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What did she discover? She better get out of there.

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Awesome update 

Geet is familorthodontist...

Doesn't even listening to her. 

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part 4

We were not expecting this revelation. He was an orphan looking for his siblings.

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Why doesn't he come forward? Why is he hiding from them? They would want to connect with him.

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We can understand he does not wan to interrupt their lives. But still.

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Geet got caught by her uncle. But she is good at what she does.

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part 5

Her family is not even listening. Just accusing her.

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Now they will push her into marrying Maan. Will he agree?

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Part 6

 

 

She answers trying to hide her phone, so it does not get confiscated

 

But her mother snatches the phone from her and takes it outside

 

Geet follows her mother

 

Ma- Ye phone pe ussi ladke se baat kar rahi thi. Aap log baat karo usse

 

Geet- Kya usse kyun baat karni hai?

 

Ma- Tumhari shaadi ke liye?

 

Geet is shocked

 

G- Kya? Shaadi? Mujhe nahi karni….

 

Shhhh!!

 

Her family shushes her as they dial Maan’s number from her phone

 

Geet is trying to get a hold of her phone

 

Maan on the other side wonders Geet itni raat ko call kyun kar rahi hai, sab thik toh hai naa

 

M- Geet, is everything okay?

 

Maan speaks up immediately after picking the call

 

G- Maan…

 

She tries to warn him, but her father warns her though his hand gesture

 

Geet becomes quiet

 

Geet’s father speaks up

 

Father- Main Geet ka pita baat kar raha hoon. Hamare kuch jaankaar aapke wahan gaye hain, unke saath hamare ghar aa jaaiye. Aapse kuch baat karni hai

 

Maan is puzzled

 

Maan-Kya? Kaise baat?

 

Father- Baaki baatein hum milke karenge

 

Father disconnects the call

 

Geet is prating ki ‘Please mat aana. Please mat aana’

 

G- Aap log please meri baat ek baar sunn lijiye. MSG-Maan- Mr Khurana ko ismein involve mat kijiye

 

Father- Tumse kaha hai naa apni beti ko kamre mein rakho

 

Her father says to her mother

 

The mother drags Geet to her room and locks her while her phone remains with her father

 

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Kuch der baad Geet ki maa Geet ke rrom ka darwaza bahar se kholti hai

 

Geet comes out to see Maan, her extended family & neighbors in their living room

 

Maan looks confused

 

Geet looks guilty, because of her family Maan has been dragged into this mess

 

Her father glances at Geet as she enters the room

 

Maan also looks at her, maybe relived to see a familiar face or relived to see that Geet is okay

 

Father- Tumhe hamari beti se shaadi karni hogi

 

Before Maan could react

 

Geet leaps in, she has had enough

 

She yells at top of her lungs so that nobody can suppress her voice

 

G- Nahi! AAP LOG HAMAARI ZABARDASTI SHAADI NAHI KARA SAKTE. Hum dono ke beech kuch nahi hai. AAP LOG MAAN KO HARASS KARNA BAND KIJIYE. Jaane dijiye unhe.

 

Everybody is looking at Geet with murderous eyes

 

Maan is also looking at Geet with surprise laden face

 

Geet is panting after yelling her lungs off

 

Her father plants a sudden unexpected tight slap on her cheek

 

She almost falls on Maan with its impact with tears oozing off her eyes

 

Maan holds and steadies her putting his large over face in an impulse so if the father tries to hit her again then he won’t be able to

 

Father- Badtameez ladki! Gairzimmedari ki bhi koi had hoti hai. Itni si bhi koi fikar nahi hai hamari izzat ki

 

G- Main Gair zimmedar nahi hoon. Agar hoti toh apne pairon pe khadi nahi hona chahti

 

Taiyaji- Ek aur lafz mooh se nikaala toh zabaan kheench lenge tumhari

 

G- Maan ko please jaane dijiye. Ismein unnki koi galti nahi hai

 

The father looks at Maan and gestures him to leave

 

Maan leaves the premises wishing & hoping the family won’t hurt Geet anymore

 

But then thinks who he is to get involved in their family matters

 

He drives off

 

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Geet’s father is staring at her, he can’t believe this girl’s audacity and stubbornness

 

Geet is staring back.

 

She knows she hasn’t done anything wrong.

 

Darr toh bass usse iss baat ka tha ki Maan ke saath kuch galat naa ho. Ab Maan chala gaya hai toh, she doesn’t care what happens to her. She is ready for everything

 

Aunt- Iss parivaar ki izzat mitti mein mila di iss ladki ne, chotti do behenein hain uska bhi khayal nahi aaya. Bhai saab, aapne uss ladke ko jaane kaise diya

 

Father- Tumhara yaar chala gaya hai. Tum bhi nikal jao iss ghar se. Tumhari wajah se mere parivaar ki izzat ko koi aanch nahi aayegi. Tumhare daaman ka kalank main apne sarr pe uthaaye apni chotti betiyon ke saar pe nahi malunga. Chaahe mujhe iske liye apni badi beti ko qurbaan kyun naa karna pade

 

Geet walks towards her room

 

Her father holds her arm

 

Father- Andar kahan jaa rahi ho?

 

G- Apna samaan lene. Yahan rehne ka shauq mujhe bhi nahi hai

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Part 5 


Dramatic and Curious Update Thanks


Geet's uncle truly made a huge scene 

but Geet's parents surely they should be aware 

of her career 

but seems now they feel Geet is in the wrong 

it was rather kind of Maan to text Geet finding out if she is 

doing well Such a a brilliant catch❤️

but now I'm sure her parents will believe Maan and Geet has 

some secret relation 😉Dekhte hain