The Girl in the Bookshop- - MG || (Part 19 |Page 15)

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Chapter One: Before the Storm

At five in the morning, Shimla still belonged to the dark.

The hill town slept beneath a cold blue hush, its sloping rooftops and deodar trees barely visible through the mist. Somewhere far below, a dog barked once and fell silent. The mountains held the last of the night between them like something they weren't ready to give up yet.

Inside the Thakur house, everyone was asleep.

Everyone except Geet.

Her alarm had barely begun to vibrate beneath her pillow when her hand found it and silenced it before it could ring. For several seconds she lay there, staring at the ceiling, cocooned in the one warm minute she'd get all day.

Then she pushed the blanket aside and let the cold do what cold always did — end the argument before she could start it.

By five-ten she was in the kitchen, hair knotted carelessly, an old cardigan wrapped around her, setting water to boil. Tea first. Always tea first. Then breakfast, then lunch, then the floors, then Mehek, then college — a sequence so worn into her that her hands moved through it without needing her mind's permission at all.

By six, the windows had fogged with steam. By six-thirty, the floors were swept, the dishes stacked, the pressure cooker cooling on the stove. Geet paused at the counter and stretched her aching back.

Twenty-one years old, she thought. What an exciting life.

At least she could still make herself laugh about it. That, she'd decided a long time ago, was different from actually finding it funny.

She carried two cups of tea upstairs and knocked lightly on a door that was already ajar.

"Good morning. Morning tea."

Her uncle stirred beneath the quilt, one eye cracking open, and broke into the same soft smile he greeted her with every day of her life. "Good morning, sweetheart."

That smile did what it always did — softened something in her chest that the rest of the house kept trying to harden.

Her aunt was already sitting up. Geet handed her the second cup. Sunita Thakur took it without looking at her.

"Wake Mehek."

Geet waited a beat, for a good morning that never came.

"She'll be late again. Go."

"Yes, Aunt Sunita."

She had learned a long time ago that there was little to be gained from expecting warmth where none had ever been offered. She left the room before the silence could ask anything more of her.

Mehek's door was shut, the curtains drawn, the only sign of life a suspiciously human-shaped mound beneath a pink duvet.

"Mehek."

No response.

"Mehek. School."

The mound burrowed deeper.

Geet crossed the room and hauled the curtains open. Cold light flooded in.

"Geet!"

"Good. You're alive."

"Why do you hate me?"

"Deeply. Personally." She pulled the pillow away for good measure. "Get up."

"Five minutes."

"You said that yesterday."

"Today's five minutes are different."

"How?"

"I'll use them responsibly."

Geet laughed despite herself. "Two minutes. Then I come back with cold water."

Mehek's eyes went wide. "You wouldn't."

"Try me."

By the time she left the room, Mehek was upright, glaring, and unmistakably alive — which, most mornings, was the entire objective.

With Mehek, smiling always came easy. Officially they were cousins. In every way that mattered, they were sisters. Mehek had been small when Geet arrived carrying a suitcase and almost nothing else, too young to understand why another little girl had suddenly appeared in the house, too young to grasp that Geet's parents were never coming back. She had simply climbed into Geet's bed one night, afraid of thunder, and had been climbing into Geet's life ever since.

It was, perhaps, the only reason Geet never let herself resent this house completely. There was her uncle. There was Mehek. And there were the ordinary, aching memories embedded in these walls of a childhood she could no longer separate from grief.

Her parents had died in a car accident when she was young enough for adulthood to feel impossibly far away. Two words — car accident — that had split her life cleanly into a before and an after. Afterward, her uncle Vikram had brought her home. He had been kind. He was still kind. But kindness and courage weren't always the same thing, and Vikram Thakur had never possessed quite enough of the second to stand against his wife for long.

There was, too, the matter of the will — the one no one in the house spoke about, though everyone knew the shape of it. Her parents had left her more than grief. Somewhere in a lawyer's office in the city sat a document that would matter enormously one day, and mattered not at all today, and Geet had trained herself years ago not to think about it too closely. Some doors were easier left shut until she had a reason to open them.

