Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: anmirza

For now Maan seems to be very selfish ðŸ˜¡

How did he figure out as to where Geet is?

Thank God he came at the right time though and forced out the creepy guy ðŸ¤¬

But what does Maan want now?


Yeah....how did he knew about her whereabouts...

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Posted: 1 years ago

Loved it Neelu 

Awesome and interesting update🤗 

Well Maan handled that creep well 🤭 but how come he is here & asking for help from Geet? 🤔ᴴᴹᴹ  it was really awkward for both of them but as Maan helped her she too didn't disappointed him ☺ 

Let's see what will happen now & what brings him back to Geet now as this entire situation is going to be tricky 🤗 

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗

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Posted: 1 years ago

Hi Nilanjana

how are you feeling?


Part 15

Intriguing update….terrifically written 

Geet's reaction seeing Maan there was justified

her questions were reasonable

why does Maan want her help?

seems like he was keeping an eye on her whereabouts

so Maan wants to stay with her for a few dates

as expected she was skeptical as she stays in one room

pleased that Maan assures her

she agreed as he helped her

sad seeing the awkwardness between them

but this was expected

well she did not have enough food for the both of them

at least Maan went to buy something to eat

not surprised she asked about money

why is Maan there?


update soon 

Edited by khwaishfan - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago

Awesome part

Maan is there to stay for sometime why what is issue with maan , poor geet maan is feeling uncomfortable with each other as they are meeting after 2 years can't wait to read further parts 


Update soon waiting 

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Posted: 1 years ago

15

maan save geet from cheap landlord 

geet is very much surprise seeing maan come back after these many days 

geet decide to help maan in return of maan's help n care

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 16

 

 

Both look at each for a whole minute

 

The eye contact breaks as Maan realizes he should get going

 

He starts to go

 

G- Woh…paise…

 

He stops mid-way

 

M- Paise….hain

 

She nods

 

As Maan leaves, Geet lets out a deep breath that she didn’t realize she was holding, while wondering why is he back? What trouble is he in? Can she trust him enough to let him stay with her?

 

+++++

 

Both are silently having the food

 

G- Thanks for the food and about that too

 

She says referring to Maan saving her from her leech neighbour

 

He nods

 

M- Thanks for letting me stay

 

Geet also nods formally

 

Both continue eating

 

G- How did you know I was here?

 

Geet asks as the question arises in her mind

 

He looks at her

 

M- You told me you are going to Hyderabad, last time we met

 

She gazes at him astonished that he still remembered

 

M- and two years is enough time to find someone

 

He confesses

 

She looks at him with surprise and confusion, not fully understanding what he meant

 

Their eyes meet for a second then Geet moves her eyes away

 

She does not want to raise her hopes

 

M- So tumhari jasoosi kaisi chal rahi hai?

 

He says to change the topic

 

G- I work as Data entry operator in a small start up

 

She replies dryly

 

M- Oh. But you wanted to be a detective…

 

G- I realized there is a vast gap between dreams and reality. Dreams don’t come true, and reality is what we live with

 

She says and walks to the kitchen with the dishes

 

Maan is surprised himself, he feels Geet he knew has changed

 

Maan follows her and washes his own dish

 

Geet does not protest

 

She walks to her cupboard and fetches a spare pillow and bedsheet and hands them over to Maan

 

She goes to her single bed and lays down

 

Maan is struggling to find a room in that tiny room to set his make do bed

 

Finally, he spreads the sheet on the floor just at the foot of Geet’s bed

 

The floor is hard

 

He curls up like a fetus and shuts his eyes, trying to get some sleep

 

+++++++

 

As Maan opens his eyes in the morning, he sees Geet is ready to go to work

 

She looks and dresses much more feminine now, he notices

 

Geet sees Maan is awake

 

G- Office jaa rahi hoon. Ghar mein samaan hai, you can cook if you feel hungry

 

He nods

 

M- Thanks

 

Geet grabs her purse and leaves

 

++++++

 

She is on the bus, on the way to office

 

She doesn't know what she feels

 

She feels a void

 

She does not know is it good or bad

 

If this would have been few years back, she would have been excited, elated, happy…. but now nothing

 

Maybe, that’s why they say time heals everything

 

She thinks to herself

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Posted: 1 years ago

Beautiful update .

Feel bad for Geet 

hope Maan will tell her the reason he's there 

Continue please 

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Posted: 1 years ago

He comes back and says he needs help. Does he?

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Posted: 1 years ago

They have not seen each other for so long. So things are awkward at best.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Very interesting part Neelu

🤔ᴴᴹᴹ  so Maan was too keeping an eye on Geet to know her were abouts & good that he was here on time to save her

I really feel that Something grave happened with maan & that's why he is here but still maan didn't told Geet the reason 

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