Suspicious Partners- MG || (Part 37|Page 88) - Page 16

Part 7

Geet walks towards her room

Her father holds her arm

Father- Andar kahan jaa rahi ho?

G- Apna samaan lene. Yahan rehne ka shauq mujhe nahi hai

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Maan after the incident was feeling disturbed, worried and mix of anxiety

He couldn’t go back to the hotel

He was driving aimlessly on the highway around the place

He would go back to the incident of how the family was treating Geet

The way they were repeatedly hitting her

He was feeling helpless for being able to not stop the injustice

He was feeling guilty for being a mute spectator

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Geet chali toh aayi ghar chodke garma garmi mein

But itni raat ko raaston par aimlessly chalte chalte realize hua ki she has nowhere to go, no plans, nothing

Itni raat ho chuki hai, gehra andhera hai, koi auto-rikshaw bhi nahi hai

Isliye raaste pe chali jaa rahi hai ki shayad koi public transport mil jaaye

Raaste sunsaan hain

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As Maan was driving, his headlight shines on a familiar figure walking aimlessly along the road alone

As his heart pauses with surprise, he stops the car

Geet is dazed after the lights directly shines on her

She squints and looks; she sees the familiar car and the familiar man getting off the car and walking towards her

M- Tum itni raat ko beech raste pe kya kar rahi ho?

She hears Maan say

She looks down, think of how to put it

M- Tumhe ghar se nikaal diya?

She nods

He sighs

G- Maine hi chodh diya

She adds

M- Hmm…toh ab? Kya plan hai?

He asks moving a little sideways towards her, she moves back subconsciously

The approaching vehicles on the road can’t access Geet if they tried to know

G-emm..woh Kanika…ke ghar jaa rahi hoon…meri friend…who raat ho gai hai toh…subah jaungi

M-Hmm

He also looking around

Both are confused what to do, how to act

M- Gaadi mein baith jao, aise highway ke beech khade hoke baat nahi karte hain

Geet who was herself feeling unsafe being on the highway does not resist

Maan lets her walk towards the car and follows her lead

He starts driving

Both are silent

Geet is looking out of the window

Kya kare samajh nahi aa raha hai. It’s all sinking in now. She left her home, family. Nobody stopped her

M-tum theek ho?

She comes out of her thoughts hearing his voice.

G- Huh?

She finds him looking at her

M- Woh tumhare kaan ke paas..woh gaal ke wahan sooj sa gaya hai

G-Huh?

She touches the area to feel it

She finally realizes the pain

G- Mere toh gaan garam hoke abhi bhi woh ssss…phisss si awaaz aa rahi hai kaam mein

She says to hide her embarrassment

He looks at her with awkwardness, he doesn’t know how to react

G- Who aap mujhe bass yahin chod dein?

M – Yahan?

G- Haan who saamne ye hotel hai, wahan room le lungi main

She points at a random small 2-star hotel on middle of the highway

He looks at the place then at her

M- Kanika ka kya hua?

G- Kaun Kanika?

M- Tumhari friend jiske ghar tum jaane wali thi

She shrinks onto her seat

G- Woh…plan chaupatt hai

M- Kyun?

G-Meri friend Kanika nahi hai…I mean meri friend hai…par uski shaadi ho gai hai toh who wahan ab nahi rehti hai. Toh main raat ko yahan room leke ruk jaungi. Aur subah….emm..subah ka dekh lenge…

Geet is waiting for him to unlock the car locks

He is staring distantly at the steering

M- Paise hain tumhare paas?

G-emm..haan…aap ne jo diye the

He doesn’t say anything

He is in dilemma

Very interesting update Neel 

So ye to do bechare bina sahare ho gaye hai 😞😞 but at least this wasn't expected out of Geets family they should have stopped her 

Maan too was feeling guilty as he is thinking that because of him all this happened to her 

To abhi Geet needs shelter & hopefully Maan could do something for her & give some gyaan to her family as well 

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗🤗

Great part 

Maan tensed for Geet even though not knowing her much.. not everyone does that 

Hope both takes right part towards their destinations

Cont soon 

Thanks for pm

Part 7

Worrisome and Awesome Update 

Geet has left home and does not really have a plan 

I liked that Maan was in the same area as she was 

at least now she can be safe with him 

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maan is restless thinking the way geet's family behaving with her 

geet is feeling scare in late hours of night.

maan also feels bad seeing geet force to leave her home n worried for her safety

Amazing update. 

Poor Geet..feeling bad for her

Glad maan found her. 

Thank you for the pm and update

Part 7

Lovely update.... majestically written

feeling for Geet

liked Maan's concern for Geet

alas he was unable to help her

of cos he feels guilty

well Geet made a decision and now has nowhere to go

Thank God Maan saw her 

so she lied to him she is going to her friend's place

as expected he offers to drop her

oh he noticed her swollen cheek

hate how her family treated her

not surprised that she asked him to drop her at a hotel

at least Geet was honest with Maan about Kanika

Maan's dilemma was reasonable

what will he do?

update soon

feeling sorry for geet

glad that maan found her

he couldnt stop being restless abouther

hope he wont let her go anywhere else n somehkw bktb stay toghter

Poor geet suffering without any mistake hope maan helps her which can help in starting there ll e story

Update soon 

Part 8

G- Woh aap mujhe bass yahin chod dein

M – Yahan?

