Aww. Both enjoying each other’s company
Will he actually be in touch? or will he ask her to come with him? Hmm
Let’s see where this goes
Nice they spent quiet day with each other. Want to also know Maan's side of story. Is he all alone, or is he staying with foster family... eager to see how they complete each other.❤️
Hi hope you and your family are well
Part 9
Amazing update…. excellently written
sad that Maan is leaving India
can understand why he does not intend to return
at least he will help her find a a place as a PG and she will show him around the city
glad that she feels protected and familiarity with Maan by her side
well Geet was unable to find a place
liked that Maan and Geet were comfortable with each other
great that they spent the day together
she now knows a bit about him
so she has decided to go to Hyderabad and open a detective business
pleased that Maan said she if she needs anything she can ask him
her question was justified
he choosing her was reasonable
loved when he said that the day turned out to be the best day of his life
she was indeed amazed hearing this
update soon
Part 9
Fabulous and Warm Update
It seems for some reason Maan and Geet
will continue to talk
either she will go back with him or he will stay back
both enjoyed their time together
Nice update
Great day they spent together, can't wait to see what happens next will geet go Dubai with maan or maan stay here with her
Update soon
great update
geet realized that she feels different n secure around maan
maan also thinks n feel best day of life which he spend with geet to find place for her living
Part 10
G- Aur saath mein aapko family drama mein phasaa bhi diya
He dismisses the notion
M- Aisa nahi hai.
He looks around and then at her
M- This is turning out be best day of my life
He says dreamily
She looks up at him with her huge doe like astonished eyes
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Dono raat tak ghumte hain, dinner karte hain saath, ice cream khaate hain
They even drive around the city and enjoy the serene new silence of the former noisy city
G- Main kabhi itni raat tak bahar nahi rahi
Geet confesses
M- Tumhare ghar mein kaun kaun hai tumne bataya nahi
G- Aap toh sab se mil hi loye, uske alawa meri chotti behenein hain
M- I see. Aur koi nahi hai tumhari zindagi mein?
G- Aur kaun hoga?
M- I mean dost aur sab
G- Haan, bataya naa. Meri sab saheliyon ki shaadi ho gai
Maan doesn’t probe more
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Dono hotel wapas pohonchte hain
G- Good night
M- Good night
G- emm…
Maan who was walking towards his room stops and looks at her
G- Aaap…kal jaa rahe hain toh…emm…main aapke saath airport tak chalun?
Maan smiles
M- Sure
Maan wanted to ask her, but he didn’t know what she would feel. Now he feels elated as Geet will come. He liked spending time with her and wanted to spend some more
Geet was also feeling a sense of weird emptiness just thinking about Maan leaving so she wants to spend few more hours before he leaves
Both don’t know whether the other would like to be in contact after separating ways but wish they would
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Next day, Geet accompanies him to the airport
M- Abhi time hai. Breakfast kar lete hain pehle
As if stealing time form the inevitable and for delaying the moment, they are making excuses
Geet agrees
They have breakfast together
Its almost time for him to get in
G- Aap social media mein ho?
M- Haan. Main active nahi hoon par.
They both add each other on social media
Thodi tassalli hui ki social media mein toh connected rahenge
M-emm..okay then…main chalta hoon
She nods
G-Have a safe flight. It was nice knowing you…I enjoyed the time we spent
She offers her hand for a handshake
He reciprocates by gently shaking her hand
This is the first time they have a physical touch
It felt as if…as if the time froze for that moment
The boarding announcement bring them back to reality
He walks away with reluctance
Her eyes have an unexplainable silence
She is trying to see him as long as she could, as much as she could
She keeps on looking till the view of the Maan she spent those beautiful moments completely disappears
Geet was turning to go back when she notices bunch of police officers entering the airport
She stops on her feet seeing her family accompanying the police officers
She runs towards them to see what’s the matter
G- Aap log yahan? Aaap yahan kya kar rahe hain
Few police officers stop her
‘Peeche rahiye aap , madam’
‘Ye hamari beti hai’
Her family reassures the police
G- Aap log yahan pe kyun…?
Before she could finish she sees Maan being hand-cuffed and being escorted out of the airport by the police force
Oh no. Who is Maan whybus he arrested. What happened. Why did her family do that
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