So she lived quietly. Learned which battles were worth fighting. Learned that finishing the work before being asked shortened the day considerably, and that silence, more often than not, shortened the quarrel too.

By eight-thirty she was ready for college — plain cotton salwar suit, hair in a simple ponytail, nothing on her face but moisturizer. Books against her chest, bag over one shoulder, she hurried down the stairs.

"Bye, Uncle. I'm leaving."

"You haven't eaten," Vikram said from the table.

"I did."

"When?"

"While cooking."

Sunita looked up sharply. "You're going to college?"

Geet stopped in the doorway. There it was.

"Yes."

"Who's going to finish the work here?"

"I've finished it."

"And lunch? I expect it fresh."

"I'll make it when I get back."

"You'll be back too late."

A second passed. Geet breathed in. "Then you could—"

She caught herself. Too late.

"Could what?" Sunita's eyes narrowed. "Say it."

"Nothing."

"You've become very clever since you started college."

There was no correct answer to that. Geet gave one anyway.

"I've done everything since five this morning, Aunt Sunita."

The room went still. Vikram lowered his newspaper.

"Watch your tongue," Sunita said. "Have you forgotten whose house you live in?"

Geet's face didn't change — that had never been her way — but something behind her eyes quietly withdrew, the way it always did.

"We took you in out of mercy," Sunita went on. "Fed you. Raised you. And this is how she speaks to me."

Geet looked down at the books in her arms. She had heard versions of these words for as long as she could remember. They no longer shocked her. That didn't mean they'd stopped costing her something.

"I'm sorry," she said quietly.

She looked at her uncle. "Can I go now? I'll be late."

"Of course." Vikram's smile was apologetic, as it so often was. "Go, sweetheart."

"Vikram—"

"Let her go, Sunita. She has class."

Geet didn't wait for the argument to restart. She slid on her shoes and slipped out the door, her aunt's voice trailing after her — you have spoiled that girl completely — swallowed by the click of the latch.

Outside, the cold mountain air struck her face. She stood there a moment and let it settle.

"Good morning to you too," she said, to no one, and started walking.

Three girls were waiting near the bend in the road — or rather, three explosions of color were waiting, and somewhere inside them, Geet's friends.

"There she is." Ria planted both hands on her hips as Geet approached. "What are you wearing?"

"Clothes."

"You know exactly what I mean."

Priya looked her over, faintly scandalized. "You haven't even put on kajal."

"No."

Sheena sighed. "Every single day. Same suit. Same ponytail."

"It works," Geet said. "I show up. I sit through class. I leave. There isn't a step in there that requires eyeliner."

Ria gave up on that particular battle, the way she gave it up most mornings, and fell into step beside her. "You don't even know, do you."

"Know what?"

"Maan Khurana is coming to Shimla."

Geet waited for the rest of the sentence. There wasn't one.

"All right," she said.

"All right?"

"What reaction were you hoping for?"

"Khurana Global. The industrialist. Youngest CEO on every business magazine this year." Priya said it like scripture. "One of the most eligible bachelors in the country."

"Ah." Geet's mouth curved. "There's the useful part."

"He's gorgeous," Ria said. "Rich. Brilliant. And unmarried."

Geet glanced at their careful faces, their bright, deliberate clothes, and understood. "So that's what this is."

"He might come to the college."

"He might come anywhere in Shimla today. It's a small town."

"And if we see him?"

"You'll have functioning eyesight. I imagine that'll be enough."

"Geet."

"I only mean — even if you see him, I doubt he stops mid-stride to propose to whichever of you is wearing the most eyeshadow."

Priya touched her eyelids, wounded. "It's a very subtle shade."

"I'm sure that's exactly the effect you were hoping he'd notice from across a crowd."

Sheena looped an arm through hers anyway, unbothered. "You never know."

"I know enough," Geet said, but she was smiling when she said it, and the four of them walked on together, the argument already dissolving into something more like habit than disagreement.

The college bell rang faintly up the hill.

