LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 23

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Kuch zada hi chota h😡

Kya comment karu... Hmmm nice part

Waiting
For the next😊



heheheee... haath dukh gye isse bada likhte likhte log fir ek word mein hi comment krte hain... fayda nhi...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

geet love the relationship between maan and shika and gautam...looks like shika and gautam are at loggerheads and probably will be pair...



thanks for replying
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Lovely Update

Maan had spoken to his mum about Geet so when his mum met her there was a certain friendliness in the air , I liked that both Maan and Geet have a certain understanding and both are jovial too
Gautum been all serious and wants to starts the discussion right away but Maan says discussion will only take place in his room while they friend Shikha is also there waiting for Maan .
she is out spoken but the moment Gautum asked her and Geet to get their talks over as they need to discuss the case Shikha too voiced about ACP Sir
I know she is Maan and Gautum's friend but their in the process of discussion about the case and both allowing her there to some level it is wrong as it was suppose to be a discussion in confidence


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and haan she is related to case also so its good she is in touch for a while
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: deep002

Wonderful update dear, loved it...



Thanks for commenting😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee

Gud so geet in maans house

Maan ki mom lo bji geet pasand aayi

Ye shikha kon jai yaar

Hope koi mu na ho maaneet mai

Precap ...wow kom j hua

Jaldi aana

Plz thora jyafa likha karo na plz

Waiting



heheheee... jyada likho toh b log comment dhang se nhi krte
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Everyone

I am sorry i am not able to quote every single person in comment for thanking so i am Thanking every person who has commented on my story sor far... i love you guys whoever read my story whole heartedly... Thanks for giving the response to me


With Regards

Dhruvika





Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago


Hi

Thanks for liking the story. I hope i will get the precious comments from the person who likes my story too...











With Regards
Dhruvika1991
Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part - 11



Gautam(interuppting their chatting session)- Guys, I think agr tumhri baatein ho gyi ho toh jiske liye aaye hain vo baat karein...


Maan(getting the situation)- Sure... Haan Geet! You waaannn...


Shikha(interrupted him)- Yeah! main toh btana bhool hi gyi thi main kyu aayi thi actually i heard about the news regarding ACP Jairaj about a new lawyer is appointed for him...


[Everyone looks here and there listening to her...]


Shikha(continued her talks without looking at them)- Vaise geet tum kya krti ho?


Geet(feeling awkward how to tell her)- Aaah... Actually I am a Lawyer and I am fighting a case of ACP Jairaj... (Looks her for a reaction)...


Shikha(her face color change and she becomes serious)- Oh! you are that Geet... (getting serious)... Well what brought you here and why this case.. I mean India mein cases ki kami nhi hai... (spoke to her sarcastically and smiles)...


Geet(understanding that she doesn't like her)- Well, I want to fight in India too... and my father think he is innocent and ACP sir has helped my father long back so ... He was coming but I insisted to come instead of him... So here I am...


Shikha- Ok... and...


Gautam(interrupted knowing where the talks is leading)- Guys stop it... lgta hai we need to have some cold drink and then we will talk right Maan... [indicating him to ease the situation]...


Maan(nodding)- Yes, First have some coffee and Geet your cold drink..


[After sometime Gautam initiated for the case]


Gautam- Geet! You met with dad naah what did he say?


Geet(getting tensed)- Woh.. (taking a deep breath)... Well I went to meet him and there i had a conversation to tell what was happening and how it went if he knew something that is not appropriate... [And she explained everything what ACP sir has told her...].. I don't know what is right or wrong but this is what ACP sir told me... i am just wondering how is it possible... that sir didn't remember what happened after the press conference... and before Maan's suspension...


Maan (shocked)- What are you saying Geet? Do you have any idea?


Geet(getting serious)- Yes Mr Maan, I am saying the exactly what ACP sir told me...


Gautam(Seriously asking her)- How is it possible Geet?


Geet- Don't know may be ACP sir was druggged and noone had a clue...


Gautam- ok what about investigation of burnt laboratory in which Maan was found guilty... He was present there.. Prakash said it he was with him that time...


Geet(seriously having hope)- Did you or Maan was present there... he was also drugged by sleeping pills naah...


Maan(confirming her still not believing)- ACP Sir personally told you about this...


Geet- Yup, That's why am i tensed and in a shock after he told me...


Maan(taking a deep breath)- Well this is a utter shock for me... don't know what to say...


Lalita(interrupting their session)- Well, guys dinner is ready... Please have dinner first then continue your talks ok... i m going down for arranging please freshen up and come down...[Maan's Mother came and calls them for dinner and went from their.]


Maan- Ok Mom we are coming... (taking a sigh of relief)... lets have dinner uske baad discuss krte hain aage kya krna hai.. ok...


