LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 48

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Posted: 8 years ago
Sometimes I feel that Tejeswini is over doing it but she too is helpless
and the fact that she cannot understand Gautam was only doing his job but she feels he could have stood with his father so each time she sees him in her house she insults him and this time she tells him and Geet to stay away from each other
Gautam ask Maan to be by Geet's side as she is innocent and naive and has no idea about the corruption that can go on
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you... Very much...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hiii

I am glad that the people who have commented and liked my work I feel so much obliged to the people who continously motivated me to write the ffs. Thanks for your appreciation. I am humbly obliged to your love given to me.


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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 18




Gautam(sighing)- I will try not to avoid her but i can't help... Ok ab raat bhut ho gyi hai kal b jaana hai Prakash ne jo sketch bnaaya hai voh dekhne...


Maan- Hmmm... Sahi kaha Take care and bye...


Gautam- Yeah sure Bye...


[Maan left from there]


Geet (feeling Sad and Self Talk)- Aaj jo hua voh hona nhi chaahiye tha... Kisse baat karun main? Gautam bhai ki koi glti nhi fir bhi voh suffer kar rhe hain kyu? Babaji koi raasta nhi hai ki Aunty apni ranjishein bhool jaaye... Kyu unhe itna sehna pad rha hai sirf isiliye ki unhone apni duty nibhaayi thi... fir kyu unhe itna kuch sunana pada (Feeling guilty and calls her home and talks with her mother) Hello Maa...


Malini- Haan Geet! Kaisi ho aur itne dino baad phone India jaake bhool gyi kya?


Geet- Nhi Maa! Bas voh case hi itna complicated hai ki i forgot... Aur vahan sab kaise hain and dad what is he doing?


Malini- Tumhre dad asusual unhe business se fursat mile tab naah... Hmmmphh... It's quite boring here pehle Jai tha toh kuch toh time ka pata nhi chalta ab tum dono hi nhi ho toh i am kinda bored here...


Geet- Mom! I know bas kuch dino ki baat aur main apke paas... and haan Jai hain kaha janaab IPS kya clear kiya sahabzaade gayab huh...


Malini- Sahaabzaade India mein hi hain... Phone aaya tha Training shuru ho gyi hai toh ajkal vhin hai... and haan he has given me a number tumhra India vaala number diya hai kya pata contact kare...


Geet(smiles)- i will surely be in contact... but i wonder where is he now... I know him... He must be planning to play a prank on me... Gosh i have to be extra careful now...


Malini(laughs listening to her comment)- Well vo toh hai... i hope bhagwaan tumhri raksha kare... (getting serious)... vaise baat kya hai Geet itni tense kyu lag rhi ho kuch hua hai kya vahan...


Geet(smiles and worriedly)- Yeah Mom! Aunty she is angry on her son... [and told her about everything what happen till now and her efforts... to her] and she is hell angry and not listening to us... the thing is Gautam is not at fault he was... he was just doing his duty and Aunty is not listening to anyone... and I am confused how to bring them close...


Malini(advices)- Dekho Geet it's good you are trying... but i can understand her feeling how she is feeling... beta abhi tum yeh baat nhi smjhogi... kyuki tumhri shaadi nhi huyi... haan main yeh nhi kehti Tejaswini puri trh sahi hai but uska reaction glt b nhi... koi b wife aisi nhi hogi jo apne pati ko arrest hote huye dekh paaye... uska gussa hona jaayaz hai... Geet she is hurt and jakhmon ko bharne mein time lgta hai... beta unhe time do ho skta hai ki dheere dheere voh khud smjh jaaye ki Gautam glt nhi tha... aur sab normal ho jaaye... Beta Tumhre unke maamle mein intervene krne se aisa na ho ki sabkuch bigad jaaye jo baat smbhalni thi voh aur b bigad jaaye... Tum smjh rhi ho naah main kya keh rhi hun...


Geet(After listening)- Ji Mom! Shayad aap sahi keh rhi hai... (Taking a sigh)... I hope voh log jald hi ek family ki trh ho jaaye shayad yeh case solve hone k baad hi yeh ho paayega... anyway mom... (misheviously)... Vaise vahan mauke ka fayda jarur uthaya jaa rha hoga... [Malini frowns]... Ab na main hu vaha aur na hi jai... Toh voh kaunsa gaana tha... haan yaada aaya.. "KOI NHI HAI GHAR PE KYA HASEEN MILA HAI PAL AAJ SHARARAT KRNE DO KAAM BAAKI KARENGE KAL"... App aur Dad apna third honeymoon bnaane ki taiyaari kar rahein honge haina...


Malini (blushing and snapped)- Badmash! Ghar aao tumhe tumhe btati hun main... Mumbai jaake kuch jyada hi shaitan ho gyi ho...


Geet(laughs)- Ab kya karein Mom aap log ke saath reh kar kuch jyada hi serious look aa gya tha... (smiles)... anyway acha mein rkhti hun raat bhut ho gyi kal subah uthna b hai... bbye tc


Malini- Ok Beta bbye tc...


