VeeBa FF 'King Of my world' Part 45 pg 109 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

interesting update loved it Tfs for pm sonu 😃

ur welcome😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
"King of my world"

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Veera was walking out of the school when Baldev caught her hand

and took her behind a tree and pinned her to the tree.

Veera; oye ki kr rha he

Baldev; tu ki kr rhi he?

Veera; me? pagal hogya he ki?

Baldev; tu masterni kyun ban gai?

Veera; kya?

Baldev; tu is school me padha rhi he na?? angreji ki masterni bani he

na?

Veera; haan to

Baldev; tu e nokri chad de

Veera; ki?

Baldev; nokri chad de bas

Veera; oye tu pagla gya he ki..tune dekhe hen na hamare haalaat aur

kal me kesi bhooki thi aur bistar bhi tujhse lena pada mujhe..aur tu

keh rha he me nokri chod dun?..abhi temporary hun to hi menu

10,000 mil rhe hen permanenet hone pe 15 ya 20 milenge..kitna

kuch badal jayega..

Baldev; me de dunga tenu har mahine 20,000 khush..ab chad de ye

nokri

Veera; oye tu bilkul sathiya gya he ki? me tujhse paise kese le skti

hun?

Baldev; le skti he..me teri nokri chudwane ka hi to badla de rha hun

na..bas tu chad de ye nokri abhi ke abhi..tenu tere veer ki qasam

Veera looked angrily at baldev and hit him on the shoulder.

Veera; tu nhi sudhrega..menu pareshan kiye bagair chen nhi aana na

tujhe...acha hat me resign kr k aaon..itni baaten sunni padengi menu

Baldev; oye unki fiqr na kr tu me baat krlunga unse.

Veera; mene unse 2,000 advance liye the wo to wapas krne de

Baldev; me kr dunga na..tu ja ghar ab.

Veera left.."pagal hogya he ye" she thought.

***************

Baldev was going home when gunjan met him.

Gunjan; veerji aap ne btaya nhi veera ayi he mujhse milne bhi ayi thi

pr mil nhi payi

Baldev; han wo..menu yaad nhi rha..wo kabootri thodi har waqt

mere dimag me rehti he

Gunjan; hmm..abhi bhi sahi se nhi mil paye hum..wadi jaldi me thi

wo

Baldev; kahan ja rhi thi?

Gunjan; rashan lene..aur kahan

Baldev; rashan?..wo itni dhoop me us lambi rashan wali katar me ja

lagi he?

Gunjan; han veerji to aur...use thodi koi hamari tarah ghr pe rashan

de k jaye ga

Baldev ran away. Gunjan was confused.

he reached the place veera was very behind and the sun directly on

her head..Baldev ran to her. All people got alert on seeing him and

lowered their heads and greeted him. baldev made a face and veera

was confused

Baldev; tera dimag khrab he..itni garmi me rashan lene ayi he

veera; to kya karun? tu ajata mere waste lene..bewaquf

All people were stunned on veera's behaviour..but when Baldev

didn't say anything the didn't have the right either.

Baldev; oye chal tu

he pulled her, she tried to free herself but in vain..he took her to the

shop

veera; ye galat he baqi sb bhi to line me lage hen..sb humen

sunayenge baldev

Baldev; (snatching the list from her) fatafat ye sb saman baandh aur

ranvi ke ghar pe de k aa smjha.

The man nodded. Veera was shocked.

Baldev; ab tu ghar jayegi?

Veera; tu menu ghar kyun bhejna chahta he me ghar pe bore hoti

hun.

Baldev; acha to mere sath chal me tenu gola khilaaoonga

Veera; acha theek he chal

Veera was unable to understand what was in his head. People

started talking as soon as he left. The news spread like fire.

Pind woman; dekha ratan aur ranvi ko..ab apne ghar ki izzat malik k

hawale kr di..paison k liye kis had tak gir jata he insan

Pind woman2; han malik to agaye honge veera k jhanse me..wo sher

se jo ayi he..bas thoda nain matakka kiya hoga..ratan se ye umeed

nhi thi mujhe.

Ratan heard all this while grocery shopping for bansuri.

Ratan; ye aap sb kya keh rhi hen bhabhiji

Pind woman; to aur kya kahen..bhai gareeb hum bhi huye hen pr

apni izzat nhi khoyi..veera k aage peeche phir rhe hen maalik wo jab

se ayi he pehle mene sirf suna to wishwas nhi kiya ab to apni

aakhon se dekh k a rhi hun.

Ratan was speechless she went home in anger. Veera was not home

yet, she was hanging out with baldev. By the time she arrived ratan

had told chaiji and ranvi about it and all were furious.

