LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congress dear
Lovely prologue n cs
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congo on the new story dear lovely and interesting prologue and cs update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
interesting proo
cant wait for update
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totally a differrent concept
story revolving around police n interogations
i love to read..

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Part-1



[At US, Kabir got the news of Jairaj being corrupt and was arrested by his own son. He did not believe on what is shown and got infuriated. He had a talk with Kavya and Malini about him]

Kabir (watching news)- Unbelievable!


Malini - What Happened?


Kabir- Look at the news. This can't be true.


Malini- Oh My God! I mean, How could this happen?


Kabir (Tensed)- Yeah! I had to talk to them about this.


Malini (Tensed)- Ok.


[Kabir trys Jairaj's number]


Kabir (ST)- Pick up the Phone Jairaj. Phone Uthao. Yaar yeh phone kyu nhi utha rha hai?


[But Jairaj is not Picking the Phone]


Malini- What Happened?


Kabir- He isn't picking up the phone God Damn it.


[Geet came from her study room]


Geet (immersed in her case file)- Hey Dad! look I have a client who is worried about the criminal who has kidnapped his daughter and... What happened?


Kabir (worriedly)- Geet! You are here. Nothing just watching the news.


Geet (while drinking the coffee)- Yeah! I have seen it. Don't know what's gonna be next. Dad I mean it's too much.


Kabir (Tensed and sadly)- No! He is not corrupt. He Can't be...


Geet (Surprised on Dad's remark)- Dad! Koi unhe aise hi todhe hi giraftaar karega.


Kabir- I know but beta koi usse fassa rha hai Jairaj aisa kar hi nhi skta.


Geet (surprised)- How do you know Dad? You Know him? Don't you?


Kabir- But...


Geet(Suspiciously)- You know him Dad? Is that true?


[Kabir got numb]


Kabir(worriedly)-... No...


Geet(Suspiciously and thinking)- Dad! Relax! If he is innocent he will come unharmed and app tension mat lo ye sab chalta rehta hai.


Kabir (Tensed)- Hmmm... Ok...


[Geet goes in her room and thinking about her dad's worries why he is so tensed for a unknown person. she had a doubt so she went to her dad for getting the truth behind the behavior of her dad. Kabir is tensed and went in library thinking of that news . Then Malini came and told him to tell the truth]


Malini (seeing her worried Husband)-Kabir! What happened?


Kabir(Thinking)- Huh...! Malini I was wondering about Jairaj.


Malini- Yeah! After seeing his arrest I am also surprised.


Kabir- Yeah! Par sabse mushkil kaam hai Geet ko kaise btaaye ki Jairaj uske... Nahi... Kabhi nhi... or Jairaj ko innocent proove krna hi hoga.


Malini- We have to tell her not now but in future Kabir lets talkabout it to Geet.


Kabir (Crying)- Malini! Nhi tumhe kya lgta hai Geet ko jab pta chalega... Kya vo humein maaf kargei itna bada sach chupaane k liye... Nhiii... Main uski aankhon mein apne liye nafrat nhi dekh skta...i won't able to handle it... Malini...


Malini(having tears)- It's all my fault. If I had agreed to let her go then then this wouldn't happen you were ready then...


Kabir- Malini! that's not the case Main pareshaan hu ki Jairaj fass kaise gya upar se uska arrest b kraaya uske bete se. Mujhe abhi bhi shaq hai koi usse fassa rha hai. Infact, I should go there and knows the whole truth. He will not tell a lie to me... and vaise bhi mujhe ye krna hi hoga kyuki main nhi chaahta Geet Jairaj ko Corrupt smjhe...



Precap- Geet and His Father decides to go to India.



Prologue and Note


Note


Part 2



Hope you like the part1 please give your reviews... on it... I will be highly obliged


With Regards
dhruvika



Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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VERY NICE START
I LIKE TO SEE GEET IN LAWYER
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi superb start! Kabir stunned! Geet questions him! he denies he knows Jairaj bt he does! they cannot tell her the truth
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A Fantastic Start

Kabir is concerned for Jairaj he believes his friend cannot be corrupted
Malini wants that she and Kabir tell Geet the truth
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 1
nice start...
kabir is worried watching the news of jairaj's arrest...and he is very confident that jairaj is innocent...
so geet didnt know about being handa in real...n she is suspicious seeing her father worry too much for an unknown person...
looks like time for truth...but they are scared of geet's reaction...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful theme too many characters...thoda samajna mushkil oras per o.kchalths hsi. Dekhna pafega hum kaise dtory ko leaf karthe ho. Nice do pm me if it is oy a problem to u. And cogrstes go u for ur start. Welcome to the forum. U will rock. All the best

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