LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago
bht ajeeb baat hai acp behosh the phir kese ghr pohnche...
story is very interesting...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Donnaa

interesting update...this case is getting more and more interesting...
its really strange that jairaj was senseless and nobody know about it...even tajaswini didnt know about it...some one is playing with lots of planning...
geet is so lost that she didnt even notice maan...maan is as usual flirting and making the situation easy ...

aahaa goutam is feeling protective toward geet...jab pata chalega she is his sister tab kya karega bechara maan 😆
Answer:- Tab toh Maan ka seedha shoot out at Sight hogaaa...😛






























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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee

Interesting hoti ja hrahi hai story

Uff kya hua hoga

Grwat start geet chalo kuch kafi to mili

Hope trio will slove the case jaldi









Originally posted by: preetidhawan

Nice Update

Geet told Maan that she met with ACP and ACP told her something which she wants to share with Maan and Gautam, Maan is little bit relieved that ACP said something atleast he shared something with Geet, Geet tried to ask Tejaswini and her answer confused Geet more, now GEET-Maan and Gautam going to meet at Maan,s place to discuss and that chai incident is not only the big clue but the main key of this case





Originally posted by: pari_DD

amazing updte...maan met geet when she is returning frm p.s she is in deep thoughts she told maan tgt she met acp het told details abt cast tht she want share with maan d gautam maan told meet at his place d he s going to pickup very interesting story hw they going to solve d puzzle of dis tea incident became d big clue nw










Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! well written! Geet lost in her thoughts n doesn't hear Maan call her! he manages 2 get her attention! Maan says they will meet at his place! he will fetch her! she tells him she is staying with Tejaswini! Maan calls Gautam n lets him know! Gautam possessive of Geet! Tejaswini teases Geet! Maan arrives 2 fetch her! she opens the door bt doesn't realize Maan is there! Geet again thinking abt the case! update soon




Originally posted by: kabslocks

Superb update. Geet wanted to talk to Maan and Gautam about the information that she got from Jairaj. She herself is very much confused. Maan too came there but she is so much in herself that she could not listen to him. When she realised that he was there, she felt embarrassed. She told Maan about her meeting to Jairaj and that she wanted to discuss about this with Maan and Gautam. They decided to meet at Maan's place.





Originally posted by: pop77

Nice part.. Geet find clue only they have connect dots.. I think case not easy which find..




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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: fict

Nice part. Geet wants to share what she learned with Maan and gautam. Maybe these three together will solve the mystery. Thanks for pm.





Originally posted by: mlaran852

geet has started collecting evidence..
she is on to something but needs help..
maan is attracted to her and gautum feels protective over her...brothers instinct...

waitng for more!!!!!!




Originally posted by: Alamelu

Geet so,lost thinking about the case. Maan had to call her few times. Wow Aunty teasing geet about maan. Hai brother protective about his sister eh. Nicemm







Originally posted by: taahir004

Fantastic Update

The case of ACP Sir seems complicating and it also seems that Tejaswini perhaps just
assumed that he might have came home she did not actually see him
Geet needs to get more strict concerning the case but also has so many open avenues
and she alone it almost seems impossible to get to the bottom of things
Geet been lost in thoughts and Maan brings her back twice now for the day
lets see what will happen next




Originally posted by: myrahluvsk

nice update

geet talk to jairaj
geet is confused
geet want to tell maan n gautam
geet is in maan home

waiting for next update





Originally posted by: suwaibah

bht ajeeb baat hai acp behosh the phir kese ghr pohnche...

story is very interesting...






Thanks for the replying...😃






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Part-9





Maan- Hello! huh.. (frowns)... isse kya hua yeh response kyu nhi de rhi... [He enters the house..] Hello... Ummh... Hello...


Geet(deeply in thoughts)- But how is it possi... Aaahh... Oh. Sorry for that Maan... [She was thinking suddenly she turns. Maaan was standing just behind her. when she turns she just collides with him making both of them stumbles but Maan grabbed her hand and makes her stable.]


Maan- Miss Geet! Todha toh apne aas paas ka khayal rkhna chaahiye...


Geet- Aap kab aaye?


Maan(raised his brows)- Abhi abhi... Tumne hi toh gate khola... OH... Sorry... [Suddenly he realised he is holding her hand. He leaves her hand and apologised to her] ... Sorry voh maine dhyaan nhi diyaa...(feeling embarrassed)... Vaise ajkal tumhra dhyan rehta kahan hai?


Geet- I am so sorry Mr. Maan...


[Tejaswini came]


Tejaswini(interrupting their little banter)- Oh Maan! Tum... Yahan kaise aana hua?


Maan- Namste Aunty! Bas Miss Geet ko lene aaya hun... (with mischevious eyes)... but yeh Madam toh... pehle se hi kahin pahunchi huyi hai...