G- Haan who saamne ye hotel hai, wahan room le lungi main

She points at a random small 2-star hotel on middle of the highway

He looks at the place then at her

M- Kanika ka kya hua?

G- Kaun Kanika?

M- Tumhari friend jiske ghar tum jaane wali thi

She shrinks onto her seat

G- Woh…plan chaupatt hai

M- Kyun?

G-Meri friend Kanika nahi hai…I mean meri friend hai…par uski shaadi ho gai hai toh who wahan ab nahi rehti hai. Toh main raat ko yahan room leke ruk jaungi. Aur subah….emm..subah ka dekh lenge…

Geet is waiting for him to unlock the car locks

He is staring distantly at the steering

M- Paise hain tumhare paas?

G-emm..haan…aap ne jo diye the

He doesn’t say anything

He is in dilemma

He unlocks the car locks

G-Thanks

She gets down and starts walking towards the hotel

She finds Maan also gets down

She turns

G-Aap…?

M- Tum chalo

He catches up with her pace as they enter the hotel lobby

He is looking around

The place looks okay but somehow has a shady vibe to it

Geet also looks around feels a little uncomfortable, but she has no other choice

Maan gestures her to stay back, and he walks to speak to the guy in the reception

Geet stays back as Maan speaks to the receptionist

She can’t here the conversation

M- Ek room chahiye, kya prices hain?

Reception guy- Sir, ghanta ka rate yaa din ka rate?

Maan doesn’t reply just stares at the guy

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Geet sees Maan walking towards her

G- Mila?

M- Nahi. Room nahi hai

G- Oh

She is relived yet disappointed

Relived because her heart & intuitions didn’t want to stay in this place but logically she doesn’t have any choice so she is disappointed

Maan puts his hands inside his trouser pockets and looks down

M- Tum mere saath chal sakti ho?

G- Huh?

M- I mean I have a whole suite; you can stay in one room. Waise bhi 2:30 baj gai hain, subah hote hi kuch deck lena

She is looking at him wondering what to do

After a while she nods in agreement

G- Thik hai

They walk towards the car

Both are silent in the car

Geet is biting her lips in dilemma confusion embarrassment and awkwardness

Maan is silently driving

He is also wondering ki kahin ye mujhe creep ya chep toh nahi samajh rahi

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They enter Maan’s hotel suite

M-emm…tum andar so jao, main bahar so jaata hoon

G- Nahi. Aap bed pe so jao, ye sofa-bed pe main fit ho jaungi. No problem

He nods and goes leaving Geet to be comfortable there

Both go to their respective beds

Sleep eludes them for a while, they are thinking about the eventful day

But both slowly drift to sleep

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In the morning,

Maan had woken up but didn’t leave the room as he didn’t know whether Geet was up

Geet bhi uthke baithi hui thi

She heard the sound of Maan’s walking in other room

‘Uth gaye gain lagta hai’

She thinks to herself

She goes near the door

G- Aap uth gaye hain kya?

M- Haan. Haan. Tum?

G-Haan. Kab ka

M- Main aayun

G- Haan aa jaiye

Maan walks in

He is in his casuals T-shirt & track pants

Geet hadn’t changed bass dupatta kahin patak diya tha

M- Intercom iss room mein hai. Chai order karte hain

G- Haan haan

Both of them are little awkward seeing each other in a new light

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Geet goes into the washroom to change & freshen up

She comes out to see the tea has arrived

G- Maan

He looks at her

G- Maine appse kal thanks bhi nahi kaha. Thank you for everything. Thank you for helping me. I am very sorry about my family, aap ko bohot pareshaan kiya

M- Its okay…chai peelo

She walks to him as he hands over the cup

G- Thanks. Main abhi chali jaungi

M- Kahan?

G- emm…koi ghar dhund lungi….itni jaldi kuch nahi mila toh koi hotel ya PG le lungi

She looks at him and realizes that he knows how unrealistic here plan sounds

G- Par acha hi hua. Main apni family ke saath rehke kabhi apne sapne nahi poore kar sakti thi

She realizes she is thinking out loud

G- Waise, I am sorry. Meri wajah se aapki badnaami toh nahi hui naa?

M- Kaisi badnaami, mujhe iss sheher mein koi nahi jaanta aur naa hi main kisi ko jaanta hoon

G- Oh. I mean…aapki wife yaa girlfriend…who kuch…unko bura lagega ki…

M- Main shaadi-shuda nahi hoon. Meri girlfriend bhi nahi hai

G-Oh

She wants to ask kyun but she doesn’t want to pry on someone’s life

G- Toh aap Dubai kab jaa rahe hain?

M- Kal raat ki flight hai