VeeBa FF 'King Of my world' Part 45 pg 109 - Page 31

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"King of my world"

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Veera blinked her eyes and moved away, both were embarassed,

they looked away.

Baldev; theek he me shaam ko lene aaonga tum dono ko.

Veera; hum tayar rahenge.

Baldev came to Balveer who was sitting on Gunjan's lap and eating

an apple. He picked him up and kissed his cheek.

Baldev; mere sheru, sham ko tenu lene aaonga, ache se tayar hojana,

dada dadi se bhi milna he na, aur apna ghar bhi dekhna he

Balveer; ok dad. (he kissed Baldev's cheek too) Aap pakka aoge na

Baldev got tears again, his son thought that he had distanced

himself from him when the real culprit was his mother.

Baldev; haan beta, tere papa tujhse bohot pyar krte hen, ab tenu

tere papa se koi alag nhi kar skta.

Balveer smiled. Baldev gave him back to Gunjan.

Baldev; khayal rakhna mere sheru ka.

Gunjan; jee veerji

Baldev left,

Balveer; bua sheru means?

Gunjan; tere papa na pind de sher hen, sher matlab lion, to tu unka

puttar he to tu sheru

Balveer; oh you mean cup, like simba, mom calls me sim that is short

for simba

Gunjan; han han, hayo Rabba ise to inni angrezi aati he, kya bna

diya mere booboo ko veera ne

Ranvi, ratan and chaiji came inside to meet Balveer. Veera

introduced them to him.

Veera; ye mere veerji hen aur tumhare mama

Balveer; but mama to aap ho na mom

Veera; are mama nhi maamaa, maternal uncle

Balveer; ok but its sounds wierd .

Ranvi; koyi gal nhi me to ter anokha wala nana bhi hun

Balveer; anokha means?

Veera; strange

Balveer; strange? how can he be strange mom if he's your brother

Chaiji; cheechdi ye aqal ke maamle me bilkul tujhpe gya he, hayo

rabba inne sawal.

Veera; and she's moti chaiji

Balveer; what? mom you tell me to respect elders and now u are

calling this lady fat?

Veera; Sim! its her nickname

Balveer; its rude

Ranvi; puttar tu hi da stu hamen kya bulayega

Balveer looked at Veera.

Ratan; maamaa nhi to maamu bula le puttar

Balveer; maamoo's fine. Thanks...who is she mom?

Veera was silent,she didn't know what to say..

Ratan; me teri nani hun beta, teri mom ki mom

Balveer; really? (he stood up and hugged ratan) me aapka big

momma bolun?

Ratan; haan beta tujhe jo acha lage tu bol. (she kissed his forehead)

Chaiji; acha ye to bta menu kya bulayega..cheeche?

Balveer; my name is Balveer, moti chaaaiiji

Every1 started laughing.

****************

Baldev went running, Billa and jaggi saw him.

Billa; kya hua paaji wade khush lag rhe ho

Baldev; oye tum log ki parjai lot ayi he...aur aur..aur sath me mera

puttar bhi he, oye me baap ban chuka hun, mera 2 saal ka puttar bhi

he, bilkul mere jesa dikhta he, oye inna bpyara he ke kya btao.

he hugged Baggi and they all smiled.

Baldev; acha me chalta hun bg papaji ko bhi batana he

he went home in a hurry.

Baldev; Bg papaji jaldi idhar ao aap log ko ek bohot hi wadhiya

khabar deni he

Balwant; ki hoya

Bansuri; inne dino baad tu inna khush lag rha he puttar ki gal he

Baldev; Bg menu maaf krdo inne salon se aap dono se ik baat chuapi

thi mene, jab me ghar se door tha tab mene aur veera ne byah krliya

tha aur phir uske do din baad wo menu aur pind nu chad ke chali

gai, aur aaj gunjan use wapas le ayi he bg, aur wo bhi, me...me papaji

ban chuka hun bg, aap dono dada dadi ban chuke ho, mera inna

sona, bilkul mere jesa puttar he, esa lag rha tha ke me aaina dekh

rha hun

Balwant and Bansuri were shocked, they looked at each other and

then at Baldev,

Baldev; me unhe sham ko ghar le aonga, aap mera kamra theek

krwao na, mera puttar ghar a rha he bg

Bansuri; haan haan puttar krwati hun

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Veera got ready to leave, she knew she had to face Bansuri now and

that was her biggest horror, but she had choice left. Baldev arrived

and came straight to Veera's room.

