Suspicious Partners- MG || (Part 37|Page 88) - Page 32

Hi how are you?

Thanks for the pm and update

Part 16

Excellent update… dramatically written

the tension in the room was understandable

they are strangers for each other

at least they thanked each other

Geet's question was justified

why did Maan come back after 2 years?

Geet's confusion was reasonable

of cos she does not want to raise her hopes

sad that Geet had to give up her dream

great that Maan realised that Geet has changed

so Maan had to sleep on the floor

well Geet had to go to work

Geet's thoughts well portrayed

oh she feels void

Gosh she feels nothing with Maan's arrival

what did she mean but time heals everything

what happened?

hate seeing a disillusioned Geet

update soon

16

nice update

geet dint ask n maan still not share reason of his visit to geet

hope everything is fine

Part 17

She is on the bus, on the way to office

She does not know what she feels

She feels a void

She does not know is it good or bad

If this would have been few years back, she would have been excited, elated, happy…. but now nothing

Maybe, that’s why they say time heals everything

She thinks to herself

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Geet is in the office

It’s a usual day

But she is unable to concentrate on her work

‘Kya hua khoyi khoyi lag rahi ho, kya baat hai?’

Her female colleague asks

She comes out of her thoughts

But the same question is coming to her mind again and again

Maan wapas kyun aaya?

Aaya toh 2 saal baad kyun?

Aur mere paas hi kyun?

Why is he adjusting in my tiny home? He is affluent enough to afford a hotel or is he not?

He said he is in “big trouble”, does that trouble mean that he has lost his money?

Even if that is the case, why come to her?

And, why come to her after not contacting her for 2 years?

All these questions are revolving around her mind

She decides she needs to know the answers

She will ask Maan today

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Udhar Geet ke jaate hi Maan lapak ke uske bed pe so gaya

Neeche poori raat so ke kamar tutt rahi thi

Her bed and pillow had her fragrance

The nap he had was the best

He wakes up after 2 hours

Uthke bhook lagti hai toh kitchen mein jaata hai for some breakfast

Searches for food in the kitchen

He finds a milk packet in the kitchen and some chocolate cereal puffs

He looks at them and smiles ‘Kid!’

He spills some milk while opening the packet and pours some in the bowl with some puffs

He cleans the mess after he is done eating, thinking ‘saaf kar deta hoon, madam ke waise hi garam mijaaz hain’

Maan decides to take a shower

After coming out of the shower and changing, Maan wonders wear should he put his clothes for laundry

Ghar mein toh koi washing machine dikh nahi rahi hai

Does she wash her clothes herself?

Kapde kahan rakhun?

Where does she put her clothes for laundry?

Is it in her cupboard?

No, he can’t check her cupboard. Will ask her when she is back

She didn’t even give me her number

He doesn’t want to keep his clothes anywhere, matlab uski bhi koi privacy hai; the clothes has his inner garments too

Ab koi jagah nahi mili toh wapas kapde apne vag mein patak diye

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Geet unlocks the door and enters her home

She stops at her place

Maan is doing push ups

Maan also stops hearing the door open

Both of them look at each other for a moment

Maan gets up

M- Hey

G- Hi

She walks in

Joote utaar ke sahi jagah rakhti hai

Purse apni jagah rakhti hai

Dupatta utaar ke rakhne jaati hai as per her habit but then glances at Maan with corner of her eyes and stops

She thinks for a moment then goes into the bathroom to change into her home clothes

As Geet comes into the room to ask her questions to Maan, he asks

M- Chai piyogi?

G- Haan

He starts to go towards the kitchen

G- Nahi

He stops mid-way and looks at her

G-emm..I mean…main banati hoon

M- I will make it. You sit

G- Nahi, mujhe bass apni haath ki chai achi lagti hai. Let me

He doesn’t protest as Geet walks past him and enters the kitchen

She checks the fridge

He hears her wonder

G- Arre dudh kahan gaya? Ek packet pada hua tha

M- woh gir gaya, packet kholte hue

She appears at the foot of the room

G- Kya??? Poora?

He nods apologetically

She clicks her tongue with annoyance

G- Toh bataya kyun nahi mujhe, aate huye le aati main

M- I don’t have your number

G- Toh tum khud jaake le aate! Uff!

She is irritated

She grabs her dupatta and purse to go out to get the milk

M- Tum itna chidh kyun rahi ho? Jab se main aaya hoon tum chidi hui ho

Maan retaliates

Geet turns towards Maan facing him

G- Haan, toh aur kya karna chaiye mujhe? A person appears in my life after 2 years 8 months, after disappearing without any communication and contact. Please enlighten me, how am I supposed to react, Mr MSG!

Originally posted by: Glitter_Goldie

Very interesting part Neelu

🤔ᴴᴹᴹ so Maan was too keeping an eye on Geet to know her were abouts & good that he was here on time to save her

I really feel that Something grave happened with maan & that's why he is here but still maan didn't told Geet the reason

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗

Pata chalega dheere dheere. Any guesses?

Originally posted by: heycookie

seems like all these years being alone has broken geet

that chirpy geet is lost

my heart goes out for her

but what trouble maan has gotten into really ???

awesome analysis on Geet. any guess what she is feeling and going through? And any guesses on what trouble Maan been referring too😉

Originally posted by: shah10

Beautiful update .

Feel bad for Geet

hope Maan will tell her the reason he's there

Continue please

Any guesses on why is Maan back?

Originally posted by: coderlady

He comes back and says he needs help. Does he?

Any guesses on why is he back and what Geet and Maan are going through after meeting up

Originally posted by: Mg13

time heals everything means...what dies she meant by that....any guesses, what does she mean by that?

Did Geet was falling for him but now she feels void ..why...any guesses why?

By the way, how many years passed to their last meeting and marriage.

As updates are coming after long gap that I forgot...😆 its been more than 2 years...lol

Plz update soon...my complaint... update is too short... unsatisfied...I am trying my best dear...thanks for the patience

😆

Well she’s asking the questions now so we shall wait for Maan’s answer but leaving someone like that without any communication can’t be justified! He should have kept in touch with Geet

Loved it Neelu dear

Awesome and interesting part

Geet thinking & irritation is absolutely justified & now after initial settlement of Maan she obviously will question on her sudden arrival

Seeing him adjusting in her small place it will be more prominent & she won't be at ease till the time she get honest answers

I think now Maan will have to reveal things to Geet let's see what had happened can't guess but obviously it won't be good

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