VeeBa FF 'King Of my world' Part 45 pg 109 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Ruled by a single person,whom no one can defeat" One and the only "Baldev Singh" <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg... its seems very interesting...
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Originally posted by: ManaliRoy

"Ruled by a single person,whom no one can defeat" One and the only "Baldev Singh" <3
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😕 mannu tu in emos ko itna bada kese kr leti he😆
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Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

awesome update interesting start do continue and update the next part soon !! 👏⭐️😛Tfs for pm dear 😃 !!


thank u 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"King of my world"

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Baldev left the house and went to the surpunch office. The panchas

were just puppets and did nothing but say yes to all of his orders

and with the villagers being so poor and mute there was hardly

anything to do. He just sat idly and watched tv or played on his

phone. His life lacked a motive, an aim, a reason. He had everything

anyone desired but he was completely empty.

After spending 2 hours in the office he left it and drove out of the

village. He no longer owned that red small jeep, he drove the brand

new land cruiser now.
He stopped the car just a few kilometers away from pritampura,

and reclined his seat, the weather was clear but cloudy and cool

breeze blew..he opened the window and relaxed with his eyes

closed, to settle the storm inside him. After a few minutes he heard

a voice coming from near by..

Voice; oye ruko..menu aage tak nhi chod skte..are ye kya batameezi

he..oye mere samaan nu aise na phenk..ruk oye.

Baldev opened his voice and looked in the direction of the voice, he

saw a bus driving away and a girl throwing stones at it.

Girl: bhad me jao..tumhara tyre puncture hojaye. Huh!..

she bend to collect her luggage and now her voice was inaudible.

Baldev moved out of his car and moved towards her with slow

steps.

The girl picked her purse and stood up and then turned. Baldev's

jaw dropped, she was still the same yet so different, she still had

the mischievious look on her face yet she looked sober, she was still

bubbly and chubby yet so pretty. Her hair were floating with the

speed of the air and some came on her face which she moved.

Baldev to himself "Veera" he said slowly, his voice suddenly changed

and he had a brief smile on his face which he completely lost five

years back. He recalled all of their fights of childhood and the

naughtiness in him returned and now he walked gracefully towards

her.

Baldev; ki hoya? beech raste which utar diya tenu...bechari..pr wo

bhi ki karen..ab delhi se yahan tak tenu jhella wo kya kam tha..aur

sehen shakti nhi hogi un me.

Veera looked at him and her cheeks got all red.

Veera; oye..wo na gadhe hen..jhel to me rhi thi unhe..aur tenu kyun

bura lag rha he..bewaqoof.

No one even dared to call him bad words even in private and she

did it with ease without making him mad with anger,

Baldev; han han dikh rha he kis ka samaan phenka gaya

Veera; oye tu chup kr..aur chal ab meri madat nhi karega ki?

Baldev; me kyun karun teri madat..kabootri

Veera; tu pind da puttar he na..to karni padegi madat..menu

surakshit mere veerji k paas pohnchana ab teri zimedari he kyunki

tujhe Rabjee ne isi waste bheja he ithe..wrna tu is sunsaan sadak pe

ki karne aya he zara bta

Baldev thought about it, maybe she was right and he was here for

her, the road was deserted and dangerous for an unaccompanied

girl. He took her luggage and walked towards his jeep

Veera; oye tu mera samaan chura ke kahan ja rha he?

Baldev turned with an irritated look.

Baldev; tenu ghar nhi jana ki? ya phir saman yahin chod ke jane ka

irada he? chal ab

Veera ran to accompany him, and when he stopped near to his car

and opened the back door to keep her luggage

Veera; ae kis ki gaadi he?

Baldev: (irritated again) tere baap ki..upar se bheji he..delhi me

padhne hi gai thi bas pr he abhi bhi tu wahi jahil veera..faltu sawal

khatam nhi huye tere.

Veera; oye faltu sawal nhi hote mere smjha

Baldev; beth ab dimag khrab na kr mera.

They sat inside and he started the jeep, Baldev had not spoken like

this since the past 5 years, he was only rude to others ,his

naughtiness and playfulness was long lost and it felt so refreshing

to have that out.

Veera; wese tune koi kaam dhanda shuru kiya ya abhi tak vella he?

Baldev smiled

Baldev; sabar kr jald hi pta chal jayega tenu ke me kya krta hun aur

mera kaam kitna wada he

Veera; acha! wade kaam aur tu (she laughed)

Baldev; has le baad me pachtayegi

Veera; chal vekhte hen.

They entered the pind and everyone greeted him. Veera was

confused. He stopped infront of her house and unloaded her

luggage.

Veera; andar chal na

Baldev; nhi tu ja menu kuch kaam he

Veera; kaam aur tujhe? (he made an angry cute face) acha maan leti

hun (she laughed)..thanks

Baldev; me chalta hun

she waved him goodbye as he reversed his car and left.

Veera went inside

Veera; surprise!

Nobody was at home, she was disappointed

Veera; kahan gaye sab ke sab? Chaiji bhi nhi ghar pe..

she was shocked to see the condition of the house, only walls and

no furniture.

Veera; ae ghar ko ki hogaya he?

she looked everywhere and was unable to understand the situation.

At last she was tired and sat on the stairs and resting her head on

her purse she fall asleep.

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Baldev reached his house and saw Ratan dusting, Chaiji was cutting

vegetables.

Baldev; aap dono ghar jao..aap ki chutti. Aur ranvi nu bhi le jaiye ga

keh dijiyega mene chutti di hai

Ratan and Chaiji were shocked. Bansuri who was eating fruits heard

this too.

Bansuri; kyun? abhi in dono ne bohot kaam krna he safai kapde

dhone hen istri krne hen aur abhi ka khana raat ka khana saare

bartan..kon krega ye sb?

Baldev; bas bg me keh rha hun na..chutti di he to di he..aap k liye to

koi bhi kaam krdega kisi aur ko bulwa lo

Bansuri; pr puttar

baldev; bg mera sir dukh rha he me sone ja rha hun..aap kisi aur nu

bulwa lo..aur aap dono jaiye

Ratan and Chaiji left.

Baldev went to his room and lay down.

Baldev; koi to aya mujhse taqar lene wala..wrna zindagi se maza hi

khtam hogya tha. Is jungle ka aqela sher tha me..meri sherni agai.

he smiled again as he recalled all their past.

Edited by overactor - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Nice...
Story is getting very intresting...
Keep it up!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
VeeBa intro 😎
Abtaq jungle mein sher akela tha,ab meri sherni aagai <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Awesome 👍🏼 loved loved loved it! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
wow just amazing!! loved it loved it loved it
u rock ⭐️ plz update soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Great update loved the interaction between them, seems veera will be the one to tame the king of pp.

also had a mini heart attack to see u updating so quickly 😆

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