Baldev; chal,

Veera nodded. Baldev picked up balveer.

Baldev; awle mera sheru, kinna sona lag rha he, dekh tere waste

chaaklate laya hun

Balveer; chocolates, thanks dad

Baldev; jaldi kr na

Veera; tu hi khada he, samaan utha to chalen

Baldev; oye me tere pyo da naukar nhi is pind da surpunch hun,

apne veer se keh uthaye

Veera; tu samaan nhi uthayega to me nhi chalungi

Baldev; bethi reh phir, me konsa tenu lene aya hun, me apne sheru

nu le k jaa raha hun, tu beth ithe hi apne saman ke saath.

Baldev moved out of the room.

Balveer; papa mom ko bhi le chalo na i want my mom

Baldev; wo ayegi dodi dodi tere peeche, me uske nakhre nhi utha

rha

He was on the stairs when Veera came pulling her heavy suitcase.

Baldev; sab akele kr skti he na tu, to samaan bhi utha le

Veera looked at him in anger. Baldev came back to her and snatched

the suitcase, he carried it in one hand with ease, Balveer on his arm.

Baldev; isi waaste Rab ne mardon ko banaya he ta ke wo apni ghar

ki aurton ka khayal rakh sken unhe sahara de sken, or aaj kal ki

aurten khud ko wada kuch smjhti hen.

Veera; Sim aap mere paas ajao

Baldev; oye hat, mera puttar mere liye boj thodi he, me ise tenu nhi

dunga, ab chal sirf nakhre krne aate hen... bhootni

Veera; Baldev kuch to sharam kr kya seekhega hamara bacha, tenu

baat krne ki bhi tameez nhi

Baldev; haan tune wada angrez bana diya he na ise, to ab iska baap

hi ise sahi wala punjabi bnayega, oye tu chup kr k chal nhi skti.

They moved out of Ranvi's house and Baldev put the suitcase in his

jeep. Veera sat on the front seat. Baldev gave Balveer to her and

their hands touched in the process, electric sparks hit both of them.

Baldev started the jeep and they soon reached his house. Baldev

took Balveer from her again and gave her a hand to help her get out

of the jeep, she gave him her hand, both had a different feeling and

they couldn't deny but had to avoid looking at each other.

Bansuri was waiting at the door when the arrived, she did aarti of

them all before letting them in and Veera had to do the ghre

pravesh rituals.

Bansuri; hayo Rabba kinna sona he mera pota dekhiye to surpunch

jee, bilkul mujhpe aur mere puttar pe gaya he, rang to dekhiye

kinna gora chitta, hayo Rabba nazar na lag jaye mere sone puttar

nu.

she put kala tikka behind his ear.

Veera; Balveer ye tumhari dadi he, your dad's mom

Bansuri; haan puttar me teri dadi hun chal aja mere paas.

Bansuri took him from Baldev.

Bansuri; aur ye tere dada hen.

Balveer; hi dada jee,..dadeee (he hugged her)

And bansuri went all aww...she hugged him with alot of love and

affection.

Bansuri; acha bta tu kya kahega, aaj sb apne sone ke liye bnaongi

Balveer; me soup peeyonga, chicken corn soup.

bansuri; hen? e ki he?

Veera; tayiji me bana lungi aap rehne dijiye

Bansuri; tu chup kr, innse saal hamare khoon ko hamse dor rakh ke

chen nhi mila tenu? ab phir apne bhashan dene aagai he, me khud hi

bana lungi apne puttar waaste kuch aur menu pta he ise zarur

pasand ayega.

Balwant; zara hamen bhi to milne do.

Baldev took the luggage upstairs

Balwant; puttar tu bhi ja upar mun haath dho le.

Veera; jee tayaji.

Veera went upstairs into Baldev's room, she was hesitating to step

in.

Baldev; ese kya ghabra rahi he, teri tarah nhi hun jo tenu apne se

door kr dun, aja, ye ghar ye kamra, aur me sb tera hi he abhi bhi.

She stepped in and stood silently.

Baldev; mene almari me tere aur Balveer k liye jaga bana di he, sheru

k liye na me ek choti si almari le k aaonga, uske kapde usme rakhna,

aur uske liye naya kamra sajayenge, uske khelne k liye.

Veera just stood silent. Then she opened her suitcase and started

adjusting her stuff in the cupboard, baldev was moving here and

there too and in the process they collided and she fell in his arms.

