Suspicious Partners- MG || (Part 37|Page 88) - Page 19

Posted: 1 years ago

Aww. Both enjoying each other’s company 

Will he actually be in touch? or will he ask her to come with him? Hmm

Let’s see where this goes 

Posted: 1 years ago

Nice they spent quiet day with each other. Want to also know Maan's side of story. Is he all alone, or is he staying with foster family... eager to see how they complete each other.❤️

Posted: 1 years ago

Hi hope you and your family are well


Part 9

Amazing update…. excellently written 

sad that Maan is leaving India

can understand why he does not intend to return

at least he will help her find a a place as a PG and she will show him around the city

glad that she feels protected and familiarity with Maan by her side

well Geet was unable to find a place

liked that Maan and Geet were comfortable with each other

great that they spent the day together

she now knows a bit about him

so she has decided to go to Hyderabad and open a detective business

pleased that Maan said she if she needs anything she can ask him

her question was justified 

he choosing her was reasonable 

loved when he said that the day turned out to be the best day of his life

she was indeed amazed hearing this


update soon 

Posted: 1 years ago

Part 9


Fabulous and Warm Update 


It seems for some reason Maan and Geet

will continue to talk 

either she will go back with him or he will stay back 

both enjoyed their time together 

Posted: 1 years ago

Nice update

Great day they spent together, can't wait to see what happens next will geet go Dubai with maan or maan stay here with her 

Update soon 

Posted: 1 years ago

Great part 

Hope all gets well with Geet 

Cont soon 

Posted: 1 years ago


THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.


Posted: 1 years ago

great update

geet realized that she feels different n secure around maan 

maan also thinks n feel best day of life which he spend with geet to find place for her living 

Posted: 1 years ago

Part 10

 

 

 

G- Aur saath mein aapko family drama mein phasaa bhi diya

 

He dismisses the notion

 

M- Aisa nahi hai.

 

He looks around and then at her

 

M- This is turning out be best day of my life

 

He says dreamily

 

She looks up at him with her huge doe like astonished eyes

 

+++++++

 

Dono raat tak ghumte hain, dinner karte hain saath, ice cream khaate hain

 

They even drive around the city and enjoy the serene new silence of the former noisy city

 

G- Main kabhi itni raat tak bahar nahi rahi

 

Geet confesses

 

M- Tumhare ghar mein kaun kaun hai tumne bataya nahi

 

G- Aap toh sab se mil hi loye, uske alawa meri chotti behenein hain

 

M- I see. Aur koi nahi hai tumhari zindagi mein?

 

G- Aur kaun hoga?

 

M- I mean dost aur sab

 

G- Haan, bataya naa. Meri sab saheliyon ki shaadi ho gai

 

Maan doesn’t probe more

 

++++++++

 

Dono hotel wapas pohonchte hain

 

G- Good night

 

M- Good night

 

G- emm…

 

Maan who was walking towards his room stops and looks at her

 

G- Aaap…kal jaa rahe hain toh…emm…main aapke saath airport tak chalun?

 

Maan smiles

 

M- Sure

 

Maan wanted to ask her, but he didn’t know what she would feel. Now he feels elated as Geet will come. He liked spending time with her and wanted to spend some more

 

Geet was also feeling a sense of weird emptiness just thinking about Maan leaving so she wants to spend few more hours before he leaves

 

Both don’t know whether the other would like to be in contact after separating ways but wish they would

 

++++++++

 

Next day, Geet accompanies him to the airport

 

M- Abhi time hai. Breakfast kar lete hain pehle

 

As if stealing time form the inevitable and for delaying the moment, they are making excuses

 

Geet agrees

 

They have breakfast together

 

Its almost time for him to get in

 

G- Aap social media mein ho?

 

M- Haan. Main active nahi hoon par.

 

They both add each other on social media

 

Thodi tassalli hui ki social media mein toh connected rahenge

 

M-emm..okay then…main chalta hoon

 

She nods

 

G-Have a safe flight. It was nice knowing you…I enjoyed the time we spent

 

She offers her hand for a handshake

 

He reciprocates by gently shaking her hand

 

This is the first time they have a physical touch

 

It felt as if…as if the time froze for that moment

 

The boarding announcement bring them back to reality

 

He walks away with reluctance

 

Her eyes have an unexplainable silence

 

She is trying to see him as long as she could, as much as she could

 

She keeps on looking till the view of the Maan she spent those beautiful moments completely disappears

 

Geet was turning to go back when she notices bunch of police officers entering the airport

 

She stops on her feet seeing her family accompanying the police officers

 

She runs towards them to see what’s the matter

 

G- Aap log yahan? Aaap yahan kya kar rahe hain

 

Few police officers stop her

 

‘Peeche rahiye aap , madam’

 

‘Ye hamari beti hai’

 

Her family reassures the police

 

G- Aap log yahan pe kyun…?

 

Before she could finish she sees Maan being hand-cuffed and being escorted out of the airport by the police force

Posted: 1 years ago

Oh no. Who is Maan whybus he arrested. What happened. Why did her family do that 



Related Topics

doc-text Topics pencil Author stackexchange Replies eye Views clock Last Post Reply
The Devil in the Dark Thread 2||Chapter 57 page 7|Note page 11

pencil Queen0fDarkness   stackexchange 86   eye 7238

Queen0fDarkness 86 7238 1 months ago heycookie
Something About You- MG || (Part 42|Page 51)

pencil NilzStorywriter   stackexchange 520   eye 17013

NilzStorywriter 520 17013 2 days ago coderlady
(MG-FF) REVENGEFUL MARRIAGE # 1 (RE-POST) PART 39/PG 87(April 16'24)

pencil drrose31   stackexchange 870   eye 26800

drrose31 870 26800 6 hours ago shah10
MG FF-Enchanted #2 - Chapter 48 ; page 116 April 05

pencil tellyme   stackexchange 1234   eye 56374

tellyme 1234 56374 5 hours ago Alamelu

Topic Info

36 Participants 692 Replies 29120Views

Topic started by NilzStorywriter

Last replied by NilzStorywriter

loader
loader
up-open TOP