LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 77

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Posted: 7 years ago
Well written update
waiting for the truth to reveal...



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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update...👏 👏 👏
maan meet's Jairaj first...
Jairaj thinks he is at fault...
Maan told Jairaj about informer rahul nd helped him in giving lead...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
any chance of an update?
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Posted: 7 years ago
REVIVING The thread Process~Keeping it alive by comments!!😳
Update when you can!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh Ila its been 8 months now
we have been waiting for updates
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Posted: 7 years ago
its been long so do try an update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi guys i am so sorry that i am not able to update my ffs as my internet service provider has not been changed but i will try to change it in this month. I am glad that you are keeping this thread alive and waiting for the update. I am really obliged to you guys. I am going to update this ff today. So, wait for half an hour. I hope i won't disappoint you.


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Ila


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Part- 25



Jairaj- Ok! Acha ab tum chalo vrna late ho jaoge... Bye Take Care {Ok Now, you can go otherwise you will be late... Bye Take Care}

Maan- Bye Sir aap bhi apna khayal rkhna... {Bye Sir You also take care of yourself...}

[Maan bid bye to Jairaj and went straight to Geet's house to pacify her and tell her about the lead he had found...]

[Maan had reached at Gautam's House where he will found his jungli billi and was praying to the god at least she will hear him first and then react.]

Maan- (Talking to himself) Bhagwaan please Jungli Billi koh todha reham rakhne bolna... Please... Please... (He Rang the Bell) {(Talking to himself)God please!! Tell the jungli Billi to have some mercy... Please... Please... (He Rang the Bell)}

[Geet opened the door and saw Maan smiling. the moment she saw him her anger returned and she slammed the door on his face. Maan was shocked and he was going to enter and in this process his nose got hurt. He was hell angry but controlled...]

Maan- Ouch! It hurts... It Hurts... (little angry) How dare she??? mere muh pe darwaza maara... Cool Down Maan Jungilli Billi hai voh aise hi react karegi (He started banging the door) Darwaza Kholo Geet varna tod dunga... (He was like... What-he-is-saying look on his face. He calmed down). Ok! Geet! You are not going to open... Theekh hai mera kya hai main toh yahan se chala jaunga ab tum yeh socho ki jo main kheer tumhare liye specially daadima se banwaake laaya hun voh sirf mein hi khaunga... maine suna hai thandi kheer jayda tasty hoti hai yummm... iski toh khusbhoo bhi kitni achi hai... {Ouch! It hurts... It Hurts... (little angry) How dare she??? She banged the door on my face... Cool Down Maan she is a jungli billi so, she will react like that (He started banging the door) Open the door Geet otherwise I will break the door...(He was like... What-he-is-saying look on his face. He calmed down). Ok! Geet! You are not going to open... It's Ok What is mine... I will go from here now you will think that the kheer i brought for you specially cooked by dadima I will eat myself... I have heard that the kheer which is cold is more tasty yummm... Ufff... It's smell is so good...}

[Geet was standing and listening and was very eager to taste the kheer but uff her anger is coming on the way.]

Geet (Self Talk)- Kheer! huh Iss Rakshash ko kaise pata chala ki mujhe kheer pasand hai... apne jaasoos chod rkhein hain kya?? Kya Karun aane dun kya?? Nhi Geet tum control kar skti ho... aur agar khaani hogi toh khud bhi toh bana skti hun vrna aunty hain naah unse keh dungi. (She made up her mind and didn't open the Door) {Kheer! Huh Who has told this to Rakshash that I love kheer... He has spread his detective everywhere??? What should I do Let him in or not?? No, Geet You can control yourself and if you want to eat the Kheer you can cook it yourself or you can tell your aunty to cook for you...(She made up her mind and didn't open the Door) }

Maan- Lagta hain bhut gussa hai aise nhi maanegi theekh hai socha tha gussa shant hoga tbhi btaungi magar ab koi chaara bhi nhi hai... Geet theekh hai tum nhi baat krna chaahti theekha hai vaise bhi main subah Jairaj Sir se mila tha mujhe kuch mila hai jo agli hearing mein kaam aayega aur tumhe jarurat bhi padegi. Agar Chaahti ho ki main share karun toh darwaza kholke mere se dhang se baat krni hogi main 10 tak ginunga fir mat kehana ki maine btaya nhi... (He started counting...) 1... 2...3...4...5...6...7...8...9... (Geet opened the door and let him enter) Jungli Billi bina blackmailing ke maanegi nhi... (muttered under his breath and entered inside) {It seems like she is very angry and won't listen to me ok... i had thought when she will pacify then i will tell but i don't have any chance... Geet ok... You don't want to talk ok by the way I have met Jairaj sir in the morning and i have found the lead for that will help you in next hearing... If you want that i will share with you have to let me in and talk with me properly... I am counting to 10 after that don't say that i didn't tell you... (He started counting...) 1... 2...3...4...5...6...7...8...9... (Geet opened the door and let him enter) Jungli Billi won't listen without blackmailing...(muttered under his breath and entered inside)}

[Geet let him enter but she was still angry on him.]