"We're late," Geet said, and that succeeded where Maan Khurana's existence had not. All four of them broke into a run.

By late afternoon the temperature had dropped, and Geet left campus with a headache building behind one eye and a notebook full of hurried lecture notes. Instead of heading home, she turned toward the lower market, to the narrow storefront squeezed between a tailor's shop and an old tea stall.

THAKUR BOOKS & STATIONERY, the faded sign read. It was small enough that two people with open umbrellas could cause a genuine traffic problem inside it.

Geet loved it more than almost anywhere else in the world.

The brass bell announced her. Vikram looked up from behind the counter. "Ah — you're here."

"Obviously."

"You look tired."

"I'm radiant."

"Very radiant." He smiled. "Go home, sweetheart. I'll manage."

"I just got here."

"And Aunt Sunita will be waiting for lunch."

That landed exactly as she intended. Vikram's enthusiasm visibly dimmed.

"Go," Geet said, biting back a smile. "Eat. Rest. I'll stay here."

"You'll call if you need anything?"

"Yes."

"If the weather turns, close early."

She glanced at the sky through the window — a flat, waiting grey. "I will."

He squeezed her shoulder on his way past, an ordinary, small gesture. Geet leaned into it anyway, just for a second, before the bell chimed and he was gone.

The shop settled into quiet. She climbed onto the stool behind the counter and opened her textbook. For twenty minutes, nothing happened at all.

Then the wind began.

It rattled the windowpanes first, then set the old sign outside knocking against the wall. Geet looked up. Pedestrians were hurrying now, shawls pulled tight, and the sky had gone the color of a fresh bruise.

The first drops struck the glass. Then the rain arrived all at once — not the gentle hill drizzle she was used to, but a wall of water that turned the street outside into a blur within seconds. Shopkeepers dragged in signs and baskets. Wind drove the rain sideways.

Geet crossed to the window.

Thunder rolled across the mountains. Uncle Vikram would never make it back through this, and she certainly wasn't walking home in it. She'd be stranded here until it passed — which, judging by the sky, might be a while.

There were worse places to be stranded. She had books, tea, biscuits, and, for the first time all day, no one asking her to make anything for anyone. She pulled her chair closer to the counter, reopened her textbook, and let the storm do as it pleased.

Maan Khurana had made exactly one poor decision that afternoon.

He'd decided to walk.

That was how he'd describe it later, at least. A poor decision. Not arrogance. Not restlessness. Certainly not the fact that three straight days of being driven from hotel to boardroom to dinner had left him feeling as though Shimla existed entirely behind tinted glass, a town he was passing through rather than standing inside.

He'd wanted air. Twenty minutes. No assistant a step behind him, no driver idling ten meters back, no one hovering to ask whether he required anything at all. He'd left the hotel in jeans, boots, and a dark red pullover, and ignored the first low rumble from the mountains.

He probably should have listened to the second.

By the time the rain began, he was several streets from the hotel, and it turned violent almost instantly. He ducked beneath an awning, water already running down the back of his neck, and checked his phone.

No signal.

Across the street, through the sheeting rain, a narrow shopfront glowed with warm light. He looked at the storm. Looked at the shop.

Then ran.

The bell jangled wildly as he shoved the door open. Warmth hit him first — then the smell: old paper, dust, wood, tea. The particular, unhurried scent of a place that had clearly been standing there long before this storm and would be standing there long after.

He pushed wet hair off his forehead and looked up to find the shop wasn't empty after all.

A young woman sat behind the counter, watching him. Not staring — looking, which was a different thing entirely. Her textbook lay open in front of her, a pencil caught loosely between her fingers, dark hair tied back in a simple ponytail, a pale kurta beneath an old cardigan.

For one strange second, Maan forgot what he'd come in here to do.

It wasn't that she was dramatically beautiful, though she was. What caught him was the absence of reaction. No recognition. No widening eyes. No sudden straightening of posture, no urgent glance toward a phone.

She looked at the dripping stranger who'd invaded her shop, glanced at the small lake forming beneath his boots, and returned her attention to her book.

