seems like all these years being alone has broken geet
that chirpy geet is lost
my heart goes out for her
but what trouble maan has gotten into really ???
seems like all these years being alone has broken geet
that chirpy geet is lost
my heart goes out for her
but what trouble maan has gotten into really ???
time heals everything means...what dies she meant by that....
Did Geet was falling for him but now she feels void ..why...
By the way, how many years passed to their last meeting and marriage.
As updates are coming after long gap that I forgot...š
Plz update soon...my complaint... update is too short... unsatisfied...
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So Maan actually looked for her and found her after 2 years?
Why didnāt he confront her if thatās the case?
And why is he here now? Geet needs to ask him upfront
Fabulous updatešššš
Part 16
Awesome and Awkward Update
I had really wanted Maan and Geet to talk
but it seems like she really does not care
now while Maan must be carrying guilt within him
Nice update
Maan is looking for Geet from last 2 years why did he also like or love her , poor Geet is feeling void as she left all hope in last 2 years.
Canāt wait to see her what happens next and what is maan reason to be back
Update soon
Nice chapter
Why maan came there
He searched geet for 2 years
Hi how are you?
Thanks for the pm and update
Part 16
Excellent updateā¦ dramatically written
the tension in the room was understandable
they are strangers for each other
at least they thanked each other
Geet's question was justified
why did Maan come back after 2 years?
Geet's confusion was reasonable
of cos she does not want to raise her hopes
sad that Geet had to give up her dream
great that Maan realised that Geet has changed
so Maan had to sleep on the floor
well Geet had to go to work
Geet's thoughts well portrayed
oh she feels void
Gosh she feels nothing with Maan's arrival
what did she mean but time heals everything
what happened?
hate seeing a disillusioned Geet
update soon
16
nice update
geet dint ask n maan still not share reason of his visit to geet
hope everything is fine
Part 17
She is on the bus, on the way to office
She does not know what she feels
She feels a void
She does not know is it good or bad
If this would have been few years back, she would have been excited, elated, happyā¦. but now nothing
Maybe, thatās why they say time heals everything
She thinks to herself
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Geet is in the office
Itās a usual day
But she is unable to concentrate on her work
āKya hua khoyi khoyi lag rahi ho, kya baat hai?ā
Her female colleague asks
She comes out of her thoughts
But the same question is coming to her mind again and again
Maan wapas kyun aaya?
Aaya toh 2 saal baad kyun?
Aur mere paas hi kyun?
Why is he adjusting in my tiny home? He is affluent enough to afford a hotel or is he not?
He said he is in ābig troubleā, does that trouble mean that he has lost his money?
Even if that is the case, why come to her?
And, why come to her after not contacting her for 2 years?
All these questions are revolving around her mind
She decides she needs to know the answers
She will ask Maan today
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Udhar Geet ke jaate hi Maan lapak ke uske bed pe so gaya
Neeche poori raat so ke kamar tutt rahi thi
Her bed and pillow had her fragrance
The nap he had was the best
He wakes up after 2 hours
Uthke bhook lagti hai toh kitchen mein jaata hai for some breakfast
Searches for food in the kitchen
He finds a milk packet in the kitchen and some chocolate cereal puffs
He looks at them and smiles āKid!ā
He spills some milk while opening the packet and pours some in the bowl with some puffs
He cleans the mess after he is done eating, thinking āsaaf kar deta hoon, madam ke waise hi garam mijaaz hainā
Maan decides to take a shower
After coming out of the shower and changing, Maan wonders wear should he put his clothes for laundry
Ghar mein toh koi washing machine dikh nahi rahi hai
Does she wash her clothes herself?
Kapde kahan rakhun?
Where does she put her clothes for laundry?
Is it in her cupboard?
No, he canāt check her cupboard. Will ask her when she is back
She didnāt even give me her number
He doesnāt want to keep his clothes anywhere, matlab uski bhi koi privacy hai; the clothes has his inner garments too
Ab koi jagah nahi mili toh wapas kapde apne vag mein patak diye
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Geet unlocks the door and enters her home
She stops at her place
Maan is doing push ups
Maan also stops hearing the door open
Both of them look at each other for a moment
Maan gets up
M- Hey
G- Hi
She walks in
Joote utaar ke sahi jagah rakhti hai
Purse apni jagah rakhti hai
Dupatta utaar ke rakhne jaati hai as per her habit but then glances at Maan with corner of her eyes and stops
She thinks for a moment then goes into the bathroom to change into her home clothes
As Geet comes into the room to ask her questions to Maan, he asks
M- Chai piyogi?
G- Haan
He starts to go towards the kitchen
G- Nahi
He stops mid-way and looks at her
G-emm..I meanā¦main banati hoon
M- I will make it. You sit
G- Nahi, mujhe bass apni haath ki chai achi lagti hai. Let me
He doesnāt protest as Geet walks past him and enters the kitchen
She checks the fridge
He hears her wonder
G- Arre dudh kahan gaya? Ek packet pada hua tha
M- woh gir gaya, packet kholte hue
She appears at the foot of the room
G- Kya??? Poora?
He nods apologetically
She clicks her tongue with annoyance
G- Toh bataya kyun nahi mujhe, aate huye le aati main
M- I donāt have your number
G- Toh tum khud jaake le aate! Uff!
She is irritated
She grabs her dupatta and purse to go out to get the milk
M- Tum itna chidh kyun rahi ho? Jab se main aaya hoon tum chidi hui ho
Maan retaliates
Geet turns towards Maan facing him
G- Haan, toh aur kya karna chaiye mujhe? A person appears in my life after 2 years 8 months, after disappearing without any communication and contact. Please enlighten me, how am I supposed to react, Mr MSG!
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