VeeBa FF 'King Of my world' Part 45 pg 109 - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update loved it loved veeba hot romance 😳😉but hated ratan and stupid words to veera 😡 Tfs for pm 😃
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Shirtless ballu ☺️,all i can say is veera is damn lucky,wonder what's gonna happen nxt,awesome sonu
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Superb update again
Loved it...can't w8 4 the nxt part
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Awesome update!!
Veera went home in Baldev's clothes?😲😆
VeeBa ☺️
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omg veera gets to knw truth behind her birth
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awesome update sonu 🤗 loved it 👍🏼
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his wide broad chest, his flour white
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great update waiting madly for the next part 👏
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"King of my world"

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Veera was unable to make out what ratan said

Veera; bg..

Ratan; mat keh mujhe bg, nhi hun me teri bg, aur na hi Ranvi tera

bhai hai, tu sampooran singh ki beti zarur he par mene nhi diya

janam tujhe, tu surpunch jee ki najayaz aulad he, teri maa margai

tenu janam de k aur mera ghar ujaad ke aur ab tere kaaran hum

kahin ke nhi rahe..aur ab hamen barbad krne wale ke sath

tu...chee..Ranvi ki parvarish tere gande khoon k rang ko badal nhi

payi.

Veera stood as a stone, her world collapsed all of a sudden, tears

fell from her eyes, she kept looking down, even ranvi was not trying

to support her. Chaiji caught hold of her.

Chaiji; na puttar na..rote nhi..

Veera looked at Chaiji, chaiji could see in her eyes that she had not

done anything that would defame her family,

Chaiji; haan puttar me janti hun tune kuch nhi kiya

Ratan; kya jaanti hen aap chaiji, apna mun kaala kr k ayi he ye, ab

aur kya baqi reh gya tha.

Veera looked at Ranvi, Ranvi came close to her

Ranvi; kya kami reh gayi thi meri parvarish me veera? jo tu mere

mana krne k bawajood us ke paas gayi..aur ye..

Veera; nhi veerji me

Ranvi; bas (he shouted) nhi hun me tera veer aur na tu meri

veerakhdi...meri veerakhdi mere khilaf to kabhi ja hi nhi skti..aur

tune to meri naak hi katwa di..us Baldev ke sath tu...kehne me bhi

sharam ati he veera

***********************

Baldev was sitting at the tea stall with billa and jaggi after he

dropped Veera, he was feeling restless and not responding to

Jaggi's talks. Something ached in his chest and he was not

understanding why..he just had the ebst time of his life then why

this sudden numbness.

Billa: kya hua paaji parjai ke bagair dil nhi lag rha kya

Baldev; pta nhi ki he, me use mil ke aata hun, kuch acha nhi lag rha,

use dekh lun to sukoon milega

Jaggi; o paji abhi aapko aye 10 minute bhi pure nhi huye honge, inni

der me ki hojana he parjai nu

Baldev; pta nhi yr, abhi achanaq se laga kuch, ajeeb dard sa ho rha

he, wo theek nhi shayad, gir gai ho kya pta, dekh ke to chalti nhi, me

use dekh ke ata hun

Baldev left quick, his heart ached badly, something was wrong and

he knew it.

********************

Veera was trying to explain but she had no words, her own brother

didn't trust her and the sudden revealation of truth had taken away

all her power.

Veera; veerji (she tried hard to speak) esa kuch nhi..me bheeg gai

thi..isiiye baldev ne apne kapde

Ratan; hum bache nhi hen veera, bohot dunya dekhi he, sach aur

jhoot me farq krna aata he humen

Veera; veerji mera yaqeen mano..esa kuch nhi hua..pr han..me...me

...me baldev se pyar krti hun...aur wo bhi

Ranvi; Veeerrraaa (he shouted and slapped her

hard)

she almost fell because of the forceful slap but someone strong

caught hold of her. She looked up and saw Baldev's eyes red with

anger, his body heated up, fists clenched. He helped Veera standup

and then put a strand of her hair behind her ear to have a better

view of the slap marks, her cheek was red and Ranvi's finger marks

prominent. Veera looked at him, her eyes filled with many tears, but

she moved her head in a disagreement to stop him. He stood infron

of her as a shield, fuming, his pupils dilated, skin red from head to

toe. And when he spoke, his voice was harsh and cruel with a tinge

of underlying pain he felt on seeing his soul in pain.

Baldev; tum logon ki itni himmat ke meri veera pe haath uthao

his voice was dangerous and ruthless, Veera caught his arm to try

to calm him but the damage was done and she couldn't stop the fire

from spreading and burning everything that came in its way now.

Baldev walked towards Ranvi and looked into his eyes, his eyes

were enough to scare ranvi's soul.

Baldev; bol na..kese himmat ki tune meri veera pe haath uthane ki,

jaanta nhi kya teri auqaat kya he? bol?

