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Posted: 10 years ago
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"King of my world"

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Ranvi woke Veera up.After they all hugged each other

Ranvi; Veerakhdi..tu to do din baad aane wali thi na..to phir aaj?

Veera; veerji wo mene aapko galat date btayi thi ta k me aap sbko

surprise de sakoon..pr ithe aak to me khud hi surprise hogai..ghar

pe koi nhi tha...aur aap sb to nhi the pr sara samaan kithe gaya

veerji..e ho ki raha he?

Ranvi; veerakhdi wo to hum..

Ratan; hum teenon kaam pe gaye the..aur ghar ka saara samaan bik

chuka he..ranvi ne teri padhai waaste inna karza utha liya tha ke

hamen sb kuch bechna pada..tere papaji ke khet zameen yahan tk k

ghar ka samaan bhi..ab bas is ghar ko aur khud ko bechna hi baqi

reh gaya he..adhe se bhi ziada kamre kiraye pe hen..aur e sb tere

kaaran hua he veera

Veera broke down..her family was suffering so badly because of her,

the truth stabbed her heart. Ranvi tried to console her.

Chaiji; acha ab ro mat tenu thodi pata tha is sb ke baare me khud

ko doshi mat thera puttar..dosh insan ka nhi halaat ka honda

he..acha ae bta tu ghar kese pohnchi..bus ne to tujhe pind se 30 km

pehle hi utar diya hoga..aage nhi ateen na ab busen.

Veera; wo baldev he na..wo wahan milgaya menu..wahi le ke aya

They were all shocked..Ratan was about to tell her but chaiji

gestured her to stop.

Ratan; acha ab kal se tu bhi koi kaam dhund le..pind ke school me

koshish kr wahan tenu nokri zarur miljayegi..sarkari nokri hogi to

tankhuwa bhi achi milegi tenu.

Veera; jee bg

At night Ranvi brought some more hay for veera to sleep on. They

only had lunch and Veera felt hungry but she didn't say anything

and tried to sleep. It was very hot the mosquitos kept flying on her

head and the floor was very hard to even try to sleep, the hay was

of only a little help. But Veera has to keep silent because she had no

other option.

In the morning when Veera woke up all had already left for work,

Ratan told ranvi to leave and then forgot to leave breakfast for

Veera.

Veera; sb kaam pr chale bhi gaye..abhi to sirf 7 hi bje hen.

She took a bath and then searched for her breakfast.

Veera; kamaal he veerji mere waaste kuch bhi nhi chod k gaye? lagta

he wo log naashta bhi nhi krte..Rabjee ye kesi pariksha he. menu

inni bhook lag rhi he ki karaan. Chod veera peth pe kapda baandh

aur ja..tujhe school me jald se jald nokri leni hogi ta k is ghar me

chula jale

She got ready and left the house. She talked with the principal who

decided to give her the job temporarily and if her work is good

they would ask the officials to confirm her. She had to join the next

day.

Veera : ab kithe jaaon..bhook lagi..Gunjan didi se milne jati

hun..kuch to khila hi dengi wo menu

She walked towards baldev's house, Baldev who was getting into his

car saw and came to her.

Baldev; oye tu inni subah subah ithe ki kr rhi he..aur inni thakki

haari kyun lag rhi hai tu?

Veera; tenu to pata hoga na..hamare ghar ke haalat ka..to wo

zameen pe menu sahi se neend nhi ayi..inna dard ho raha he peet

me aur kal thoda sa bas din me hi khaya tha uske baad se kuch nhi

khaya 21 ghanton se bhooki hun sirf paani aur thoda sa dood piya

pait me goldi babli papoo suman ne udham macha rakhi he by God.

The color from Baldev's face faded..he got all worried and held her

shoulders

Baldev;e ki keh rhi hai tu..(his voice trembled) tune tune..21 ghanton

se kuch nhi khaya aur ye tu menu ab bta rhi he..tu pagal he ki tenu

bhook lagi thi to menu kehti me tere waste khana le k ajata..chal

abhi chal me cha..

he stopped..if veera was talking with him that meant she didn't

know about his involvement yet.

Baldev; chal mere naal me tenu dhabe pe khilata hun

Veera; dhabe pe kyun? Ghar pe chal na me gunjan didi se bhi mil

lungi

Baldev; nhi wo nashta to hum kar chuke hen aur ghar me aur kya

khaye gi tu ainvayi bg mun bana lengi tu gunjan se baad me mil

lena..abhi chal.

He took her to a dhaba outside the pind and ordered every single

dish available. Veera ate over filling her stomach..and baldev

watched her eat..with every bite she ate something entered baldev

too, a sense of satisfaction and relief.

Baldev; hogya tera meri bukhad sherni? ya aur kuch khayegi

Veera; nhi nhi hogya..inna sara mene aaj tak nhi khaya..thanks

baldeva

Baldev; oye thank you kisse keh rhi he..e sb to mene apne waaste

kiya he

Veera; acha wo kese?

Baldev; tu bhooki rehti to bimaar pad jati aur tu bimaar hoti to

mere naal pange kon leta?

Veera smiled.

Veera; sun ye jo khana bach gaya he wo me apni family k liye pack

karwa lun plx.

Baldev nodded.