He caught her tightly. They looked into each other's eyes and

heartbeats raced, Baldev straightened her, and they both looked

away, they never felt so awkward ever before, and now when they

were married and had a child they were behaving as strangers, it

hurt them both but there was a lot of gap to overcome now.

Veera sat down and took her stuff out of the suitcase,and Baldev

went outside, she opened the drawer of the side table to put

something and saw her photograph, how different she was, a happy

newly in love Veera who was smiling widely, she stood up and

looked at herself in the mirror, how changed she looked, she was

not a bubbly girl anymore, but a responsible woman and a mom.

The lovely girl in her had died and she herself had killed her, she

left her heart and soul in pritampura while she lived in Delhi.

Balveer was the only reason she was alive, or esle she would have

succumbed to her pain and if not death, depression would have

taken over the best of her, she knew it was not Baldev's fault, and

that's why she still loved him as much as before or maybe a little

more. The circumstances had led her to take such a drastic step and

then she didn't have the bone to return. A tear escaped her eye and

Baldev saw this as soon as he entered, and her tear again stabbed

his heart, nothing had changed but alot had, their love was still the

same but they were unable to express it as before, and both

thought that the other has moved on.

Balveer came running.

Balveer; dad

Veera wiped her tears and turned, Baldev picked him up.

Balveer; wow, papa ye hamara room he

Baldev; haan puttar ye hamara kamra he

Balveer; its so big, delhi me our room was so small

he made gestures to make baldev understand, Baldev looked at

Veera in anger.

Baldev; teri waja se pind da shehzada gareebi me pala bada

Veera; mene ise kisi cheez ki kami nhi hone di baldev.

Baldev; acha! baap ki bhi nhi?

Veera got tears in her eyes.

Veera; Baldev, tu ye kesi baaten kr rha he (she moved out the room)

Balveer; dad mom ko kyun rulaya?

Baldev; mene nhi rulaya use, uske aansu to mujhse dekhe hi nhi

jaate, jab bhi wo roti he man krta he sb kuch tod dun

Balveer; (smiling wide) hi five dad, mujhe bhi, mom ne ek baar unke

phone pe kuch dekha aur rone lagi mene phone tod diya, i hate

tears, aur meri mom ki eyes me to bilkul ache nhi lagte

Baldev hugged him.

Baldev; (in his head) me na sahi, mera sheru to tha meri khadoos

sherni ka dhyan rkhne waaste.

Edited by overactor - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I read it already😆
This shows how desperately i wait for ur updates😳...

It was a fab update...baldev with his frnds sharing his happyness was the best❤️

Waiting...
Edited by .Jenvita_Neha. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love u Sonu🤗
i m like totally awww Loved the update!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am eagerly waiting or the next update why did she leave sonu itna suspense kyun
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Posted: 10 years ago
Like button is nt working,bad me thok dungi. Lovely,awwful update. Loved how balveer cares for his mom. And yes mom ne bola to how rude or khud 'moti chaiiiji'. Simply awesome!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww!! such an amazing update sonu 🤗 just love u girl!kinni adorable hai hamara sheru bilkul uska papa jesa hi hai ❤️ i loved how the family members interacted with chti balveera,they all doting over,how can they not,such a sweetheart he is 🤗 and i loved all the VeeBa moments,loved their awkwardness,loved their nok jok wala interactions,loved baldev's sarcastic comments and VeeBa's hideen pain and love for each other ❤️❤️,it was fun,cute,sweet and emotional,a beautiful mix,u nailed it buddy! and i also loved how balveer also has the habit of breaking stuff jut like him dad 😆,cant wait to see more of father-son moments and bansuri going gaga over her grandson and obviously more VeeBa and VeeBa -balveer family bonding moments! a child is the best way to bring a distanced couple closer cant wait to see how that happens in this story!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
This update came as a relief..Read it while the epi was being aired!!What a boring epi with so little of Baldev 😒
Balveer is adorable ❤️ Just like his dad 😳
Loved the awkwardness between VeeBa!!Balveer would help in bringing them closer!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
such a lovely update!! 🤗 loved it and loved all VeeBa moments ❤️ and Balveer is so adorable just like Baldev waiting... update soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
u r such a fabulous writter👏, how i wish u r one of the CV's to this show, u write veeba scenes
so beautifully ,i so wish this happens in the show as well but unfortunately this haapens only in
our deams and stories😭

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