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Posted: 1 years ago

Thanks for the pm and update


Part 32

Compelling update... sensationally written

great that Geet is still continuing her detective work

so she is working with the police

well she saw the video footage

oh the image of Maan entering in the raincoat comes to her mind

alas brushes it off

she recalls that Abhijeet was going to meet her

great that Maan called her about their trip

hmm he is already packed

now Geet wants to reopen the serial killer case

Abhijeet questioned Maan about this

was is Maan's connection to this?

who killed Abhijeet?

glad that Geet and Maan are on their way to her hometown

Geet clearly cannot stop thinking about the case

Maan's question was reasonable

he wanted to stay at the hotel

alas Geet refused

they will stay at her house


update soon

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Posted: 1 years ago

Great part 

Omg what is Maan hiding 

Everything is too complicated 

Cont soon 

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Ye ho kya raha hai

OmG is Maan the murderer?? I hope not!

Lol ab what is Maan going to answer to her not so rhetorical question?

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Posted: 1 years ago

nice one

glad that geet didnt give up on her passion

good to see her working with the police

here maaneet finally board for geets sis wedding

so maan booked hotel earlier but later agrees to come with geet to her home seems like he wants to be with geet, does he? or keeping eye on her?

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Part 33

 

 

 

He composes himself

 

M- Fine. Bhaiya aap iss address mein drop kar dijiye humein

 

Maan gives the address to the driver

 

G- Mujhe toh laga tha tum hotel mein nahi ruk sakte ho. Hotel mein ruk sakte ho toh mere ghar pe kyun ruke ho? Hotel mein kyun nahi gaye?

 

Geet thinks out loud

 

But Maan chooses to ignore her question

 

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They reach Geet’s house

 

As she looks around memories start pouring in

 

She takes a deep breath to compose herself

 

Maan rings the doorbell

 

Geet sister opens the door and both happily hug each other

 

Her other sister and parents also appear happily to welcome them

 

Ma- Aiye aiye jamai ji

 

Maan folds his hands as acknowledgement towards the parents

 

Geet looks at Maan to see whether he is uncomfortable

 

But his expressions are unreadable

 

So she starts to step in to get in the house quickly

 

Ma- Arre ruk, pehli baar tum dono aaye ho. Grihpravesh toh karenge naa

 

The family does aarti and all

 

Geet is getting annoyed with the drama

 

Maan is standing their obediently

 

Father- Jamai ji, aap dono ko aane mein takleef toh nahi hui naa. Hum gaadi bhijwa dete

 

G- Jamai ji ki takleefon ke baare mein pehle soch lete toh zyada acha ho jaata

 

Geet enters rolling her eyes

 

Ma- Geet!

 

Ma snaps at her

 

M- Nahi sab theek tha

 

Maan answers her father while ignoring Geet

 

Father- Suno, jamai ji thak gaye honge. Unko unka karma dikhado, thoda aaram kar lenge

 

The father says to Geet’s mother

 

Ma- Ji ji

 

‘Unka kamra’ Geet wonders, she was heading towards her old room

 

Ma- Tu kahan jaa rahi hai, idhar aa!

 

Ma stops Geet and pulls her aside

 

Ma- Wahan kahan jaa rahi hai? Tu aur jamai ji ke rehne ka intezaam main tere papa aur mere bedroom mein kar diya hai

 

G- Kya??? Par kyun???

 

Ma- Kya kyun? Jamai ko kahin bhi thode thehra sakte hain. Aur tu ye, kaise saade kapde pehenke aa gai. Shaadi ke baad pehli baar aarahi hai, mahualle waale taak lagake baithe the. Zara achi saaree, thode zevar sindur, mangal sutra kuch toh pehen aati. Jamai ji ne tujhe sarr pe bitha rakha hai!

 

G- Toh pehle batana tha ki mauhalle ka fashion show ho raha hai

 

Ma- Chup ho jaa! Shaadi ke baad bhi zabaan katt-katt chalti hai

 

G- Kyun shaadi ke baad bezubaan ho jaate hain kya aap ki tarah?

 

Ma- Akalmand ho jaate hain, samjhi? Chal jamai ji intezaar kar rahe haain

 

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Geet’s mom directs Geet and Maan to the bedroom

 

Ma- Jamai ji, aap aaram kar lo. Phir khana laga deti hoon

 

Maan nods

 

Ma- Aur ye hamare mein rivaaz hai, jamai ghar mein aata hai toh unko ladki ke maike se kapde dete hain. Aap agar ye pehnoge toh acha lagega

 

Geet’s mother hands Maan a bag

 

Maan nods

 

M- Thank you

 

Maa smiles

 

Ma- Waise jamai ji, ek baat kahun?