He drifted toward the shelves — no intention of buying anything, only somewhere to stand until the sky exhausted itself. He'd counted perhaps thirty seconds of silence when he heard her stool creak, followed by soft footsteps on old wood.

"Can I help you find something?"

He turned. Up close she was more striking still — nothing styled or arranged about her, no visible effort behind it at all. Large dark eyes. A quiet, unhurried patience in the way she waited for his answer.

He was aware, somewhere in the back of his mind, that he was taking a fraction too long to answer a perfectly simple question.

"No. Thank you." A beat. "I was only looking."

Only. He hadn't meant to say only.

"All right."

That was it. She turned and walked back to the counter, and resumed reading as though he'd already left.

He looked down at the shelf in front of him. History. He picked up the nearest spine and stared at the cover without reading a single word of the title.

Outside, lightning split the sky, thunder cracking almost on top of it. The lights failed a heartbeat later, and the whole shop dropped into darkness.

He heard her breath catch. "Oh—" A pause. "Oh, no."

Something knocked softly against wood behind the counter.

"You all right?" he called.

"Yes." A beat. "I think."

His hand found the lighter in his pocket automatically. A small flame caught, illuminating his fingers first, then the edge of his jaw. Across the room, she turned toward the light — and for the first time since he'd walked in, really looked at him.

The flame was too weak to show much. It caught his eyes, the sharp line of one cheekbone, rain-darkened hair falling across his forehead. Nothing more. And in that same faint gold, he could see little of her beyond a softened outline of a face and eyes that caught the light and held it.

Neither of them spoke. Rain hammered the glass around them.

Then he lifted the lighter slightly. "Do you have candles?"

"Yes. This way."

She moved carefully from behind the counter. He followed, the flame traveling between them like something they were sharing without quite deciding to.

"There's a drawer somewhere here," she said, searching a small cabinet in the dark. A pause. Another drawer. "It's usually easier when I can see what I'm doing."

"I'd imagine most things are."

She glanced back at him — he couldn't see her expression, only the shape of her turning — and after a moment, found what she was looking for.

"There." She lifted two candles. "Here we are."

He held the lighter to the wick. The flame caught, spreading warm gold outward — not enough to light the whole shop, but enough to make it feel, suddenly, intimate. She carried the candle to a small round table at the center of the room, flanked by two worn armchairs, and set it down between them.

The storm carried on outside, indifferent.

She glanced toward the windows. "You may be here a while."

"So may you."

"I work here."

"Then apparently you planned this better than I did."

The faintest smile crossed her face — not quite the laugh he'd already, somehow, begun listening for, but close to it — and she sat. He looked at the second chair, then at her.

"May I?"

"It's a chair."

"Good to know."

He sat across from her. The candle flame shifted between them, throwing soft light and softer shadow across the shelves. For a moment, neither spoke — two strangers, a locked-down hill town beyond the glass, a storm standing between them and everywhere else either of them was supposed to be.

She studied him for a second too long, a faint, unplaceable familiarity tugging at her — the kind that surfaces and vanishes before you can name it. Probably one of those faces that resembled someone else, she decided, and let it go.

"So," she said. "Did you actually want a book?"

His gaze dropped to the history book still in his hand — he'd forgotten he was holding it. She noticed. The corner of her mouth curved.

"Apparently," he said.

"You don't sound convinced."

"I've had very little time to develop an emotional attachment to it."

"To the book?"

"To history in general."

She laughed — an easy, unguarded sound, nothing careful or performed in it at all — and something in Maan's chest went very still, the way it did when a negotiation shifted in a direction he hadn't planned for and found, to his own surprise, that he didn't mind.

It was, he realized somewhere in the back of his mind, a very specific kind of laugh. The kind that didn't know it was being watched.

Which meant she genuinely had no idea who he was.

Maan Khurana had spent years learning to read a room before anyone inside it realized they were being read — who wanted something from him, who was performing for him, who had already rehearsed their opening line before he'd even sat down. He could not remember the last time he'd sat across from someone who was doing none of those three things.

Until now.

