VeeBa FF 'King Of my world' Part 45 pg 109 - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update loved it looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zainabawoon

Awesome update 👍🏼 the way he confessed to her and proposed was so ❤️ loved that verse he had written with chalk,it was really really touching ❤️

i hope u didn't find it hard to understand 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
"King of my world"

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Baldev put Veera down, she was wet and her clothes revealing, she

turned her face and tried to cover herself, Baldev looked away and

then opened the cupboard and got a towel and one of his kurtas.

Baldev; ye le pehen le, tu puri bheeg gai he.

She took the towel and kurta, Baldev gave her a trouser too and she

went to chnage inside the bathroom, there were not many clothes

there, Baldev got another jeans but no more shirts or kurtas were

available and he had to sit shirtless untill his clothes dried.

Veera came outside and her jaw dropped as she saw him shirtless,

his huge biceps and triceps that she had already seen before, his

wide broad chest, his flour white skin, his abs, she was getting

dizzy. Baldev was busy typing on his phone so he didn't see her,

Veera tried to divert her attention and started drying her hair with

the help of the towel, and as she gave a blow to her hair with the

towel, water droplets hit Baldev's face, he was mesmerized by her,

she was in his light brown kurta and his trouser looking like the

princess of his dreams, he watched her as she tried to dry her hair.

Then he stood up and walked close to her and snatched her towel,

she turned to look at him, he threw the towel aside and moved

close, she moved back and hit the wall. He put both hands on the

wall trapping her. Veera's breaths raced and she looked down as he

looked intensely on her. He was so close their noses touched.

Baldev; (slowly and subtly) mere kapdon me tu dhamaka lag rhi he

Veera was blushing badly, he lifted her face with his finger under

her chin. He came close to her and kissed her full on the lips, Veera

kissed him back, they kissed softly at first but then he caught her

from the waist tightly and pulled her very close to himself, she put

her arms around him, Baldev's held her very tight as they kissed, as

they moved, they tripped over a small box and fell, Baldev fell on

the floor Veera fell on him, their kiss broke and they hit each

other's nose too.
They looked at each other and laughed. Baldev hugged her.

Baldev; I love you

Veera; I love you too

Veera moved away and helped him get up.

Veera; tenu ziada chot to nhi ayi na

Baldev; nhi

Veera sat down on a sofa.

Baldev; kya soch rhi he tu?

Veera; yehi ke veerji ko pta chalega to ki hoga

Baldev made an irritated face

Baldev; uski auqat hi kya he

Veera; Baldev! wo mere veerji hen

Baldev; to mene konsa kaha ke wo tera chaprasi he..he veer to he

me kya karun, tu meri he bas

Veera; Baldev me koi cheez nhi hun jo tu apna haq jama ke le jayega

Baldev pulled her close again.

Baldev; tujh pr to sbse ziada haq he mera, baqi sb to paise ki ayi

cheezen hen, aaj hen kal nhi, par tu to meri janam janmantar ki

sathi he, tujhe pe mera haq koi nhi jhutla skta.

Veera; han pr, veerji ka dil nhi dukhana chahti me Baldev, aur..me

...me jaantii hun tu veerji se kyun naraz he pr mera yaqeen kr veerji

ne esa kuch nhi kiya, hum mil kr us ka pta lagayenge jisne e sb

fasad kiya he

Baldev; kiya kisi ne bhi ho pr phir bhi me ranvi ko kabhi maaf nhi

karunga..wo tera veer he isiliye abhi aish kr rha he

Veera; Baldev tu..tu ye sab chod nhi skta

Baldev; nhi veera, jab tak mere dil ki aag nhi bujhegi..me nhi

chodunga.

Veera was quiet, she knew arguing was not the solution, she had to

heal his wounds to extinguish the fire in him and for that she had to

find the real culprit and she had to prove baldev's worth. She

hugged him and rest her head on his shoulder.

Veera; ek baat bta

baldev; kya

Veera; tenu mujhse pyar kyun hua..me to teri sabse wadi dushman

thi na

Baldev; tu meri barabar ki dushman thi, dhoke se nhi jeetti thi

muqable se jeetti he..meri sherni...pr tenu mujhse pyar kyun hua..sb

k liye to me zalim badshah tha na

Veera; han pr menu tere pyar se pyar hua..mere baldeva

Baldev tickled her spine she pushed him.

Veera; oye ye kya harqat he..

Baldev; harqat nhi ye to pyar he

Veera blushed again, but then she realized that it was very late.

Veera; Baldev menu ghar chod de please wrna siyapa hojana he sb

bht naraz honge

Baldev; hote rhe, me sab ko dekh lunga

Veera; Baldev please, mere liye

Baldev; acha chal, pr agar baarish kam hui hogi to

Veera; okay

he rain had almost stopped, Baldev brought his bike and they left

the place soon, Veera was still in Baldev's clothes and he put his wet

shirt on. They entered pritampura and every1 who was out made

faces on seeing them.

Baldev; inhe na bohot shauq he mujhe maar khane ka

Veera; nhi abhi nhi please

They reached Veera's house.

Baldev; me chalu tere naal..andar sbko

Veera; nhi tu jaa me sambhal lungi.

Baldev; koi ziada bakwas kre to

Veera; Baldev, mene kaha na me smbhal lungi..tu ja..good night

Baldev; good night

Veera enetered the house and saw the angered faces of Ratan and

ranvi ready to blast her, Chaiji was sitting with a sad face.

Ratan came to her,

ratan; kahan thi tu? kis ke saath thi ye to hum jaate hi hain, kya gul

khila ke aa rhi he

Veera; bg wo me

Ratan; mat keh mujhe bg..aakhir tu bhi wesi hi niqli na..apni maa

jesi..

Veera was confused

ratan; aaj dikha hi diya tune ke tu us besharm amrita ki beti he..aur

chahe me kesi bhi parvarish krlun..khoon ne to apna rang dikhana

he tha.

Veera was shocked.

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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG! It was HOT☺️
I read it twice!😆
Show me to aisa kuch dekhne ko nahi milta tumhare ss me hi sahi☺️

It was awsome as usual!

Waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my gosh,Ratan!how harsh she is!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow!! just Wow!! it was beyond Awesome Bas! 👏 the best update in this story so far! Hayyo Rabba! main toh VeeBa land pe chali gayi ☺️ perfect balance of HOT romance and drama 👍🏼 and the romance was perfect!not cheezy one bit 👍🏼 i LOVED LOVED IT ❤️
Edited by zainabawoon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mere kapdon mein dhamaaka lag rahi hain <3
Diwaali ke just pehle what a dhamaakedaar update..
VeeBa's passionate kiss,,and baaki hottest moments ne toh behoshi mein bhi madhosh kar daalaa..
"Mainu tere pyaar se pyaar huaa"
I am lost,,and feeling blessed to have your creations as my most precious things...Can't say more,,just 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
hao rabba... maar dala... drama is in full swing
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG!!That was HOT!!☺️
Shirtless Baldev, passionate kiss!! Hayee mein marjawan!☺️
Continue soon dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great going Sonu, but Veerji here also!!!!!! Oh God!...waiting for the next part.

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