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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome update.

Let see where will geet go now.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Her family is the pits. They care nothing for her.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome update

Geet stand for her and also ready to leave her house she is really independent and strong girl

Can't wait to see what she do now

Update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

She has to leave her home. Where will she go?

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Posted: 3 years ago

Great part

Maan left Geet with her family but hoped he would stand by Geet if something went wrong

Cont soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 7

Geet walks towards her room

Her father holds her arm

Father- Andar kahan jaa rahi ho?

G- Apna samaan lene. Yahan rehne ka shauq mujhe nahi hai

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Maan after the incident was feeling disturbed, worried and mix of anxiety

He couldn’t go back to the hotel

He was driving aimlessly on the highway around the place

He would go back to the incident of how the family was treating Geet

The way they were repeatedly hitting her

He was feeling helpless for being able to not stop the injustice

He was feeling guilty for being a mute spectator

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Geet chali toh aayi ghar chodke garma garmi mein

But itni raat ko raaston par aimlessly chalte chalte realize hua ki she has nowhere to go, no plans, nothing

Itni raat ho chuki hai, gehra andhera hai, koi auto-rikshaw bhi nahi hai

Isliye raaste pe chali jaa rahi hai ki shayad koi public transport mil jaaye

Raaste sunsaan hain

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As Maan was driving, his headlight shines on a familiar figure walking aimlessly along the road alone

As his heart pauses with surprise, he stops the car

Geet is dazed after the lights directly shines on her

She squints and looks; she sees the familiar car and the familiar man getting off the car and walking towards her

M- Tum itni raat ko beech raste pe kya kar rahi ho?

She hears Maan say

She looks down, think of how to put it

M- Tumhe ghar se nikaal diya?

She nods

He sighs

G- Maine hi chodh diya

She adds

M- Hmm…toh ab? Kya plan hai?

He asks moving a little sideways towards her, she moves back subconsciously

The approaching vehicles on the road can’t access Geet if they tried to know

G-emm..woh Kanika…ke ghar jaa rahi hoon…meri friend…who raat ho gai hai toh…subah jaungi

M-Hmm

He also looking around

Both are confused what to do, how to act

M- Gaadi mein baith jao, aise highway ke beech khade hoke baat nahi karte hain

Geet who was herself feeling unsafe being on the highway does not resist

Maan lets her walk towards the car and follows her lead

He starts driving

Both are silent

Geet is looking out of the window

Kya kare samajh nahi aa raha hai. It’s all sinking in now. She left her home, family. Nobody stopped her

M-tum theek ho?

She comes out of her thoughts hearing his voice.

G- Huh?

She finds him looking at her

M- Woh tumhare kaan ke paas..woh gaal ke wahan sooj sa gaya hai

G-Huh?

She touches the area to feel it

She finally realizes the pain

G- Mere toh gaan garam hoke abhi bhi woh ssss…phisss si awaaz aa rahi hai kaam mein

She says to hide her embarrassment

He looks at her with awkwardness, he doesn’t know how to react

G- Who aap mujhe bass yahin chod dein?

M – Yahan?

G- Haan who saamne ye hotel hai, wahan room le lungi main

She points at a random small 2-star hotel on middle of the highway

He looks at the place then at her

M- Kanika ka kya hua?

G- Kaun Kanika?

M- Tumhari friend jiske ghar tum jaane wali thi

She shrinks onto her seat

G- Woh…plan chaupatt hai

M- Kyun?

G-Meri friend Kanika nahi hai…I mean meri friend hai…par uski shaadi ho gai hai toh who wahan ab nahi rehti hai. Toh main raat ko yahan room leke ruk jaungi. Aur subah….emm..subah ka dekh lenge…

Geet is waiting for him to unlock the car locks

He is staring distantly at the steering

M- Paise hain tumhare paas?

G-emm..haan…aap ne jo diye the

He doesn’t say anything

He is in dilemma

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Posted: 3 years ago

Very interesting update Neel

So ye to do bechare bina sahare ho gaye hai 😞😞 but at least this wasn't expected out of Geets family they should have stopped her

Maan too was feeling guilty as he is thinking that because of him all this happened to her

To abhi Geet needs shelter & hopefully Maan could do something for her & give some gyaan to her family as well

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Great part

Maan tensed for Geet even though not knowing her much.. not everyone does that

Hope both takes right part towards their destinations

Cont soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 7


Worrisome and Awesome Update


Geet has left home and does not really have a plan

I liked that Maan was in the same area as she was

at least now she can be safe with him

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Posted: 3 years ago

7

maan is restless thinking the way geet's family behaving with her

geet is feeling scare in late hours of night.

maan also feels bad seeing geet force to leave her home n worried for her safety

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