He could have told her. It would have taken four words, maybe five. He watched himself not say them, and found the decision made itself before he'd finished considering it, the way the best decisions usually did.

He wanted to see what she said next — before she started weighing every word, before the ease went out of her voice and something more careful slid into its place. It wasn't kindness that stopped him from correcting her.

It was curiosity. And beneath the curiosity, something quieter and more deliberate that he chose, for now, not to examine too closely.

"So," he said instead, settling back into the chair, "tell me about this shop."

Outside, the thunder rolled on. Inside, the candle burned steadily between them — and Geet Thakur, who had spent the entire morning listening to her friends rhapsodize about the famous Maan Khurana without the faintest flicker of curiosity, went on talking to him as though he were simply a stranger the storm had swept into her evening.

Which, as far as she knew, he was.

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geet is very simple n mature before age after her parents death

maan is talking with geet without revealing his identity knowing that geet dint recognise him

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Congratulations on the new story

Part 1

Fascinating and Amazing Start

Geet been an orphan living with her uncle and horrible aunt

but have learned to stay in her limits as she realized her aunt for some

reason dislikes her.

Geet's college friends ranting on all about Maan Khurana

while Maan Khurana comes to the book store just to take shelter from

the storm

and Geet is obvious that he is Maan Khurana and seems like he truly

is enjoying her company


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Congratulations on the new story

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The girls were all talking about Maan and Geet had the sole fortune to run into him. Without even making any effort.

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Congratulations 👏 🎉 beautiful update 🥳 interesting story

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Thank you so much, everyone, for reading the first part and taking the time to comment. 🤍 I loved reading your reactions.

I’m really glad the opening worked for you — Geet’s life with her uncle and aunt, Maan meeting her at the bookshop during the storm, him hiding his identity when he realizes she doesn’t recognize him, and the way their first conversation starts so simply. 😊 And yes, as some of you noticed, Geet has learned to live within the limits of that house, while Maan entering her life is going to disturb that balance quite a bit. 😄

A few of you also mentioned that the first meeting felt interesting and different, and that you’re curious to see where Maan and Geet go from here. Thank you — that really encourages me to keep posting. ❤️

And I have one small request from all of you, especially because many of you have been reading my stories on IndiaForums for years and already know my writing.

I now have two published novels on Amazon:

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Chapter 1

Feeling for Geet

Sad that she lost her family

Hate that her aunt treats her like a maid

She is so mean to Geet

At least her uncle and cousin are nice to her

Glad that Geet is studying

So the Maan Singh Khurana is coming to Shimla

Of cos Geet's friends are excited

However Geet shows no interest

Well Geet helps her uncle at the bookstore

Oh Maan went to the bookstore cos of the rain

As expected she does not recognise him

Maan's thoughts were reasonable

He then spoke to her


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Chapter Two: The Walk Home

"Tell me about this shop," Maan said again, when she didn't immediately answer.

Geet considered him for a moment, as if deciding whether the request was genuine or simply something to fill the silence with. Apparently she decided it was genuine, because she leaned back slightly and let her eyes travel over the shelves the way someone looks at a room they've loved for a long time.

"My grandfather started it. My uncle inherited it, and inherited none of his business sense along with it, which is why it's still standing on charm rather than profit." She said this fondly, not unkindly. "I do the accounts sometimes. Don't tell him I said that."

"Your secret's safe."

"It had better be." She glanced at him. "What about you? What brings a man in a soaked pullover to a bookshop that smells like it hasn't been dusted since the last monarchy?"

"The rain."

"Only the rain?"

"Overwhelmingly the rain."

She smiled at that, and Maan found himself watching the smile a beat longer than the joke warranted.

"I'm Maan," he said.

He was aware, as he said it, that he was giving her exactly enough to seem forthcoming and nothing at all that might mean anything. It was a small, deliberate omission — the kind he made a dozen times a week in boardrooms, without a second thought. He was surprised to find this one required a second thought.

Geet only nodded, unbothered, the way a person nods at any name offered to them in passing. "Geet."

