VeeBa FF "King Of my world" Part 45 pg 109 - Page 48

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update

thanks for pm 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zainabawoon

oye tu aise kesa bol sakthi? Tu acchi se pata hai na ki mera mood bi karab hogaya aur mai bi sad aur ro rahi hoon about the whole change of hair style😭😭😭

mash se hamari khushi dekhi nhi jati😡
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: a4aarsh

Suspense 🤔 nw this is iinteresting,it was a sweet 1 but short 😔 nxt tym i need a longer 1 sonu

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikki36

Yeah an update.

Veera seems to be going through so.e emotional turmoil. She is constantly worried that something is gonna happen to baldev.

I hope there isnt a separation, poor things have just got their little family back together


dnt worry niks😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Asyalover

somthing is really fishy with veera and her fears

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: monumolu

It was a wonderful update Sonu!!! I absolutely loved the family scene. What I liked most in this update was that Baldev is finally becoming really responsible. 

But like Veera I have my fears too, please hamaare jaanuable jodi ko separate nahi karna ti.

siya me mash ya ekta nhi jo separate krti rahun baar baar😡 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
"King of my world"

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Veera was still very worried, she was thinking.

"ab to sab ko hamari shadi ka pata bhi chal gaya hai, menu wapas aana hi nahi chahiye tha, par me kya karun, kese jeeti me Baldev k bina, aur Sim ki is sab me kya galti he. Rabjee please mere pati aur bete ki raksha karna, koi bhi museebat unse pehle mujhpe aye please unhe kuch mat hone dena."

Balveer came inside the room crying.

Balveer; mom!

Veera; sim (she came running to him) kya hua, ye chot kese lagi, beta aapko kaha he na dhyaan se khela karo.

Balveer; sorry mom

Veera; oh my baby, aao me dawai lagati hun.

She picked him up and taking a first aid box she aided his wound.

Balveer; mom it hurts

Veera; bas abhi theek hojayega.

She bandaged his wound and then hugged him.

Veera; I love you, you love me

Balveer; we are a happy family

Both together; with a big big heart and a kiss from me to you.

Balveer; oh my mommy i love you.

Veera; oh my baby i love you.

Veera kissed his forehead.

Balveer gave his elbow, where he was hurt.

Balveer; mom kiss here

Veera smiled and kissed his elbow.

Balveer; thanks mom, im going to play.

Veera; are nahi, betho yahan, abhi chot lagi hai na, no playing now, main aap ke liye bournvita laati hun, you stay out of trouble till then okay

Balveer; okay, can i watch cartoons

Veera; sure.

Veera went to make his milk. Baldev came inside the kitchen and hugged her from behind.

Veera; Baldev! ese achanaq mat aya kr na

Baldev; to kya dhol baja ke aaon

Veera; nhi

Baldev; murjhai kyun hui hai

Veera; Sim ko chot lagi hai

Baldev; are wo sher hai chote mote ghav se upar jayega

Veera; menu pata hai

Baldev; to phir

Veera; kuch nahi

Baldev; tu jhoot mat bol Veera, bta na kya hua hai

he turned her and looked into her eyes, she looked down

Baldev; nazren kyun chura rahi he kya hua bol na

Veera hugged him.

Veera; Baldev tu ye sab chad de na, tu surpunch bana reh pr ye sab, tu itni power ka ki karega

Baldev moved out of the hug,

Baldev; dekh veera, tera dimag khrab hogya he, wadi mushqil se paya he mene sab ab nahi kho sakta

Veera; par Baldev iski waja se tere kinne dushman banenge

Baldev; main nhi darta kisi ke baap se

Veera; Baldev bht khatarnaq log...tu samjhta kyun nhi, tu sirf baldev nhi hai ab, tera ek beta hai uske future ka to soch

Baldev; usi k liye sab kr rha hun me, mere paas ye sab nhi hoga to wo angrezi school kese banega, college kese banega bol? TU chahti kya hai aakhir main ghar pe beth jaon, tere pallu me chup jaon? Us din bhi tune yehi kiya tha, mere naal jhagda wo bhi jab meri galti tak nahi thi, aur phir dusre din tu mainu chad ke chali gai, menu to samjh hi nahi aya ke gal kya hui, aur aaj to kuch hua bhi nhi, akhir teri diqat kya he? kahin tu bhi meri taraki dekh k jal to nhi rhi kahin baqiyon ki tarah tenu bhi meri taqat se uljhan to nhi. Aur hogi kyun nhi aakhir tere veerji k mun ka nivala jo kha gya me

Veera was shocked, Baldev was accusing her of being jealous of his success, how could he?

Veera; (crying) tu esa kese keh skta hai Baldev, main teri taraki se jalungi, tu sab bhool gaya ki?Sab ke khilaf ja kr mene tujhse vyah kiya, apne veerji ko chad ke tere paas ayi kyun ki menu pata tha ke tenu meri veerji se ziada zarurat he aur tu menu

Baldev; acha? to kyun chali gai do din me hi menu chad ke? mere puttar ko kyun rakha mujhse door? bol? sirf is liye ke mene do gundon ko peeta tha, wo bhi is liye ke wo galat kar rahe the bol?

Veera; Baldev tu samjhne ki koshish kar na

Veera broke down on the floor and cried, Baldev was unable to see her like this, he came to her and hugged her.

Baldev; acha maaf krde, menu esa nhi kehna chahiye tha

Veera; tu kyun maafi maang rha he tenu pura haq he, par meri majboori thi Baldev, main tujhse bht pyar krti hun, tujhe kho nahi sakti main, me to maafi maangne k bhi qaabil nahi.

Baldev; tu ro mat Veera, menu gussa agaya tha kuch bhi keh gya, sorry

Veera hugged him tightly.

Veera; I love you

Baldev; i love you too, aur ab rona band kar, tu bta na tu kyun gai thi menu chad ke, azaad hoja na is boj se aur menu bhi krde.

Veera; Baldev main, menu kuch waqt de, mujhme himmat nhi abhi,.

Baldev; theek he pr jald hi btana hoga tenu

Veera nodded.

Baldev; ab jaldi kar sheru ko dood de

Baldev helped her stand up, she continued where she left and Baldev left the kitchen.

"mainu jald pta lagana hoga ke aakhir gal hai kya, Veera itni pareshan kyun hai" he thought as he went.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update 👍🏼 but such a short one sonu ki bacchi😡 my FF's update was much longer!Not fair! 😆Anyways Ab tu jaldi se batao yeh suspense kya hai? Waiting eagerly for the next part😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zainabawoon

Awesome update 👍🏼 but such a short one sonu ki bacchi😡 my FF's update was much longer!Not fair! 😆Anyways Ab tu jaldi se batao yeh suspense kya hai? Waiting eagerly for the next part😃

suspense would be out soon, will start with the flash back parts now😳..i was not in much writing mode but just did
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: overactor

suspense would be out soon, will start with the flash back parts now😳..i was not in much writing mode but just did

oh ok, *super excited* 😃 btw thanks for the update buddy, u know how much i love this FF na❤️🤗 Edited by zainabawoon - 9 years ago