VeeBa FF 'King Of my world' Part 45 pg 109 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
"King of my world"

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Veera got ready and left the house to see Baldev, she felt so happy

and so much in love, everything looked so beautiful to her.

"ye kya hogya..jis se nafrat aur bhad jani chahiye thi usi se itna

pyaar kese hogya menu" she thought as she walked on the streets

of pritampura.

She stopped infront of the surpunch office and took out her mirror

to adjust herself. Then she entered the office, Baldev was staring at

some papers. She walked hesitantly towards him with a faint smile

Veera; Hi baldev..

her voice was low and very polite, baldev raised his head to see her,

he looked worried.

Baldev; beth

veera sat down opposite to him.

Baldev; tere ghar me sab theek he na?

veera nodded.

Veera; tu..aap bohot pareshan lag rhe hen

Baldev raised his eyebrows.

Baldev; aap? ye aap kon he? tera dimag khrab hogya he ki..tu

mujhse itni tameez se baat kregi na to me bimar ho jaonga

Veera smiled in a shy style.

Baldev; acha sun tu ye kaagaz dekh na subah se uljha hua hun

inme..ye sb kaam nhi hte mujhse.

Veera; haan de na.

Veera looked at the papers and tried to solve his problem.

Veera; are ye to kuch bhi nhi hai..bas thodi formality ke papers

hen...bas sb kisanon k signatures chahiyen.

Baldev; tu rakh de billa se kahunga le lega

Veera came to him and cupped his face.

Veera; ki hoya? tu inna pareshan kyun he? menu bhi nhi btayega?

he hugged veera.

Baldev; menu yahan se door jana he veera..aur bardasht nhi hota ye

sb mujhse..in sb logon se door jana he tang aa chuka hun men in sb

se

Veera; baldev..pr hoya ki?

Baldev left her and stood up.

Baldev; kuch nhi..tu..tu apna saaman bandh lena..aaj me tenu tere

ghar se lene waaste aaonga

he left in a hurry then.

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Veera was at home worried,

Veera; wo menu lene ayega..ab ki hoga?

and then she heard his jeep's noise and came running down, chaiji

ratan and ranvi stoodup.

Baldev; veera chal

he caught her wrist and was walking out of the house but ranvi

caught veera's arm and stopped them.

Ranvi; aap kahan le ja rhe hen meri veerakhdi nu?

Baldev; yahan se door

Ranvi; bas bohot hogya baldev

Baldev was shocked, no1 had the power to raise voice infront of

him

Ranvi; har cheez ki ek had hoti he baldev..tune humse hamara sab

kuch cheena..par veera koi cheez nhi he wo meri behen he..uspe tera

koi haq nhi..chod ise..tenu jo le jana he le ja..pr meri behen se door

reh tu

Baldev pushed him.

baldev; smjhta kya he tu khud ko haan? har waqt mere kaamon ke

aade aa kar sabit kya krna chahta he tu? k tu bht mahan he bht

acha he bht sacha he? ranvi bhool mat tune kya kiya he mere sath

aur tu kis cheez ka harjana bhugat rha he..rahi baat veera ki to wo

meri he..jese k is pind ki har cheez aur har insan..veera ko tujhse

ziada khush rakh skta hun me...aur isiliye is narq se le ja raha hun

me apni veera ko

Ranvi grapped Baldev's collar. Baldev pushed him, they started

fighting. Veera ran to separate them.

Baldev; dekh ranvi..me manta hun veera teri behen isiliye me use

zabardasti nhi le ja rha..tenu jo chahiye tu le le mujhse..ghar paisa

zameen..pr meri veera menu de de

Ranvi; tu meri veera ki qeemat laga rha he

baldev hit ranvi in the face

Baldev; himmat kese hui teri esa bolne ki

Veera then held her from his shoulders.

Veera; baldev abhi tu jaa..me veerji ko smjhaongi..tu plx abhi ja..me

aongi tere paas..plx plx ja abhi..mere liye

Baldev was still boiling in anger but he left because veera asked him

to.

