Suspicious Partners- MG || (Part 37|Page 88) - Page 54

Created

Last reply

Replies

693

Views

29297

Users

36

Likes

1687

Frequent Posters

coderlady thumbnail
Most Comments (2023) 1 Thumbnail Most Comments (July 2023)  1 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 1 years ago

Maan overshadowed Geet in no time. Its like he knows these people more.

coderlady thumbnail
Most Comments (2023) 1 Thumbnail Most Comments (July 2023)  1 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 1 years ago

Geet is wary about his intentions towards her. The way he works his charm, but how he never checked in on her.

coderlady thumbnail
Most Comments (2023) 1 Thumbnail Most Comments (July 2023)  1 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 1 years ago

Through these people, they actually said some things that they never said to each other.

heycookie thumbnail
Posted: 1 years ago

nice one

both only seem to misunderstand eachother

i hope it wont get stretched for long

also last scene was lovely

geet grinning n maan being happy to see her acting like old geet is superbbb

NilzStorywriter thumbnail
Anniversary 18 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 1 years ago

Part 28

 

 

G- Thik hai phir, main eek nayi saree kharidi hai party ke liye; wapas nahi karni padegi

 

She blurts out happily

 

He grins seeing her smile

 

He finally saw a glimpse of the chirpy Geet he knew

 

++++++++

 

Next Day

 

Geet is on her video call with her little sister

 

They are talking about sister’s boyfriend, crush, relationships, and all

 

Maan overhears the conversation from the bathroom as he was shaving

 

‘Di, aapko kya pata aapko toh kabhi kisi pe crush hi nahi hua’

 

G- Aisa nahi hai ki mujhe kabhi kisi pe crush nahi hota lekin agar saamne wala reciprocate hi nahi karega toh main kya kar sakti hoon!

 

++++++

 

Geet ke collegues ne Maan ko actual annual party mein bhi bula liya tha

 

Some farmhouse ki badi party with celebrity performance and all

 

Maan shave karke nikla toh Geet bhaag gai bolke ki

 

G- Main aati hoon

 

Maan is wondering kahan chali gayi

 

++++++++

 

Geet parlor mein mast massage, beauty treatment sab kara rahi hai

 

Mooh pe green mask, hair wrapped in towel

 

Herself in half pinned towel

Idhar massage udhar pedicure chal raha

 

Phone bajaa

 

Geet says to parlor lady

 

G- Pick karke do please

 

Lady ne dekha nahi video call hai

 

Maan called to show ki ye coat chalega party ke liye?

 

Geet thought phone is on speaker

 

He squints looking at her ki ye kya drishya hai

 

He speaks after a moment

 

M- Tum...tum ..ho kahan abhi..?

 

G- Kyun? Kya hua? Tumne kyun call kiya tha?

 

M- Ye dikhaane ke liye

 

G- Photo bhej do

 

M- Abhi dekhlo video pe

 

Geet gasps hearing him

 

Kya video pe?

 

She almost drops her phone, like his jaw was hanging dropped

 

++++++

 

Geet aati hai ghar wapas parlor se

 

She is avoiding him out of embarrassment.

 

Naa jaane kitna kya dekh liya hai.

 

She is not making eye contact

 

Bathroom mein jaake baal bana liye make up kar liya

 

Ab saree kaise pehne?

 

She is planning to wear a nice badi back wala blouse with fish cut petticoat. Net wali saree pehnegi

 

Saaree shawl ki tarah lapetke bahar aayi in her blouse and petticoat

 

Maan looks at her, hands inside his pockets

 

She is still not making eye contact

 

G- Who… mujhe saree pehenni hai...aap bahar jao please

 

M- Main bahar khada rahunga toh log kya sochenge....ki main bahar kyun khada hoon

 

Geet thinks like kya bakwas hai

 

M- I will look away. I am not looking. You can change

 

He turns to the other direction

 

G- Haan sahi bhi hai. Aapko thode hi mere change karne se koi farak padega

 

He turns back hearing her tone

 

She has started draping the saree, YouTube pe tutorial dekh rhi hai

 

M- Matlab??

 

She shrugs

 

G- Kuch nhi. Aapko itne din farak nhi pada toh ab kya padega aur padna chahiye bhi nahi

 

M- Kya matlab? Kyun farak nhi padna chahiye?

 

G- Kahan padta hai.....sabki pasand alag hoti hai.... jisko jo pasand hai

 

M - Kisko kya pasand hai?

 

G- Mujhe kya pata. Jo bhi aapko pasand hai. Dubai mein allowed nahi hai naa

 

M- Kya?

 

G- Aapko toh pata hi hai. Mujhe kya nahi pata chalega? Jisko jo pasand hai...main kaun hoon judge karne wali

 

He raises his eyebrow

 

M- Aur aapko kya pata hai Madam Detective?

 

He says crossing his arms

 

M - Aur aapko jo pata hai woh aapko kisne bataya?

 

G- Aapko harkaton ne. I mean ismein burayi kya hai; kisiko ladkiyan pasand hain kisiko nahi. Ismein kya burayi ha? Kuch nahi. Aapko jo pasand hai, pasand hai

 

M- Aur meri kaunsi harkaton se aapko ye pata chala?

 

She shrugs

 

G- Matlab...aap itne time se mere saath yahan...yahan tak ki pehle bhi ek kamre mein ...I mean...

 

M- Toh maine koi badtameezi nahi kari toh main gay sabit ho gaya

 

G- Maine aisa toh nahi kaha. Maine kaha aapka interest alag hoga. Harr kisi ko harr koi pasand nhi aata, chaahe woh ladka ho yaa ladki

 

M- Wah! Toh ladke badtameezi karein toh bhi galat aur naa karein toh bhi galat

 

Toh thodi badtameezi kar hi lete naa!

 

She feels like saying but doesn't

 

Bolne jaati hai par nahi bolti

 

M- What??? Say it!

 

Geet doesn't say anything

 

M- Ye moti-moti badi-badi aankhon se mujhe ghurna band karo aur bolo jo mann mein hai!

 

G- Aap bhi toh mujhe ghur rahe hain!

 

He was actually staring and Geet’s saree had slipped, and she was in her petticoat & blouse

 

She realizes and her whole body gets goosebumps

 

M- Main toh badtameezi kar raha hoon

 

He says with his sly grin

tellyme thumbnail
Posted: 1 years ago

Okay... this was nice one...


Some progress on their attraction... I was waiting for long ke kahin to koi emotion ya attraction aaye... Thanks for bringing that. Story was going nice but dry... But today it took good turn on that front.


Thank-you❤️

coderlady thumbnail
Most Comments (2023) 1 Thumbnail Most Comments (July 2023)  1 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 1 years ago

He got to see his girl at the spa with a face mask and all.

coderlady thumbnail
Most Comments (2023) 1 Thumbnail Most Comments (July 2023)  1 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 1 years ago

Maan never made any pass at her. She took it no interest from his side.

coderlady thumbnail
Most Comments (2023) 1 Thumbnail Most Comments (July 2023)  1 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 1 years ago

She actually thinks he likes guys? How did she figure that?

coderlady thumbnail
Most Comments (2023) 1 Thumbnail Most Comments (July 2023)  1 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 1 years ago

The last bit cracked me up. He is getting in form now.

Edited by coderlady - 1 years ago