VeeBa FF 'King Of my world' Part 45 pg 109 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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fabulous update dear Tfs for pm 👏😳
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So, the emotional turmoil has started. Good one. Update soon.
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Aisi he dark story di aur vishal ko suit karti hai,they can pull it off very easily. I can imagine that. Wish!
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Loved the update!
Your descriptions are so vivid that readers can visualize everything 😳 Such a talented writer you are 😊
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Pls update part 6 now can't wait if u don't mind
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interesting story ballu ekdum ek villain k siddharth ki tarah hai in ur story😊 update soon,cant wait for the nxt part.
btw thanks for PM 😊
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Awesome yaar!!! 👍🏼 great going!!continue soon 😃 ps : thanks for this lovely eid gift 🤗
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Great update, now ratan is also starting to resent baldevs special treatment of veera,
im starting to feel sorry for her, but she is a bit of a wimp in this story, not as firey as usual
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Originally posted by: anaworld24

interesting story ballu ekdum ek villain k siddharth ki tarah hai in ur story😊 update soon,cant wait for the nxt part.
btw thanks for PM 😊

thnx😳
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"King of my world"

Part_6

Veera woke up late in the morning, she went to have a bath and was

shocked to see a beauty soap a good brand shampoo and a good

toothpaste in her bathroom. Then she went out and saw alot of

food awaiting her on a small table centrally placed in her large

otherwise empty lounge, and there was a note that read,
"kha le bhookhad sherni"
she smiled, how can a person so evil be so caring towards a person

he calls his toy.

Veera sat down on the cushion placed by the small table's side.

Veera; menu zameen pe na bethna pade iska bhi intizam kiya he..ye

ladka haye Rabba

she had her breakfast, and then got ready.

Veera; ghar pe beth k bore hone se acha is baldev k sath khel hi

lun..uska khilona ban ke.

she left the house and went to search for baldev, after searching the

whole village almost she stopped infront of the surpunch office.

Veera; ofcorx wo to surpunch he aur me use pure pind me dhund

rhi hun.

she was about to go inside when she heard some water splashing

noise, she went to check and her jaw dropped.

Baldev was in his white vest, his huge biceps and triceps flexing and

extending as he used his hands to splash water on his face. She

couldn't but stare at his flour white perfect body. Then she stared

at her face as he threw water on his face, the water dripping from

his wet face made her thirsty...then he applied some water on his

head and then billa gave him a towel to wipe his face. Veera was

still staring until his eyes caught her and then she looked here and

there to avoid the embarrasement. Baldev smiled and walked

towards her

baldev; tu yahan?

veera; han..han wo..wo menu..menu kuch kaam tha

baldev; acha? bol na kya kaam tha?

veera; wo..wo..wo mujhe na wo shampoo suit nhi kr rha jo tune

diya..baal rough ho rhe hen to menu doosra chahiye.

baldev nodded smiling

veera; aur wo beauty soap tu bhi na bilkul beqar wala beauty soap

laya he koi acha nhi la skta tha? aur menu na naashte me itna oily

khana pasand nhi he itne parathe me akeli khaon ki? aur raat ko

wadi sardi lag rhi thi menu tune quilt to di hi nhi menu bas ac de

diya.

Baldev pulled her and pinned her to the wall.

Baldev; (intensely) aur koi farmahish meri maharani

Veera moved her head.

Baldev; tu jo kahegi jesa kahegi wo sb tenu miljayega..pr badle me

tenu bhi to kuch krna hoga na

Veera; kya krna hoga?

Baldev; mera manoranjan..

Veera's eyes opened wide.

veera; oye me tere waste na naachne wali hun na gaane wali hun

samjha.

Baldev; samjh gaya

Veera; dekh baldev apni had me reh..me koi esa wesa kaam nhi

karungi

baldev came closer, very close just 3 cms away from her lips were

his.

She pushed him and trued to run, he caught her hand, she bit her

hand but he didn't leave her she turned away, he moved her hair

and blew some air on her neck. She stepped on his feet and ran

away, he ran behind her and kept running until they came near a

small pond of water, baldev caught her again andpulled her close.

Baldev; kab tak bhagegi sherni

Veera; jab tak pairon me he taaqat, dil me junoon aur dimag me

jeetna ka jazba

Baldev; acha

she tickled him and he fell into the pond, she laughed and then he

pulled her into the pond.

Both splashed water on each other and enjoyed and then baldev

again pulled her close.

Baldev; krdiya na manoranjan tune..ab tenu jo chahiye maang

le..jaan bhi maangegi na to wo bhi de dunga.

his eyes had something she just couldn't ignore, and his words hit

her heart like arrows. There was care and affection she had never

seen in anyone's eyes before, he was looking at her in a way she got

disturbed, her clothes were wet and almost revealing. Baldev got

out and ran to bring his coat, then he wrapped it around her.

Baldev; bas ab tu ghar jaa

he turned his face away

Veera; ek baat poochun?

Baldev; han pooch

Veera; tu har waqt menu ghar bhejne ki rat kyun lagata he?

Baldev; ta k tenu kisi ki nazar..
it just slipped out but then he closed his eyes tight and regretted,

veera was touched.

Veera; me chalti hun.

baldev; han

At night Veera was in her room and thinking of Baldev and

whatever he did to her since she arrived, and she was just unable to

get his face washing session out of her head.

Veera; amrit sahi thi kitna extra hot he na Baldev, kisi hero se kam

nhi..balke sabse handsome he..lekin dekho..shaqal hero wali aur

harqaten villain wali hen uski.

He had send all the things she demanded and she stared at the quilt

he send.

Veera hugged the quilt as she lay down.

Veera; kuch to baat he wrna tu mera itna khayal nhi rakhta

baldev..pr kya?

Baldev was in his room.

Baldev; kya hojata he mujhe veera k paas ja k..kyun uska chehra

menu itna sukoon pohnchata he..jese toofan tham gya ho, barish

ruk gai ho, aag bujh gai ho..kyun wo mujh pe bhari padti he to

menu itna pyara lagta he..he kya wo mere liye...sirf ek khilona? nhi

wo khilona nhi wo kuch aur he..pr kya?

both were again lost in each other's thoughts

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