Tejaswini(Teasing her)- Hmm... Vo toh main b dekh rhi hun jab se aayi hai kahin khoyi huyi si hai... (getting worried)... Geet kuch hua hai kya?


Geet(seeing her worried aunt try to ease the situation)- Nahi aise hi voh ghumke pareshaan ho gyi...


Tejaswini(confused)- Ghumke!!!


Geet- Voh kya hai naah muje dust wagera ki aadat nhi hai...


Maan(getting the point of diverting the topic)- toh aadat daal lo Miss Geet...


Geet(furious on listening Miss Geet again and again)- Yeh kya aapne Miss Geet Miss Geet laga rkha hai... seedhe... seedhe... Geet nhi bola jaata...


Maan(smirks)- Toh kya hua meri mrzi jo mein bolun...


Geet(angrily)- Kyu aapki mrzi hadh hai...


Maan(infuriates her more)- Tum chid kyu rhi ho...


Geet(in angry tone)- main... Main chid rhi hun... Main sirf yhi bol rhi hun theekh se mera naam bol lo...


Maan(rolls his eyes)- lo fir shuru ho gyi...


Geet- Main shuru huyi yeah aap...


Maan- Tumne muje yhan ldne bulaaya hai??


Geet(opening his mouth wide)- Aap...


Tejaswini- Bas karo tum dono kitna ldte ho tum dono... ufff... (interrupted them before they start their banter again)...


Geet(pouts)- But Aunty shuru toh Maan ne...


Tejaswini(showing eyes to her)- Geet! [Maan giggles seeing the situation]


Geet(pouting)- Ok...


Tejaswini- Thank God tum logon ne ladna toh band kiya (breathing a sigh of relief)... Chalo tum log bhaito main kuch khaane ko laati hun...


Maan- Nahi Aunty ji Main toh sirf isse lene yha aaya tha bas nikalte hain...


Tejaswini- Ok Beta but agli baar khaake jaana


Maan(smiles)- Jarur Aunty agli baari pkka...


Maan(teasing again)- Chalein Miss... Geet... (slowly mutters... Jungli Billi..)


Geet(Shooting daggers at him)- Kya kaha?... (mutters Rakshash)


Maan(diverting her and not taking her murmuring seriously and smiles at her remark)- Kuch nhi... Chalte hain vrna late ho jaayenge...


Geet- Ok


Maan(self talk)- Hmmm... Chalo shukar hai ladne ke bahaane tumne muje Maan toh bulaya vrna Mr Maan sunte sunte pak gya tha... Aur voh kya tha Rakshash... iska khaamyaaza toh chukana padega... ache khaase dashing hero ko koi aise kehta hai...


Geet(hearing his self talk)- Kya?


Maan(rolls his eyes)- Kuch nhi Chalte hain vrna sach mein Gautam se humaari remand lagegi... usse wait krna pasand nhi...


Geet(Smiles)- Hmmm... Haan sach mein vrna Gautam naam ka volcano fatta toh rokna mushkil ho jaayega... (Both of them laugh out loud at the remark)



Precap:- Maan, Geet and Gautam had a discussion and a New Entry...






Part 10



Hi guys i hope you like this update too. Please guys comment and tell me how you feel about this story in 4-3 lines i will be highly obliged. specially the persons who likes my story too... Please comment i like people who give reviews even if you dont like anything you can tell me that too...


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Dhruvika


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Posted: 9 years ago
very nice update
maan is teasing geet

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...
uff maaneet both are fighting like kids...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really a fun filled and lively update.
Liked it thoroughly.
Loved the bickerings of maan and geet.
Each and every words they used against each other were hilarious.
They even started calling each other by nicknames. Good choice done by u again.
Maan was clearly disappointed by the name given to him and I bet he will take revenge on geet for calling him rakshas, quite soon.
What I liked most is that, both in spite of being so childish don't take even a fraction of a sec to get changed into serious , responsible roles when needed. Both of them r so balanced and u have portrayed these shades of characters so efficiently dear. U did an appreciable job. Actually this update gave an essence of maaneet.
Well, these two didn't even leave the poor soul gautam and maybe in sometime they will manage to reduce some of his loneliness and pain as they did with tejaswini.
Anyways, waiting for the meeting of the trio and their convo.
What plan will they hatch to uncover the culprits???
And the precap seemed too interesting. A new entry is always welcome as long as he or she brings a new perspective with him or her. Hope this person will be resourceful enough so that he/she can help the trio in solving the case .
Do cont soon dear.
Suspense is going over board. He he. Its not that I don't like it. In fact I love it too too much and ur story too.
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Posted: 9 years ago
tom and jerry lgte hain maaneet larte hue...
short update😕😕...

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