LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: vrinda22

nice start

kabir shocked seeing the news of jai arrested by his own son
geet asks does he know jai
but he said no
he is scared thinking of geets reaction
when she knows the truth





Thnx for replying...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi, I am dhruvika thnx for liking the little work i have posted here. I will be glad to have your comments. Hope you will like and read my work in future too. I will be highly obliged to you. I will try to update it frequently. If i am not able to update frequently kindly forgive me as i get employed at school and gonna teach and its the end of the session exams are gonna start or may be i wont get time. But, I promise to update as soon as possible. I hope you will give your support to me. I will be highly obliged.

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dhruvika




Thnx for liking the main part 1

Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part-2



Malini- We have to tell her not now but in future Kabir lets talkabout it to Geet.


Kabir (Crying)- Malini! Nhi tumhe kya lgta hai Geet ko jab pta chalega... Kya vo humein maaf kargei itna bada sach chupaane k liye... Nhiii... Main uski aankhon mein apne liye nafrat nhi dekh skta...i won't able to handle it... Malini...


Malini(having tears)- It's all my fault. If I had agreed to let her go then then this wouldn't happen you were ready then...


Kabir- Malini! that's not the case Main pareshaan hu ki Jairaj fass kaise gya upar se uska arrest b kraaya uske bete se. Mujhe abhi bhi shaq hai koi usse fassa rha hai. Infact, I should go there and knows the whole truth. He will not tell a lie to me... and vaise bhi mujhe ye krna hi hoga kyuki main nhi chaahta Geet Jairaj ko Corrupt smjhe...


[Geet entered the room]


Geet- Dad!


Kabir(Composing himself)- Yeah! Haan bolo Beta.


Geet- Apko pata hai Aap pe jhuth acha nhi lgta.


Kabir(Feeling Tensed)- Kaunsa Jhuth.


Geet- Yahi ki You don't know him. Tell me about him Dad.


[Kabir seees Malini. Malini said you have to tell her the truth go on.]


Malini(urges him to speak)- Kabir! Tell her.


Kabir- Ok! So I wanna tell you that We are good friend infact best friend.


Geet- So, You know him.


Kabir (smiled)- Haan! Bhut ache se in fact Main, Tumhaari Mom and Jairaj ek hi college se pass out hai.


Geet- That's great! so, both of you are the college mates. interesting.


Kabir (smiles)- Yeah! Jairaj Handa iss naam se toh har ek criminal darta tha hum dono ne ek hi batch se police ki training khatam ki or ek hi jagah posting or issi tarah humaaari dosti aur atoot hoti gayi. issi doraan Jairaj Tejaswini se mila she was a teacher in a school and her school was attacked by criminal who was on a run. We went their we were able to save the school and children but we lost Jairaj there (looking Geet confused he laughs) i mean he fell in love with Tejaswini and married her. Mujhe toh laga tha Jairaj jaisa hai vo saari umar bhramchaari hi rahega (Laughed out loud) but Tejaswini ne paani fer diya. Jai bhut hi serious, adarsh wadi, imaandaar inspector tha i mean hai. Criminals ko unki sahi jagah pahunchana, innocent ko insaaf dilana uski duty hi nhi passion b hai. Humne kaafi cases solve kiye hai ek saath. Main kabhi kabhaar dar jaata tha criminals ki dhamkiyon se but Jai no ways there is no one who can make him afraid. If he thinks someone is culprit he would do anything to him to get him punished. Infact he is a hero to me. Every cop wants to be like him.


After serving 10 years in Police department I took my reitrement from my job and came to US to help my father in buisness. Now, I am here with my family. We talked seldom on phone. About ourselves, He has son. You actually tied Raakhi to him. That's why your mom always tell you to put extra raakhi in temple for him. We named our son on his name to remember him always and feel him close to us.


Geet(Feeling amused)- Uncle itne imaandaar hai toh phir ye...


