VeeBa FF 'King Of my world' Part 45 pg 109 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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luved it... excited to see how dey will realise dere luv
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Read the whole story just now. Great job! Its a lil heart wrenching to see baldev like this but yes thats his true character! Eager to knw what transpired five years back. And hope veera does somethingto change him and the way evrybody is treated esp her family. She sleeping in a comfy room and her family suffering is slightly disturbing - thats so not veera! Pls pm me if possible.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Veeba lost in each other...lets see wats instore for them...
Waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anuramesh26

Read the whole story just now. Great job! Its a lil heart wrenching to see baldev like this but yes thats his true character! Eager to knw what transpired five years back. And hope veera does somethingto change him and the way evrybody is treated esp her family. She sleeping in a comfy room and her family suffering is slightly disturbing - thats so not veera! Pls pm me if possible.

she is helpless na what to do😳 she can't change anything
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
awesome veeba awesome update waiting for next update Tfs for pm 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
read part 5 and 6 in one go
boht parts r just fab! love ur story to the core❤️😳
plz plz make it ff i'll love to read more and more,.. plz think about it 😃
u r awesome sonu ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
awww...kitne cute hain dono...please make it more intensified...update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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"King of my world"

Part_7

Veera was again talking to amrit.

Amrit; veera please open ur eyes and mind. Try to think, get out of

the box and think please.

Veera; i'll try amrit.

She went out again and a boy came to her.

Boy; veera didi chaiji aapko haveli bula rahi hen

veera went to chaiji,

Chaiji; cheechdi ye khana tu maalik ko de ayegi surpunch ke daftar

me

Veera; jee chaiji.

She took his lunch, he was playing on his phone when she entered,

his feet on the table crossed, his eyes fixed on the phone. Nobody

else was there.

Veera was in a playful mood she walked slowly to him

Veera; malik jee...aapka bhojan layi hun

Baldev looked at her and smiled,

Baldev; dasi hamen apne hathon se khilana hoga tumhen.

Veera; pr maalik me kese?

Baldev; ye hamara hukum he..hukum ki tameel ho.

Veera pulled a chair and sat beside him, she opened the tiffen, and

started feeding him. He purposely tried to lick her fingers, and

succeeded, veera got chills over her body. She was still feeding him

when her phone rang, she picked it up with her free hand.

Veera; karan! where the hell have u been? mene kitni calls ki tumhen

pta he..what? really? great..! me...me theek hun

Baldev was fuming, she was talking so freely with another guy it

stabbed his chest.

Veera; nhi yr me nhi a paongi na..bas kuch issues hen

Baldev snatched the phone from her.

Baldev; aap baad me phone kijiye abhi hum bohot zaroori kaam me

wyast hen

and he cut the phone and later switcehd it off.

Veera; ye..ye kya tha..tenu tameez nhi he ki?

Baldev; oye tu dasi he na meri chup chap khana khila baqi kaam

baad me.

Veera; baldev! (she stoodup) me nhi khila rhi tujhe tu khud hi kha..ja

krle jo krna he dede saza.

she turned her face.

Baldev; acha ja hogya mera..pr ye phone nhi milega tujhe..dusra

bhijwa dunga sham ko jisme sirf tere zaroorat ke number hon.

Veera; baldev tera problem ki he..karan sirf mera dost he

Baldev; han hoga to? mera maza khrab kiya na usne..ab tu ja

Veera; baldev tu kitna bada jal kukda he

Baldev; oye ziada uchal mat..is pind ka shehenshah hun me pure

pind ki kudiyan mere aas paas rehti hen har wqt aur me us sheri

gawar se jaloonga?

Veera; kya kaha tune? kitni ladkiyan hoti hen tere aas paas?

Baldev; koi mela lage to vekh lena

Veera got angry and left. She kept talking to herself as she went.

Veera; aya bada menu jalane wala..hongi iske kareeb jati kudiyan

menu ki...khud jal ke khaaq hogya to menu bhi suna di isne..pagal

hogya he ye..smjhta kya he khud ko..me iski koi dasi wasi nhi hun.

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Baldev checked her phone and saw all her pictures with her friends.

Baldev; itne sare namune meri veera ke qareeb..sbko jala dunga. bas

bohot hogya ab aur nhi me kal hi veera ko us ghar se niqalunga.

he went home and saw chaiji had hurt her finger with the knife, he

ran to her.

Baldev; chaiji..aap theek to ho na..inna khoon niqal rha he..me ..me

pati le k ata hun

he got the first aid box and dressed her wound, veera who just

arrived to take chaiji home was shocked.

Chaiji; jeeyonda re puttar.