Veera; veerji esa kya hua he baldev k sath jo wo esa hogya he?

aakhir baat kya he?

Ranvi; uska apna dimag khrab he haar bardasht nhi hoti us

se..hamen nhi chahiye uska kuch.

he kicked the fan and cots and left the house. Ratan left too.

Veera; chaiji btaiye na aisa kya hua he jiski wja se baldev itna badal

gya he itna sakht hogya he btaiye na

Chaiji; puttar 5 saal pehle jab pind me surpunch ke chanao hone

wale the tab baldev ne apne kaagaz jama krwaye the aur balwante

ke kehne pe ranvi ne bhi..balwante ne baldev ki prachar ke liye use

paise nhi diye uska parchar ache se nhi ho ska..balke yun keh k ho

hi nhi paya..aur balwante ne sari madad tere veer ki ki..phir baldev

ne ghar ghar ja k khud vote maangne ki sochi to sb pind walon ne

uska mazaq banana shuru krdiya..us guldeep ne to use najane kya

keh diya ke baldev ne usko bht maara..aur wo haspatal pohoch

gya..baldev ko jail hone wali thi par kisi tarah bansuri ne use bacha

liya...aur phir ranvi aur baldev ke beech ek aur galat fehmi hogai

Veera; kesi galat fehmi?

Chaiji; ranvi ke jo kaagaz jama huye the wo kahin kho gye aur chote

chan ko lga ke wo baldev ne churaye hen, unke beech bohot bada

jhagda hua aur baldev ko chunao se hata diya gaya, ranvi bhi hat

gaya tha..aur najane kese baad me hamare hi ghar se wo kagaz

mile..Baldev ko laga ke chote chan ne ye sab jaan booch ke use

niqaalne waste kiya he...abhi bhi sab ne ranvi ka hi sath diya aur

kaha ke baldev ne khud ko bachane k liye kagaz hamare ghar me

rkhwa diye..pr suboot na hone ki wja se dono chunao me wapas

agaye..uske baad do din tak Baldev kahin gayab tha..hum sb ko

pakka yaqeen tha ke chota chan he surpunch banega pr akhri din

hamen notice aya aur hamare karze ki wja se sab kuch chin gaya

humse..aur phir vote dene ka din bhi tabdeel hogya ek hafte

tak..dheere dheere sb k karze unpe bhari bade aur har cheez ka

maalik najane kese baldev ban gaya..phir kya sbko majbooran use hi

vote dene pade aur wo jeet gaya..bansuri ban gai rani aur wo raja..

Veera; pr chaiji usne ye sb kiya kese?

Chaiji; surjeet singh ki madat se

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Edited by overactor - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Full on drama!!! Awesome it is⭐️
Waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Surjeet singh!!!!!!!

Great update, how do you manage to write this story where I still feel sorry for baldev and think ranvi misplaced thise papers and poor ballu got the blame. Baldev is definitely the lovable villian
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update...
looking forward to next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Veera cupped Baldeva's face then her Baldeva Hugged his Sherni <3 ❤️🤗VeeBa's unspoken Love <3 ...
Ballu ne veerji ko jo sunaaya waah 👏⭐️
Surjeet Singh 😉
Hameshaa se show jo naa kar paata hain,tu jhatse kar deti hain 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update amazing loved it Tfs for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Surjeet Singh!!!! Nice update. continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update!!
Continue soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikki36

Surjeet singh!!!!!!!

Great update, how do you manage to write this story where I still feel sorry for baldev and think ranvi misplaced thise papers and poor ballu got the blame. Baldev is definitely the lovable villian


maybe because i love him too so i dnt write him that negative🤔 or maybe bcoz vishal's impact is too much we just think of his adorable innocent baby face and love him no matter what😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely one..drama...😳...
loved baldev hitting sum1👍🏼
awesome update
waiting for the next one

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