Precap- She was buying... and someone came from behind... :)






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Hi guys i hope you like this update too. Please guys comment and tell me how you feel about this story in 4-3 lines i will be highly obliged. specially the persons who likes my story too... Please comment i like people who give reviews even if you dont like anything you can tell me that too...


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ILA


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Posted: 8 years ago
Cute update where did u go dear plzzz complete this incomplete love thanks for the pm poor Gautam suffering coz of his duty geet sad seeing the way tejaswini not forgiving her son geet called her mom who was cribbing how her son and husband both busy in buisness and she is getting bored appraently Jai likes to play pranks on geet can't wait to see hehehehehe geet told abt tejaswini and Gautam situation her mom made her understand that tejaswini is first a wife and she loves her husband geet shouldn't interfer in her matter and let her sort it herself in time she will understand her son was doing his duty and will forgive him geet teased her mom
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi welcome back! superb update, well written! Geet feels bad as Tejaswini nt forgiven Gautam! Geet calls her mom! she advises Geet nt to intervene! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow... I have just read all the parts and I must say that u have written very well ...By seeing the title I thought it must be a love story but it is in crime background...Part 1 to 3 are very well written and explained clearly 😆 Geet is adopted by Kabir ... Geet doens't know about it but sometimes I feel that she knows the truth because she calls Goutam as bhai .. so I got this doubt ... And commenting Goutam look as Tarzan lol... Here Maan is soo flirty I am confused whether he like Geet or he is just being close to her so that he could know her exact intention... But Geet is very serious about case ... Teju is very rude to her son...She must understand that it's his duty. ... Don't keep them separate for a long time ...shika ... Err I hate her ... She is soo rude to Geet and why they are discussing matters infront of her if she doesn't have any link with the case... She commented about Geets father ... About jealous I thought that Maan might be jealous but here that shika is jealous ABT Geet and Goutam ... And ABT the story it's very interesting and I must say u have written very well ... Good job dear ... Continue update regularly ... Actually it is very hard for me to comment on every part so I thought to give my full view at last 😆😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Roopaamrutha

Wow... I have just read all the parts and I must say that u have written very well ...By seeing the title I thought it must be a love story but it is in crime background...

Initially romantic one too but romance is right now at back seat because of investigation as the story moves the storyy will shift to the how Maan and Geet will fell and How Shikha and Gautam will face difference and family drama too where Two familise will face the eachother where past meets present... So, Totally fully packed I wish somebody will suggest the Geet's adoptive father's pic and mother too both Tejaswini and Mailini I wish you suggest me this...

Part 1 to 3 are very well written and explained clearly 😆 Geet is adopted by Kabir ... Geet doens't know about it but sometimes I feel that she knows the truth because she calls Goutam as bhai ..

No She doesn't know it's just that her adoptive mother always make sure to put the rakhi in the name of gautam and when the case comes so they told the half truth that both family are friend and geet considered him to be her bhai...

so I got this doubt ... And commenting Goutam look as Tarzan lol... Here Maan is soo flirty I am confused whether he like Geet or he is just being close to her so that he could know her exact intention...

In my story he is flirty but to bring out the truth he can use it as it seems where he uses this skill to bring out the truth of geet's adoptive father and he was his mentor... Geet blurted out who actually her father is

But Geet is very serious about case ... Teju is very rude to her son...She must understand that it's his duty. ... Don't keep them separate for a long time ...
Fate is twisted they will unite but at the cost of something and what it is i myself don't know...


shika ... Err I hate her ... She is soo rude to Geet and why they are discussing matters infront of her if she doesn't have any link with the case...

Shikha is a Grey character till some of the part due to her insecurities... may be after a while you will change opinion but don't worry she won't hamper in case investigation she is an honest person too...

She commented about Geets father ... About jealous I thought that Maan might be jealous but here that shika is jealous ABT Geet and Goutam ...

Maan is free going person he is just flirting love is not even hitting him and geet voh kya hai naa abhi to dosti huyi jealousy ka feature abhi nhi aaya...

And ABT the story it's very interesting and I must say u have written very well ... Good job dear ... Continue update regularly ... Actually it is very hard for me to comment on every part so I thought to give my full view at last 😆😉


I have a tendency to reply to the comment for a while but Your comment made my day... as i have very less reader to follow but jitne b hai i love to see the comment and there are very few who reply to their heart saying what they love... and the way you explained Is making me so happy...

I was uncertain when i pmed you without being familiar I thought you must feeling wierd but alas i am happy after seeing the outcome...



I liked your comment it's ok i am obliged to have the summarise part...


P.S. I have seen Maan very arrogant with attitude personality in most of the fanfiction because they wanted to intact his personality I wanted the Maan a little different here you will find him easy going not even tinge of arrogancy in him not even dealing with colleagues...


with regards
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awsome update

Love it..

PlZ continue soon

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