VeeBa FF "King Of my world" Part 45 pg 109 - Page 79

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Bars

It was my most fav part! I guessed it in the beginning of the update itself! But I was like y sum1 unncessary is here! Then, i understood what were u upto! I went all awww!!! Ballu delivered his daughter himself๐Ÿฅณ

Unnecessary ppl were there for cleaning and all๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
Gosh that was beautiful ! โค๏ธ
Father daughter bond is so well described ! Baldev must be so happy to hold that little life in his hands aawww !!!! ๐Ÿค—
I so want to see this particular scene in the show too๐Ÿ˜ญ damn beatiful man !
This was one of the best updates of urs ! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Waiting...

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Posted: 9 years ago
OMA!! That was an Amazing .. mujhe 3 idiots Yaad arhi thi jab chanchali Ballu ko instruct kar rhi thi ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜† Aww Their Daughter <3 <3 
Loved it Diii โญ๏ธ Continue Soon ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
Im speechless.. U just nailed it!! A fathers feelings his emotions of holding her daughter for the first time.. Everything was just so so so beautiful i was smiling widely throughout the update..loved it so much โค๏ธ and love u sonu for this update โค๏ธ

Eagerly waiting for next update once again it was so beautiful   โค๏ธ ๐Ÿ˜ญ (khushi ke anso) ๐Ÿ˜†
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awesome thanks for pm ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Loved the update โค๏ธ You've described the emotions of Baldev beautifully!Glad that someone left just in time and didn't spoil the moment ๐Ÿ˜†
Can't wait to read how Baldev pampers his little girl 


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sonmusk

Finally our junior veera entered. Too gud sonu! You compensated all to baldev which he missed while balveer. If veera named their son,baldev named their daughter. I've heard that usually in behaviour,boys have mother's traits and daughters have father's. Ye kudi ne ab uski maa ko pagal kar dena hai fir toh :-D really a 'dramatic' update. Khare sone ko sona he kahenge bhai.

ofcorx ek to sher ki beti upar se highly pampered veera ki to waat lagne wali he๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Jammy...

Loved the update โค๏ธ You've described the emotions of Baldev beautifully!Glad that someone left just in time and didn't spoil the moment ๐Ÿ˜†

Can't wait to read how Baldev pampers his little girl 



im not mash to destroy special moments with some ppl๐Ÿ˜†
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"King of my world"

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The weather cleared in the morning and the village people 

got the streets clean, Baldev called the doctor and she 

examined Veera and Sonam.

Baldev; ye dono theek to hain na?

Doctor; bilkul theek hen, aur ye baby to boht lucky hai ise 

itne brave daddy jo mile hen, aap ki himmat daat deni hogi 

esi situation me log sirf panick krte hen pr aapne to khud 

delivery ki

Veera; doctor, ek maa apne bache ko janam deti he pr ise to 

iske papa ne janam dilwaya he

Doctor; she's so lucky ke use itne ache dad mile, ab aap 

pareshan na hon dono bilkul theek hen, main vaccination ka 

saaman apne saath lai hun me vaccine laga dun ise

Baldev; jee doctor

Baldev held her himself when the doctor gave her the 

injection on her arm, she flinched and started crying in pain, 

but more then her Baldev was in pain, he closed his eyes 

when the doctor was about to insert the needle, and his face 

was twisted in such a way as if he himself got the injection. 

Sona cried and Baldev held her close to himself.

Baldev; na na meri choti sherni he na, is choti si sui se dar 

gai (but his voice trembled as he spoke) na na meri jaan rote 

nhi

He touched her cheeks carefully with his own, trying to keep 

his beard hair away. Veera smiled.

Veera; tu khud itna pareshan hogya he use kya samjhayega 

pagal mujhe de me chup krati hun

Doctor; ek minute bas ye drops pilane hen ise

the doctor dropped two drops of vaccine in sona's mouth 

and she cried more.

Doctor; bas baby hogya, acha ab me chalti hun

Baldev; jee

Baldev sat beside Veera and carefully handed Sona over. 

Veera held her close but she didn't stop crying.

Baldev; menu de ise itna dard hua he, ye kese chup hogi de

Baldev took her back and then he got tears.

Veera; tu khud ro rha he pagal

Veera hugged them both, Sona stopped crying.

Baldev; chup hogai meri sona

Veera; haan sona se bhi ziada chote uske papa

Balveer entered with Bansuri and Balwant.

Balveer; mom dad, meri sis kahan he

Baldev moved for balveer to see

Balveer; ye meri sis hai

Veera; haan sim ye tumhari sis he

Balveer; kitni cute he na, choti si, mere teddy se bhi choti he 

ye, mom iska naam kya hai?

Veera; Sonam

Bansuri took her from Baldev.

Bansuri; dekhiye surpunch jee, mere puttar ki gudiya

Balwant; nazar na lage Bansuri jee kitni pyari he na hamari 

rajkumari

Balveer; mom me ise kya bulaonga

Veera; aapki marzi baby

Balveer; aapne iska nickname kya rakha he mom?

Veera; aapke dad ne iska nickname "sona" rakha he which 

means "gold" maine abhi socha nhi

Gunjan who just woke up came there too

Gunjan; maaf krna me kal bht thak gai thi kesi he meri 

gudiya

Balveer; bua nickname rakho na

Gunjan; main to ise gudiya hi bulaongi

Balveer; how boring 

He said down and pulled a long face. Then suddenly he 

smiled and came to Veera who had Sona in her lap.

Balveer; mom i will call her "daisy"

Veera; daisy? kyun?

Balveer; mere day care me ek bht pyare garden ki picture thi 

and it had daisies, so daisy

Veera; okay as u wish

Baldev; tune naam nhi socha??

Veera; maine bhi soch liya

Baldev; kya?

Veera; Devra

Balveer and Baldev exchanged looks confused

Veera; uff ho, dekh baldev tere naam ka bal to balveer me he 

pr dev to reh gya to isliye Baldev ka dev aur veera ko 

ra..devra.meri choti si devra

Baldev; hat, kitna ajeeb sa naam rakh diya he meri sona ka, 

sheru ka bhi ajeeb naam rakha tune, angrez sherni

Balveer; haan mom daisy is cute but devra

Veera; i don't know and i don't care meri beti he me kuch 

bhi bulaon tum dono ko mna kiya mene

Baldev; acha ab naraz na ho teri marzi, devra ki maa

Veera smiled.

Balveer; dadoo dadee aap ne nicknames nahi rakhe meri 

daisy ke?

Balwant; beta zaruri he kya abhi rakhen sb, baad me rakh 

lenge

Baldev; aap sab bahar jao ab meri sona sogai he

Gunjan; par veerji abhi to Ranvi aur baqi sab ise dekhne 

aane wale hen

Baldev; nhi oye, koi nhi dekhega bas, jao sab meri sona ko 

sone do

He got everybody out except Veera and balveer.

Baldev; sheru tu bhi so ja

Balveer; okay dad

Baldev; veera, tu sheru ko sula sona menu de de

Veera carefully handed over Sona to baldev and he kept 

holding and cuddling her as long as she slept.
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Awww!!! How cute and sweet,baldev-sona moments โค๏ธ the way baldev flinched when sona was getting vaccinated, the way his eyes teared when she was crying, the way he was holding her close keeping his cheek on her carefully to sooth her and then the way he kept holding and cuddling her for as long as she slept, hayyo rabba it was all so heart warming and got me teary eyed, loved loved loved it โค๏ธ๐Ÿค— 
Btw Devra is so Ajeeb ๐Ÿ˜†