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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 30


Hilarious and Fantastic Update 


Oh Maan secretly watching Geet 

but I enjoyed the entire Sheena scene 

hope Geet realizes that Maan is only interested in her 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Pt 30


I didn't expect this stunt from Maan...😲

I thought he was actually going to catch Sheena..

But...🤣

Geet is actually angry on him for leaving her alone but couldn't confess to herself even...😛

Aww.... he was there to catch her in time...but made that girl fall on her face....😆 

Geet realized that but still couldn't digest the fact that he is getting close to her. 


Thank you🤗

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Posted: 1 years ago

Lovely update!  Thanks.  Yes Geet, Maan is crazy about you.  I think Maan needs to show Geet just how much, otherwise she is never going to believe it.  Even his small gestures, she has some or other reason behind it.  She really does not want to give herself any hope again. 

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Posted: 1 years ago

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enjoyed reading

even getting signal from maan ,geet s still in thinking n analyzing maan 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 30

Marvelous update…incredibly written 

liked Maan helping Geet

great that he does not her to get embarrassed

of cos Geet is affected by his touch

well her female colleagues tell her that Maan is shy

Geet was astounded as Maan as everyone wants to talk to Maan

so they cleared that Maan is shy of her

good that they tell that Maan secretly checks out Geet

as expected they question Geet

alas she denies

not surprised that they tease Geet

oh Sheena is after Maan

at least Geet's colleagues warned her

Geet's reaction was reasonable

hate that Sheena taunts Geet

nice that Geet does not care about Sheena

loved how Maan ignored Sheena

Geet's thoughts well portrayed


update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago

wow everything points how much maan is into her

now this sheena incident proofs that

maan only rescues his wify darling 

i loved whole sheena fall scene hahaha

here also loved how he didnt let geet fall...soo lovelyyyy

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Posted: 1 years ago

 Wow! Just loving the way the story is progressing. Geets colleagues are truly cupid's. Always making Geet and Maan think more about each other, making them analyse each others behaviour towards the other. Them teasing Geet to no end was fun and Maan getting caught and flustered was too adorable. Finally Geet is realising that Maan has gotten comfortable with her and trusts her to let her in his personal space and also takes liberty to enter her personal space when needed. The chemistry is increasing each chapter. Still can't forget how he helped her with saree in previous chapter. Eagerly waiting for next chapter. 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Great part 

Anyone can fall for this maan

Geet’s colleagues try’s to make her understand but maan proved to them 

Cont soon 

Thanks for pm

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Part 31

 

 

 

Girls -Haan Sai baat hai. Kya hi kar legi Sheena.  Maan toh bas tumhara hai. Baaki log to achoot h hain uske liye

 

All of them are giggling while teasing Geet

 

Geet lekin digest nahi kar pa rahi ki kya hua

 

Jab woh girne wali thi tab Maan kahan se teleport hokar usko help kiya.. Aur abhi yeh....

 

Is it.... ?

 

She actually thinks back ki actually mein Maan apna personal space kisi se share nahi karta.

 

He always stands at least on an arm’s distance away from everyone... except herself?

 

 Huh?

 

Is Maan close to her?

 

HUH???

 

What? Isn't Sheena every guy’s fantasy? Maan rejected her so brutally?

 

Geet is at loss of words even in her thoughts

 

+++++

 

As they come home in the taxi, Geet is looking out of the window

 

Her face has a little happy smile

 

The stars look brighter, the wind feels pleasant on her skin, the lull of the night sounds like a melodious music

 

‘It was fun’

 

She hears him speak

 

She turns to look at him and nods

 

He smiles back looking relaxed

+++++++

 

They enter home and start to change

 

G- Suno!

 

He looks over his shoulder

 

She turns her gaze at the saree pins, asking for his help through her eyes

 

He walks towards her and the close to her gently undoing the safety pins on her saree

 

Maan is very aware of their closeness

 

Geet can feel his warm breath on her skin

 

M- Are you tired?

 

He asks after he is done undoing her last safety pin

 

G- Hmm

 

He nods

 

M- Take rest then. Sleep well

 

She nods

 

She changes to her comfortable clothes and removes her makeup and goes to her bed, while Maan lays down on his bed on the floor

 

++++++

 

Geet ki need khulti hai

 

Its 3 am

 

She sits up to go the washroom but doesn’t find Maan at his usual position

 

She looks around the whole house

 

Its raining heavily

 

Maan is no where to be found

 

She wonders, has he left her

 

But his stuff was intact

 

Geet hears the main door open

 

She looks at the direction to

 

She sees a person’s profile in a dark long raincoat with a hoodie

 

The raincoat is drenched, and water is dripping

 

The hoodie is casting a shadow on the face, so the face is not visible

 

Geet is alarmed

 

She quickly turns on the light of the room to see better

 

Maan looks at her with surprise as if he caught him off guard

 

G- Tum…itni raat ko kahan gaye the?

 

He is gazing at her but today his gaze looks different…somewhat unsettling

 

He takes out a can of beer

 

M- I got beer.

 

G -Tumhe peene ki aadat hoti jaa rahi hai!

 

He smirks

 

++++++++++

 

Next day while in the bus for her office, Geet fishes out her other phone

 

It has become difficult to check her other phone since Maan was staying with her

 

She quickly switches it on

 

She quickly finds the single message

 

Message means there is a new case

 

She always eagerly waited for the message on the phone

 

But this time reading the message casts horror on her face

 

Message said:

 

Abhijeet is killed. Time of death 2:30 am yesterday. The left thumbnail pulled off

 

She knew what this meant

 

This meant this won’t stop

 

The serial killer is back

 

+++++++

 

Her public phone also beeps

 

I have booked tickets for us tomorrow to visit your home for your sister’s wedding

 

The message is from Maan

 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Itna chotu update...😔

I told before itself...it's about serial killer.

It giving me vibes like "DURANGA" webseries.

Name also - abhijeet. 

...is Maan serial killer...😲


Guess need to wait for revelations now..😛

Geet still doing her job as detective? ðŸ˜²

So geet will catch the killer now...

Let's see....

Edited by Mg13 - 1 years ago