VeeBa FF 'King Of my world' Part 45 pg 109 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its just perfect...😃
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Originally posted by: feck

Superb update. Veera was a khilona for Baldev!!!!!! Oh my God!!!! waiting for the next part.


yes a toy he lacked in his life😛
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i can actually imagine ballu dat much angry... it was an awesome update... 👏 curios to know about baldev more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow.. Superb update loved it
Continue soon eagerly waiting 😳
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"King of my world"

Part_5

Veera sat at home alone in her room. The empty room was eating

her but she wanted to be alone, those eyes were haunting her. She

was still trembling from fear of those eyes. Suddenly there was a

knock on the door. She some how gathered the courage to stand up

and open the door. As soon as she opened the door, her eyes

widened with shock, and she forgot to breathe, she became a stone.

Those eyes were again infront of her looking directly into hers and

holding her there...She was motionless until he shook her.

Baldev; raaste se hatte gi?

his voice all playful again not the dangerous one she experienced in

his house in the morning, she nodded and moved to a side. Alot of

men entered her room with lots of boxes in their hands.

Baldev; tere kamre ke waaste kuch saaman layen hen ye log, ziada

kuch nhi bas ek single bed, ek almari, ek dressing table aur ek air

conditioner.

She looked at him with confused innocent looks.

Baldev; smjhi nhi ki? dekh tu mera khilona he aur pind de surpunch

de khilone bhi wade khas honde hen, mera khas khilona esa garmi

me zameen pr soye mujhse dekha nhi jayega.

He pulled her close by holding her from the waist and looked into

her eyes, her face just cms aways from his.

Baldev; bahar chalen, yahan inhe kaam krna he

he pulled her outside the room pinned her to the wall, one hand

holding her waist and the other on the wall.

Baldev; fiqr mat kr bill main hi dunga tera bhikari veer nhi. aur han

is kamre ka saara saman sirf tera he kisi aur ko istimal krte dekha

na to uski khatiya khadi kr dunga, smjhi?

She was just staring at him blindly, and a tear escaped her eye

without her notice. Baldev caught it just as it escaped her eye.

Baldev; teri aakhon me ye aansu menu bardasht nhi veera! (his voice

was intense again, eyes red again but not dangerous)

He cupped her face in his hand. More tears started coming out of

her eyes

Baldev; dekh tu..tu...tu ro mat veera..

he wiped her tears.

Baldev; oye..oye tu to pind di sherni he na..meri sherni..chal

muskura..tu mujhse naraz he to lad na mujhse maar mujhe pr ro

mat

Veera lowered her eyes and sobbed.

Baldev lifted her face up with his finger and kissed her eyes. His

warm touch gave her electric sparks, she looked at him and her

mouth opened.

Baldev smiled.

Baldev; mun band kr makhi chali jayegi

he left her and went to check on the people who were installing the

stuff in veera's bedroom.

Veera; Rabjee kis mitti se banaya he aapne is munde ko? meri to

kuch smjh nhi a rha ye kya kr rha he

When all the work was done, Baldev came to Veera again and pulled

her close again by holding her waist.

Baldev; ac chalu krdiya he..tab hi band krna jab thand ziada lage.

Aur kisi ko andar mat aane dena ziada der k liye. Tujh pr hamesha

nazren gadi hui hen meri smjhi.

he left her and was leaving but again turned

Baldev; aur han...khel me maza tabhi aata he jb saamne wala taqar

de..to sher ko taqar dene k liye tayar hoja meri sherni.

he left leaving veera more confused then ever.
*************

Many rumors spread in the pind, people spoke very ill of veera and

no one talked to ranvi ratan and chaiji.

Ratan; sabzi wala se sabzi lete waqt wo esi gandi shaqal bna rha tha

ke me ap ko kya btaon chaiji..sb log hamen achoot smjh rhe hen..aur

is sb ka kaaran he veera.

Chaiji; isme cheechdi ki kya galti he ratan wo to khud pareshan he

ratan; han dikh rha he kitna pareshan he..sara din rani ki tarah

thande kamre me aaram se palank pe soti he aur wo pareshan he.

...

Bansuri tried all means to get Baldev out of veera's evil eye but

nothing got Baldev's obsession for veera out of his head. She tried

to reason with him that she didn't deserve all what she is getting

but baldev turned bansuri down and left.

Veera was walking on the street, all pind people made faces on

seeing her, she tried to ignore. And then a guy came and hit her

with a stone.

Pind guy; maro is besharm ladki ko hum is jesi ko apne pind ka

naam khrab nhi krne denge maaro.

Many people started hitting her with stones..she ran no stone had

hurt her badly yet and she saw baldev from a distance..she ran and

hugged him hiding her face in his coat.

Baldev; veera..ki hoya tu inni ghabrai hui kyun he?

Veera was shivering.

Veera; baldev wo pind wale..wo menu..wo..pind wale menu pathar

maar rhe hen.

