Suspicious Partners- MG || (Part 37|Page 88)

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~~~~~~~Suspicious Partners~~~~~~~~



Index



Part 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161906486


Part 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161939710


Part 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161990694


Part 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162004141


Part 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162023264


Part 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162032946


Part 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162064956


Part 8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162084615


Part 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162167676


Part 10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162192186


Part 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162197260


Part 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162203605


Part 13


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162217727


Part 14


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162317133


Part 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162342526


Part 16

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162366855


Part 17

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162373667


Part 18

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162402861


Part 19

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162419337


Part 20

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162455264


Part 21

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162465458


Part 22

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162512883


Part 23

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162548761


Part 24

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162568329


Part 25

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162619026


Part 26

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162701021


Part 27

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162733123


Part 28

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162742636


Part 29

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162760826


Part 30

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162808624


Part 31

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162854453


Part 32

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162989461


Part 33

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/163147010


Part 34

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/163153760


Part 35

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/163985510


Part 36

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/163998554


Part 37

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/164023320






Starting this new story. Hope you enjoy it

Part 1


It’s a crowded area with lots of people moving around

 

In that busy area lies a tiny office with a sign board

 

‘ Geet Detective Agency’

 

It was Geet’s dream to become a detective. But her lack of experience and her being a women came in way of here getting hired

 

But she was not the one to get bogged down. She opened her own detective agency

 

Didi! Didi! Chai

 

Geet comes out of her daydreams hearing Chintu calling her name

 

G- Thanks Chintu

 

Chintu- Didi 6 mahine toh ho gaye makhiyaan maarte huye. Iss vaar rent nahi diya office ka toh office band

 

Geet sinks down in her chair

 

G- I know. Aur use bhi bhayanak

 

Chintu- who kya?

 

G- Shaadi. 6 mahine ki mauhlat maangi thi baba se. Kuch nahi hua. Ab baba pakadke shaadi kara denge

 

She buries her face

 

Chintu- Ab didi uncle ji bhi kya karein, apke peeche aapki do behene bhi toh hai naa

 

G-Toh unki shaadi kara dein naa

 

Chintu- Himmat hai toh jaake bol do. Himmat hai?

 

Geet looks at Chintu and grumbles, she knows she can’t’ say anything to ger father. He is too strict & the patriarch of their middle-class conservative family. And most importantly her baba is stubborn, just like her

 

G-uurggg!!!

 

Chintu- Waise didi aapke naam ka ye lifafa deke gaya hai koi bahar

 

G- Mere naam ka?

 

Geet proceeds to open the heavy envelope as Chintu sees himself out

 

Envelop has a whole bunch of cash money and a letter

 

Geet starts reading the letter

 

 

Ms Geet

 

Envelop mein aapko pachaas hazzaar (50, 000) rupees milenge. Ye aapka advance payment hai. Baaki ke paise aapko kaam ke baad milenge. Aap ye kaam karna chahein toh apne office ke neeche aa sakti hain. Saamne aapko ek black sedan khadi milegi. Usmein baith jaayiye baaki baatein wahin karenge. Aur agar aap ye kaam nahi karna chahti toh aap ye paise rakh sakti hain

 

-MSG

 

Geet finishes reading

 

G- MSG?

 

Geet ko samajh nahi aaraha kya akre. Kaam kya hai ye jaane ki curiosity bhi hai. Finally, ek kaam aaya hai uski excitement bhi hai. Paise bhi chahiye par ye darr bhi hai ki ye kaisa kaam hoga aur itni secrecy kyun hai?

 

 

Curiosity gets better of her, and she finds herself on the road under looking for a black car

 

She finds a black sedan parked on the road.

 

The car is is sticking out like a sore thumb in that busy overpopulated marketplace

 

She cautiously walks towards the car

 

The driver in his white uniform approaches her

 

‘Miss Geet’

 

She nods

 

He opens the passenger door for her

 

She looks inside to see a man in a black suit and wearing black shades sitting in there

 

He looks someone of high stature and class, someone with money

 

That she expected

 

But she had not expected that the man would be almost of her age. Maybe a few years older but he was younger than her expectation

 

He speaks up and Geet realizes his voice matches his physique, he had a manly commanding voice

 

‘Miss Geet, please sit.

 

Geet obeys & sits

 

G- Are you MSG?

 

She inquires

 

He nods without elaborating more

 

++++++++++

 

Geet is back to her office pondering about what happened

 

She re-looks at the new envelope that she got

 

The envelope has a picture of a scar

 

‘Aap mujhe iss sheher mein Shalini, Shalu naam ki ladki ka pata lagayengi. Umar 19-20. Haath pe aisa ek scar. Dhyaan rahe, pata chalein toh aap bass mujhe batayengi. Aaap kisi se koi baat nahi karengi iss barein mein. Aapke paas 3 din hain iss kaam ke liye. Baaki paise kaam ke baad aapko mil jaayenge’

 

Geet rewinds the instruction the man gave to her

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Wow Di this is going to be exciting and interesting too.... Do continue with your good work... 🤗

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Congratulations for new story ☺️

Interesting part,geet as a detective sayad first time padh rahi hu 😀 eagerly waiting for next part 🤗❤️

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Congrats on new story. Interesting concept with geet want to be a detective and MSG, well wait for further secrets

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Very Interesting start

Geet Detective 🤨🤨 this was really cool 

So she gets a first case now

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗

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Interesting concept 

Please continue 

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part 1 

Congratulations for new story 

nice update geet is detective here and she has own agency I like the conversation between chintu and geet .MSG is here what is G here ?

 waitimg for next part update soon 

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Congrats on the new story! 

thanks for the pm! 


Part 1

Captivating update.... well written

so Geet is a detective

Geet and Chintu share a good bond

oh she has been given six months by her dad 

now she has to get married

alas she cannot refuse her dad

glad that she finally got her first case from MSG! 

seems like Maan is MSG


update soon

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congrats for new story

very interesting

waiting to read more 

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Interesting concept

Unique first time geet as detective can't wait to see how there love story starts 

Update soon