Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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geet ask maan to sit on bad seeing his care for her as she is not expecting maan to save her 

geet dint like maan requesting landlord for car as she dint know how maan get the car 

why geet visit forensic office 

maan dint ask but become suspicious with geet's answer

what is maan's real job and shade of his personality

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Posted: 1 years ago

Thanks for the pm and update


Part 24

Majestic update… beautifully written 

Geet was indeed relieved seeing Maan there

sad that she did not expect her

but understand why

of cos Geet was visibly shaken

liked how Maan took care of Geet

wow he even made the water hot and made tea for her

Geet's reaction was justified

so Geet allowed Maan to sit on the bed

he was certainly amazed

well Geet thanked Maan

loved Maan's concern for Geet

pleased that Geet was direct with Maan

her question was expected 

Gosh Maan threatened the landlord and used his car

curious about Maan and his past

not surprised that Maan lied to Geet

oh no Maan is addicted to smoking

he was worried about Geet

why did Geet to the forensic lab?


update soon

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Posted: 1 years ago

Awesome updates, hopefully they will come close to each other 

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Unique and interesting concept. Story keeps me guessing and edge of the seat thinking what could happen next. Loved how Maan re-entered her life at right time to save her from creep, to speak to her family who must be wondering why he never talks to them and finally so glad that he saved her from the floods. Very scared to know if Maan is any trouble due to his job and if he and Geet will be safe or not. Anxious to read the next chapter. Waiting! 

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Lol Maan ne kaam nikalwa liya apna landlord se car leke 😃

What’s going on with Geet and the journalist and why did she go to the lab?

It’s a heartwarming moment between Maan and Geet when she asked him to sit on the bed and all that he did for after she got home ❤️

There’s a lot of suspense. Looking forward to it all being revealed!

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Part 25

 

 

 

M- Waise tum xyz place mein kya kar rahi thi? Tumhara office toh woh side nahi hai

 

Maan says to change the topic

 

G- emm ....woh...woh ..kuch kaam tha

 

She doesn’t want to divulge that she wnet to the forensic lab after work

 

Maan’s eyes sharpen as he realizes the hesitation in Geet’s voice

 

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Both have dinner

 

It’s still dark due to power outage so they had to light a candle

 

After the dinner both Maan & Geet go to their respective places and lay down after blowing off the candle

 

Geet is laying on her bed

 

The night is still fresh in her mind

 

The sky is clear now with moonlight sneaking through her window and illuminating the place

 

The sleep is eluding her

 

She turns a little, Maan who is laying on the floor, his profile is visible in the moonlight

 

He is laying turned on the other side, so Geet does not have to worry that he might catch her gazing at him

 

Maan assumes that Geet had slept

 

He gets up and starts doing push-ups, as he always does as a punishment for smoking

 

Geet frowns, thinking ‘isse kya ho gaya’

 

But does not say anything

 

She lays their still

 

M- 51-52-ooofff…hu….53….54

 

He is heaving with every push-up

 

Geet thinks ki ye raat ko push-up kyun kar raha hai. Uss din shaam ko bhi kar raha tha. Weirdo!

 

Haanf raha hai, thak raha hai, phir bhi nahi ruk raha

 

G- Tumhe chaadar chahiye

 

He hears Geet and almost scrambles down. He had assumed she was asleep

 

M- Huh? T..tum soyi nahi

 

G- Neend nahi aa rahi. Tumhe bhi nahi aa rahi?

 

M- Huh?

 

G- Isliye push-ups kar rahe ho yaa thand lag rahi hai

 

M- Nahi…nahi..aise hi

 

He quickly lays down on the floor

 

G- Ab tumhe need aa rahi hai?

 

M- Haan…haan…tum bhi so jao

 

G- Mujhe thand lag rahi hai. Chaadar nikalni hai. Tumhe chahiye?

 

M- Nahi

 

Geet gets up and walks towards the cupboard

 

Maan is laying hiding his face under his arm hiding his embarrassment

 

He was laying for quite a while then he wonders -kya hua itna time ko lag raha hai Geet ko chadar lane mein

 

He gets up and goes to see what she is doing

 

He sees she is jumping to reach the top shelve where the bedsheets are

 

He walks closer to look

 

M- Kya hua?

 

Geet has goosebumps as she hears Maan’s voice so close as if his lips are near the curve of her ears

 

G- Wo…who…andhere mein stool nahi mil raha

 

She could sense his sweat laden body

 

M- Main help kar deta hoon

 

He moves forward in the tiny space to get the bedsheet as Geet steps back

 

Their bodies brush for a moment

 

They feel a wave of electricity run through their body with the touch

 

Both stiffen up so the other does not know what is happening

 

Maan finds his voice and says

 

M- Kuansa nikaalun?

 

G-emmm…..dono nikaal do

 

She replies looking down

 

He gets the bedsheets and hands over to them

 

She is still looking down

 

G- Ek tumhare liye hai

 

M- Oh…okay

 

Geet bhaag ke jaake bed pe letke chadar odh leti hai, hiding her face

 

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Next day as she goes to office her colleagues are chatting about the last nights flood

 

‘Geet tum toh late nikli thin aa, phir ghar thik thak pohunch gayi thi?’

 

G- Woh…raaste mein phass gai thi…

 

‘Kya???? Phir??’

 

‘Kal toh bohot khatarnak toofaan aaya tha’

 

G- Phir…Maan ko call kiya toh who lene aa gaye

 

‘Ohhh...’

 

Sab maze le rahe hain

 

‘How dreamy, tumhe musibat se bahcaane tumhara hero aa gaya’

 

‘Sab musibatein paar karke’

 

Geet was also smiling

 

As they are a close knit company the owner also comes and asks about how Geet reached home

 

Sab kahaani suna dete hain

 

Owner- Geet

 

G- Yes sir

 

Owner- Ek din milao apne husband se. We are like a family, sab ki family se mile hain. Milao kabhi

 

G- Ji

 

‘Kabhi kyun sir, iss week jo company dinner hai ussi mein bula lijiye naa sir’

 

Owner- Ye bhi acha idea hai. Uss din apne husband ko bhi le aana

 

Geet nods

 

G- Ji sir

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Posted: 1 years ago

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geet feeling different with maan's care n she get goosebumps with maan's voice

geet's office owner invite maan in office party as he interested in knowing him 

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Wow! Unplanned Candle light dinner!🥳 Both having tough time falling asleep. It must be so tough for Maan to let of cigerette addiction. It was funny how Geet saw him do push ups so late in night and he was embarrassed, cutee Maan. The chadar moment was too cute, looking forward for more such moments. So finally Geets colleagues are going to meet Maan, very excited to see how it goes and ready to enjoy the teasing these two will get. 😃

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Posted: 1 years ago

Beautiful part Neelu 🤗🤗

Awesome and interesting part 👍

Geet & Maan are getting closer & their awareness & awkwardness was brought out completely well & it was extremely natural

Hmm 🤔 Geet & Maan are getting to know each other & their behavior nature etc. I specially loved the night part that slow & steady closeness was nice

Now office people too wanted to meet Maan after yesterday instance

Waiting for more

Thank you for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗

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Posted: 1 years ago

Nice update 

Maan Geet relationship improving, can’t wait to see will maan meet Geet colleagues or not 

Update next part soon