas ab ro mat

Veera hugged him tightly.

Veera; main tenu kho nhi sakti Baldev kisi qeemat par nhi

Baldev; kon keh rha he khone ko? kamli

Veera thought," tujhse door reh lungi Baldev par tenu kuch nhi hone

de skti teri Veera"

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update sonu but don't separate them plz
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Nice update nd thanks for update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sonu...suspense kab khatam karegi...can't wait šŸ¤”

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