LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018

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Love Incomplete Or complete: Maan and Geet FF




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I am Dhruvika. I was a reader here for quite a while... i have old habbit of mine that i have shared recently with my friends... they told me to post my work on Geet Forum too.. So, by there motivation i am posting my work here...

It's a story only on Maan and Geet. I don't know you guys will like it or not... but please do comment on it as i will feel appreciated by your reviews...

Thanks for motivating me the guys who are reading and commenting on my story in my blog... i will love to get the reviews from others to...

with regards
dhruvika




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Hii This to inform I have made a new ID for giving pm to my readers. So, whoever wants pm from my side please send their request to "dhruviPM". It's my id to send pm to my reader's. I will be glad to accept my reader's pms

With Regards
Dhruvika

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INDEX FOR MY STORY
Character Sketch on page 1(Scroll down)
Prologue and Note on Page 1 (Scroll down)
Part 1 on Page 3
Note on Page 5
Part 2 on Page 5
Part 3 on Page 7
Part 4 on Page 9
Part 5 on Page 12
Part 6 on Page 16
Part 7 on Page 19
Part 8 on Page 22
Part 9 on Page 26
Part 10 on Page 29
Part 11 on Page 34 Part 12 on Page 46
Part 13 on Page 53
Part 14 on Page 60
Part 15 on Page 64
Part 16 on Page67
Teaser on Page 70
Part 17 on Page 72
Part 18 on Page 76

Character Sketch with Picture Updated
Part 19 on Page 81

Part 20 on Page 88
Part 21 on Page 93

Part 22 on Page 100
Character Sketch Updated on Page 106
Part 23 on Page 111

Part 24 on Page 116

Part 25 on Page 121
Hiii
I have started an OS series on Maan and Geet as well please do visit that thread and give your views on it...
Here's the link:-

Index for FF


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dhruvika
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Character Sketch


Geet's Family:-

  • Geet Deshmukh/Handa/Khurana:

She is 22 year old girl completed her degree in law she is an lawyer. She had completed her law degree from cambridge law college


  • Kabir Deshmukh: He is a retire Inspector. He now runs a buisness in london. He has adopted Geet.


  • Malini Deshmukh: She is a wife of Kabir. She is a mother of Geet and Jai. She has adopted Geet because at that time she was not able to have a child.


  • Jai Deshmukh (18 year old):


He is a younger son of Kabir Deshmukh. Pursuing 12th class. After this appeared for IPS and got selected. Little brother of Geet.


  • ACP Jairaj Handa: He is the real father of Geet and Gautam. he is a very good friend of Kabir. A well reputed Inspector.


  • Tejaswini Handa: She is a wife of Jairaj. Mother of Geet and Gautam. She convinced Jairaj to give her little child to his friend after knowing that they can't have a child.


  • Inspector Gautam Handa:

2007 pass out. son of Jairaj. He is a big brother of Geet. he is 24 year old. A very elegant and intelligent.

Shikha's Family:-

  • Shikha Bhosle/Handa:-

She is an socialliate a NGO worker Daughter of a buisness man she is in love with Gautam. she is 24 year old.


  • Yashwant bhosle:- HE is a Buisness man. Father of Shikha.


  • Neela Sawant:- she is a Massi of Shikha and Buisness partner of Yashwant.

Maan's Family:-

  • Inspector Maan Khurana:-
He is 24 year old young vibrant guy. his passion is to serve people. He is a son of a Buisness man his father is against of his profession.

  • Samarth Khurana:- Father of Maan. He is a buisness man. He is against the profession of his son and wants him to join his buisness.


  • Lalita Khurana:- Mother of Maan. She is a cool person supports her child.


  • Savitri Devi Khurana:- Daadi of Maan. Love his grand son and act as a coolant between dad and son.

Other's Character

  • Sameer Nanda:- Close friend of Geet.


  • Inspector Aditya:- Junior Colleague of Maan.


  • Inspector Vikas:- Junior colleague of Maan.


  • Inspector Mayank:- Junior Colleague of Gautam.


  • Inspector Puja:- Junior colleague of Maan. She likes Maan.


  • Inspector Anand:- Corrupt But can be handy colleague of Gautam.



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Hi i am just trying my hand. I have seen a serial at the starting it has a very good concept but after sometimes the whole story got changed. Even the Characters also. I have a concept after what they had showed but it is little different from that show. I hope you guys will like it.So, i am writing this story based on that but in my view how should it be like in my point of view... If anyone is offended by it kindly tell me politely i will not update it again and apologies to them too...


with regards

dhruvika



Prologue


It was a case handle by Maan and ACP Jairaj. Radhika and Bhavik was killed and Gautam was handling theBhavik's case and Maan was handling the Radhika's case. The lab was burnt under some circumstances and Maan was suspended but Gautam helped him for proving his innocence. In the meanwhile the case was solved but ACP Jairaj was convicted for destroying the evidences and got jailed. Now, His friend who was living in US got the news but he didn't believe and sent his daughter to find the truth. The story will revolve around these protagonist. I hope you all will like it.




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congrats! fab banner! lovely cs! update soon
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Congrats... Sounds interesting.. Hope you start the story soon...
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awesome concept
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wonderful prologue! will b waiting 4 updates

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