 

M- Ji

 

Ma- Geet ke papa, jo pehle hua uske liye bohot sharminda hain. Islie who aap se nazar milaane mein bhi kat ra rahe hain. Aap ho sake toh unko aur hum sabko maaf kar dijiyega

 

M- Ji, aap chinta mat kariye. Uss baat ko 2 saal ho gaye hain

 

Maa grins happily

 

Ma- Jeete raho beta. Khush raho. Aaram karo

 

Maa leaves

 

Geet appears from the other side of the room

 

G-  “Ji, aap chinta mat kariye. Uss baat ko 2 saal ho gaye hain” ???? Chinta matt kari???

 

Maan looks at her

 

G- Tum kitna kuch keh sakte the. Aur tumne bass…

 

M- Kya keh sakta tha. Aur kyun kehna tha?

 

G- Kyun nahi kehna tha! Tumhare saath jo hua…

 

M- Harr baat pe logon se jhagda karne ki koi zarurat nahi hoti. Ye samajhna chahiye

 

G- Harr cheez mein chup rehne ki bhi koi zarurat nahi hoti , ye tumhe bhi samajhna chahiye!

 

Maan doesn’t answer her back to stop the quarrel

 

G- Tum iss poore jhamele se iss baar bach sakte the. Par nahi! Tumhe to serial ki mahaan bahu banna hai! Tum Anupama ho yaa Tulsi, ya Parvati; mujhe toh samajh nahi aata

 

M- Acha? Toh mujhe yahan nahi aana chahiye tha?

 

G- Bilkul nahi

 

M- Tumhari behen ki shaadi hai, unhone mujhe invite kiya tha. Toh main kya kehta?

 

G- Manna kar dete!

 

M- Aur tum?

 

G- Main kya?

 

M- Tum apni behen ki shaadi mein nahi aana chahti thi?

 

She answers after a moment

 

G- Chahti thi. Par tumhe pata hai naa tumhe yahan kitni takleefein hongi aur ye sab natak karna hoga. Inn logon ke saath uthna baithna padega jo…

 

M- Tumhari behen ki shaadi thi. Tum aana chahti thi. End of discussion.

 

Maan turns away fiddling with the kurta pajama that Geet’s mom had gifted

 

G- No!

 

Geet appears in front of him

 

G- Main aana chahti thi. Main aajaati. Mere paas plan tha

 

M- Aur kya tha who plan?

 

Maan asks looking unconvinced

 

G- Main akeli aati

 

M- Aur log mere baare mein puchte toh?

 

G- Keh deti ki kaam tha toh tum nahi aa paaye. Yaa keh deti ki hamare beech mein kuch problems chal rahi hain

 

M- Acha. Tum keh deti kaam tha toh ye aas paas ke log baatein nahi banaate. Aur kehti ki hamare beech problems hain ye keh kehti toh tum tumhari iss behen ki bhi shaadi tutt jaati aur dusri ki bhi nahi ho paati. Aur sab tumhe zimmedaar thehraate

 

G- Woh sab main handle kar leti par tumhe toh pareshaaniyaan nahi hoti naa

 

M- Tumhe toh hoti. Aur main nahi chahta tumhe koi pareshaani ho. Main ye handle kar lunga. Trust me

 

Maan says with such a sincerity that for a second Geet’s heart stops to just hear him and believe his each and every word

 

Her gaze meets his

 

His eyes were as dark and deep as the deepest night

 

That sense of assurance in his words was filling her heart

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Posted: 1 years ago

Awesome and amazing update Neelu 

Just loved it 🤗🤗 

I really loved how after so much of events Maan is maintaining his composure & managing everything at Geets place nicely as it is matter of family

Thou Geet was pissed off with the entire drama feeling that if they were so concerned they wouldn't have created a mess like this but she cannot do anything as it is her sister marriage

Maan to calmed her with his assurance that he is going to handle things smoothly which was surprising for Geet 

Waiting for more

Thank you for the PM

Continue soon 🤗

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Posted: 1 years ago

Great part 

Maan trying to make things work out with Geet’s family is so sweet 

Cont soon 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 33


Fabulous and so Amazing Update 


Geet seemed pissed off and taking all her frustration out on Maan

but I admire that he thinks about Geet and her sister

as it's a wedding and people will surely ask Geet about her husband 

Geet's parents giving Maan the respect a son in law deserves 

I'm hoping that Maan can win over Geet at this wedding 

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Beautiful update! 

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They had no respect for her when she was living at home. Now when she comes back with a husband, all doors are open.