LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Fabulous update
Geet went to police station to meet inspector Maan Singh Khurana and Maneet first encounter with takker
maan named geet as jungli billi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Donnaa

nice update...
lol i was waiting for maaneet's famous takkar...ho gayi takkar :P
geet is at PS to ask maan about the case...
maan is very friendly...liked him a lot...
now case history time...


Yup the case history😆😃


Originally posted by: swapna.p

nice update..
waiting for next update..



Originally posted by: preetidhawan

Part 3

Nice Update
Geet reached India and after 1month training met tejaswani ad convinced her to take Jairaj case, Tejaswani agreed and everyone was shocked for this change, Gautam argued with Geet but Maan calmed him down, Tejaswani is angry with Gautam , loved the whole update



Originally posted by: preetidhawan

Part 4

Lovely Update 👏
Geet went to police station to meet inspector Maan Singh Khurana and Maneet first encounter with takker, loved it 😉
Maan named Geet Jungli Billi 😆 aur Geet ne bhi mud ker dekha 😉
Geet met Maan for case discussion
Waiting for next update



Thnx for the reply😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: aparna3011

very nice update

geet reach ps to meet maan for more information about case
maan call her jangli bili ask her to meet in hotel in evening as he is bussy with his work



Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

The story is getting very interesting.. Geet don't know where to start so she seek maan help to get a start .. Can't wait for story to progress..



Originally posted by: pari_DD

nice updte... geet went to meet maan in ps she want to knw d details of jairaj case waiting for d nxt updte...



Originally posted by: kabslocks

Awesome update. Geet was thinking from where to start the investigation. She thought about Maan to start from him. So she went to police station to talk to him. She met Pooja there and she told Geet that Maan will come after some time. Geet collided Maan. She asked him about the case. He invited her to a cafe in the evening and she agrees.


thnx for replying😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Well written! Geet watches Gautam n comments! she goes 2 meet Maan bt he is on duty! they decide 2 meet later! Maaneet meet! update soon!







Originally posted by: kindlelover

Nice one Waiting to read why Gautam is against Jairaj And also how MANEET will continue



Originally posted by: CookieMonster.

Awesome update
so geet started her investication..n went to maan to gather info..likd their convo
update nxt soon




Originally posted by: taahir004

Fantastic Update

I really liked the conversation between Maan and Geet
I'm sure they will end up been good friends by the end of this case 😆



Originally posted by: myrahluvsk

awesome update

geet takes maan help to solve the case



Originally posted by: Alamelu

Hmm geet getting into the case and starts with maan...good idea...lets see how their discussion progresses...


Thnx for the reply😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: heemasomani

Fabulous update

Geet went to police station to meet inspector Maan Singh Khurana and Maneet first encounter with takker
maan named geet as jungli billi



Thnx for the reply😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Hi Every one


Sorry for updating late. As i got a job in school as teacher and students are having their exam these days and the function preparation is also going on so i will not be able to update the story frequently please don't stop reading i will try to update frequently.I will be highly obliged if you keep commenting on the story. I would like to know what you like about my story in your words. I will be highly grateful.


With Regards
Dhruvika



Thanks for liking the story...







Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87


Part-5




Geet(feeling awkward)- Haan! Sorry .. I wanna know what happened till now I was wondering from where to start. then, I thought of you. That's why I am here.


Maan(sensing her uneasiness tries to make her comfortable)- hmmm... (smiles) Usse pehle aapko humaare sawaalon ka jwaab dena padega.


Geet(feeling scared)- Sawaal... Ok Mr. Khurana.


Maan(Smiles)- Maan. aap mujhe Maan keh ke bula skte ho.


Geet- Ok! I will try.


Maan- So, New York main pali badi ek buisness man ki beti yha kaise and yeh case hi kyu? Koi aur case b toh le skti thi.


