Suspicious Partners- MG || (Part 37|Page 88) - Page 39

Part 18

Outstanding update…dynamically written 

Geet's frustration was justified

of cos she is upset that he is there cos he needed her

she was indeed taken aback when introduced himself as her husband

the convo was necessary

finally Maan reveals he was there

Geet's reaction was reasonable

Part 19

Brilliant update… majestically written 

Maan's thoughts well portrayed

Maan has fallen for Geet

liked how he admires her

of cos he does not want to put her life in danger

great that he helped Geet

update soon

Maan’s thought process reveals that he wanted to get in touch with Geet while he was away but couldn’t because of his circumstances so I’ll give him the benefit of the doubt!

Hoping everything goes well from hereon!

This man I swear you show up announced tell you wife you in trouble but once things are better you will disappear again. Like bro you married Geet not Mulan you think she going to pull out some sword and kick ass for you. I mean the girl may have hidden talent but like seriously lol. I love how shocked he is she hand washed his clothes like Einstein why didn't you offer to get them washed you kanjoos. 

Great part 

Maan in trouble 

Both have feelings for each other but not talking to Know their feelings 

Cont soon 

Thanks for pm

waiting for next part

Waiting for next update please 

New Update is work in progress. Thinking whether to move this story to little mysterious route yaa nahi. What you guys prefer? Simple love story yaa thode thriller wali love story? Let me know

thoda thriller wali love story😃

Part 20

M- Tumne ye kapde dho liye?

G-Hmm, roz dhoti hoon

M- Haath se?

G-Hmm

She replies while putting the clothes to dry

M- Mere bhi dho diye

He exclaims after seeing his clothes there

G- Haan, pade the toh dho diye

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Raat ho gai

As usual Geet upar bed pe so gai aur Maan zameen pe, on foot of her bed

Raat ko Geet uthi bathroom jaane ke liye

She is in her half-asleep zombie mode

Like usual she zombie walks towards the bathroom

Chalte chalte uska pair adj gaya and she stumbles

G- aahhhh! Ye kya hai yahan??!!

Maan gets up with a start a something collided with his feet

M- Huh? Kya hua??

She looks at him, tab yaad aaya ki, Maan neeche soya tha uske paise se adh gai

In her sleepy mind she had completely forgotten about Maan’s presence in her home

She walks to the bathroom while muttering under her breath

G- Beech mein aise koi sota hai….raat ko gir jaaye insaan toh kya ho…

Maan wonders who aur kahan sarke, ghar mein toh aur jagah hi nahi hai

He tries to make himself smaller in a fetus like position as he goes back to lay down

Geet bhi aake dhap se bed pe so gai

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It’s a weekend the next day

Toh Geet ki chutti hai

Maan is just observing her

She seems very busy

Sab set up kar rahi hai

Camera laga rahi hai

Kuch photos edit kar rahi hai

Maan is confused but doesn’t ask anything

Geet phone on karke apne saje huye set up kea age baith jaati hai

G- Hello! Maa Baa! Kaise ho aap log?

Geet’s mom- Hum toh bilkul thik hai. Tu kaisi hai?

Geet’s dad- Dubai ka Mausam kaisa hai bete?

G- Main bilkul theek hoon. Mausam toh waisa hi hai. Par har jagah toh AC rehta hai

Maan glances up at the ceiling fan, jo hil hilke chal raha tha

Geet’s mom-Par bahar jaane mein ghumne mein dikkat hoti hogi naa

G- Arre ghar hi itna bada hai, ek kamre se dusre kamre mein jaane mein pair thak jaate hain. Aur kahin jaana ho toh car se hi jaate hain

Geet’s sisters appear enthusiastically

Sis- Heyyy di!!! Jiju kaise hain??? Kahan hain

G- Woh theek hain.

Sis- Kabhi bhi baat nahi karaate aap. Aapse promise kiya tha aaj baat karaoge

G- Woh…woh busy rehte hain naa…aaj bhi kaam tha

Geet mom-Aaj bhi office gaye hain. Damad ji?

Her mom’s tone changes

Geet looks at the screen and then over her shoulder

Maan is behind her, video-bombing her call

Geet mom- Arre Damad ji, kaise hain aap?

Maan replies while bobbing his towards the screen to hear better

Geet moves away as his scratchy chin is grazing her shoulder and making her feel things that she should not

Maan- Main theek hoon. Aaap kaisi hain?

Geet’s sisters are jumping like fans

Geet is aghast, ki ye kya ho gaya

Mom smiles

Geet mom- Theek hoon beta

Geet sis- Jiju aap shaadi mein aoge naa?

M- Shaadi?

Geet sis- Di, aapne bataya nahi

Geet looks away

Geet sis- Meri shaadi hai 45 days mein. Didi keh rahi thi aap busy ho toh aap dono nahi aa paoge. Aap aa jao naa, aise kaise shaadi hogi. Di ka bhi bohot mann hai. Par who aapki wajah se nahi jaa rahi

M- Tumhari di ka mann hai toh theek hai

Geet turns her head to look at Maan

The family jumps with happiness

Geet mom- 2 saal baad tum dono Dubai se aoge. Hum log kitna khush hain tum soch bhi nahi sakte beta.

Maan smiles

Geet cuts in

Geet- Acha main rakhti hoon

She hangs up

G- Ye kya kiya tumne!!

Geet screeches at Maan and walks away stomping her feet