Veera; acha me ab chalti hun. Ghar ja ke tayari bhi to krni he

Baldev; tayari? kis cheez ki?

Veera; tu chod na wo sab..me chalti hun

she stood up.

Baldev; oye ruk me chad deta hun tenu.

he dropped her home and went to his own.

At night baldev felt restless as he lay on his perfect cozy soft bed

and the thought of Veera being on bare floor was disturbing him.

He felt restless.

Baldev; kya museebat he..ye ranvi bhi na..veera ke liye ek gada

khareedne ke paise nhi bacha skta tha. Padhai k liye itna sb aur

aram k liye kuch nhi.

he moved out of his bed...

************

Veera was unable to sleep again and was fighting with the

mosquitoes when suddenly her phone vibrated.

Veera; ye kis ka no. he?

she picked up the phone.

Veera; hello?!

Baldev; jadi se bahar aa

Veera; baldev tu..tenu mera no. kis ne

Baldev; oye kamli..bahar aa baad me baat krte hen wrna tere

parivaar wale jaag jayenge.

Veera; acha aati hun

Veera went out and baldev was standing with a portable matress.

Veera; oye tu inni raat ko ye bister le k kyun ghoom rha he..sadaq

pe sone ka irada he ki?

Baldev; o nhi oye..har waqt fazool baaten..delhi padhne bhej ke tere

veer ne ainvayi apne paise barbaad kiye..jab khopdi me dimag hi nhi

hoga to kya khaq padhegi tu

Veera; oye dimag tere pas nhi hoga..mera dimag to bht tez he

Baldev; chup kr..kabootri!..ye le..tere waaste laya hun..mere ghar pe

wese hi pada tha socha tere kaam ajayega..tujhe zameen pe soya nhi

jata na.

Veera was shocked..baldev was such a changed person

suddenly..the person she hated all her life was being so sweet since

her return, from dropping her home to filling her empty stomach he

did it all and now he was also concerned of her sleep.

Baldev; oye mun mat phad makhi chali jayegi le..

he handled the matress to her.

Veera; pr baldev..chaiji bg k hote huye me akele kese is bistar pe

araam kr skti hun..aur wo log to kaam bhi kheti ka krti hen mujhse

to double triple thak jati hen.

Baldev; ye mahanta (he said between his lips she couldn't hear)..nhi

veera wo log aadi ho chuke hen unhe diqat nhi hoti..tu nhi so pati tu

hi soyegi smjhi..aur me wese bhi tere waste laya hun..tu nhi so rhi to

wapas krde menu

Veera; acha acha theek he thanks..

Baldev; meri nazar he tujhe..tu hi soyegi is pe smjhi

Veera; han han samjh gai. good night

Baldev; good night.

Veera took the matress insight and lay on it. baldev peeked in to

check on her..she had closed her eyes, he took a breathe of relief

and left.

*******************

The next day Baldev was drinking tea at a stall along with billa and

jaggi when chotu came with a smiling face, he was returning from

school.

Jaggi; kya chotu wada khush lag rha he gal ki he?

Chotu; paaji apni nayi angreji ki teacher ayi he na ek dam mast item

he

Billa; acha! hamen bhi to milwa..naam kya he uska

Chotu; are paaji wo apne pind ki hi he...wo apna kisaan he na..uski

behen..are wo..wo..haan ..veera..yehi naam he..

Baldev broke the glass in his hand and caught chotu's head. His eyes

burned.

Baldev; kya bakwas ki tune? kya kahan veera ko tune?

Chotu; mene kya bola paaji..kuch nhi..veera miss..bohot achi hen bas

yehi

Baldev left him and smiled, shocking them all.

Baldev; wese tu kya keh rha tha..wo teri..wo school me masterni ban

gayi

he stood up..

Baldev; bewaqoof ladki..aur ye ranvi ab apni choti behen ki kamai

bhi khayega..wese kehta he meri beti ki tarah he veera aur use in

nalayqon ki masterni bana diya..janta nhi kya is pind ke bache kese

hen..ek hi din me veera ka khoon choos liya hoga.

He left in a hurry.

Chotu; ye paaji muskuraye na? ya me din me sapne dekh rha hun?

Jaggi; nhi chotu..paaji muskuraye to sahi..pr kyun?

Billa; pta lagana padega.

They kept thinking of the reason of baldev's smile.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Sonu this is really intresting love it
u r an Awesome writer 👏
And thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
interesting update loved it Tfs for pm sonu 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Awesome update. waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Tune 21ghanto se kuch nahi khaaya,aur yeh tu mainu ab bataa rahi hain(his voice trembled) Aww Caring Ballu <3 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tune 21ghanto se kuch nahi khaaya,aur yeh tu mainu ab bataa rahi hain,,Aww Caring Ballu <3 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Sonu this is amazing its getting more and more intresting and im loving it more.. U r awesome writer and i love ur all stories and this one is just fab! Im in love with ur SS update soon eagerly waiting to read more and more ⭐️ 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great updates😳
The plot is very interesting!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is getting really Interesting, veera reaction when she finds out baldev is behind all this is gonna be great.

Even reading this a d knowing baldev is such a b*****d I still feel sorry for him because obviously he has been missing something in his life that veera filled
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great update sonu...loved it...suspence all over!

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