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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 12

 

 

M- Shaadi ke liye haan kardo

 

G-kya???

 

M- Toh aur koi raasta hai???? Huh?

 

He is frustrated and irritated

 

M- Kam se kam yahan se toh nikal paunga naa,  wapas toh jaa paunga

 

She sighs guiltily, she could understand his frustration and she blames herself for it

 

G- Thik hai. Haan kar dete hain. Uske baad tum Dubai chale jaana, aur main Hyderabad. Hum dono iske baare mein aur kisi ko kabhi nahi batayenge

 

He looks at Geet and nods

 

She looks down

 

She didn’t want things to go this way

 

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Geet finds herself in the marriage registrars office

 

She doesn’t know how but her family had arranged some wedding wear for them

 

She was decked up by her mother & sisters

 

Maan was also given some clothes to change into

 

He hadn’t uttered a word since their last conversation. He was just silently obeying what was asked out of him

 

But she had noticed his stoic expression and clenched jaw

 

She sighs

 

They both sign the marriage registration papers and get some pictures clicked as instructed

 

As soon as it is done, Maan asks:

 

M- Ho gaya? Ab main jaun…?

 

But he stops mid-sentence reading the room, the family had said they will only take back the case after the wedding is over

 

M- I mean ab ‘Hum’ jaayein?

 

Geet’s mother- Arre, kitni jaldi kya hai beta abhi toh shaadi hui hai

 

M- Mujhe Dubai pohonchna hai, important hai. Flight bhi book karni hai

 

He answers trying to hide is irritation

 

Geet’s father- Damad ho. Aise kaise jaoge. Hamari beti ke saath Dubai jaa rahe ho. Flights tickets toh hum gift karenge tumhe

 

Geet’s Dad hands over two tickets to Maan

 

Geet’s father- Ye lo. Aaj raat ki hi flight hai as tumhe jaldi hai

 

Maan takes it

 

Geet- Case wapas le lijiye, shaadi toh gai hai

 

Her father nods

 

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Geet’s family come to the airport to see them off

 

Her mother and sisters are crying as its ger vidaai

 

She also has tears in her eyes as she is losing the life as she knows it

 

Life will be full of uncertainties

 

She is even losing the hope the Maan and her will be in contact, she could see him getting restless

 

Geet lets go of her family as to not let Maan wait much

 

They walk inside the airport

 

Her family is waving to her

 

Maan & Geet walk together till they know the family could see them

 

Both look at each other

 

Maan gives a formal nod to her and walks towards the international departure as Geet walks towards the domestic departure

 

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Writer’s Note:

 

There was this song going on in my mind as I was writing the part, I feel this song would be appropriate for this part

 

Raanhja song from Shershaah

 

Roothi Ae Sabte Rabba
Rabba Dil Bhi Hai Rootha
Sab Kuchh Hai Bikhra Bikhra
Bikhra Sa Rootha Rootha

Chup Maahi Chup Hai Ranjha
Bole Kaise Ve Na Ja
Bole Kaise Ve Na Ja
Aaja Aaja

Bole Kaise Ve Na Ja
Bole Kaise Ve Na Ja
Chup Maahi Chup Hai Ranjha
Aaja Aaja

Ve Mera Dola Ni Aaya Dola
Ve Mera Dola Ni Aaya Dola
Ve Mera Dola Ni Aaya Dola
Ve Mera Dola Ni Aaya Dola

Oh Rabb Vi Khel Hai Khele
Roz Lagave Mele
Kehnda Kuch Na Badla
Jhooth Bole Har Velle

Oh Rabb Vi Khel Hai Khele
Roz Lagave Mele
Kehnda Kuch Na Badla
Jhooth Bole Har Velle

Chup Maahi Chup Hai Ranjha
Bole Kaise Ve Na Ja
Bole Kaise Ve Na Ja
Aaja Aaja

Bole Kaise Ve Na Ja
Bole Kaise Ve Na Ja
Chup Maahi Chup Hai Ranjha
Aaja Aaja

Ni Main Rajj Rajj Hijar Manawa
Ni Main Khud Toh Russ Murjhawa
Ni Main Rajj Rajj Hijar Manawa
Ni Main Khud Toh Russ Murjhawa

