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geet thinks that she must be very careful around maan seeing him interacting very well with everyone as acting

maan feels bad knowing geet dint want him to introduce him with her office staff

geet is feeling safe at late night out in city as maan is with her

maan get glimpse of old geet while interacting with her in return journey after party

Nice update

Geet maan interact with each other and agree to go to party loved cheerful geet can't wait for next part

Part 27

Pleasant update…. splendidly written

of cos they question Maan about his profession

good that he handled the situation well

he is indeed charming

as expected their answer regarding their marriage was different

was he really missing Geet?

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

Gosh the car broke down

great that Geet felt safe with Maan around

glad that Maan agreed to attend the annual party

update soon

Great part

Maan is a charming person

But something is missing between them

Cont soon

Thackeray for pm

Maan overshadowed Geet in no time. Its like he knows these people more.

Geet is wary about his intentions towards her. The way he works his charm, but how he never checked in on her.

Through these people, they actually said some things that they never said to each other.

nice one

both only seem to misunderstand eachother

i hope it wont get stretched for long

also last scene was lovely

geet grinning n maan being happy to see her acting like old geet is superbbb

Part 28

G- Thik hai phir, main eek nayi saree kharidi hai party ke liye; wapas nahi karni padegi

She blurts out happily

He grins seeing her smile

He finally saw a glimpse of the chirpy Geet he knew

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Next Day

Geet is on her video call with her little sister

They are talking about sister’s boyfriend, crush, relationships, and all

Maan overhears the conversation from the bathroom as he was shaving

‘Di, aapko kya pata aapko toh kabhi kisi pe crush hi nahi hua’

G- Aisa nahi hai ki mujhe kabhi kisi pe crush nahi hota lekin agar saamne wala reciprocate hi nahi karega toh main kya kar sakti hoon!

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Geet ke collegues ne Maan ko actual annual party mein bhi bula liya tha

Some farmhouse ki badi party with celebrity performance and all

Maan shave karke nikla toh Geet bhaag gai bolke ki

G- Main aati hoon

Maan is wondering kahan chali gayi

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Geet parlor mein mast massage, beauty treatment sab kara rahi hai

Mooh pe green mask, hair wrapped in towel

Herself in half pinned towel

Idhar massage udhar pedicure chal raha

Phone bajaa

Geet says to parlor lady

G- Pick karke do please

Lady ne dekha nahi video call hai

Maan called to show ki ye coat chalega party ke liye?

Geet thought phone is on speaker

He squints looking at her ki ye kya drishya hai

He speaks after a moment

M- Tum...tum ..ho kahan abhi..?

G- Kyun? Kya hua? Tumne kyun call kiya tha?

M- Ye dikhaane ke liye

G- Photo bhej do

M- Abhi dekhlo video pe

Geet gasps hearing him

Kya video pe?

She almost drops her phone, like his jaw was hanging dropped

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Geet aati hai ghar wapas parlor se

She is avoiding him out of embarrassment.

Naa jaane kitna kya dekh liya hai.

She is not making eye contact

Bathroom mein jaake baal bana liye make up kar liya

Ab saree kaise pehne?

She is planning to wear a nice badi back wala blouse with fish cut petticoat. Net wali saree pehnegi

Saaree shawl ki tarah lapetke bahar aayi in her blouse and petticoat

Maan looks at her, hands inside his pockets

She is still not making eye contact

G- Who… mujhe saree pehenni hai...aap bahar jao please

M- Main bahar khada rahunga toh log kya sochenge....ki main bahar kyun khada hoon

Geet thinks like kya bakwas hai

M- I will look away. I am not looking. You can change

He turns to the other direction

G- Haan sahi bhi hai. Aapko thode hi mere change karne se koi farak padega

He turns back hearing her tone

She has started draping the saree, YouTube pe tutorial dekh rhi hai

M- Matlab??

She shrugs

G- Kuch nhi. Aapko itne din farak nhi pada toh ab kya padega aur padna chahiye bhi nahi

M- Kya matlab? Kyun farak nhi padna chahiye?

G- Kahan padta hai.....sabki pasand alag hoti hai.... jisko jo pasand hai

M - Kisko kya pasand hai?

G- Mujhe kya pata. Jo bhi aapko pasand hai. Dubai mein allowed nahi hai naa

M- Kya?

G- Aapko toh pata hi hai. Mujhe kya nahi pata chalega? Jisko jo pasand hai...main kaun hoon judge karne wali

He raises his eyebrow

M- Aur aapko kya pata hai Madam Detective?

He says crossing his arms

M - Aur aapko jo pata hai woh aapko kisne bataya?

G- Aapko harkaton ne. I mean ismein burayi kya hai; kisiko ladkiyan pasand hain kisiko nahi. Ismein kya burayi ha? Kuch nahi. Aapko jo pasand hai, pasand hai

M- Aur meri kaunsi harkaton se aapko ye pata chala?

She shrugs

G- Matlab...aap itne time se mere saath yahan...yahan tak ki pehle bhi ek kamre mein ...I mean...

M- Toh maine koi badtameezi nahi kari toh main gay sabit ho gaya

G- Maine aisa toh nahi kaha. Maine kaha aapka interest alag hoga. Harr kisi ko harr koi pasand nhi aata, chaahe woh ladka ho yaa ladki

M- Wah! Toh ladke badtameezi karein toh bhi galat aur naa karein toh bhi galat

Toh thodi badtameezi kar hi lete naa!

She feels like saying but doesn't

Bolne jaati hai par nahi bolti

M- What??? Say it!

Geet doesn't say anything

M- Ye moti-moti badi-badi aankhon se mujhe ghurna band karo aur bolo jo mann mein hai!

G- Aap bhi toh mujhe ghur rahe hain!

He was actually staring and Geet’s saree had slipped, and she was in her petticoat & blouse

She realizes and her whole body gets goosebumps

M- Main toh badtameezi kar raha hoon

He says with his sly grin

Okay... this was nice one...

Some progress on their attraction... I was waiting for long ke kahin to koi emotion ya attraction aaye... Thanks for bringing that. Story was going nice but dry... But today it took good turn on that front.

Thank-you❤️