LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 74

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

Thanks for update dhurva di..

maan family everyone so sweet even samrat also..he worried about his son safety..it common to every parents and want maan help in business.maan so cute and sweet. Disaster khurana thinking how to make kheer to manoify to his lady love.dadi and laita teasing maan..and helped to prepare kheer..finally kheer made by maan with help of ladies.maan asked his dad and laitha said he busy in business.and worried about his health.samrat entry..maan and samrat start before cold war laitha stopped them.dinner time samrat said maan married to sakshi ( business man daughter) after marriage she help in business.maan got angry and denied married to sakshi.maan not liked her .he said married with someone.dadi understand what rying he say..samrat askd about why prepared kheer..maan reval everything about geet and her father name.samrat worried about maan ang geet safety.both invoving jayraj case. Maan assured he will take care of geet..

precap: tataoo secrets..waiting for revealation..

thanks for pm di




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I am glad that you liked it and thanks for such a beautiful comment here...

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

very nice update

maan's daadi tease him when he share his fight with geet n wants to please her by khir
maan n his father have fight with each other as samarth wants maan to be in business than his current job of police



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Risingsun626

Thanks for pm. Lovely update. I must say maan is the cutest character here. Full update belongs to maan n his cuteness with family. Each dialogue he said sounds like punches. His father samarth they both dont have good chemistry so he dont spare his father too by naming dangerous name.

Geet without doing anything made her place in khurana family and everyone has positive attitude for her. Even dadi announced her daughter in law with out any hesitation.
Waiting for next.



I am glad you liked my version of Maan. When I started my this fan fiction the response was low. I thought Nobody like the maan of my story who is easy going and chilled out guy... who loves to enjoy and have fun... but seeing the appreciation of the character I want it's making me supers happy...


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! well written! Maan is funny! Love dadi n Lalitha! Maan calls himself Disaster Singh Khurana! Maan wants 2 make kheer 4 Geet! dadi n his mom tease him! Maan n his dad dnt see eye to eye on his job! his dad wants him 2 work in the business! Maan calls his dad Mogambo! Maan tells his dad abt Geet! update asap



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

This was indeed such a lovely chapter

Samrath and Maan having a hearty conversation for the first time was actually good to see
its either Maan leave the police force and join business world as his father created this entire empire for him or he married the Khanna girl but Maan says he can think about marriage but not to the Khanna girl maybe someone else both his mum and Daadima were much relieved that the father son were at least talking without having another volcanic fight about career moving
I so loved how Daadima and his mom were teasing at Maan but they were indeed happy that Maan is preparing Kheer for Geet though its to get her to talk to him but they were glad
even his father suggest him to take care of Geet as he has business relations with her father

I'm now eager for the secret of the tattoo to be revealed



I always try to wait for oyur comment and sometimes i have irritated my toher frn and kept her waiting for you to comment first before my update and I am glad you make it up to this sooner then i expected... Thanks for the comment now it will be revealed now you don't have to wait for it so much...


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: uluvmg

wonderful update...loved it... dadi & mom were shocked to hear maan wanted to make kheer & when he told its for geet by calling himself disaster & referred his dad as mogambo lol...loved this MSK..his dad wanted maan to marry his business friend's daughter to handle their business as he was not interested in their business & happy in his service... but maan refused sakshi as she was arrogant but ready to marry any other girl (geet*) with his choice only... samarth came to know kheer was for lawyer geet who was his one of business friends daughter & involved in jairaj's case so maan's dad asked maan to take care of her as well as him...loved maan's adorable family..excited for maan's manofy geet with kheer & revealing tattoo secret...excited for next...thanks for pm...!!



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar



I am glad you liked my version of Maan. When I started my this fan fiction the response was low. I thought Nobody like the maan of my story who is easy going and chilled out guy... who loves to enjoy and have fun... but seeing the appreciation of the character I want it's making me supers happy...


Thanks for your comment


P. S. Keep Commenting


With Regards
Ila

Thanks for pm n reply. Good things take time to shape up n showing result. So we should not loose hope n patience. Hardwork is always fruitfull. All the best.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Risingsun626

Thanks for pm n reply. Good things take time to shape up n showing result. So we should not loose hope n patience. Hardwork is always fruitfull. All the best.



Thanks for your motivation...


I always cherish your comment...
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update
waiting for next
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part-24




Maan- Ok dad Geet ka khayal rkh lunga but iss case mein toh involve ho chuka hun main... isiliye ab peeche hatna mushkil hai... {Ok Dad I will take care of Geet but i have involved myself in this case so i will not back down now...}


[After having Dinner, All left to their respective room. Maan was waiting for the morning to come and manaofying his jungli billi as soon as possible and they have to discuss about the case too but before that he has to meet Jairaj for the tattoo..]