Kalli Bheed Ch Baithi
Teri Peed Le Baithi
Russeya Ranjha Ve Mera
Main Vi Kamm Na Aithi

Kalli Bheed Ch Baithi, Baithi
Teri Peed Le Baithi, Baithi
Russeya Ranjha Ve Mera, Mera
Main Vi Kamm Na Aithi

Chup Maahi Chup Hai Ranjha
Bole Kaise Ve Na Ja
Bole Kaise Ve Na Ja
Aaja Aaja

Bole Kaise Ve Na Ja
Bole Kaise Ve Na Ja
Chup Maahi Chup Hai Ranjha
Aaja Aaja

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: ranumohanty

What raaz will open  yaar in next chapter something is hidden there also? I think Geet's family will forcefully make them married, if they arrest maan with a false allegation, then they can do anything. Very dangerous family.


Thanks for your comment. Keep commenting on every part😊

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: tellyme

nice progress...

crazy family. I mean even after throwing her out of house, they are not at rest. Maan kahan phas gaya?

Maaneet are trying to trick her family and say yes to get him out but these crazy people, i doubt they will leave the duo this easily. Maaneet ko ek kerke rahenge yeh.😆

I don't know why but I am loving this simple calm Maan and Geet as well. I could literally imagine Maan threading his hair in frustration.😆


Also to you question - I don't see it as attraction or infatuation but some unknown strong bond between them. That's purely my view, not sure what you have planned.❤️


Thanks for commenting. i enjoyed reading it. And thanks for liking the characterization of Maan & Geet❤️

Special thanks for answering my question too

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Posted: 1 years ago

Thanks for the wonderful comment. Lol she calls him Gadha as we call our bosses names, just like he shows her power and she retaliates in her own way by keeping names for him

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Posted: 1 years ago

Thanks for taking the effort to read the story. I really appreciate it. I am also trying to write more in english so its easier for you to read through😊

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: Alamelu

Seriously though what a weird family she has. Poor Maan he almost got out

Now they want them

To get married. And Maan has no other choice but to do so really

can he not get a proper lawyer and get himself out 

He has the money 



Yup, he has the money but to contact a lawyer would take time. They threatened Geet indirectly when she spoke about bail that they can do anything to Maan in lock up. So both Maan & Geet are afraid of that possibility. He has money but no contacts in India

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Thank you for the pm and update


Part 11

Dramatic update…. fabulously written 

feeling for Maan

he is innocent yet has been treated like a criminal

as expected Geet went to the police station

of cos she goes to speak to the inspector telling to release Maan

hate Geet's family

they have accused Maan without any evidence

glad that Geet told the inspector that Maan did not do anything except help her

alas Maan cannot be released

he needs to get bail

oh so her family needs to take the case back

well they will take the case back on condition that Maan and Geet get married

great that Geet tries to make them understand

but her dad and uncle are adamant

dismayed with their thinking

Geet's anger was justified

at least she goes to see Maan

liked her concern for Maan

so she apologised to Maan

Maan wants to know what her family told her

good that she was direct with Maan

Gosh he tells her to say yes to get married

sad that there is no other way

Geet was stunned hearing him

his frustration was reasonable

finally she agreed

however after they get married, he will go to Dubai and she will go to Hyderabad

I don' t think it will be that simple


update soon


Ah, trust me it will be far from simple

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Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by: Kkiran

Her family is cocoa for coco puffs. What kind of jail this is where an adult can not make their own decisions. Her father worried about izzat like dude I am embarrassed for Geet to be related to you all because you all have no common sense. Well Geet better listen to Maan and do some fake wedding thing so he can get out of this mess. 


Her family is cocoa for coco puffs🤣


I am embarrassed for Geet to be related to you all because you all have no common sense🤣

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 12 


Painful and Curious Update 


Both Maan and Geet have a registered marriage 

and Geet can see the annoyance in Maan

just hope that both still keep in touch 

now Maan leaving to Dubai 

while Geet too will leave to Hyderabad 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Very interesting and emotional part Neelu

Just loved it 🤗🤗 

I really don't know what was brewing inside Maan except frustration & anger ... He must be really pissed off with the attitude of Geet parents

Finally to save their skin they got married & now things are going to be extremely tough specifically for Geet & she could read that Maan won't be in touch either 

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