Geet- Hmmph... btao kya kaha Uncle ne jo meri madad karega?? {Hmmph... Tell me what did the uncle said that will help me????}

Maan- Pehle tum Meri baat suno uske baad btaunga. (He waited for her response... Seeing him adamant Geet dropped her weapons and said politely- Ok I will listen to you) I am sorry yaar ho gyi glti ab jaan bhujke todhe hi usse peeta tha. Mujhe kya pata tha voh tumhre saath prank khel rha hai... pata hota toh shayad aisa nhi krta... Ab Geet yeh dekho agr voh sach mein koi gunda hota toh kya tum tab bhi mere pe gussa krti (Geet thought and understands his point of view that he was right) still I am apologising and yeh lo kheer dadima ne specially tumhre liye bnaayi hai... {Firstly you have to listen to me then I will tell you...(He waited for her response... Seeing him adamant Geet dropped her weapons and said politely- Ok I will listen to you) I am sorry yaar I know I did wrong i shouldn't have acted that way. I didn't know he was playing the prank... If i knew i wouldn't have done that... See Geet if he was the real bad person then you behave like this and get angry on me????? (Geet thought and understands his point of view that he was right) still I am apologising and Take this Kheer Dadima had specially made it for you...}

Geet - Hmm.. (She took it and keep it in fridge) Main baad mein khaungi todhi aur thndi hone do... Acha vaise yeh btao ki kya hua aisa ki tum jo itne khush ho and aise insist kar rhe the... { Hmm.. (She took it and keep it in fridge) I will eat later... Let it get cold more... Ok Now Tell me what happen that lead you to be happy and you are insisting like that}

Maan- Tumhare Jaane ke baad ek informer aaya tha He gave a photo to me... (He started telling how he got the clue and how he remembered he had seen the tattoo and met Jairaj sir and told about that Sir can't have tattoo as he is highly allergic to tattoo)... I was shocked and happy and glad ki agli hearing se pehle mil gya and yeh humaari madad karega tum sahi thi Geet ki sir nirdosh hai... vaise agli hearing kab hai?{After you left I met an informant he gave a photo to me...(He started telling how he got the clue and how he remembered he had seen the tattoo and met Jairaj sir and told about that Sir can't have tattoo as he is highly allergic to tattoo)... I was shocked and happy and glad that I got the lead before the next hearing and It will help us and you were right Geet that Sir is innocent... Anyway when is the next hearing???}

Geet- parso hai agli hearing and Maan thank you and mujhe khushi hai ki yeh lead humein sahi time pe mila mujhe iski jarurat thi ab hum kam se kam bail ke liye toh apply kar skte hain and bas kisi trh se voh chai vaale ka sketch humein mil jaaye and pata chal jaaye voh kaun tha fir toh uncle yun baahar honge voh bhi samaan ke saath... (She was so excited to hear that she forgot that she was moving ahead and she didn't know when her foot get entangled in mat and she fall but unforunately or fortunately she fell on Maan...) {Day after tomorrow is the meeting and Maan Thank you and I am happy that this lead we get on time and I needed it we can bail out uncle with this and we can apply for it and just we have to identify the chai vaala and we will be able to know who is behind it. and Uncle will be out from jail with honour and respect...(She was so excited to hear that she forgot that she was moving ahead and she didn't know when her foot get entangled in mat and she fall but unforunately or fortunately she fell on Maan...)}


[She has closed her eyes in fear and Maan was looking at her as if the time has stopped for him... Both were so immersed in themselves that they forgot that there is someone seeing them. Suddenly, Maan was having a weird feeling that he had experienced this for her first time and realized his position but was scared to see her reaction. He thought right now I have to manaofied this jungli billi and now what he should do?? On the other side Geet was scared first but when she opened the eyes and saw Maan staring at her She felt goosebumps and shied... She was not able to comprehend that someone was seeing them and She was shying and staring at his deep chocolate brown eyes.]

Precap: The Person who will caught them and Gautam, Maan and Geet together in a police station. OOPS What they have done Anyone who can guess... :)





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ILA


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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update me first awesome so maan was happy to get the information he needed and now biggest task to manao geet poor masn deathly scared of Gert she slammed the door on his face masn first blackmail her by taking kyeer name but still when she didn't open he told he has information regarding jairaj case and geet open the door masn made her understand that he only did to protect her not any other way he told about the tattoo geet was so happy she fell on maan both lost in each other welcome back dear I had almost forgotten u but glad u updated
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

Hi guys i am so sorry that i am not able to update my ffs as my internet service provider has not been changed but i will try to change it in this month. I am glad that you are keeping this thread alive and waiting for the update. I am really obliged to you guys. I am going to update this ff today. So, wait for half an hour. I hope i won't disappoint you.



Thank You

Best Regards
Ila



Wow!! Glad to see you back!! 😃

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