"Geet," he repeated, and something in him noted — carefully, the way he noted most things — that the name had settled into his memory with unusual ease.

"So," he said, before she could ask him anything further about himself, "you happened to be here today, and I happened to get caught in a storm, and—"

"I didn't happen to be here." She said it plainly, without offense. "I come here every day after college."

"Every day?"

"Most days."

"Good," he said — and heard himself say it before he'd quite decided to. Her eyebrows lifted a fraction. He recovered, smooth as water finding its level. "Good for your uncle. Free labor."

"I'm not sure he'd describe it that way."

"No?"

"He pays me in tea."

"Exploitative."

"Completely."

He glanced toward the textbook she'd left near the counter. "You're studying?"

"Biotechnology."

That surprised him — genuinely, not for effect. "Biotechnology."

"Why do you say it like that?"

"I was expecting literature. You looked personally offended when I picked up a history book I had no intention of reading."

"That was professional judgment. Very different."

"What are you planning to do with it? The biotechnology."

The question should have been simple. Geet looked, for a moment, as though it wasn't.

"I don't know yet."

"No plan?"

"I have plans." A pause, and something crossed briefly behind her eyes before she smoothed it away. "Plans just require life to cooperate sometimes."

There was more underneath that sentence than she'd said aloud — Maan had built a career on hearing what people didn't say, and he heard it now, clear as a struck bell. He was on the verge of asking when Geet turned toward the window.

The rain had thinned to a fine, silver drizzle. Somewhere down the road, the streetlamps flickered back to life.

"I think the storm's passed."

He looked, and unfortunately, she was right.

"We can leave now," she said.

"So we can," he said, with none of the enthusiasm the sentence deserved.

By the time they stepped outside, the power had returned to most of the market, and the wet road gleamed black under the lamps. Geet locked the shop door and turned to find Maan still standing there.

"You're waiting?"

"I thought that was obvious."

"For what?"

"For you. I'll drop you home."

"No, thank you. I'm walking."

"Then I'll walk you home."

"Maan." It was the first time she'd used his name, and he felt it more than he expected to. "I can manage."

"I didn't say you couldn't."

"Then why are we arguing?"

"We aren't. You're refusing an extremely reasonable offer."

"And you're refusing an extremely clear answer."

He smiled. She noticed, and narrowed her eyes at him.

"Why are you smiling?"

"No reason."

"That's suspicious."

"Is it?"

"Very." She turned and started walking. He let her get three full steps before he called after her.

"Geet. The roads are empty. It's dark. And you expect me to just watch you walk home alone?"

She stopped. "Let me?"

"Wrong word."

"Very wrong word."

"Fine — watch you walk home alone, and then spend the entire night wondering whether you got there safely." He spread his hands, entirely too pleased with himself. "Do you really want that on your conscience?"

"Nothing is going to happen to me."

"You don't know that."

"Neither do you."

"Exactly," he said, delivering it as though she'd just conceded the whole argument.

Geet stared at him a moment longer, then turned and walked another few steps before stopping to look back over her shoulder.

"Well? Are you coming or not?"

His grin arrived before he could stop it. "Of course."

The rain had settled into a faint, persistent drizzle. Water ran in narrow streams along the edges of the road, and the trees released their held drops whenever the wind moved through them. The air smelled of wet earth and cold stone, and somewhere in the dark hillside, crickets had begun calling to each other as if the storm had never happened.

They walked without speaking for a while — an easier silence than the one in the shop had been.

"Who do you live with?" Maan asked eventually, faintly annoyed at himself for how long it had taken him to land on something as ordinary as a question. He was used to knowing exactly what to say to people within seconds of meeting them. He was less used to wanting to know the answer.

"My uncle. My aunt. My younger cousin, Mehek — she's more like a sister."

"And your parents?"

The change in her was small. Her steps didn't slow and her face didn't fall, but her voice quieted by a degree. "They died when I was little. Car accident."

"I'm sorry." He wished, almost as soon as he'd said it, that he hadn't asked.