[Next Morning Maan. was in dilemna where to go first either he went to Geet to pacify her first or to meet the Jairaj Sir. Then, he decided to go to meet Jairaj Sir and it will be best thing with the kheer but he has to hurry for that. He get ready quickly and went to the Police Station. In the police station.]


Maan- I have to meet Jairaj Sir I need to know something and Gautam has already told you i guess.


Hawaldaar (sighs)- Haan Sahaab! humein pata hai... Jaaiye sahaab.. {Ok Sir! We Know... You can go Sir...}


Maan- Hmmph...


[He went in to meet him. He was standing in front of his cell Jairaj was sitting at one corner reading his favorite novel. He was feeling hesitated how to call him. He was thinking how the time changes where there was a time i never hesitated to speak anything or hide anything from him. Now I am short of words in front of him now. Anyway, I have to be strong for him We have come so close to reveal the truth and he is not a culprit anymore...]


Maan (getting the courage called him)- Sir... (he was emotional seeing him after that incident)


[Jairaj looked up to see Maan standing in front of him with concern eyes he stand and move ahead to know why is he here?]


Jairaj (after getting courage to speak)- I don't think I am in a position to listen sir for me... aur jaha tak mujhe lgta hai jo tumhre saath maine jo kiya use baad toh tum mujhe nafrat bhi karo toh voh bhi kam hai... (he smiled sadly) { don't think I am in a position to listen sir for me... And I haven't done think what i had done up till know even if you hate me is very less...(he smiled sadly) }


Maan (instantly snapped hearing him)- No, Sir aap bekasoor ho pehle shayad yakeen nhi tha par ab ho gya hai... and Aap humesha mere sir hi rahenge and aap bhut jald baahar vaapis aayenge... aur aap hi kehte hain sach humesha jeetata hai... {No, Sir Your innocent and i was not sure first but now, I am confirm that you are innocent... and you will always be our Sir and you will come out soon sir... you always says truth always win...}


Jairaj (smiles)- Hmmmph... anyway yahan kaise aana hua... kuch hua hai kya?? Main koshish jarur karunga madad krne ki... ab mein shayad uss jgh nhi hun jaha tumhri madad kar sakun... {Hmmmph... Anyway How you come here??? did something happen? I will try to help you... but Now, I am not in plays where I can help much}


Maan (feeling emotional)- Sir please don't say like that... Main yaha aapse kuch puchne aaya hun... Sir kya appne tattoo bnwa rkha hai left arm pe...?? {Sir Please don't say like that... I came here to ask something... Sir, did you have a tattoo in left arm...????}


Jairaj (frowns)- Nahin toh infact main chaahun toh bhi nhi bnwa skta I am highly allergic to it. College mein try kiya tha I end up landing in hospital and then I have to remove it... aur tabse I haven't par tum yeh kyu puch rhe ho... {No, Even I want I can't have tattoo on my body as I am highly allergic to it. I tried in college and I end up landing in hospital and then I have to remove it... and from then I haven't but Why are you asking this...}


Maan (Surprised and happy)- Sir, aaj mujhe yakeen hi nhi confirm bhi ho gya hai ki aap nirdosh hain... main, Geet aur Gautam apko yahan se bai izzat bahar nikalenge aur apka voh samaan bhi aapko vaapas milega (Jairaj was confused what Maan wants to say and Jairaj- Mtlb! Main smjha nhi.. Maan smiles) Sir... mujhe lead mili hai ek informant ne diya tha ek tattoo ki photo kaha this can lead and vhi tattoo maine apke left arm pe dekha tha... press conference ke agle din mujhe ajeeb laga par maine socha apko showk hoga... par ab sab cheezein clear ho gyi hai... i know agli hearing ki date paas hai aur humein culprit nhi mila par hum apki bail k liye apply kar sakenge jo evidences mile hain usse humaara kaam asaan hoga aap jld hi baahar honge... and main vaada krta hun jo bhi iske peeche hain usse main jail mein pahunchaake rahunga... {Sir, Now, I have full confidence and confirmed that you are innocent... I, Geet and Gautam will take you out from here with dignity and will return the prestige which is tarnished. (Jairaj was confused what Maan wants to say and Jairaj- Mtlb! Main smjha nhi.. Maan smiles) Sir... I have a lead given by the informant, He has given the photo of Tattoo and said that this can lead and I had seen the same tattoo on your left arm... day after the press conference I felt it weird but thought you have your liking ... but Now everything is cleared... I know the next hearing is close and culprit is not here but the lead we have we can bail you out... and I promise that whoever is behind this he will be behind the bars...}


Jairaj(astonished to hear this)- I mean it was someone else ... jo main sochta tha ki mera illusion hai voh sach tha... lekin how did you get to know this... (He was surprised to know) {I mean it was someone else ... What I was thinking that was not my illusion and it was true... But how did you get to know this... (He was surprised to know) }


[Maan explained about the progress what they have found how Geet got to know about this... and he meeting with the informant...]