[They went for dinner. After having dinner they came back to room]


Maan(listening to this)- yeh case toh aur b complicated hota jaa rha hai... [After a while Maan Speaks his inner turmoil what to believe or not Gautam was stunned and thinking deeply about the case and what Geet has told]


Shikha(interrupted)- I am sorry guys. If I am interrupting ye b toh ho skta hai ACP Sir khud ko bchaane k liye jhuth bol rhe ho. kyuki apne self defence k liye sabhi yhi krte hain.


Geet- Self defence krna hota Sir ko toh ab tak apne favor mein jhuthe witnesses laa chuke hote yaa he would have applied for bail but no he is in jail. So,don't argue onthat ok... koi itna b freak nhi hoga jo iss time pe yeh baat bole...unhone vhi kaha jo unhe laga... aur unke saath hua...(Before Maan and Gautam could react Geet snapped at her).

Shikha- It's baseless Geet. Koi bhi ACP sir ke room mein aake unki jgh le skta hai yaa unke chai mein kuch mila skta hai...


Geet- It's not impossible... but sirf tabhi jab koi office ka staff involve ho... jaise Bhavik k khaane mein jehar aur Radhika ka b toh murder hua toh yeh possible kyu nhi...


Maan(listening to their point of view)- Vaise Shikha! Geet ki baat valid toh hai... but...


Shikha(interrupting and rolling her eyes and not believing what Geet is saying)- Maan! Geet kya jaanti hai is case k baarein mein abhi kuch hi din toh huye hain case ko haath mein liye huye... koi aisi bchkani baatein krke kuch saabit nhi hoga... Meri maano ACP Sir jhuth bol rhe hain...


Gautam- Dad! kabhi jhuth nahi bol skte agar unhone bola hai toh sach hi bola hoga... I think we should have a talk with Prakash again he is the one who was on duty that time... [After listening and lot of thinking he replied to her to avoid the situation to get worse].


Shikha(getting upset and snapped at him)- Oh! Tum bhi Gautam Please understand She doesn't have a point agar ACP Sir bolenge ki maine nhi kiya toh voh sach ho jaayega...


Gautam- Ek baar try krne mein kya jaata hai...


Shikha- Gautam! tum toh yhi chaahte ho ki tumhre dad jaldi se baahar aa jaaye chaahe unhone galat bhi kiya ho...


Gautam(getting angry)- Shikha enough... Haan i want him out of jail but only when he is not guilty and innocent... otherwise i dont want... do you get that...


Shikha- Gautam! Maan tum toh smjho ki ye time ki wastage hai Kuch bhi haasil nhi hoga...


Maan- Shikha... Gautam... [try to intervene before the matter goes worst as Gautam is getting angry and Shikha is not listening...].


Geet(interrupted him)- Shikha what do you want that truth will not come out... or you want to live in a web of lies...


Shikha(Getting furious)- Look Geet! tum jo krna hai chaahti ho tum kro... muje tumse argue nhi krna chaahti... ACP Sir ne Radhika k case mein evidences ko destroy kiya iss ko koyi nhi badal skta... yeh fact hai...


Geet- Yeh b toh ho skta hai ki voh Sir nhi ho... aur beside what is the problem in asking prakash once again...


Shikha(sarcastically)- Look tumhre Dad dabe honge ACP Sir ke ehsaan talle Main nhi... jo ki ek criminal ka saath doon ACP sir ne jara si madad kya kar di unke gulaam aa gye huh...


Geet- Tum... (Listening to this and outbursts her inner turmoil and having tears...) Jaanti kya ho mere dad k baare mein huh... Tumhe koi haq nhi hai Mere dad ke baare mein bolne ka... or haan koi mera saath de yaa naa de i dont care... Main ACP Sir ko innocent proove krke hi rahungi... that's a promise to myself and my dad... Do you understand that... and for your kind information do you know who is my father?... Pehle kuch jaan lo fir kuch bola karo... He is a...[Her sentence was left incomplete as she noticed Gautam and feels helpless as she can't tell the truth... She feels like she will loose herself so she went from there to the lawn...].






Precap: Gautam's Outbursts and Someone's Being Jealous... :)


Part 10


Part 12



Hi guys i hope you like this update too. Please guys comment and tell me how you feel about this story in 4-3 lines i will be highly obliged. specially the persons who likes my story too... Please comment i like people who give reviews even if you dont like anything you can tell me that too...


With Regards
Dhruvika


Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dhruvika1991

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dhruvika1991

Hi Everyone


I am sorry i am not able to quote every single person in comment for thanking so i am Thanking every person who has commented on my story sor far... i love you guys whoever read my story whole heartedly... Thanks for giving the response to me


With Regards

Dhruvika





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