"It's all right." The smile she gave him was faint, and old, and practiced — the smile of someone who had learned to carry a thing without showing the weight of it. Maan understood that particular skill better than most people assumed he did.

They walked on. Near a bend where a narrower lane disappeared between trees and low stone houses, Geet stopped.

"This is far enough."

"I'll take you to your door."

"No."

"Geet—"

"Really. I'll go from here."

He studied her face. This refusal was different from the others — not teasing, not stubbornness. Something quieter.

"Why?"

She hesitated. "My aunt. If she sees me coming home with a man—"

"I'm walking you home. That's all."

"I know that."

"So what's the problem?"

"You don't know my aunt." She said it with a certainty that would have made him laugh, if something in her face hadn't stopped him. She glanced toward the dark lane. "She doesn't need much of a reason."

"For what?"

The door closed, the way he was beginning to recognize it did. "No reason. I shouldn't have said anything."

He didn't like that answer — not because it was inadequate, but because it was deliberate. She was protecting something, or someone, or possibly only herself. He filed it away, the way he filed most things that didn't add up yet.

"Any trouble at home?"

"No." Too quick. She heard herself say it too quickly, and said it again, more firmly. "No. Nothing like that."

He let it go. For now.

"I should go," she said, shifting her bag onto her shoulder. "Thank you for walking with me."

"It was a terrible hardship."

She smiled despite herself. "Good night, Maan."

"The pleasure was entirely mine."

Something shifted very slightly in her smile at that — he wasn't sure what — and then she stepped back and turned up the lane. He stayed where he was, listening to her footsteps for longer than he needed to, until the sound of them was gone entirely.

Geet, he thought. Biotechnology student. Works in her uncle's shop every afternoon. Lives beyond that bend with an aunt she'd clearly rather not discuss.

He smiled to himself, once, and turned back toward the main road.

Geet reached home expecting the worst, and found exactly that waiting in the sitting room.

"Where have you been?" Sunita didn't look up from her chair.

"The storm—"

"Of course. The storm. Her Highness finally remembers she has a home to return to."

"Sunita, enough." Vikram lowered his newspaper, his face changing the moment he looked at Geet properly. "Are you all right? You weren't frightened?"

"No, Uncle. I'm fine." That was true, technically. She had been many things that evening — uncomfortable, embarrassed, oddly and constantly aware of a man sitting across a candlelit table from her — but not frightened.

"Go change. You're damp."

She escaped upstairs before Sunita could find a second wind.

She and Mehek shared a room, and Mehek was already in bed, though the book lying open and forgotten on her stomach suggested sleep hadn't been part of the evening's plans. She sat bolt upright the moment Geet came in.

"There you are! I was worried — the power went out everywhere, you were alone in that shop in the dark—"

"I wasn't alone."

Mehek stopped.

Geet began unpacking her bag, as if the sentence hadn't been enormous. "There was a man. He got caught in the storm and came in to wait it out. We talked."

"What man?"

"His name was Maan."

Mehek's expression did nothing dramatic at first — the name meant nothing on its own, and Geet hadn't expected it to. "Was he nice?"

"Surprisingly." Geet pulled off her cardigan. "Irritating. But nice. Insisted on walking me home, wouldn't take no for an answer."

"What's his last name?"

"He never said. Just Maan." Geet paused, folding the cardigan over her arm. "There was a car waiting near the market when we finally said good night. Driver and everything. And someone kept calling his phone — he never answered it, just kept glancing at it like he already knew who it was and didn't care."

Mehek went very still.

"A car. With a driver." She sat up straighter. "Geet. The one everyone's been talking about since Monday — the one arriving in Shimla yesterday — what was his name?"

"Mehek—"

"Maan Khurana." She was already reaching for her phone, thumb moving fast. "Tall. Dark hair. Rich enough that people drive him around and he doesn't even look at his phone." She turned the screen toward Geet before she'd finished speaking. "Look."

Geet looked.

The photograph was clean and professional, the kind taken at some family event rather than a candid — but it was unmistakably him. The same face she'd watched by candlelight two hours earlier, illuminated now by proper lighting and captioned with a family name she recognized from every single conversation she'd successfully ignored that morning.

