Part 2
Nice update.
So Geet finally managed to find Shalini in 3days and informs the man but how did he know that Geet talked to Shalini?
Did Geet herself tell about it to MSG in the message OR the man was just testing Geet's detective skills? How could he knew that Geet talked to Shalini until Geet herself confessed to him or Shalini told him about that?
Again the job of finding another girl...it's obvious for Geet to become suspicious of him. Good that she decides to investigate about the man too.
Part 3
Intriguing update.
So the man is hiding his true identity from Geet. She felt concerned for the safety of those girls and again inquired about them and get shocking news of their disappearance from the places which further increased her doubts on the man.She started investigating the man.
Excited to know what shocking things she finds about him.
Part 4
She starts to frantically search around the room about anything and everything’
Initially she just finds some clothes & stuff
But searching minutely she starts finding information
‘Toh ye Dubai se hai’
‘Toh yahan kya kar raha hai?’
Dhundte dhundte things start becoming clearer but murkier to her
Some of the information almost pulls the rug off under her feet
She loses track of time
She hears the lock turning
She is shocked
She was here too long
She looks around to find a way to escape
The windows are sealed
The bathroom ventilator is too small
She is trapped
She has micro-seconds to think of something
She needs to come up with a plan
She is panicking
With no other way, she goes into the washroom & locks it
‘Geet, kab tak yahan chupi rahegi. Woh kabhi naa kabhi toh yahan aayega naa’
She hears heavy footprints enter the room
She hears the footprints stop
He must have stopped at his track seeing the room a messy state
He must have guessed there is an intruder
She thinks to herself
She hears the doorknob of the bathroom turn
‘Kaun hai wahan? Bahar aao!’
She hears the familiar deep voice yelling
She is trapped & cornered
She has no other way
‘Bahar aao! Warna police ko call karunga!’
Geet frowns and in reflex opens the door & comes out
G- Haan kar lijiye police ko call. Main darti nahi hoon!
He furrows his brows in surprise seeing Geet in front of in housekeeping clothes (mid-thigh length frill dress)
She grabs a rod of a lamp in defense
He looks around the mess & sighs
‘Why are you here? Maine tumse kaha tha Gagan ko dhundo’
G-Aapne mujse sab jhooth bhi kaha tha, including apna naam
‘Maine tumse koi jhooth nahi bola’
Geet rolls her eyes
G- Aapka naam Maan Singh Khurana hai. MSG nahi. Yes or No?
He nods clenching his jaw
G- Meenakshi Gagan aur Shalini aapke bhai behen hain. Aapke maa baap ki ek accident mein ek saath death ho gai aura aap sabko ek orphanage ne apne paas rakha aur aap sab bhai behen ka alag alag jagah adoption ho gaya. Yes or No?
Maan looks at Geet with surprise
He is shocked that Geet was able to dig this information
G- Pehle mujhe laga tha ki aap inn sab ke saath kuch galat kar rahe hain . But aapne toh inn sab ko kuch naa kuch deke settle kar diya hai. Shalini ki shaadi ke liye paise diye, who bhi destination wedding, Meenakshi ko padhai ke liye abroad jaane ke liye finance kiya aur Gagan ke baare mein pata karke uske medical expense uthana chahte hain
She looks at his melancholy & stoic expression, she had never noticed his dark black eyes. He had always worn sunglasses whenever he met her before
He speaks up after a while
M- You…you are good…you are a good detective
G- But aapne jhooth kyun kaha? Mujse jhooth kaha, ye sab chupaake rakhna chaha. Aur apne behen bhai ki bhi anonymously help ki hai. Kyun? Log aise kaam ka dankaa bajaate hain aura aap aise choro ki tarah logon ka bhala karte jaa rahe the. Kyun?
He looks up at her with his deep eyes drowning in emotions
M- Kyunki apno ke liye jo hum karte hain who hamara farz hota hai. Aur main nahi chahta mere aane se unki abhi ki zindagi mein koi effect ho. Bada bhai hone ke naate woh meri zimmedaari hain, maine jo kiya apni zimmedaari nibhaane ke liye kiya. Aur Geet, tum bhi unse kuch nahi kahogi, kabhi nahi. Who apni zindagi mein khush hain, main usmein dakhal nahi dena chahta
Both are silently looking at each other for a moment
She is in silent shock. What she thought about this man & what she found was completely different
He is also numb. This is the first time he had shared his deepest secret with someone.
He had always been a loner.
An orphan in a foreign country struggling to find his footing with no friends & family
Opening his heart & sharing his secret to another soul felt different
The door bangs open and bunch of hotel staff walk in
‘Sir, we got your text saying there is an intruder in your room. Are you okay?’
Maan- Yes, I….
Before Maan could complete one of the older staff member looks at Geet
‘Geet tu?’
Geet looks up at the man
G- Taayaa ji?
Lets hope for the best😉
Part 3
Geet is concerned towards the girls of those whom she handed the info to the suspecious man geet take the room same as that man as she cannot risk others girls life and also that man havent told his name correctly it was fake
continue soon
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Part 3
Captivating Update
For some reason I believe this mysterious man
must be helping these people out medically Hope that is true
I enjoyed Geet disguises herself just to search her client's room heheheh...good catch...I enjoy that too...I am sure the hero will too😉
It is superb Thanks,is she going to get caught lets see
She is working hard,hope she gets the desired result...hope so too
Eagerly waiting for next chapters..
The story is🖤 Thanks for liking it. Keep reading & commenting
Loved it dear
Awesome and beautiful part👏✊👍 Thanks a lot dear, this means a lot
Well so now Geet has her doubt on man & it's obvious as ladies he enquired for are missing & it's something fishy about this case
Geet now investigate about this man & finds vital information about him but now she is trapped as she got caught
Let's see what happens next Sure, keep reading
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Continue soon 🤗🤗
Amazing update
Hope geet will leave the room soon
Or else she will get caught soon ...lets hope for the best
Story is getting very Interesting Thanks for liking it
Please continue Sure, please reading & commenting
Loved it Neel dear
Awesome and emotional part👏✊👍
I must say Maan did everything to protect & save his family & siblings 🙂 he even helped them when required without coming into the notice
Geet got the information & confronted Maan for not giving her the true information but it's understandable that his purpose was to make his siblings happy & protect them without effecting their lives
Lo khaya piya kuch nahi glass phoda 12 aana ... Geet & Maan were caught in the hotel room by her Taya je ab to solid lagegi subki
Waiting for more
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Continue soon🤗🤗