Suspicious Partners- MG || (Part 37|Page 88) - Page 53

Posted: 1 years ago

Nice update...

But both need proper discussion to clear things...

Posted: 1 years ago

Part 27

 

 

 

Sab log start conversing with him and dragging him into various discussions and jokes... thodi der baad koi dekhe to lagega ki Maan actual employee hai and Geet uski wife, guest hai party mein

 

Geet also thinks ki he sure can charm anyone when he wants to... isse bachke rehna chahiye.. kitna act hai to get something out of her and kitna genuine hai... Kya pata

Party is going very well

 

He is getting along well with everyone

 

He figures out ki party kaafi time se planned thi but Geet didn't want to invite him

 

He feels a bit... what is it? Heartburn? Disappointed? Acidity?

 

He doesn't know…but decides if Geet doesn't want to involve him then woh bhi nahi hoga

 

Ek collegue randomly says ki –

 

‘Aapko itne khatre mein darr nhi lagta?’

 

M-....

 

Maan is perplexed

 

'Humein Geet ne sab bata diya hai'

 

He is wondering kya bata diya hai, how much does she know

 

' Aap Bandipur National Park mein forest officer hain naa'

 

Maan hides his frown ki ye Geet ne kya kya kahaaniyan phaila rakhi hain

 

'Aur issi liye toh aap dono shaadi ke baad durr durr rehte ho naa'

 

Geet is also worried ki ye Maan ab kya bolega

 

M- Main durr isliye shaanti se reh paata hoon ki mujhe pata kia ap log Geet ka khayal rakhne ke liye

 

He nods his head and comes up with his ever-charming answer ki lage hi nahi ki this was something new to him

Sab fan ho gaye uske

 

‘Geet toh kuch bolti hi nahi, aura ap toh itne hassmukh ho’

 

Maan smiles

 

M- Geet ko meri tension bhi toh itni rehti hai naa

 

‘How romantic! You cant stop gushing about her. Geet’ you are so lucky to have him’

 

Geet also gives a smile while rolling her eyes inside

 

‘Aap dono ki toh love marriage hi hogi naa’

 

M- Haan

 

G- Nahi

 

Maan & Geet turn their heads and look at each other

 

The people around are confused

 

Maan is also looking at her

 

G- woh…mere papa ne hamari shaadi kara di

 

Geet says

 

‘Toh love kaise hua?’

 

G-eemmm.woh….

 

M- Hum pehle se ek dusre ko pasand karte the toh pata chalne par ghar walon ne shaadi kara di

 

Maan comes up with a believable story

 

‘Geet, tum bhi toh Maan ko miss karti hogi jab who durr the’

 

G- Karti thi

 

She answers thinking of those years when she waited for Maan to communicate with her

 

She sighs and looks down with a heavy heart

 

Maan looks at her

 

M- Karti thi?

 

His question has sincere genuinity

 

She looks up at him as their eyes meet

 

‘Aur Maan tum apni Geet ko miss karte the?’

 

M- Karta tha….sochta rehta tha kab milne aunga…kab dekh paunga

 

He answers while gazing at Geet

 

She feels a light tingle on her skin as she hears him

 

Geet! Shake it off. Ye bass log saamne hain isliye aisa keh raha hai. It doesn’t mean anything

 

Geet berates herself

 

+++++++

 

On the way back Geet drives the Car because Maan had a few drinks

 

Car stops mid-way

 

M- Kya hua? Yaha kyun rokdi hai?

 

G- Car roki nahi hai. Rukk gai hai

 

M- Phir se try karo

 

G- Try kar chuki hoon. Tumhe kya zaroorat thi uss creep landlord se Car maangne ki? Usne de di ab ye khataara

 

++++++++++

 

Both end up on the dark secluded road looking for an auto

 

But unlike the last time when she was in similar situation due to the storm this time, she is not fearful, maybe because Maan is with her

 

Maan finds an auto-rikshaw, speaks to the driver and asks Geet to sit

 

M- Baitho

 

Geet gets in first

 

Maan gets in after her

 

As the auto starts the cool breeze on Geet skin & hair is feeling very pleasant

 

It’s the first time she is seeing the City so late

 

She was also aware of left side of her body touching his as seat was not wide enough

 

Was he also aware of their bodies touching; Geet wonders

 

She speaks up after a while

 

G- I am sorry

 

M- Huh?

 

G- Aapko meri wajah se inn logon ke saath interact karna padh gaya

 

M- No….I liked it. Tum…

 

He pauses

 

She looks at him

 

M- Tum pehle bata deti mujhe

 

She sighs

 

G- Mujhe laga aapko nahi aana hoga. Sorry, maine aapke bare mein sab ko ye sab keh rakha hai…ye sab jhoothi kahaniyan…jab ki aapne toh kisi ko...

 

M- No, its okay. I understand

 

G- Aap annual party mein nahi aana chahte toh its okay

 

M- Nahi, mujhe problem nahi hai jane mein. Tumhe nahi hai toh…

 

G- Thik hai phir, maine ek nayi saree kharidi hai party ke liye; wapas nahi karni padegi


She blurts out happily

 

He grins seeing her smile

 

He finally saw a glimpse of the chirpy Geet he knew

 

 

Posted: 1 years ago

Loved it dear Neelu 

Awesome and beautiful part 🤗

I think it's high time Maan should speak his heart out to Geet as from Geets pov her reactions are obvious & it's only Maan who can handle & make her realize that he loves her 

Party was amazing & Maan carefully replied to every question on them 👍 Geet too was bit surprised at this as she wasn't expecting this from Maan

Last part giving explanations was cute & Maan was bit at ease at the entire office staff of Geet 😊

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗

Posted: 1 years ago

Part 27


Fabulous Update 


Now Maan and Geet really needs to talk 

to each other 

as she believes whatever Maan said and did at the party 

was just for colleagues.

but glad at least Geet is slowly warming up to him again  

Posted: 1 years ago

Cutest chapter. Loved how the teammates are playing cupid for Maaneet. Both confessing that they were in each other's thoughts and missed each other was so very adorable. Liked the way the answered the questions about love and their marriage. And Maan being supportive and giving thoughtful answers was admirable. Super excited that they will go to the party together 

Posted: 1 years ago

27

geet thinks that she must be very careful around maan seeing him interacting very well with everyone as acting

maan feels bad knowing geet dint want him to introduce him with her office staff 

geet is feeling safe at late night out in city as maan is with her 

maan get glimpse of  old geet while interacting with her in return journey after party  

Posted: 1 years ago

Nice update 

Geet maan interact with each other and agree to go to party loved cheerful geet can't wait for next part 

Posted: 1 years ago

Part 27

Pleasant update…. splendidly written 

of cos they question Maan about his profession

good that he handled the situation well 

he is indeed charming

as expected their answer regarding their marriage was different

was he really missing Geet?

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

Gosh the car broke down

great that Geet felt safe with Maan around

glad that Maan agreed to attend the annual party


update soon 

Posted: 1 years ago

Great part 

Maan is a charming person 

But something is missing between them

Cont soon 

Thackeray for pm 



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