Geet(smiles)- Well Mr. Maan Mere dad pehle yhi rehte the koi problem thi toh unki mushkil ki ghadi main ACP Jairaj ne bhut madad ki thi. That's why I am here. My dad thinks he is innocent.


Maan(getting suspicous but let it be like this)- Please call Maan yeh Mr. Maan kuch ajeeb hi lgta hai.


Geet(Smiles)- I will try.


Maan- So, your dad knows ACP Jairaj.


Geet(getting tensed)- Yes, Infact he was coming here but i stopped him and express my views to fight for his case.


Maan- So, What will you have?


Geet- hmm.. Just a fruit juice nothing else.


Maan(smiles)- ok Waiter!


Waiter- Yes!


Maan- One fruit juice for lady and one black coffee for me.


Waiter- Ok! Anything else Sir.


Maan- Well, I would love too but My charming lady doesn't want to have right now so, Right now just bring this.


Waiter(Smiles)- Order will be placed sir.


[Waiter leave from there]


Maan(started explaining what happened during the case)- So, Geet I am working under Jairaj Sir. It happen when I was handling Radhika's murder case. Lab was burnt and the evidences are burned. I was suspended for that. Inspector Gautam helped me prooving innocent... [and explains everything] After this Prakash admitted helping Jairaj in removing the evidences.


Geet(seriously thinking on this)- So, that happened. It's all messed up. Mr. Maan you have cross checked the witness. I mean they are not lieing.


Maan- No we put pressure on them to tell the truth but they are saying it's ACP Jairaj.


Geet(Thinking)- Ok...


[Geet didn't reply for a minute. Waiter came and placed the Order]


Waiter- Your order please.


Maan(smiles)- Thank You.


Waiter- Ok You and Madam need anything else.


Maan-Nope! We will inform you if we need something.


Waiter- Ok Sir!


Maan- So, Miss Geet! your Fruit Juice and here is my Black Coffee.


Geet(Seriously thinking)- Thanks for it.


Maan(seeing Geet getting tensed and serious)- Oh come on you don't need to it's my pleasure after all I don't get a chance to have a outing with a beautiful lady.


Geet(smiles)- Mr. Maan Aap b naah...

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[Geet was tensed listening about the case but she was trying to be normal in front of Maan. Maan understanding the situation diverts her mind and ask few uestion which he was having doubts on what Geet said before]


Maan- Miss Geet! What happened?


Geet(seriously thinking)- Huh... Nothing...


Maan(understanding)- Chalo apni family k baare mein hi bta do.


Geet(smiling)-My family hmmm... well mom hai she is a housewife... Dad as i said he is a business man and ik bhai hai Jai he has given the entrance test for IPS.


Maan- Great! Your brother has given the exam. Your father what type of a buisness is he in... (curiously asked about him).


Geet(tensed)- aaah... He is in Interior Designing.

Maan(getting serious)- Interior Designing... Good.. Can you tell me the name of your father.


Geet(feeling tensed)- Aaahh.. (thinking he will not able to guess as his father has left this profession) Kabir Deshmukh.


Maan(feeling amused)- Oh... You are a daughter of Mr. Kabir Deshmukh who is famous for his business my dad's has a construction business he always recommends your dad's company for interior designing.


Geet(relieved)- Thanks.


Maan(Serious)-Vaise Mr. Kabir Deshmukh is also famous for other things too Miss Geet. ab ye aap btayengi yaa ye b main hi btaun. Mujse chupaake fayda nhi hai


Geet(getting caught told about his Dad)- He is an ex-police officer. Kabir Deshmukh.


Maan(happily)- Kabir Deshmukh... Oh my God! tum unki beti ho.


Geet(Surprised)- Haan Mr. Maan Itni chowkne vaali kya baat hai...


Maan(controlling his emotion)- He is one of the best policemen infact jab bhi police ki aan baan shaan ka naam liya jaata hai toh Kabir sir ka naam jarur aata hai. Infact he is a roll model for us specially me and Gautam.