Baldev heard this and now nothing could stop him. All other colors

from his face faded and he got all red in anger. He took a poll and

left. He saw people holding stones in their hands, the stones

dropped as soon as they saw Baldev.

He started hitting people with the poll brutally. He held a man from

his hair

Baldev; meri veera ko khrab kahega tu? meri veera ko pathar

marega...auqaat kya teri?

He was so harsh and badly beating them some started bleeding but

he was unstoppable..veera ran and caught his arm.

Veera; baldev chad de baldev..bas

Baldev; nhi chadunga me inhe..in sb ki jaan le lunga..himmat kese hui

inki meri sherni ko pathar se maarne ki.

Veera tried to stop him but he had lost all his senses.

Veera; baldev ruk jaa tenu meri qasam (she shouted)

Baldev froze where he was, and then threw the poll stick. Veera

went to him and pulled him away from that place.

Veera; tu pagal he ki wo mar jate to? tenu qaatil banna he ki?

Baldev; aur tenu kuch hojata to? unki himmat kese hui tujhe kuch

kehne ki aur pathar? in sbko to me

Veera; baldev plx..ese behave mat kr..ye sb jo ho rha he wo bhi teri

hi galti he..tu jis tarah menu special treat kr rha he logon ke man me

galat khayal a rhe hen

Baldev; to? apne khayal apne paas rkhen..me tenu bta rha hun

veera..(his voice sharp) inki wja se tenu inni si kharoch bhi ayi na..to

me inke haath kaat dunga.

Veera; pr kyun?

Baldev; veera mera dimag bht garam ho rha he.

Veera; baldev menu smjha..akhir kyun kr rha he tu ye sb kuch? me

to teri bachpan ki sbse badi dushman hun na? to kyun mere liye tu

sbko..aur menu itna special kyun treat kr rha he tu?

Baldev; veera dekh mere paas tere sawalon ke jawab dene ka waqt

nhi abhi tu jaa yahan se. me tenu tere ghar chod deta hun.

***************

Baldev was in his room.

Baldev; veera ziada der apne ghar me nhi reh skti use yahan aana

hoga. Mere paas, me use le aaonga wo sirf meri he bas.

Veera was talking to amrit on the other side.

Amrit; veera how does he look?

Veera; amrit me yahan tujhe uski dehshat ke bare me bta rhi hun

aur tujhe looks ki padi he

Amrit; plx bta na

Veera; urgh! pta nhi

Amrit; what pta nhi..hot he na? Im sure hot hoga

Veera; han han boht hot he blazing hot, jab bhi mujhe touch krta he

esa lagta he mene stove pe apna haath rkh diya ho.

Amrit; oh come on veera..sahi sahi bta na.

Veera; mere paas uski pic he tujhe send krti hun wait

Amrit; oh ho pic

Veera; shut up! just a random selfie gola khate huye li thi i didn't

know wo king of pritampura he.

Veera send the pic to amrit.

Amrit; oh gosh

Veera; kya hua?

Amrit; veera he's so handsome..itna handsome ladka mere colony ka

king hta aur mujhe special treatment deta to me us ko kiss krleti

Veera; amrit just shut up. Wo handsome he to uski harkaten justify

nhi hti ek trf meri puri family uski servant he aur me yahan princess

bani hui hun. Aur i dnt knw shayad mere room me usne camera bhi

lagai ho shayad tum pe nazar rkhunga kaha tha usne mujhe. Aur

tujhe kiss ki padi he kuch aur soojhta hi nhi kya tujhe

Amrit; oh God veera u don't understand anything..tu ek kaam kr

usne jo bhi kiya he abhi tak tere saath recall it and think..phir baat

krenge bye..

Veera was unable to understand,

Veera; amrit bhi baldev ki tarah pagal hogai he. Me sojati hun wrna

sb ke saath me bhi pagal hojaongi.

But she was unable to sleep, Baldev's thoughts occupied her mind,

and baldev kept thinking of her too.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
I know this part is confusing😆 but its just to show the confused state of mind of baldev😳 hope u enjoy
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Posted: 10 years ago
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One of the bestest update of all the time <3
Each and every emotions blended amazingly with every bit of it,,kaun si line ko chodke kaunsi line ki taareef karoon,,sab ke sab superb,,Eid ki update sabse special mein se ek rahi...<3
Ballu ka barbar veera ko waist ke through pakadnaa ^_^,,saath mein Baldeva ki mazaakiya andaaz,,and the top of it "khel mein mazaa tabhi aata hain jab saamne waalaa taqqar ka ho,,taiyaar hoja meri sherni awww <3 "
veera ka Ballu ki aankhon mein kho jaana without realisation,,aur amrit is :D,,aakhir veera se bulvaa hi liya ke "Baldev is blazing hot" <3
I am overwhelmed with the update 🤗
Biggest hug...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely...awesome update...kya karega baldev ab...kidnapp???questions in my mind...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kya likhti ho yaar tum its fab👍🏼
Waiting...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
enjoying your story to the core...

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