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Posted: 2 years ago

Oh no. Too much of a coincidence

Did Maan do this. Is he the serial killer. Why ?? So was Dubai a fake thing

Why is he after geet

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Posted: 2 years ago

Part 32

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Abhijeet is killed. Time of death 2:30 am yesterday. The left thumbnail pulled off

She knew what this meant

This meant this won’t stop

The serial killer is back

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Her public phone also beeps

I have booked tickets for us tomorrow to visit your home for your sister’s wedding

The message is from Maan

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Geet immediately gets off the bus after taking a day off from work and makes her way to the police headquarters

G- Shinde sir, kya information hai?

The police officer looks at her as if he was expecting her

Shinde- Abhijeet research kar raha tha saalon pehle hui serial killings ke baare main

Geet- Haan par uss baat se se uske murder ka kya link hai? Humne CCTV track kiye?

The officer shows her the footage

The footage is from a traffic cam so very grainy

They could see a man in raincoat entering the place of murder and then walking out

The CCTV image she sees gets super imposed by image of Maan entering yesterday in his raincoat

She brushes her thought away thinking, sheher mein toh kitne logon ke paas same raincoat hoga

She comes out of her thoughts as Officer Shinde speaks

Shinde- Waise Abhijeet tumse milne wala than naa

Geet- Haan milne aane wala tha par pata nahi kyun mujse milne nahi aaya. I was also surprised

Tabhi Geet’s phone rings

G- Excuse me

Its Maan on the other side

M- Tum ghar kab aa rahi ho? I have packed my stuff. Tumhare ghar jaana hai yaad hai naa

She sighs

G- Hmm. Aati hoon. I will talk to you later. Tum pack karke ready raho

She hangs up

Geet notices the questioning curious look of officer Shinde

G- It’s my husband

Shinde- Oh, he is back!

Geet nods

G- Waise, I think humein iss investigation ke saath-saath jispe Abhijieet research kar raha tha woh case bhi open karna chahiye

Shinde- Serial killer wala?

G- Yes sir

Shinde- Hmm, I think you are right

G- Sir mujhe kuch dino ke liye mere hometown jaana hai with my husband for my sister’s wedding. But aap kahein toh main ruk sati hoon

Shinde- Nahi nahi, officially hum police ki investigation start karte hain. Tumhe main updates deta rahunga agar private detective side se koi help chahiye ho toh

G- Yes sir. Abhijeet hamara aadmi tha. I would like to get involved in this case full-flegedly and nab the criminal

Geet says with resolve

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Geet was lost in her thoughts in the whole flight

The case was intriguing and disturbing

She didn’t speak much with Maan on the flight

He also didn’t say anything

He was used to their silence

He finally speaks up

M- Tum khush nahi ho?

He refers to the fact since she is going to meet her family after more than 2 years

She comes out of her thoughts

G- Nahi, aisa nahi hai. Main khush hoon

M- Toh chehre par barah baje huye hain

She gives a small yet formal smile

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They reach the airport and sit in the cab

Geet was following Maan’s lead

She was anyway in a daze as her mind was pre-occupied due to the case

She suddenly realizes they are going in the wrong direction

G- Arre arre! Ye kis raaste jaa rahe hain hum?

She says to the driver

G- Maan, tumne sahi address diya hai naa ghar ka?

M- Hum tumhare ghar nahi jaa rahe

G- Toh?

She looks at Maan with surprise

M- Hum hotel jaa rahe hain

G- Hotel? Kyun?

M- Hotel mein stay karenge naa. Tumhare ghar pe thode rukenge

He says smugly

She frowns

G- Haan, nahi toh?

Maan is taken aback

He composes himself

M- Fine. Bhaiya aap iss address mein drop kar dijiye humein

Maan gives the address to the driver

G- Mujhe toh laga tha tum hotel mein nahi ruk sakte ho. Hotel mein ruk sakte ho toh mere ghar pe kyun ruke ho? Hotel mein kyun nahi gaye?

Geet thinks out loud

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Posted: 2 years ago

Geet is so passionate about her detective work that she is so lost in it, hope she has success in this field. The murder mystery is interesting but a lil scary as well. Glad to see Maan putting so much effort on booking tickets and reminding Geet about the trip and also packing for it ahead of her. It's cute how he observes her facial expressions and so concerned about her noticing the stress on her face. Now with them visiting family it will be good to see more Maaneet time and their act as hubby wifey. Story us getting more interesting and eager for next chapter

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Posted: 2 years ago

Oh so geet is working with police eh. Nice

Oh looks like Abhijit is after Maan Maan is staying with geet to keep an eye on her. He probably realises she is pretty good in finding things out.

Scary and sad if Maan is the killer. But why???


good thinking by geet why are they going yo hotel. If so he could have stayed in hotel too why her house

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Posted: 2 years ago

Nice update

Interesting, maan geet trip to geet mayka can't wait to see how they live like truly husband wife can't wait update soon

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Posted: 2 years ago

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geet is doing her detective work in Hyderabad also when police officer abhijit murder by serial killer she was called in police station for alertness n help

geet find similarity in murderer n maan but she brush it off. all the way to her her home geet thinking of case giving impression that she is not happy to meet her family

maan is still suspicious

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Posted: 2 years ago

Very interesting Neelu

Awesome and interesting part 👍

Well Maan past is still hidden but this case has given a new flavor to the story if Maan is guilty or hiding anything this is going to be shocking for Geet

Case that Geet is investigating is really interesting & I think somewhere involvement of Maan will make it more captivating 👍

So Geet has reached her home town now Maan is taking her to a hotel which is interesting

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago

Okay.. so this is getting very very interesting..

Hope Maan is not a serial killer or a murderer

My heart will break into pieces if he is one🥺

Is he staying in her house for his own benefit or to protect her… if he is just hiding there and not for her… I will have another heartbreak 🥺

Geet is a very strong girl here.. sorted one

Let’s see if the story is love between Maaneet or it’s mystery tale.. I am here with strong heart to take whatever comes from you


Edited by tellyme - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago

Part 32


Fabulous and Curious Update


Geet once again getting involved in her investigation

but this time it's all about a murder

it seems like Geet is suspicious about Maan yet at the same time

she wants to trust him

both Geet and Maan flying down to her home for her sister's marriage

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Posted: 2 years ago

Abijieet was working on old cases. Was he getting close to someone?

Edited by coderlady - 2 years ago

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