Part 30
Hilarious and Fantastic Update
Oh Maan secretly watching Geet
but I enjoyed the entire Sheena scene
hope Geet realizes that Maan is only interested in her
Part 30
Hilarious and Fantastic Update
Oh Maan secretly watching Geet
but I enjoyed the entire Sheena scene
hope Geet realizes that Maan is only interested in her
Pt 30
I didn't expect this stunt from Maan...😲
I thought he was actually going to catch Sheena..
But...🤣
Geet is actually angry on him for leaving her alone but couldn't confess to herself even...😛
Aww.... he was there to catch her in time...but made that girl fall on her face....😆
Geet realized that but still couldn't digest the fact that he is getting close to her.
Thank you🤗
Lovely update! Thanks. Yes Geet, Maan is crazy about you. I think Maan needs to show Geet just how much, otherwise she is never going to believe it. Even his small gestures, she has some or other reason behind it. She really does not want to give herself any hope again.
30
enjoyed reading
even getting signal from maan ,geet s still in thinking n analyzing maan
Part 30
Marvelous update…incredibly written
liked Maan helping Geet
great that he does not her to get embarrassed
of cos Geet is affected by his touch
well her female colleagues tell her that Maan is shy
Geet was astounded as Maan as everyone wants to talk to Maan
so they cleared that Maan is shy of her
good that they tell that Maan secretly checks out Geet
as expected they question Geet
alas she denies
not surprised that they tease Geet
oh Sheena is after Maan
at least Geet's colleagues warned her
Geet's reaction was reasonable
hate that Sheena taunts Geet
nice that Geet does not care about Sheena
loved how Maan ignored Sheena
Geet's thoughts well portrayed
update soon
wow everything points how much maan is into her
now this sheena incident proofs that
maan only rescues his wify darling
i loved whole sheena fall scene hahaha
here also loved how he didnt let geet fall...soo lovelyyyy
Wow! Just loving the way the story is progressing. Geets colleagues are truly cupid's. Always making Geet and Maan think more about each other, making them analyse each others behaviour towards the other. Them teasing Geet to no end was fun and Maan getting caught and flustered was too adorable. Finally Geet is realising that Maan has gotten comfortable with her and trusts her to let her in his personal space and also takes liberty to enter her personal space when needed. The chemistry is increasing each chapter. Still can't forget how he helped her with saree in previous chapter. Eagerly waiting for next chapter.
Great part
Anyone can fall for this maan
Geet’s colleagues try’s to make her understand but maan proved to them
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Part 31
Girls -Haan Sai baat hai. Kya hi kar legi Sheena. Maan toh bas tumhara hai. Baaki log to achoot h hain uske liye
All of them are giggling while teasing Geet
Geet lekin digest nahi kar pa rahi ki kya hua
Jab woh girne wali thi tab Maan kahan se teleport hokar usko help kiya.. Aur abhi yeh....
Is it.... ?
She actually thinks back ki actually mein Maan apna personal space kisi se share nahi karta.
He always stands at least on an arm’s distance away from everyone... except herself?
Huh?
Is Maan close to her?
HUH???
What? Isn't Sheena every guy’s fantasy? Maan rejected her so brutally?
Geet is at loss of words even in her thoughts
+++++
As they come home in the taxi, Geet is looking out of the window
Her face has a little happy smile
The stars look brighter, the wind feels pleasant on her skin, the lull of the night sounds like a melodious music
‘It was fun’
She hears him speak
She turns to look at him and nods
He smiles back looking relaxed
+++++++
They enter home and start to change
G- Suno!
He looks over his shoulder
She turns her gaze at the saree pins, asking for his help through her eyes
He walks towards her and the close to her gently undoing the safety pins on her saree
Maan is very aware of their closeness
Geet can feel his warm breath on her skin
M- Are you tired?
He asks after he is done undoing her last safety pin
G- Hmm
He nods
M- Take rest then. Sleep well
She nods
She changes to her comfortable clothes and removes her makeup and goes to her bed, while Maan lays down on his bed on the floor
++++++
Geet ki need khulti hai
Its 3 am
She sits up to go the washroom but doesn’t find Maan at his usual position
She looks around the whole house
Its raining heavily
Maan is no where to be found
She wonders, has he left her
But his stuff was intact
Geet hears the main door open
She looks at the direction to
She sees a person’s profile in a dark long raincoat with a hoodie
The raincoat is drenched, and water is dripping
The hoodie is casting a shadow on the face, so the face is not visible
Geet is alarmed
She quickly turns on the light of the room to see better
Maan looks at her with surprise as if he caught him off guard
G- Tum…itni raat ko kahan gaye the?
He is gazing at her but today his gaze looks different…somewhat unsettling
He takes out a can of beer
M- I got beer.
G -Tumhe peene ki aadat hoti jaa rahi hai!
He smirks
++++++++++
Next day while in the bus for her office, Geet fishes out her other phone
It has become difficult to check her other phone since Maan was staying with her
She quickly switches it on
She quickly finds the single message
Message means there is a new case
She always eagerly waited for the message on the phone
But this time reading the message casts horror on her face
Message said:
Abhijeet is killed. Time of death 2:30 am yesterday. The left thumbnail pulled off
She knew what this meant
This meant this won’t stop
The serial killer is back
+++++++
Her public phone also beeps
I have booked tickets for us tomorrow to visit your home for your sister’s wedding
The message is from Maan
Itna chotu update...😔
I told before itself...it's about serial killer.
It giving me vibes like "DURANGA" webseries.
Name also - abhijeet.
...is Maan serial killer...😲
Guess need to wait for revelations now..😛
Geet still doing her job as detective? 😲
So geet will catch the killer now...
Let's see....
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