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Posted: 1 years ago

seems like all these years being alone has broken geet

that chirpy geet is lost

my heart goes out for her

but what trouble maan has gotten into really ???

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Posted: 1 years ago

time heals everything means...what dies she meant by that....

Did Geet was falling for him but now she feels void ..why...

By the way, how many years passed to their last meeting and marriage. 

As updates are coming  after long gap that I forgot...šŸ˜†

Plz update soon...my complaint... update is too short... unsatisfied...

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Posted: 1 years ago

So Maan actually looked for her and found her after 2 years?

Why didnā€™t he confront her if thatā€™s the case?

And why is he here now? Geet needs to ask him upfront 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Fabulous updatešŸ™‚šŸ‘šŸ™‚šŸ‘

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 16


Awesome and Awkward Update 


I had really wanted Maan and Geet to talk 

but it seems like she really does not care 

now while Maan must be carrying guilt within him 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Nice update 

Maan is looking for Geet from last 2 years why did he also like or love her , poor Geet is feeling void as she left all hope in last 2 years. 

Canā€™t wait to see her what happens next and what is maan reason to be back

Update soon

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Posted: 1 years ago

Nice chapter

Why maan came there

He searched geet for 2 years

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Posted: 1 years ago

Hi how are you?

Thanks for the pm and update


Part 16

Excellent updateā€¦ dramatically written

the tension in the room was understandable

they are strangers for each other

at least they thanked each other

Geet's question was justified

why did Maan come back after 2 years?

Geet's confusion was reasonable

of cos she does not want to raise her hopes

sad that Geet had to give up her dream

great that Maan realised that Geet has changed

so Maan had to sleep on the floor

well Geet had to go to work

Geet's thoughts well portrayed

oh she feels void 

Gosh she feels nothing with Maan's arrival

what did she mean but time heals everything 

what happened?

hate seeing a disillusioned Geet


update soon

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Posted: 1 years ago

16

nice update

geet dint ask n maan still not share reason of his visit to geet 

hope everything is fine 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 17

 

 

She is on the bus, on the way to office

 

She does not know what she feels

 

She feels a void

 

She does not know is it good or bad

 

If this would have been few years back, she would have been excited, elated, happyā€¦. but now nothing

 

Maybe, thatā€™s why they say time heals everything

 

She thinks to herself

 

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Geet is in the office

 

Itā€™s a usual day

 

But she is unable to concentrate on her work

 

ā€˜Kya hua khoyi khoyi lag rahi ho, kya baat hai?ā€™

 

Her female colleague asks

 

She comes out of her thoughts

 

But the same question is coming to her mind again and again

 

Maan wapas kyun aaya?

 

Aaya toh 2 saal baad kyun?

 

Aur mere paas hi kyun?

 

Why is he adjusting in my tiny home? He is affluent enough to afford a hotel or is he not?

 

He said he is in ā€œbig troubleā€, does that trouble mean that he has lost his money?

 

Even if that is the case, why come to her?

 

And, why come to her after not contacting her for 2 years?

 

All these questions are revolving around her mind

 

She decides she needs to know the answers

 

She will ask Maan today

 

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Udhar Geet ke jaate hi Maan lapak ke uske bed pe so gaya

 

Neeche poori raat so ke kamar tutt rahi thi

 

Her bed and pillow had her fragrance

 

The nap he had was the best

 

He wakes up after 2 hours

 

Uthke bhook lagti hai toh kitchen mein jaata hai for some breakfast

 

Searches for food in the kitchen

 

He finds a milk packet in the kitchen and some chocolate cereal puffs

 

He looks at them and smiles ā€˜Kid!ā€™

 

He spills some milk while opening the packet and pours some in the bowl with some puffs

 

He cleans the mess after he is done eating, thinking ā€˜saaf kar deta hoon, madam ke waise hi garam mijaaz hainā€™

 

Maan decides to take a shower

 

After coming out of the shower and changing, Maan wonders wear should he put his clothes for laundry

 

Ghar mein toh koi washing machine dikh nahi rahi hai


Does she wash her clothes herself?

 

Kapde kahan rakhun?

 

Where does she put her clothes for laundry?

 

Is it in her cupboard?

 

No, he canā€™t check her cupboard. Will ask her when she is back

 

She didnā€™t even give me her number

 

He doesnā€™t want to keep his clothes anywhere, matlab uski bhi koi privacy hai; the clothes has his inner garments too

 

Ab koi jagah nahi mili toh wapas kapde apne vag mein patak diye

 

 

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Geet unlocks the door and enters her home

 

She stops at her place

 

Maan is doing push ups

 

Maan also stops hearing the door open

 

Both of them look at each other for a moment

 

Maan gets up

 

M- Hey

 

G- Hi

 

She walks in

 

Joote utaar ke sahi jagah rakhti hai

 

Purse apni jagah rakhti hai

 

Dupatta utaar ke rakhne jaati hai as per her habit but then glances at Maan with corner of her eyes and stops

 

She thinks for a moment then goes into the bathroom to change into her home clothes

 

As Geet comes into the room to ask her questions to Maan, he asks

 

M- Chai piyogi?

 

G- Haan

 

He starts to go towards the kitchen

 

G- Nahi

 

He stops mid-way and looks at her

 

G-emm..I meanā€¦main banati hoon

 

M- I will make it. You sit

 

G- Nahi, mujhe bass apni haath ki chai achi lagti hai. Let me

 

He doesnā€™t protest as Geet walks past him and enters the kitchen

 

She checks the fridge

 

He hears her wonder

 

G- Arre dudh kahan gaya? Ek packet pada hua tha

 

M- woh gir gaya, packet kholte hue

 

She appears at the foot of the room

 

G- Kya??? Poora?

 

He nods apologetically

 

She clicks her tongue with annoyance

 

G- Toh bataya kyun nahi mujhe, aate huye le aati main

 

M- I donā€™t have your number

 

G- Toh tum khud jaake le aate! Uff!

 

She is irritated

 

She grabs her dupatta and purse to go out to get the milk

 

M- Tum itna chidh kyun rahi ho? Jab se main aaya hoon tum chidi hui ho

 

Maan retaliates

 

Geet turns towards Maan facing him

 

G- Haan, toh aur kya karna chaiye mujhe? A person appears in my life after 2 years 8 months, after disappearing without any communication and contact. Please enlighten me, how am I supposed to react, Mr MSG!