Suspicious Partners- MG || (Part 37|Page 88) - Page 43

Posted: 1 years ago

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very nice 

maan is happy seeing geet's care for him 

maan is confuse seeing setup done by geet but his confusion clearing with geet talking with her family

geet's family happy to see maan 

geet is not happy as maan accepted wedding invitation of geet's sister 

Posted: 1 years ago

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geet is confuse with maan's return in her life

maan is not clearing his attitude 

who visit geet n running away seeing maan 

geet trying to clear everything by questioning maan but maan is repeating same answer which increasing confusion

Posted: 1 years ago

Part 22

 

 

M- Coffee peete hain

 

Maan tells the man, pulling him inside the house and locking the door

 

Zor se mixer chala deta hai after locking the door

 

Guy – ehh

 

Maan stares at the guy

 

M- cheeni grind kar raha hoon. Coffee ke liye

 

Maan takes out a hammer from his bag and casually puts it on his back pocket

 

Guy- what will you do to me?

 

Maan turns

 

Shrugs

 

M- I would have spread a plastic on the floor if I wanted to do anything. Cleaning up is a headache.

 

Maan coffee rakhta hai

 

M- Don’t force me to do something I really don’t want to do

 

That guy becomes pale

 

Guy- you... you...will …

 

M- As I said, Abhijeet. Don’t make me do stuff I don’t like!! You will not be seen around here

 

The guy gulps

 

Guy- What will you do? You will kill me too? Like your father killed those innocent people. Son of a serial killer would be a killer too. Your family fled from there, everybody thought you disappeared. I didn't expect you will resurface like this

 

Maan’s jaw gets clenched hearing the guy

 

Abhijeet- I am a reporter. People will come looking for me if you harm me. And then they will start looking into your past

 

++++++++

 

Geet comes home in the evening

 

Maan opens the door

 

She puts her purse and looks around

 

G- Mere liye koi aaya tha kya?  

 

Geet asks, as if she was expecting someone.

 

M- Koi aane wala tha kya?

 

Maan answers calmly

 

She brushes it off saying:

 

G- Nahi just a delivery

 

She wonders the reporter she was expecting why didn’t he turn up

 

She changes and goes to the kitchen

 

She is surprised to see the kitchen overflowing with groceries

 

G- Ye itna saaman?

 

M- Yeah, I thought I will help you with groceries

 

He answers while walking towards the kitchen and standing leaning on the wall at the entrance of the kitchen behind her

 

G- Par itne samaan ki zarurat nahi thi

 

She says while trying to sound less rude than before as she felt that she had been snapping unnecessarily at him

 

She could at least be civil with him like he is to her

 

He shrugs

 

M- Mere paas tumhara number nahi tha, warna main pooch leta kya chahiye

 

Maan indirectly asks for her number again

 

She nods and finally shares her number with him

 

 

++++++

 

Next Day:

 

Geer is in her office, working

 

Her phone beeps, it’s a text message

 

She doesn’t bother to check as nobody usually texts her

 

Her phone again beeps few more number of times

 

Geet ignores thinking, must be some spam message

 

Her colleague’s had their ears perked up

 

Finally, her phone rings

 

G- Hello

 

Its Maan on the other side

 

M- Maan bol raha hoon

 

G- Haan pata hai, bolo

 

M- Maine message kiya tha

 

G- Oh tumne message kiya tha kya, maine check nahi kiya

 

M- Tumne reply nahi kiya toh call kiya

 

G- Haan bolo?

 

M- Main bahar jaa raha hoon. Ghar ke liye kuch chahiye kya?

 

G- Ghar ke liye…nahi…ghar pe sab kuch hai. Kal bohot samaan le aaye the tum

 

M- Okay, kuch ho toh bataana

 

G- Haan, kuch yaad aayega toh call karlungi

 

M- Cool. Bye

 

G- Bye

 

Geet hangs up the phone and looks around to see her colleagues looking at her

 

‘Geet, kisse baat kar rahi thi?’

 

‘Tumhare husband aa gayein?’

 

‘Unse hi baat kar rahi thi naa’

 

‘Haan, usually aise kisse baat karogi’

 

‘Waise toh tumhare koi call nahi aate’

 

Everybody is looking at Geet for an answer

 

Geet glances at everyone

 

G- Haan

 

She finally had to admit

 

‘ “Haan”, haan kya? Tumhare husband the call pe?’

 

G- Haan

 

‘Arre kabhi milao unse’

 

Geet nods

 

+++

 

Kaam karte karte shaam ho gayi

 

‘Arre Geet tum nikli nahi’

 

G- Abhi toh 5 hi baje hain. Abhi kyun nikalna hai?

 

‘Hum log sab nikal rahe hain. Tumne suna nahi toofan aane wala hai, poore sheher mein red alert laga diya hai’

 

‘Maine toh apne husband ko bula liyya hai, woh pick kar rahe hain mujhe. Tum bhi apne husband ko bula lo’

 

‘Haan, waise bhi tum durr rehti ho, raaste mein kuch jhamele mein padh gai toh’

 

G- Aap log jao. Mera kaam pending hai. Main manage kar lungi

 

Itne din manage kiya hai. Ab kyun kisi ko bullaun, Geet thinks to herself

 

Posted: 1 years ago

Part 22


Fabulous Update 


So the man is Abhijeet a reporter 

and he believes that Maan's father has

killed innocent people 

so Maan too will kill him 

at the office Geet's phone rings and all her office friends 

wants to know if it's her husband 

Posted: 1 years ago

Loved it Neelu dear 🤗🤗

Very interesting part

So Geet is trying hard to cope up with the situation & overpowering her irritation at least is being normal & civic to him which is good👍

This new reporter seems to be quite known person to Maan & he knows his family too which seems quite interesting 

So finally a red alert in city for storm hopefully Geet in her ego doesn't fall in any trouble

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗🤗

Posted: 1 years ago

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guy come is reporter abhijeet from maan's past 

why geet call him 

hope there will not be any misunderstanding between maan n geet 

 

Posted: 1 years ago

Nice update 

Did report said truth and what happened to him did he leave or maan done something 

Maan is innocent or not ?

What happens next can’t wait to read 

Update soon 

Posted: 1 years ago

😲is Maan a serial killer? Really...

That was so shocking info about his father and family...😲

It gave me DURANGA feeling...just knew about the show and watched trailer....still...Geet was also detective before coming to Hyderabad...

Have you taken the same concept....?

Also why does she called for reporter...in any case has she had doubts on maan...for that reason ? 

Although i don't know if he is really serial killer or saint as he is till now...

Only future story will reveal the secrets now ..🤪

Plz try to update fast...

Posted: 1 years ago

Part 22

Interesting update…. impressively written 

so the reporter knows Maan's family

well he accuses Maan's dad of being a serial killer

oh he calls Maan a killer

eager to know about Maan's past

is what the reporter saying true?

why was Geet expecting a reporter?

great that Maan brought groceries

Geet was indeed shocked

at least Geet was civil to Maan

glad that she gave Maan her number

ahh Maan calls Geet 

as expected her colleagues question her

Geet admits that her husband called her

of cos they want to meet Maan

Gosh there is a red alert in the city cos of the weather

good that her colleague tell her to call her husband to fetch her

not surprised with Geet's response

her thoughts are reasonable

hope she does call Maan

worried for Geet


update soon

Posted: 1 years ago

Abhijeet, the reporter, what is he after? Is he following Maan?



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