Jairaj- Oh, So you met Rahul. He is really capable of finding something... but he demands money for that I hope you don't have any problem with it (Maan smiles and Maan- No Sir! He gave me a nice discount or nhi bhi deta toh bhi jitna maangta main de deta) He gave you discount strange aur vaise uske jayda paise maangne pe aitraaz bhi nhi hai mujhe usse jarurat bhi hai pasion ki apni behan ki dekh rekh jo krta hai... life bhut mushkil hoti hai kuch sabkuch deti hai aur kuch kuch bhi nhi... anyway agli baar mile toh meri trf se thank you bolna... usne jo madat ki hai uska shulriyada main kaise chukaun yeh mujhe bhi nhi pata ab toh dum ghutne laga hai yahan... bas Geet hi hai jo ek ujaali kiran ki trh aayi hai... aur i am glad ki main tumhra ghunegaar nhi hun vrna itne dino mujhe yhi baat pareshaan kar rhi thi i was thinking how to face you... (Jairaj first time opens up his heart i front of Maan)... {Oh, So you met Rahul. He is really capable of finding something... but he demands money for that I hope you don't have any problem with it.(Maan smiles and Maan- No Sir! He gave me a nice discount and even if he hasn't given I would have given whatever He asked) He gave you discount strange and I don't have any issue in demanding the more money as he needs it for the taking care of his sister... Life is really cruel it gives everything to some and nothing to some... anyway when he you meet him again say thank you from my side... I don't know how to repay for his help... Now, I feeling suffocated here... It was the Geet's presence who comes like a light in our life... and I am glad that i am not your culprit anymore as it was bugging me for a while. and I was thinking How to fqace you...(Jairaj first time opens up his heart i front of Maan)... }


Maan- Nahi Sir app aisa mat kahiye... aap jarur baahar aayenge and Rahul ne aapki madad isiliye bhi ki kyuki apne bhi uski madad ki hai voh apko bhut maanta hai sir tbhi toh usne itna bada risk leke information nikaali aur share ki... Yeah Geet is really a light in everyone's life vahan... aunty ki akelepan ko dur kiya yaha aapke maan samaan ko lautaane ki liye lad rhi hai aur Gautam ke liye toh voh ek angel hi hain... Itne dino aur mahino mein apke jail mein jaane ke baad usse todha relax dekha ab toh todha bhut insaan bhi lgta hai hans bhi deta hai... aur voh din bhi dur nhi jab Geet shayad Gautam aur Aunty ko ek dusre ke saath khush rehne k liye taiyaar bhi kar le... She is really an angel... Acha sir ab mein chlta hun apki LAwyer ko maine manaana bhi hai... aur yeh lead bhi dikhani hai... {No Sir, Please Don't say this... You will come out for sure... and Rahul has helped you because You have helped him when he needed and he adores you sir that's why he took the risk to took out the information... Yeah Geet is really a light in everyone's life There... She curbs the loneliness of Aunty and here she is fighting and for Gautam she is an angel... After so many days I have seen him relax and Now, he looks a little human and seldom smiles too... The day will be not far when she make Aunty and Gautam to live together happily... She is really an angel... Ok Sir! Now, I have to leave. I have to meet your lawyer and pacify her and show this lead to her...}


Jairaj- Ok Maan! jaao aur dhyaan rkhna aur Geet ka bhi pata nhin kyu mujhe voh bhut apni feel kra deti hain... by the way kya tum uske dad ko jaante ho... {Ok Maan! You can go and take care of yourself and Geet too. I don't know why She feels like that She is close to me. By the way Do you know her dad...}


Maan (Was in dilemna)- Umm... jayda nhi bas usne yhi btaya tha ki uske papa ka koi business and you have helped him in past. that's why she is here... (in mind) Sorry sir I can't tell you the name who is he? { Ummm... Not much... Only that Her father had a buisness and you have helped him in past. That's why She is here... (in mind) Sorry Sir I can't tell you the name who is he?}


Jairaj- Ok! Acha ab tum chalo vrna late ho jaoge... Bye Take Care {Ok Now, you can go otherwise you will be late... Bye Take Care}


Maan- Bye Sir aap bhi apna khayal rkhna... {Bye Sir You also take care of yourself...}


[Maan bid bye to Jairaj and went straight to Geet's house to pacify her and tell her about the lead he had found...]



Precap- Pacifying Geet and Reveltion of who was the chai vala and the secret...😃





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