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Posted: 1 years ago

Hwww 😲 Maan is handcuffed.

How can they… 

Geet is an adult how can they get arrested Maan for that reason 

Waise Theek hee hai, isse bahane Maan will be near Geet… 😆we are real jerk, to keep Maaneet together we are ok for Maan being in jail.. 🤣 I am hopeless case when it comes to Maaneet.

but liked how they casually spent time together and felt attached. Just one day of spending time together and it’s hard for them to get separated 😊


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Posted: 1 years ago

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maan n geet spend time n enjoyed it 

why geet's family arrest maan 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Hi Nilanjana

hope that you and your family are well 


thanks for the pm

Part 10

Shocking update… brilliantly written 

great that they further spent time together

nice that Geet opens up to Maan

hmm so Maan wanted to know if she has a boyfriend

alas he could be direct

liked that Geet wanted to see him off at the airport

of cos Maan was happy hearing this

pleased that he wants to spend more time with Geet

well Geet feels an emptiness just thinking about Maan leaving

sad that Maan has to leave

loved that they both try to prolong the time that they have to together

glad that they affected by each other's closeness 

now Maan has to board the flight

aww he reluctantly leaves

Gosh Geet's family arrive with the police

Geet was indeed flabbergasted

not surprised that she confronted them 

oh no Maan is arrested

Geet was stunned seeing this


update soon

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Posted: 1 years ago

Yeh kaisi jasoos hai jo kaam hone pe phi pecha nahi chod rahi. Bechara Maan goes from best day of his life to a day in of his life with handcuffs. Yeh Geet ke gharwala galat sochi ja rahe hai. the struggle is real :(

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Posted: 1 years ago

Wow..amazing update. What a twist 

Let see what will happen next 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 11

 

 

Geet was turning to go back when she notices bunch of police officers entering the airport

 

She stops on her feet seeing her family accompanying the police officers

 

She runs towards them to see what’s the matter

 

G- Aap log yahan? Aaap yahan kya kar rahe hain

 

Few police officers stop her

 

‘Peeche rahiye aap , madam’

 

‘Ye hamari beti hai’

 

Her family reassures the police

 

G- Aap log yahan pe kyun…?

 

Before she could finish, she sees Maan being hand-cuffed and being escorted out of the airport by the police force

 

She gasps with panic

 

G- Maan!

 

She run towards them

 

G- Aap ye…inko…chodiye inko…inge kyun leke jaa rah hain

 

Police- Madam, inke khilaf aapki family ne complaint darj ki hai, jo hoga police station mein hi hoga

 

Police drag Maan into the police van and drives off

 

++++++++++

 

Geet reaches the police station in haste

 

She enters and finds her family in there

 

She is looking around for Maan; and finds him in the lock up

 

She walks to the inspector

 

G- Chod dijiye inhe

 

Police- Madam. Aise nahi chod sakte. Aapki family ne complaint likhayi hai inke khilaaf

 

G- Kaisi complaint?

 

Geet’s uncle chimes in

 

Uncle- Ye hi, ki ye ladka tumhe gumraah karke bhagaake le gaya hai

 

G- Kya??? Aap logon ne mujhe ghar se nikaala aur Maan ne toh meri madat…

 

She stops mid-way and turnts to the police

 

G- Its clear now, Maan ne aisa kuch nahi kiya hau. I am an adult. Aapke paas warrant nahi hai, release him

 

Police- Aisa nahi hota madam, court se bail paper leke aayiye

 

G- Kaisi bail? Jab koi case hi nahi banta toh

 

Police- Madam, humko kanoon matt sikhaayiye. Choodwana hai toh apni family se kahiye case wapas lein

 

Uncle- Hum ye case wapas le sakte hain

 

Her face brightens

 

Uncle- Toh lijiye naa. Mr Khurana hi flight hai, unko Dubai jaana hai

 

Her family comes to come aside

 

She walks towards them

 

Geet’s father speaks up

 

Father- Beta, meri baat suno. Iss masle ki wajah se bohot samaaj mein baatein ho rahi hain. Tumhari toh chodo, tumhari behenon ki zindagi hai, unki shaadi karaani hai humne. Tum dono ek dusre ko pasand karte ho toh shaadi karlo

 

Geet- Papa aisa kuch nahi hai

 

Father- Aisa nahi hai to huss ladke ke saath kya kar rahi thi!!

 

The father yells at her

 

Father- Shaadi toh tumhe karni padegi. Tumhara baap hoon main, iss parivaar ki izzat main mitti mein milne nahi dunga. Aur shadai tumhe issi ladke se karni padegi warna…

 

G- Warna

 

Uncle- Warna police wale hamari baat sajhte hain, unko ache se samjha diya hai humne; iss ladke ka naa koi aage hai yahan naa peeche. Bete, lock up hai kuch bhi ho sakta hai

 

Geet gasps

 

G- Aap logon ko sharam aani chahiye!!

 

Uncle- Sharamnaak kaam toh tune kiya hain iss ladke ke saath naa jane kya kya…ye naubat hi nahi aati agar tu

 

Geet has had enough

 

She walks towards Maan who was inside the cell

 

He walks towards her

 

She looks up at him from head to toe

 

G- Tum thik ho?

 

He nods

 

G- I am so sorry, sba meri wajah se…tumhari flight bhi. Tum chinta mat karo main kuch karti hoon

 

M- I really need to be in Dubai. Why did they arrest me? What do they want?

 

G- I know….I am so sorry….main tumhe bail dila dungi

 

M- Tumhari family kya keh rahi thi tumse?

 

G- Who chahte hain ki hum shaadi karlein

 

Maan holds his head

 

M- Aur nahi kari toh

 

She doesn’t want to think about what her uncle threatened her

 

G- Unke liye unki izzat bohot pyaari hai

 

M- Shaadi ke liye haan kardo

 

G-kya???

 

M- Toh aur koi raasta hai???? Huh?

 

He is frustrated and irritated

 

M- Kam se kam yahan se toh nikal paunga naa,  wapas toh jaa paunga

 

She sighs guiltily, she could understand his frustration and she blames herself for it

 

G- Thik hai. Haan kar dete hain. Uske baad tum Dubai chale jaana, aur main Hyderabad. Hum dono iske baare mein aur kisi ko kabhi nahi batayenge

 

He looks at Geet and nods

 

She looks down

 

She didn’t want things to go this way

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: Alamelu

Oh no. Who is Maan whybus he arrested. What happened. Why did her family do that 


Sab raaz khulenge next part padho

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 10


Fascinating ,Emotional and Shocking 


Both Maan and Geet wants to spend as much

time with each other as they possibly can

Geet accompanies Maan to the airport

but what has her family now did 

got the police involved and Maan is arrested 

wonder now what will happen 


Read the next part to know more...

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: Mg13


My pleasure🤗

I understand but still you can saved your work in Microsoft word and continued here. It just to protect your hard work, I suggested. Although IF is safe, I know that too. 

At the end, you can do as per your own comfort. ❤️


Thanks for your suggestion Dear. By the way, did you check the new updates?

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: Glitter_Goldie

Very interesting Neelu  

Just loved it 🤗🤗 

Geet has started to trust & feel for Maan & even he started to feel the same & the time spent was extremely beautiful to cherish Such a beautiful & apt observation

So Maan is all set to leave for Airport & Geet too accompanied him to see him off & thank him for the help he did 

Hmm 🙄🙄 I knew Maan isn't going to leave so easily but this new twist seems to be interesting & let's see what happens next Yup, read on to know more. By the way, any guesses?

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🥳