Geet(feeling amused)- I don't know about this infact it's been a month when i come to know about that my dad used to be a cop.


Maan(shocked)- what your father haven't told you?


Geet- Yup, he hasn't told anything about it. till this case which he got tensed.


Maan(feeling curious)- That's strange!


Geet- Hmmm... Infact he worked with ACP Jairaj sir and they both are best buddies since college.


Maan(amused)- Yeah... that i had known about them... they have solved the many cases together and their Pairing was amazing. in training we were given there cases to solve. they are so tough we always wonder how they crack the case so soon. and there theories oh my god... Jairaj sir means he is a way of practical and goes out of the book but i never seen Kabir sir doing that he is much of a rule book follower still he was like a gem who give justice to people.


Geet(feeling proud)- Haan jab dad ne ye news suni woh toh yakeen hi nhi kar rhe the ki ACP sir aisa kar skte hain... at first i was telling him its those evidences but he was not convinced at all. He said," Something is wrong. He can't do this" Infact my daad and Jai consider him to be a hero.


Maan(thinking)- Hmmm... itna trust toh hona hi hai itne saalon ki dosti jo hai experience hai dono jaante hai toh kyu nhi hoga trust.


Geet(feeling worried)- you are right Mr. Maan pta nhi kyu muje lgta hai ki hum koi kadi miss kar rhe hain and deep down in my heart knows that he is innocent.


Maan(Thinking)- Kabhi kabhi toh aisa lgta hai ki sir aisa nhi kar skte.


Geet(with expectation)-Maan! tum meri madad karoge naa sir ko innocent prove krne mein??


Maan(serious and having a smile)- Yes ofcourse! agr Sir innocent honge toh humein asli culprit b saamne aa jaayega jo unhe frame krna chaahta hai... Let's see what happen... (having a mischivous smile) vaise ab to madad krna bnti b hai pehli baar Miss Geet ne humein Maan kehke bulaaya... my ears are dieing to hear my name without Mr.


Geet(blushing)- Mr. Maan aap b naah mujhe Miss Geet bulana chodiye...


Maan- toh Miss Geet aap Mr. Maan bulana...


Geet(annoyingly)- Chodo aap nhi maanoge and thnx...


Maan- iski koi jarurat nhi thi well Gautam yeh jaanke bhut khush hoga ki woh apne hero Kabir sir ke itne kareeb hai when he got to know about you are his daughter.


Geet(tensed)- No, don't tell him or his family about me and my dad relation. My father has said when i disclose my identity to his family and to him i have to leave India forever... and right now i don't want to go...Please...


Maan(shocked)- But why?


Geet- I don't know but please don't tell him since he is ACP Sir's son.


Maan(feeling weird)- Ok I won't tell him.




Precap: Maan Saving Geet and Gautam and Geet's Meeting... 😃





Part 4
Part 5




Hi guys i hope you like this update too. Please guys comment and tell me how you feel about this story in 4-3 lines i will be highly obliged. specially the persons who likes my story too... Please comment i like people who give reviews even if you dont like anything you can tell me that too...


With Regards
Dhruvika


Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fantastic Update ' Maan and Geet talks and he tries getting as much information out of Geet it does seem like she is still soft to be a lawyer as when she senses Maan touching a topic that is hitting home she either gets tense or nervous and she been a lawyer must actually become stronger but I enjoyed their talks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
nice update
maan flirting with geet order k bahane
maan is doubt to geet because geet is very interest in case
maan bato bato mai geet se sari details nikal raha tha
about geet father maan is doubting something

precape is interesting
waiting for next update

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely ue I like we're the story is going so maan asked abt geet ehy she interested in the case though geet was nervous she told how her dad was in trouble and jairaj helped him he is a business man but maan the efficient cop came to know abt geets dad and she told he was ex cop who is apparently maan and every cops role model geet is thinking deeply she and maan both think jairaj is innocent maan will help her he teased her making her blush

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