Kabir- Yahi toh smjh nhi aa rha. Tumhaara bhai hamesha ACP Jairaj krta rehta hai. HE is fan of him and when he got to know he will be broken heart but beta from deep down my heart, there is a feeling that he is innocent.


Geet- Don't worry Dad! If he is innocent he will be proved innocent you don't worry.


Kabir- Yeah! That's why I am going to India to have a talk with him and Tejaswini.


Geet- What's his son's name?


Kabir- His name is Gautam and your elder brother. He also joins a police department looks like that it runs in genes (He laughs).


Geet- Gautam Bhai. The guy who arrested ACP sir right.


Kabir(While standing)- Right... Now, I am booking a ticket to India.


Geet(thinking a lot)- Wait a second Dad!. I want to go to India.


Kabir(got shocked)- You but why?


Geet- dad! Firstly, It's my wish to see my birth place. Secondly, i wanna fight this case of ACP Jairaj Look where it will lead. I am very interested in it. and it also give my career a boost as i am a lawyer and it will open a door to take the cases in India too. Thirdly, you have told so much about uncle that i am eager to know about him.


Kabir(Getting Tensed)- But Geet! who will look after the buisness.


Geet- You stay here. Dad! I promise i will bring the Hero back for you and Jai. (Smiles). Please Dad.


Kabir(Worriedly)- Geet...


[Malini interupted him and encouraged him to let her go.]


Malini(Understanding)- Let her go.


Kabir- Malini!


Malini- Trust her. Let her go.


Geet(Pleading)- Please dad... Please...


Kabir- Ok... But promise me... one thing.


Geet- Yes Thank you dad. Yes, I promise but what?


Kabir- Never let them know about me and Malini and who you are. Ok.


Geet- But Dad why?


Kabir- No more question. If you agree otherwise drop the idea.


Geet- Ok ok... I won't tell them ok...


[Geet left from there.]


Kabir- Why Malini? Why you let her go there you know what will happen?


Malini- Kabir! I know. I don't know what fate is? I have had enough of my sturborness. Kabir They also deserve this. atleast fot a time being. May be they will feel better. You have told her not to reveal na. even if it comes out. Let the faith decide. Don't be so stressed over it...


Kabir- Yeah you are right. They also deserve and please don't blame. They don't regret and they understands it too that's why we are still in touch right. (taking a deep breath) Lets preparing for her departure to India. I have to book the Ticket for her... Lets go..


Malini(Having tears)- Yes! I will also prepare something for her to take to India.




Pre-cap- Geet Went to India and NOW our Hero's entry too... 😉



Part 1


Part 3




Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
awesome start
kabir cant believe tat jairaj could be corrupt..they r hiding truth from geet!!!!!!!!! waiting fr next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wonderful part yaar..geet dad old her about the partial truth only..cant wait for next part..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice one...
finally kabir told geet about his n jairaj's friendship...but not total truth...geet is going n kebir took promise from her about not revealing herself totally...
wondering why so much secrecy if their relation is still good n they are still in touch...what's their to hide!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! well written! Malini n Kabir talk! she says Geet needs 2 know the truth! Kabir tells Geet that he n Jairaj r friends! Geet decides 2 go to India 2 help Jairaj! Kabir refuses bt Malini convinces him! Geet will reveal who she is! update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing updte kabir d jairaj are bestfrnds d policeofficers d geet is gng to india to help jairaj waiting to knw d yruth abt jairaj waiting for d nxt updte... thnk u for d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update kabir tells geet that jairaj is his friends he is courageous honest man he is hardworking and did many great works together married they even kept their sons name after him who look up to him geet is amused she wants to help her dad on proving his innocence by going to India with him but kabir made her promise she won't tell abt what relations she has with him kabir is scared for the truth will make her hate him but malini makes him understand that they should leave it on fate
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the PM
Geet,s father Kabir told Geet about his friendship with Jairaj and remembering his old days, Geet getting curious and now wants to meet Jairaj and wants to handle this case, Geet,s father is worried about her coming to India but agreed
Precap is lovely, pls update soon

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