Ratan; kahan thi tu?

Veera; bg wo me

Ratan; kis k saath thi?

Veera; wo bal..

Ratan; tune apni naukri kyon chodi?

Veera; bg wo baldev ne menu..

Ratan; baldev baldev baldev..veera ye sb kya he? wo to tera bachpan

se dushman tha na? to ab ki hogya he tenu?

Veera; han bg pr wo..wo shayad badal gaya he usne mere liye bohot

kuch kiya to me kya karun..isiliye wo menu ghoomane le jana chahta

tha to me mana kese krti?

Ranvi; veerakhdi..wo wo

Veera; kya baat he veerji..aap log kahoge to me usse baat bhi nhi

karungi par baat kya he..

Chaiji; idhar aa puttar me batati hun sb tenu

She told veera everything.

*****************

At night Veera burned the matress baldev had given her and cried.

Veera; jisne mere parivaar ke saath itna bura kiya me usi ko apna

dost samjh rhi thi..kyon Rabjee kyon..

she hated the thought that she had breakfast with him had snacks

with him sat in his car and even used his money.

The next day in the morning,

Ratan; meri tabiyat theek nhi..veera meri jaga aaj tu kaam pe chali ja

Veera; jee bg..

Veera accompanied Chaiji to baldev's house.

Bansuri; oh ho to aaj ye maharani ayi he kaam pe..ranvi ne aane kese

diya ise..bhai hamare pind ki sbse padhi likhi kudi hamari haveli me

safai ka kaam kre gi..bhaag khul gye hamare to...are jo yehi krna to

kyun ispe pese zaya kiye aap log ne? huh! ab subah subah mere

kaam badha diya sara kaam is ko sikhana padega ratan ko to sb pta

chal gya tha khud hi krti thi. Chal aa..btati hun.

She gave veera a duster and told her to clean everything she finds.

Chaiji went to the kitchen. Veera started cleaning. After some time

baldev came down for breakfast and was shocked to see veera

dusting the lounge.

He caught her arm at once and threw the duster away, bansuri had

gone outside and chaiji was in the kitchen.
His eyes turned red and he was mad with anger.

Baldev; e sb tu ki kr rhi he veera?

Veera; kyon "maalik" jb meri bg kr skti hen to me bhi kr skti

hun..unki tabiyat theek nhi to me agai aaj

Baldev tightened his grip on her arm.

Baldev; dekh veera..tu tu ghar ja..teri bg ki jaga koi aur aajayega

Veera; kyun? ye mera kaam he main hi karungi.

baldev; veera tu..tu jaa yahan se.

Veera; mujhe apna kaam krne dijiye.

Baldev; Veeraaa! (he shouted in anger) ja yahan se...(his eyes

completely red forehead creased, brws fixed breaths heavy and

finger pointed at her, his voice heavy and intense)...agar ab mene

tujhe kahin bhi kaam krte huye dekha to tere veer ka chunna milega

tujhe ...mujhse is pure pind me koi behes nhi krta..tenu e haq de k

shayad galti hogai mujhse..me is pind da surpunch..nhi shehenshah

hun..aur tu mera khilona (veera's eyes widened) meri zindagi be

rang hogai thi to socha tujhse khel ke dil ko khush kr lun..pr ye

rang dhang nhi bardasht krunga me tere..ab ghar ja isi waqt...wrna

acha nhi hoga.

Veera got scared of the look he had on his face, those burning eyes

scared her sould and that voice made her shiver..now she

understood the impact of pritampura's king. She nodded with tears

in her eyes and he left her hand. She went away slowly and he kept

breathing heavy until she left.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: overactor


u will start bashing him soonish😛




nooo I dont ever want to bash baldev!!! He is too good looking 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Awesome update, u r on a roll!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Nikki36

Awesome update, u r on a roll!!!

thnx 😳..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
super se upar hai!!!!!!!!kya baath hai sonu didi,aap tho kamaal ho...reallly intresting...aap muje bhi writting tips de dho naa...muje writting bahut pasand hai..u rock!!⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
What a drastic change at the last para in this update..."You are my khilona,,main tere saath khel rahaa tha" awww chupaane mein maahir Ballu <3 🤗 Amazing update..Kaise tadap rahaa tha apni sherniko naukri kartaa dekh aur dhoop mein raashan ke line mein khade hote dekh,,aur veera bhi maan gayi naukri chodne waaste :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Superb update. Veera was a khilona for Baldev!!!!!! Oh my God!!!! waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
wow...loved it dear...update soon...keen to know wats ahead!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Pure 4 parts eksath,badhiya! Gud going. Sorry for late comment. Late aau par padhe bina nh rahungi. Thnx for pm

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