"Oh," Geet said, very quietly.

Mehek stared at her. "You didn't know."

"No."

"You spent an entire evening with Maan Khurana and you didn't know."

"I didn't ask for a last name. He didn't offer one." Geet sat down slowly on the edge of her bed, turning this new information over as if it might rearrange the evening behind it — the whole conversation replaying itself in a different light, every ordinary question he'd asked her suddenly worth a second look. "He let me think he was just — Maan."

"Why would he do that?"

Geet didn't have an answer for that. She wasn't entirely sure she liked how much she wanted one.

"Geet." Mehek's voice had dropped to something closer to awe. "He walked you home. On purpose. Knowing exactly who he was, and you had no idea."

"It doesn't mean anything."

"It means everything."

"It means he forgot to mention his surname."

"Nobody forgets that they're Maan Khurana."

Geet had no answer for that either, and the absence of one bothered her more than she wanted to admit.

She turned toward the cupboard to end the conversation, and behind her, a voice began, entirely too pleased with itself.

"Geet's wedding is coming—"

"Mehek."

"—Maan Khurana will be waiting—"

A pillow found its target with excellent aim. Mehek dissolved into laughter beneath the blanket.

"Good night," Geet said, in a tone that closed the subject with considerably less success than she'd hoped.

"Good night, future Mrs. Khurana."

A second pillow followed the first.

Elsewhere in Shimla, Maan was no longer smiling.

He stood at the window of his hotel suite, the city scattered in light below him, while his project manager waited a few feet behind with a folder tucked under one arm. Maan didn't offer him a seat.

"Have you found the land?"

"Yes, sir. There's one issue."

"One?"

"The parcel you liked. The owner won't sell."

"You told me negotiations were underway."

"They were."

"And?"

"They refused."

"Increase the offer."

"We did."

"Increase it again."

"Sir—"

"Give them whatever number they want."

The manager hesitated, and Maan caught it instantly. "What?"

"They don't want a higher number."

"Everyone wants a higher number."

"Not these people. They simply don't want to sell."

For several seconds, Maan said nothing. The project mattered more than the people around him fully understood — months of capital, planning, political negotiation, and investor confidence had already been built around this exact stretch of hillside. He did not enjoy obstacles that believed themselves permanent.

"Take me to them."

"Sir?"

"Tomorrow morning."

"You want to speak to them yourself?"

"Apparently I have to." He turned back to the window. "Set it up."

Morning began for Geet exactly as most mornings did — before sunrise, tea, breakfast, lunch preparation, the floors, Mehek complaining about the injustice of consciousness, Sunita finding fault with something before Geet had even finished it. Ordinary life had a remarkable ability to resume itself, as though nothing unusual had happened inside it at all.

A few streets away, a black car stopped at the entrance to a narrow residential road, and Maan looked out the window at it twice before he placed why it seemed familiar.

"We'll need to walk from here," his manager said.

Maan stepped out and recognized the bend immediately — the same one where Geet had turned last night and told him, with absolute finality, that this was far enough. A smile arrived before he could stop it.

"Sir?"

"Nothing."

He glanced up the lane as they passed it, at the stone houses scattered along the slope, at the small balconies and shuttered windows, and told himself he was only curious. It was becoming a suspiciously convenient explanation. Somewhere along this road, Geet Thakur was probably arguing with her cousin over a hairbrush, or tying that plain, unbothered ponytail of hers, entirely unaware that the man from the bookshop was fifty meters from her front door.

He almost laughed at himself. He had come here to negotiate a multimillion-dollar land acquisition and was apparently checking balconies for a woman he'd met the day before.

"Sir." His manager had stopped beside a gate. "This is it."

Maan turned toward the property, and whatever had briefly softened in his expression closed over again, instantly, the way it always did when there was work in front of him.

"Good."

The manager pushed open the gate, and Maan followed him through it, with no idea yet that the land he'd come to acquire and the girl he'd met in a bookshop were about to become the same problem.

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 26 days ago

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