LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 31

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_DD

Amazing updte... Geet wants to prove acp innocent BT this shika is she involved kuch to chupa rahi hai ye waiting for d nxt updte...




Wait for next 😃 thnx for comment
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kabslocks

Awesome updates. Maan and Geet reached Maan's house. Gautam has not reached yet but Shikha, childhood friend of Maan is already present in Maan's room. Gautam came and all three went to Maan's room. Geet told Maan and Gautam about her meeting with ACP Jairaj and what has he told her. All are surprised. Shikha is not ready to believe whatever ACP had said. Why is she so adament to prove ACP guilty without investigation. It looks as she has decided that he is guily.

It's because she is impulsive in nature and thinks what she sees... and more reason you will know after reading next part...


Sorry for late reading.
Waiting for next update.



Thnx for comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hii

I am glad you guys commented. I whole heartedly say thanks who had elaborated their views on my story... and those who had queries about my part 11 it will be clear in upcoming part so keep commenting like always i will love to know about review in long one...

Those who have only written one words. Kindly please elaborate what you like or not i will be glad to it also... i feel happy even if you say if you dont like something...







With Regards
Dhruvika



Thanks for those who likes my story but those who don't comment please comment i will be highly obliged... 😃😃






With Regards
Dhruvika1991
Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 12



Geet- Tum... (Listening to this and outbursts her inner turmoil and having tears) jaanti kya ho tum mere dad baarein mein huh...Tumhe koi haq nhi mere da ke baare mein bolne ka... Haan koi mera saath de yaa naa de i don't care... Main ACP Sir ko innocent proove krke rahungi ... that's a promise to myself and to my dad... Do you understand that... For your kind information... Do you know my who is my father?... Pehle kuch jaan lo fir kuch bola karo... He is a... [Her sentence was left incomplete as she noticed Gautam and she feels helpless as she can't tell the truth... She feels like loosing herself... So, she wne to the lawn to calm herself...]


Maan- Shikha! What's this? (Feeling Helpless)


Shikha(getting annoyed as she thought she doesn't done anything wrong)- What?


Maan(Irritatingly seeing Shikha's reaction)- Tumhe pta bhi hai tumne kiya kya hai?


Shikha(Rolling her eyes)- Maine kya kiya Maan... Ab uske ek point of view se sir innocent proove nhi ho jaayenge...


Maan(Sternly)- Baat voh nhi hai...


Gautam- Rehne do Maan yeh samjhne se rahi... isse toh sirf apni muh boli behan Radhika ke ghunegaar dikhate hain aur kuch nhi... puri duniya main sirf issi ke paas emotions hai aur logon ko issi ke emotions ki respect krni chaahiye... aur kisi inssaan ke feeling bhaad mein jaaye... [Gautam interrupted Maan and rudely spoke with her as he was not able to tolerate the behaviour of Shikha].


Shikha- Gautam! (seeing his outbursts)... Tumhe kya lgta hai muje farak nhi pdta...


Gautam(Sarcastically)- Oh just shut up! Agar pdta naah tum iss tarah behave nhi krti... aur uske dad ke baare mein nhi bolti... Ok... Tumhri behan and uske liye justice... How self centre you are... by the way Tumhri behan ko insaaf mil chuka hai... My dad's case is not related to that... Get this straight... and don't interfere in future... otherwise i will forget... we are frnz.... [After venting out his anger... he left from the room to find Geet.]


[Geet was standing in the lawn and was crying...]


Gautam- Hi...


Geet- Oh... (seeing Gautam stops crying)... Hii Gautam...


Gautam- Yahaan... Bhai bol skti ho... [Suddenly, Geet hugs him and started crying... Gautam patted her head as a brother... and consoled her...] Sssh...


Geet- Bhai... I don't know what is right or wrong... I just only know one thing my father's faith can't be a lie... Please, you believe me naa... I swear of my dad... ACP Sir did tell this to me... It's not a lie... Bhai... [After some time Geet opens up with Gautam...]


Gautam- Sssh... I know and i believe you now stop crying... We will have a talk with prakash too... I will arrange it... as i promised before remember bring something related to case so that i can help you right... Now Smile...


Geet- Really, Bhai... (Stops crying and smile...) Thnx for believiing me...


Gautam- No Need to thnx...


Shikha(Self Talk)- Yeh Gautam ko kya hua hai...uski badi tarafdaari kar rha hai... par Gautam galat b toh nhi hai... Radhika ka culprit is in jail he was sentenced... It's different case... beside I shouldn't have spoken about Geet's father like that... It was really very rude... I should apologize to them for my silly behaviour... God help me with my insecurities...

[This whole scene was seen by Shikha but she didn't hear anything as she was standing in the room's balcony and she was far away from them...]


Maan- Sorry to disturb you.. [Seeing them talking and came there to see what's going on...]


Gautam- Oh it's ok...


Maan- I am sorry Geet... What happened in room...


Geet- Oh common Mr. Maan It's not your fault... Beside we will have a talk with prakash atleast we will got a clue from him... I am sure he knows something...


Maan- Oh... That's a good decision... (Feels relieved seeing Geet calm after the incident...)


Shikha- Hello Guys... Geet! I am sorry what have I said above... I had lost my mind then... i really regret my words...


Geet- It's Ok... Infact i would have behaved if i was in your place... because your sis was involved... i am not saying she was not killed but i am saying it's not ACP sir who had destroyed the evidences... hope you understand the point...


Shikha- Well! I don't know who has done what nevertheless Gautam is right i should not indulge myself in this case... now ignoring all the bitterness can we be friends??


Geet- Yes of course why not... [They smiles and hugs each other...]


Gautam- I think we should leave now... I have to inform Mayank about this...


Maan- Yeah.. It's getting late... Come Geet i will drop you...


Gautam- Aah... Maan I am leaving i will drop her... as her house is comes between my way... it will be easy... you can drop Shikha it's late and how will she go right... (interrupting him...)


Maan- Errrmmm... Ohk As you say i will drop Shikha... (feeling Disheartened seeing Gautam's idea...) [After a while all left from there...]






Precap: Jealousy part... Tumhe koi aur dekhe toh jalta hai dil... bade mushkilon se yeh sambhalta hai dil...




Part 13

Hi guys i hope you like this update too. Please guys comment and tell me how you feel about this story in 4-3 lines i will be highly obliged. specially the persons who likes my story too... Please comment i like people who give reviews even if you dont like anything you can tell me that too...


With Regards
Dhruvika


Edited by IlaTanwar - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n note! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oooh dhuvi does that mean ur updating now??? Waiting hun!
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks for the note and eagerly waiting for the next part plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Waiting for the next update
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Ur welcome dear u keep writing the amazing updates we will keep on liking and comment on it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ue shikha grrr itna against kyo hai yaar acp se
Hhate her
Bhagooo usr yaha se adap

Come soon

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