He is such a good person. Hope he can help her.
He is such a good person. Hope he can help her.
Can he take her along with him? Help her settle down?
Thanks for the pm and update
Part 8
Fabulous update…amazingly written
great that Maan accompanied Geet to the hotel
well he found the place shady
good that he spoke to the guy at the reception
pleased seeing his concern for Geet
of cos Geet was relieved that she did not have to stay there
glad that he helped Geet and offered that she sleep in one of the rooms of the suite
his thoughts are understandable
the morning was awkward for them
so Geet has nowhere to go and will search for a place
how will she manage?
as expected Geet apologizes to Maan for what happened
now she is aware that Maan is not married nor has a girlfriend
her curiosity was justified
alas she is unable to ask
oh Maan is leaving for Dubai
update soon
Awesome update
Hope maan bhi geet ko apne saath le jay
Let's see..
Continue please
Such sweet part... he did care for her safety and didn't let her stay in that bad hotel
Lovely part
Glad maan was there for Geet
Cont soon
Maan can’t really go anywhere leaving Geet like this! Granted he isn’t responsible for anything, I know he would still feel bad leaving her in the middle of nowhere!
Part 9
G- emm…koi ghar dhund lungi….itni jaldi kuch nahi mila toh koi hotel ya PG le lungi
She looks at him and realizes that he knows how unrealistic here plan sounds
G- Par acha hi hua. Main apni family ke saath rehke kabhi apne sapne nahi poore kar sakti thi
She realizes she is thinking out loud
G- Waise, I am sorry. Meri wajah se aapki badnaami toh nahi hui naa?
M- Kaisi badnaami, mujhe iss sheher mein koi nahi jaanta aur naa hi main kisi ko jaanta hoon
G- Oh. I mean…aapki wife yaa girlfriend…who kuch…unko bura lagega ki…
M- Main shaadi-shuda nahi hoon. Meri girlfriend bhi nahi hai
G-Oh
She wants to ask kyun but she doesn’t want to pry on someone’s life
G- Toh aap Dubai kab jaa rahe hain?
M- Kal raat ki flight hai
G-Oh
She is staring at the space thinking about what to do next
Maan is looking at her realizing her helplessness, but he also doesn’t know what to do
She comes out of her thoughts realizing Maan is there
She stands up abruptly picking her bag
G- Main chalti hoon. Aapka bohot bohot shukriya
Maan also gets up
M- Kahan jaa rahi ho? Aage ka kya plan hai?
He doesn’t want to pry but he wants to know what Geet is upto
G- PG ya koi hostel dhundna hai naa
M- Ek din mein mil jaayega?
Her heart sinks
G-Hopefully
M- emm…Good. Mian bhi chalta hoon…issi bahane sheher bhi ghum lunga..woh maine kabhi yeh sheher ghuma hi nahi. Pehli baar wapas aa raha hoon.Ab shayad kabhi wapas bhi naa aayun
She notices the sadness in his eyes
G- Chaliye. Aap mujhe PG dekhne mein help kar dijiye, main aapko sheher ghumaa deti hoon
A subtle smile appears on Maan’s lips
Geet also beams
Even if her life is in doldrums right now, somehow, she feels a sense of familiarity & protection when she is with Maan. She doesn’t want to let go of that feeling. She knows beyond that feeling is her sterile realization uncertainity
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1-2 hostel and PG mein jaate hain
Ek ki hygiene ki haalat kharab hai
Dusre mein itni ladkiyan bhari padi hai. Aur who sab Maan ko aise ghur rahi thi jaise bhookha sher apne shikaar ko ghutra hai
Teesre mein toh wahan ki owner ne Geet ko Maan ke saath dekhke kuch kuch sochke dikhaane se hi mana kar diya
Par inn sab ke beech mein dono ne street food khaya har cart mein jaa jaake
They had become quite comfortable
It seemed as if they have known each other for years
Shaam ko thaak ke Seaside ke paas jaake baithte hain, thandi thandi hawa chal rahi hai
Dono chana aur garam garam chai pii rahe hain gazing at vast Ocean
It had been a good day
The sun was setting, and it looked beautiful
Both of them are immersed in whole experience, sitting beside each other on the rocky beach in silence
G- Dubai mein bhi sunset aisa hi lagta hai?
She asks gazing at the beautiful scenery without a thought why she asked this
M- emmm…(He sighs)….dikhta hoga…notice nahi kiya zyada. Office mein busy rehta hoon
G- Dubai mein kya karte ho?
M- Finance mein job karta hoon
She nods
M- Ab kya karogi. Koi hostel toh mila nahi
G- Chali jaungi
M- Kahan?
G- Hyderabad
M- Hyderabad kyun?
G- Yahan rehke kya karna hai? Wahan Private Detective ka business kholungi. Whan durr durr ke bhi koi rishtedaar nahi hai hamare; taanon se toh bach jaaungi.
He nods
M- Koi zarurat ho toh batana mujhe
She looks at him wondering; does that mean they will be in contact even when he goes back to Dubai
She looks down and pushes a strand of her hair behind her ear
He smiles
G- Waise bataya nahi tumne, itne jaasooson mein se mujhe kaise aur kyun choose kiya
M- well…baaki sab detectives were men, you were the only female. Meri do behne hain aur ek bhai jo bachcha hai…I wanted someone jo unki life and sensibilities ko hurt naa kare aur the best thing was that it turned out that you were so capable ki meri umeed se pehle sab kaam poora kar diya tumne
He says gazing at her
She chuckles
G- Aur saath mein aapko family drama mein phasaa bhi diya
He dismisses the notion
M- Aisa nahi hai.
He looks around and then at her
M- This is turning out be best day of my life
He says dreamily
She looks up at him with her huge doe like astonished eyes
Loved it dear😇
Awesome and emotional part 🤗🤗
I don't think that maan is going to leave Geet after the entire drama but still challenges begin here in search of new house
I loved the time they spent together & how Maan helped her in his way
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 🤗🤗
wow amazing both had the best days of their lives
seems like both gonna be in contact
but wish this evening could never end
cant wait to read more n more
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