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Posted: 1 years ago

He is such a good person. Hope he can help her.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Can he take her along with him? Help her settle down?

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Posted: 1 years ago

Thanks for the pm and update


Part 8

Fabulous update…amazingly written

great that Maan accompanied Geet to the hotel

well he found the place shady

good that he spoke to the guy at the reception

pleased seeing his concern for Geet

of cos Geet was relieved that she did not have to stay there 

glad that he helped Geet and offered that she sleep in one of the rooms of the suite

his thoughts are understandable

the morning was awkward for them

so Geet has nowhere to go and will search for a place

how will she manage?

as expected Geet apologizes to Maan for what happened 

now she is aware that Maan is not married nor has a girlfriend

her curiosity was justified

alas she is unable to ask 

oh Maan is leaving for Dubai


update soon

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Posted: 1 years ago

Awesome update 

Hope maan bhi geet ko apne saath le jay

Let's see..

Continue please 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Such sweet part... he did care for her safety and didn't let her stay in that bad hotel 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Lovely part 

Glad maan was there for Geet 

Cont soon 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Maan can’t really go anywhere leaving Geet like this! Granted he isn’t responsible for anything, I know he would still feel bad leaving her in the middle of nowhere!

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 9

 

 

G- emm…koi ghar dhund lungi….itni jaldi kuch nahi mila toh koi hotel ya PG le lungi

 

She looks at him and realizes that he knows how unrealistic here plan sounds

 

G- Par acha hi hua. Main apni family ke saath rehke kabhi apne sapne nahi poore kar sakti thi

 

She realizes she is thinking out loud

 

G- Waise, I am sorry. Meri wajah se aapki badnaami toh nahi hui naa?

 

M- Kaisi badnaami, mujhe iss sheher mein koi nahi jaanta aur naa hi main kisi ko jaanta hoon

 

G- Oh. I mean…aapki wife yaa girlfriend…who kuch…unko bura lagega ki…

 

M- Main shaadi-shuda nahi hoon. Meri girlfriend bhi nahi hai

 

G-Oh

 

She wants to ask kyun but she doesn’t want to pry on someone’s life

 

G- Toh aap Dubai kab jaa rahe hain?

 

M- Kal raat ki flight hai

 

G-Oh

 

She is staring at the space thinking about what to do next

 

Maan is looking at her realizing her helplessness, but he also doesn’t know what to do

 

She comes out of her thoughts realizing Maan is there

 

She stands up abruptly picking her bag

 

G- Main chalti hoon. Aapka bohot bohot shukriya

 

Maan also gets up

 

M- Kahan jaa rahi ho? Aage ka kya plan hai?

 

He doesn’t want to pry but he wants to know what Geet is upto

 

G- PG ya koi hostel dhundna hai naa

 

M- Ek din mein mil jaayega?

 

Her heart sinks

 

G-Hopefully

 

M- emm…Good. Mian bhi chalta hoon…issi bahane sheher bhi ghum lunga..woh maine kabhi yeh sheher ghuma hi nahi. Pehli baar wapas aa raha hoon.Ab shayad kabhi wapas bhi naa aayun

 

She notices the sadness in his eyes

 

G- Chaliye. Aap mujhe PG dekhne mein help kar dijiye, main aapko sheher ghumaa deti hoon

 

A subtle smile appears on Maan’s lips

 

Geet also beams

 

Even if her life is in doldrums right now, somehow, she feels a sense of familiarity & protection when she is with Maan. She doesn’t want to let go of that feeling. She knows beyond that feeling is her sterile realization uncertainity

 

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1-2 hostel and PG mein jaate hain

 

Ek ki hygiene ki haalat kharab hai

 

Dusre mein itni ladkiyan bhari padi hai. Aur who sab Maan ko aise ghur rahi thi jaise bhookha sher apne shikaar ko ghutra hai

 

Teesre mein toh wahan ki owner ne Geet ko Maan ke saath dekhke kuch kuch sochke dikhaane se hi mana kar diya

 

Par inn sab ke beech mein dono ne street food khaya har cart mein jaa jaake

 

They had become quite comfortable

 

It seemed as if they have known each other for years

 

Shaam ko thaak ke Seaside ke paas jaake baithte hain, thandi thandi hawa chal rahi hai

 

Dono chana aur garam garam chai pii rahe hain gazing at vast Ocean

 

It had been a good day

 

The sun was setting, and it looked beautiful

 

Both of them are immersed in whole experience, sitting beside each other on the rocky beach in silence

 

G- Dubai mein bhi sunset aisa hi lagta hai?

 

She asks gazing at the beautiful scenery without a thought why she asked this

 

M- emmm…(He sighs)….dikhta hoga…notice nahi kiya zyada. Office mein busy rehta hoon

 

G- Dubai mein kya karte ho?

 

M- Finance mein job karta hoon

 

She nods

 

M- Ab kya karogi. Koi hostel toh mila nahi

 

G- Chali jaungi

 

M- Kahan?

 

G- Hyderabad

 

M- Hyderabad kyun?

 

G- Yahan rehke kya karna hai? Wahan Private Detective ka business kholungi. Whan durr durr ke bhi koi rishtedaar nahi hai hamare; taanon se toh bach jaaungi.

 

He nods

 

M- Koi zarurat ho toh batana mujhe

 

She looks at him wondering; does that mean they will be in contact even when he goes back to Dubai

 

She looks down and pushes a strand of her hair behind her ear

 

He smiles

 

G- Waise bataya nahi tumne, itne jaasooson mein se mujhe kaise aur kyun choose kiya

 

M- well…baaki sab detectives were men, you were the only female. Meri do behne hain aur ek bhai jo bachcha hai…I wanted someone jo unki life and sensibilities ko hurt naa kare aur the best thing was that it turned out that you were so capable ki meri umeed se pehle sab kaam poora kar diya tumne

 

He says gazing at her

 

She chuckles

 

G- Aur saath mein aapko family drama mein phasaa bhi diya

 

He dismisses the notion

 

M- Aisa nahi hai.

 

He looks around and then at her

 

M- This is turning out be best day of my life

 

He says dreamily

 

She looks up at him with her huge doe like astonished eyes

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Posted: 1 years ago

Loved it dear😇 

Awesome and emotional part 🤗🤗

I don't think that maan is going to leave Geet after the entire drama but still challenges begin here in search of new house

I loved the time they spent together & how Maan helped her in his way 

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗

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Posted: 1 years ago

wow amazing both had the best days of their lives

seems like both gonna be in contact 

but wish this evening could never end 

cant wait to read more n more