Suspicious Partners- MG || (Part 37|Page 88) - Page 2

Posted: 1 years ago

Interesting. Who is this SHAlu why is MSK looking gif her. And why hire geet who is a nobody. When he can easily hire reputed detectives 

mystery !!!


Posted: 1 years ago

Congratulations🥳🎉👏 for new story dear looks very interesting

Posted: 1 years ago

Congratulations on your new story 

Title sounds Fascinating and makes me Curious 


Part 1 


Intriguing Start 


Geet has not gotten any cases to solve 

which means no income and now she has to pay the rent too

a client gives her money to start investigating and I' sure Geet

will get to the bottom of his issue 

Posted: 1 years ago

Congratulations for new story.

Geet new look is superb 

Detective 🕵️‍♀️ wow

Posted: 1 years ago

wow interesting concept

detective geet that would be interesting to read

pls do cont soo 

Posted: 1 years ago

This is going to be interesting...

Detective Geet🤩

Looking forward to read it....


Good luck😍

Posted: 1 years ago

Writer's Note: Thank you for liking & appreciating this story. Hope you like this part too. Please refer this story to your friends to read if you like it. Also, added all the readers to by PM list. By chance if I missed anyone then please let me know


Part 2

 

 

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Geet is back to her office pondering about what happened

 

She re-looks at the new envelope that she got

 

The envelop has a picture of a scar

 

‘Aap mujhe iss sheher mein Shalini, Shalu naam ki ladki ka pata lagayengi. Umar 19-20. Haath pe aisa ek scar. Dhyaan rahe, pata chalein toh aap bass mujhe batayengi. Aaap kisi se koi baat nahi karengi iss barein mein. Aapke paas 3 din hain iss kaam ke liye. Baaki paise kaam ke baad aapko mil jaayenge’

 

Geet rewinds the instruction the man gave to her

 

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Geet research for the birth records of girls around the 19-20 age. Once she has a list of girls of that age then she disguises herself as a NGO worker and goes to each and every house with pretext of free vaccine for a deadly disease

 

After 3 days of extensive research and going to door to door she finally finds the girl with the scar

 

She confirms her name & it is indeed 'Shalini'

 

Her instructions told her to send a message on a number whenever she finds the person, that she does

 

She is instructed to meet the same way next day

 

She again goes inside the car and finds the man sitting

 

She thought he will be happy that she found the person so quickly, but he looks pensive

 

'Maine kaha tha naa aapse, baat nahi karne ke liye unse'

 

G-Toh main confirm kaise karti ki wo hi Shalini hai?

 

'Aap se jitna kaha jaaye, utna kijiye'

 

'Please'

 

He adds

 

Geet frowns

 

G- Ye lijiye uski information aur address. Ab main jaun?

 

'Paise leke jaaiye aur dusre kaam ki information leke jaayiye'

 

She wonders 'Dusra kaam?'. If he didnt like my work, then dusra kaam kyun kara raha hai

 

But she doesn't say anything. Just takes the envelop and goes

 

Upar aake envelop kholke wohi paise milte hain aur ek note

 

: 'Name: Meenakshi/Meenu Age: 16-17 years Gender:Female Info: Goes to Bansal classes'

 

Geet reads

 

Ajeeb lag raha hai, saari ladkiyon ke baare mein kyun pata karwa raha hai? Kahin main kuch galat kaam ka hissa toh nahi bann rahi?

 

Geet wonders

 

She decides ki apni iss investigation ke saath saath she will also investigate on the man giving her the work and his motives

 

Meenakshi/Meenu ka pata lagaate lagaate, Bansal classes mein bohot saari ladkiyan mili with same name.

 

Baaki koi information di nahi thi.

 

Toh ab Geet pata kare toh kare kaise ki sahi Meenakshi hai kaunsi.

 

Geet starts clicking pictures of all the girls named Meenakshi or Meenu in every 'Bansal Classes'

 

G- Pictures toh mil gaye but ye confirm karne ke liye 'MSG' 'Aginomoto' se milna padega

 

She clicks her tongue

 

G- Chal Geet, paise ke liye gadhe ko bhi baap banana padta hai

 

She messages him to come

 

Same routine, they meet in the car next day

 

'Information mil gayi?' He asks

 

G- Nahi

 

'Nahi? toh aap ne mujhe yahan kyun bulaaya hai?'

 

G- Confirm karne ke liye ki inn mein se Meenakshi kaun hai

 

'Behtar hoga ki aap jitni information di jaaye usse use karke kaam ko anjaam dein'

 

G- Behtar hoga ki aap mujhe puri information dein. Warna Investigator change karlein. I am sure you can hire anybody. Mujhe toh ye samajh mein nahi aa raha ki aapne mujhe iss kaam ke liye kyun choose kiya hai

 

'Photos dikhaiye'

 

She hands over the photos to him

 

He skims through them and & points at one

 

She nods

 

'Iska matlab isko ladkiyan kaise dikhti hai pata hai' Geet observes

 

G- Kal tak aapko Meenakshi ki information mil jaayegi

 

He nods

 

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As promised Geet provides the information about the girl he pointed on

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 1 years ago
Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by UmaDevi97


Wow Di this is going to be exciting and interesting too.... Do continue with your good work... 🤗

❤️


Thank you dear❤️. Hope you will like it. Keep reading my fics & commenting on them🤗

Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by mkd.70


Congratulations for new story ☺️

Interesting part,geet as a detective sayad first time padh rahi hu 😀 eagerly waiting for next part 🤗❤️


Thanks dear❤️. Its totally a new concept. Hope you will like it. Keep reading my fics & commenting on them🤗

Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by sun4u


Congrats on new story. Interesting concept with geet want to be a detective and MSG, well wait for further secrets


Thanks dearsmiley27. Its totally a new concept. Hope you will like it. Keep reading my fics & commenting on themsmiley31



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