Suspicious Partners- MG || (Part 37|Page 88) - Page 10

Well its another story and of course a new persona of Geet. Jahsoos seriously yaar? I mean I am intrigued but it has yet to capture my interest so lets see where you take her first case!

Uhhh so she is not a good detective just putting that out there. Like you don't even ask the persons basic demographic info of who hired you and start looking for people her asks. Like girl he can be putting someone in danger or you. 

thanks for the pm and update

Part 4

Wonderful update…awesomely written 

well Geet was trapped and cornered

as expected she confronted him

he was indeed shocked that knows everything about him

so Shalini, Gagan and Meenakshi are his siblings

great that Maan has helped his siblings financially

Maan was correct that she is a good detective

liked that has taken responsibility for them

can understand why he does not want them to know about him

Geet was amazed

sad that Maan is all alone

at least he opened up to Geet

oh no Geet's uncle was there

what will she do?

update soon

OK sorry I take back the bad detective jobs. Girl is talented bur of course knowing her luck she would be caught. Awww his long lost siblings and he is helping them out and that is so sweet. He is a loner who needs help and now he is stuck with Geet because Taaya ji is not going to let that slide. 

Sounds very interesting!

Want to read more on it soon 😊

Aahh the turn of events...

Now what will she say to her relative🤩

Looking forward to it ..

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very nice update

maan surprise knowing geet found his real motive behind searching his brother n sisters 

first time he share his deep secret with geet 

geet is safe 

Surprising and Warm yet with Sadness too

I loved this update 

Geet actually found out the people her client 

wanted were actually his siblings 

and they are all orphans 

it almost seem like there is some trust been build 

between Maan Singh Khurana and Geet 

Part 5

The door bangs open and bunch of hotel staff walk in

‘Sir, we got your text saying there is an intruder in your room. Are you okay?’

Maan- Yes, I….

Before Maan could complete one of the older staff members looks at Geet

‘Geet tu?’

Geet looks up at the man

G- Taayaa ji?

++++++++++++

Sharp slap from her father hits Geet’s cheek

Her uncle had dragged her out of the hotel while her investigation & now she was in her home surrounded by her family and her uncle’s family

Neighbors were also peeking & eavesdropping to overhear what was the commotion all about

Uncle- Puchiye aapki beti se kaun hai who ladka jiske saath who bade hotel ke kamre mein aise kapde pehenke…chi chi chi!

Her Uncle says referring to her Hotel Maid’s dress as a disguise

Mother- Sharam nahi aati! Naak kata di pure samaj mein

Father- Isliye kaha tha iski jaldi shaadi karado. Humse hi galti ho gai….

Geet- Aap sab galat samajh rahe hain! Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai

Uncle- To main jhooth bol raha hoon

Father- Teri himmat kaise hui apne Tayyaji ke saamne zabaan chalaane ki

Another slap hits her cheek

Tears are rolling down off her eyes that Geet is trying to control but in vain

Geet- Mian kisi ko jhootha nahi keh rahi hoon. Main wahan gai thi apne investigation ke silsile mein, meri detective agency ka client hai woh

Aunt- Wah! Wah! Wah! Client ke saath hotel room mein mila jaat hai? Kisse bevkoof bana rahi ho tum

Father- Ab se tumhara ye sab jasoosi sab band. Tum ghar pe baithke maa kaa haath bataogi aur tumhari jald se jald shaadi karaayenge hum. Jaao apne kamre mein aur nikalna mat wahan se!

Geet ko uske kamre mein bhej dete hain

She sighs ki ab inko kaise samjhaye

But she hopes ki ho sakta hai kal tak inka gussa Thanda ho jaaye and she can reason with them. Because shaadi toh usse kisi anjaan insaan se bilkul nahi karna hai aur naa hi usko apni detective agency band karni hai

As Geet goes, the extended family and neighbors’ barge in saying

‘Bhai saab, abhi ladka dhundne ke din gaye. Ye sab sunke kaunsa ladka shaadi karega aapki beti se?’

‘Arre Geet toh chodo, aapki jo chotti do betiyan hai ab toh unki bhi shaadi hona mushkil hai’

‘Poore khandaan ka naam mitti mein mila diya iss ladki ne’

‘Islie main kehti thi waqt rehte ladki ki shaadi kardijiye’

Father sinks into the sofa holding his head

Father- Hey Bhagwan! Ab kya karein hum

Aunt- Badnaami se bachne ka ek hi tareeka hai. Ussi ladke se shaadi kara dijiye aap

Geet’s father is thinking

Father- Kya who ladka shaadi karega?

Uncle- Arre kyun nahi karega? Karna hi padega! Hamari ghar ki beti ke saath aisi harkat karke bhaag niklega kya. Hum zabardasti pakadke karayenge

Ushar Geet kamre mein band hai thinki ki iss jhamele se kaise nikle

Tabhi her phone rings loudly, she almost jumps ki itni raat ko call kaun kar raha hai

Jaldi se phone silent kar deti hai

She sees its Maan’s number

She texts him

Call mat kariye abhi, pls

He texts back

Is everything okay?

He was calling because he was wondering what must have happened after Geet was almost dragged by her uncle from his room. But he doesn’t know what to say

Geet is surprised reading his text, she wonders ‘inhe kya hua?’

Before she could reply, she gets another text from him

Tumne Gagan ka contact nahi diya

‘Oh, toh ye reason hai, isliye he was calling & texting me’ Geet thinks to herself

She texts Maan Gagan’s contact

++++++++

Tabhi her mother enters the room

She finds Geet wth her mobile texting

Ma- Itni raat ko ksko message kar rahi hai?

Geet is taken aback

G- Kisi ko nahi

She answers trying to hide her phone, so it does not get confiscated

But her mother snatches the phone from her and takes it outside

Geet follows her mother

Ma- Ye phone pe ussi ladke se baat kar rahi thi. Aap log baat karo usse

Geet- Kya usse kyun baat karni hai?

Ma- Tumhari shaadi ke liye?

Geet is shocked

Part 5 

Dramatic and Curious Update 

Geet's uncle truly made a huge scene 

but Geet's parents surely they should be aware 

of her career 

but seems now they feel Geet is in the wrong 

it was rather kind of Maan to text Geet finding out if she is 

doing well 

but now I'm sure her parents will believe Maan and Geet has 

some secret relation