Baldev; chaiji..aap dyan se kaam kiya karo..apko pta he na aap sab

veera k liye kya ho..phir esa kyun krte ho aap me se kisi ko bhi kuch

hua to wo toot jayegi...aur menu meri hasti khelti sherni hi chahiye

hamesha dhuki se tooti hui ghayal sherni ka me kya karunga.

Veera was touched, he was not doing this for chaiji ,which

disturbed her a bit, but he did it for her because he knew causing

her family pain would cause pain to her.

Baldev; chaiji aap..aap rehne do ye sab kaam..aapki umar hogai he

me kisi aur ko rakh lunga aap ghar pe araam karo..menu pta he

veera ko bht dukh hta hoga ke wo itne sukoon se he aur aap sab

taqleef me..mene billa se keh diya he aap ke waaste khatiya le ayega

wo..abhi tak usne ghar pe rakh bhi di hogi. Aur pankha bhi bhijwa

diya he.

Chaiji; puttar tu inna bhi bura nhi jitna tu banta he..kyun kiya tune

wo sb jab tenu khud nu taqleef hoti he ye sb kr k

He stood up, veera hid behind a pillar.

Baldev; taqleef nhi hti thi chaiji..bohot sukoon pohonchta tha un

sbko taqleef de k jinhone mera sukoon ,chen aur meri sari

khushiyan cheen leen. Ap to menu bachpan se jaanti hen na..me

badmash to tha pr zaalim nhi..aur aap ye bhi janti hen k me zalim

kyun bna..

Chaiji; puttar burai ka badla burai se nhi liya jaata

Baldev; chaiji achai ki zaban koi smjhta nhi..isiliye me bura hi theek

hun

Chaiji; to phir puttar e sab ab kyun??

Baldev; veera k liye

Veera smiled and a tear escaped her eye

Chaiji; veera k liye?

Baldev; me use dard me nhi dekh skta chaiji..jab bhi use dard hota

he na..to menu bhi hojanda he..pta nhi kyun pr use dekh k hi menu

khushi hti he aur uski muskurahat me hi meri rahat he. Us se lad k

use tang kr k use mana k jo khushi menu hti he wo aur kisi bhi

cheez se nhi hoti..

Chaiji was not shocked, she had doubts on him from the day he got

protective of veera but she didn't discuss it with ratan or ranvi

because she knew they won't understand.

Baldev; pr me ye sb aapko kyun bta raha hun..aap bhi nhi

samjhengi..aur aap kyun samjhen taqleef to mene aapko bhi boht di

he..jabke aapki to galti bhi nhi thi..me maafi to nhi maangunga kyun

ke baldev singh kisi se maafi nhi maangta , pr chaiji..aaj k baad me

aapko kabhi tang nhi karunga.

Chaiji; puttar tu meri cheechdi ka itna khayal rkhta he mene to wese

hi tenu kab ka maaf krdiya he

she gave him her blessings.

Baldev; pr ratan chachi ke sath bg ka apna hisab he..me kuch nhi kr

skta. Aur ranvi ko to me kabhi maaf nhi karunga

Chaiji laughed

Chaiji; han pta he..aur tenu ki lagta he bansuri menu chad degi je

mene kaam pe aana band krdiya to..me aaongi puttar wese bhi tujhe

aur gunjan ko mere haath ka khana bohot pasand he na

he nodded.

Baldev; pr apki madad k waaste kisi ko zaroor rakhoonga

Chaiji; mera badmash puttar.

Veera left without being noticed. She was so touched by his words,

baldev had send him another phone that lacked the numbers of all

her male friends, amrit called.

Amrit; hello veera..kahan thi tu..hottie k sath

Veera; amrit baldev..baldev.

there was a network issue,the call dropped and then it started

raining..Veera recalled all the things that had happened since her

return and his dialogues to chaiji were ringing in her ears "jab bhi

use dard hota he na..to menu bhi hojanda he" she had tears in her

eyes. She smiled and cried at the same time.

Veera; amrit..tu yehi btana chahti na mujhe...

she said to herself.

Veera; baar baar mujhe sochnepe isiliye majboor kr rhi thi na..kyun

ke tu samjh gai thi..isiliye tu pooch rhi thi na k wo hot he k nhi..aur

me bewaqoof.

Amrit called again

Amrit; veera ye ho kya rha he

Veera; amrit..amrit u were right

Amrit; kis baare me?

Veera; baldev

the call dropped again but veera continued

Veera; Baldev..Baldev mujhse..baldev mujhse pyaar krta he...he loves

me.

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Edited by overactor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update!!! cant wait to know the mystery,continue soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wanted the update to be on top 😃 so edited a previous post😛

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