Ranvi; (his voice was shaking) wo meri behen he, me kuch bhi karun

Baldev punched him, Ranvi fell on the ground, blood appeared from

his nose.

Baldev; acha! teri behen he..to tu haath uthayega us pe..tenu pta nhi

ki...kudiyon pe hath asli mard kabhi nhi uthate

Veera held Baldev

Veera; baldev chod kuch nhi huwa..thodi galat fehmi hogai he bas

Baldev; galat fehmi, galat fehmi hogi to ye haath uthayega tujh pr,

veera tu hat ja, bas bohot hogya, me kuch bhi bardasht kr skta hun

pr koi tenu sui bhi chubhayega to me bardasht nhi kr skta.

Ratan; maalik aapko koi haq nhi banta hamare ghar ke maamlon me

dhakhal dene ka..aur aapko veera chahiye to le jaiye ise..wese bhi ab

apne pati ki galtiyon ka boj aur nhi uthaya jata hum se.

Baldev understood what happened, Veera's birth truth was revealed

infront of her and she was being accused of doing the same

mistake, Baldev looked at Veera, she looked like a stone almost

lifeless. He recalled the happy veera he dropped off a while ago, full

of life and colors, but now she was all black and white. He looked at

Ratan and Ranvi, how could they do this to her, they had brought

her up and didn't know what values she has.

Baldev; (after a fake laugh & 3 slow claps) wah! Ratan Sampooran

Singh aur Ranvi Sampooran Singh wah!..jis ne galti ki uski tum dono

aaj tak pooja krte ho, aur jiski koi galti nhi us se itni nafrat. Aur

ranvi tu, beti bna ke pala tha na tune veera ko, itna sa bhi bharsa

nhi tujhe uspar, are jo ladki itne saal akeli delhi me reh ke ayi he jab

delhi me kuch nhi kiya to pind me aake wo tera naam badnam

kregi,wadi wadi galan krta tha na tu, apna sab kuch bech diya tune

veera k liye, pr bharosa itna sa bhi nhi tenu us par, aur ek ye jaan

deti e tum sab pr. ghin aati he mujhe tujhse ranvi, tu kitna gir chuka

he, tenu mujhse nafrat itni bhad gai ke tenu veera bhi galat lagne

lag gai, ab to tenu maar peet kr apne haath gande krne ka bhi ma

nhi kr rha.

He went to veera and took her hand.

Baldev; me koi zid nhi sununga ab..tu mere naal chal rhi he. Smjhi?

she didn't respond, Baldev looked at Chaiji and gestured her to

follow. Baldev pulled Veera out of the house and Chaiji followed,

Ratan and Ranvi were left behind alone.

****************

Baldev took Veera and Chaiji to a new house close to his, being the

surpunch and the king had given him access to many things and he

didn't misuse his power but it was the need of the hour.
It was a small house with one bedroom and a hall where the kitchen

and bathroom was. A cot was paced in the centre where Baldev

made Veera sit on, Chaiji went inside the room to give them some

private time. Baldev sat with Veera and put his arm around her, she

leaned on his shoulder and then slowly she started crying, she cried

alot and baldev remained quiet letting her pour her heart out, his

kurta was wet again but now with her tears. She cried loudly and

then was decreased to silent sobs..baldev didn't move he just held

her, his head leaning on hers. And then she finally spoke,

Veera; Baldev, menu..menu nhi pta tha, veerji mere...mere sage veerji

nhi, bg meri bg nhi, me anat hun Baldev.

her words were arrows to his heart, every tear that left her eye

pierced his heart. He felt helpless because he couldn't change this

fact of her life and relieve her pain.

Veera; aur isiliye wo menu...Baldev mere veerji ne mujhe itna galat

smjha..me esa..wo soch bhi kese skte hen

Baldev moved now and wiped her tears, then cupped her face.

Baldev; bhool ja veera, kal in sbne mujh pr ghinone ilzam lagaye the

aur aaj tujhpr...menu chor kaha to theek, pr apni behen tak ko nhi

choda is ranvi ne. Tu bhool ja..me hun na tere paas, tere saath, tenu

kabhi dard nhi dunga me, ab se har dukh ko tujh tak pohonchne se

pehle mera saamna krna padega.

Veera hugged him, and they closed their eyes, just listening to each

other's heartbeats, they found peace in each other.

Chaiji saw them and smiled.

Chaiji; Rabjee aapne in dono ko dard diya..aur ab ye dono ek dusre

ke dard ki dawa hen, kisi ki nazar na lage is pyar jodi ko.

She took some kaajal from her eye and put it on their mirror

reflection.


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Posted: 10 years ago
This part of os is just reflection of my thought. Ranvi is truely hypocrite. Baldev ko bhi takleef di,lekin apni behen ko bhi nahi baksha. Gud that baldev took both veera and chaiji alongwith. Best part in this os.Thanks for pm. :-)

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