Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Posted: 1 years ago

part 14

Was Maan keeping an eye on Geet all this time? How else would he know where to pop up?

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Posted: 1 years ago

maaja agaya..........bechara land lord..........saare ummeedon per pani pher gaye..........


nice update.............

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Posted: 1 years ago

 

Part 15

 

 

Maan- Surprise tha. Aaap bhi apni wife ko surprises dete honge naa

 

Maan says reminding the creepy guy about his family

 

Landlord- emm…haan…ap log enjoy karo. Main chalta hoon. Who, Geet akeli rehti hai toh I feel responsible toh main haal puchne aa jaata hoon, to make sure she is fine

 

Maan- Thank you very much for being an elder brother to my wife        

 

Maan says with a straight face while moving towards the other man to make sure he is out of the house

 

Maan shuts the door behind and mutters’ what a creep’ under his breath as he turns to face Geet

 

Geet was staring at him without blinking

 

M- Hey Geet

 

His voice brings her back to the reality and she realizes what she is seeing is real

 

Her awe turns into a frown

 

G- Aap? Yahan…kaise?

 

M- Mujhe tumhari maddatt chahiye, Geet

 

He pleads and walks towards her

 

She looks up at him questioningly

 

M- Mujhe kuch din yahan rehna hoga

 

G-Yahan?

 

She looks around, she lives in one room

 

He reads her thoughts

 

M- Tum chinta mat karo, main manage kar lunga. Zameen pe so jaunga. Tumhe koi dikkat nahi hogi. Please Geet

 

Geet thinks to herself- ‘Ek waqt tha, jab aapne mujhe mere bure waqt mein madatt kit hi…..mujhe bhi aapki madat karni chahiye….baaki aur kuch nahi….aapki marzi aapka faisla ki aapne itne saal mere saath koi communication ya contact nahi rakha. Aapne mujhpe ek din ye Ehsaan kiya tha, wohi main chukaungi’

 

She nods

 

G- Thik hai

 

She goes and sits on the bed swaying forward and backward indecisively looking into the space

 

M- emmm….main neeche se samaan leke aata hoon

 

The awkward energy is well…..awkward

 

When Maan comes back with his stuff

 

Ghar itna chotta hai ki bags rakhne ki bhi thik se jagah nahi hai

 

He finds Geet putting the groceries in kitchen

 

He doesn’t know what to do

 

He walks to the kitchen

 

M- Should I help?

 

G-emm…no I am fine

 

He realizes she is avoiding eye contact

 

Maan jaake bed pe baith jaata hai

 

In the kitchen, Geet starts heating the dinner

 

But it seems food is not enough for two people

 

Her plan was to have leftovers as she was already tired after grocery shopping

 

She didn’t know about arrival of this unexpected guest

 

She walks over to the room where Maan is sitting

 

G-Woh…khana dono ke liye kam padega…main kuch order kar deti hoon

 

M- oh…who…main le aata hoon neeche kisi restaurant se

 

She nods in agreement

 

M- What do you want to eat?

 

G- Anything

 

Both look at each for a whole minute

 

The eye contact breaks as Maan realizes he should get going

 

He starts to go

 

G- Who…paise…

 

He stops mid-way

 

M- Paise….hain

 

She nods

 

As Maan leaves, Geet lets out a deep breath that she didn’t realize she was holding, while wondering why is he back? What trouble is he in? Can she trust him enough to let him stay with her?

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Posted: 1 years ago

Why he is back and staying with her now? He didn't clarified that...

Want little longer update plz...😛

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: Mg13

So short but nice...

Maan is back now how would Geet react...


Take care dear...

Even I have cold and fever, from last two days, it was raining suddenly here ... I couldn't sleep whole night because of cough and cold.

I couldn't even go to the new job interview that was scheduled today....my luck....😆

Well...however I wished to read next one fast but won't tell you to update soon...first take care of yourself well...

❤️


Take care dear. Feel better soon

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 15


Amazing and so Surprising Update 


Maan been back, does this mean he did 

keep his eyes on Geet to know exactly where she is 

the awkwardness between both makes everything seem stranger 

so soon he will tell Geet his reason for return 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Hi, thanks for pm , its too short yaar, maan is back but why, how he come to know where Geet is staying, he knew that Geet is in Hyderabad but exact location, why he wanted to stay here.Too many question yaar. Hope next chapter give me answer . Waiting for next chapter.

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Posted: 1 years ago

ok maan came because he needs geets help 

what is it? geet seems still in shock 

cant wait for next update now

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Posted: 1 years ago

For now Maan seems to be very selfish 😡

How did he figure out as to where Geet is?

Thank God he came at the right time though and forced out the creepy guy 🤬

But what does Maan want now?

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: NilzStorywriter


Take care dear. Feel better soon


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