LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 35

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

Heyyy I read this one yday
Such a nice plot
Wilb waiting for next.
I still don't understand why shikawath spoke rudely about acp,well gautam and geet out burst was reasonable

its because She thought ACP had his hand in killing her sister thats why....


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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Guys


Thanks for commenting. I very obliged by knowing your views. Kindly keep commenting. I have replied to your queries which you have mentioned in your reply kindly see to it.



With Regards
dhruvika






Thanks for liking the update.



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Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago
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Part 13


Gautam- Aah... Maan I am leaving i will drop her... as her house comes between my way... it will be easy... you can drop Shikha it's late and how will she go right... (interrupting him...)


Maan- Errrmmm... Ohk As you say i will drop Shikha... (feeling Disheartened seeing Gautam's idea...) [After a while all left from there and bid bye to each other]


Shikha- Yeh ldki tumhe kuch ajeeb nhi lgti... (After a while while travelling in a car asked Maan about Geet..)


Maan(Confusing)- Kaun Geet?


Shikha(rolling her eyes)- Aur kiski baat kar rhi hun Ofcourse Geet...


Maan(disbelievingly)- Tum abhi bhi uske peeche padi huyi ho usse koshish toh kar lene do...agar success milti hai toh jo police force pe questions uthe hain voh hat jaayenge aur agr voh galat prove huyi usse bhi tassalli ho jaayegi...


Shikha(irritatingly)- I am not talking about that... I know and I am sincerely not gonna involve as you guys are right...


Maan(understanding her point)- Hmmm... Uska gussa hona jayaz hai uske dad ke baare mein aisa nhi bolna chaahiye tha... Tum jaanti hi kitna ho... Geet aur uski family k baaare mein... Voh toh koi aur bhi hota aisa hi react krta...


Shikha- Maine sorry bola naah... and main uss baare mein baat nhi kar rhi thi and by the way tum kya jaante ho uske dad ke baare mein...


Maan(Smiles)- I know about him who is he... she had told me... and please don't ask further i can't tell you because she had told me not to tell about her family till she wants to.


Shikha(astonished)- Tumne baat ki hai usse...


Maan- Hmmm... We had a talk before...


Shikha- Ohk... Good... But yeh Gautam kuch ajeeb nhi behave kar rha tha ajkal bhut hyper hone laga hai... (feeling weird on Gautam's behaviour)


Maan- Tum jaanti toh ho usko ki usse pasand nhi hai koi bhi aise misbehave kare kisi ke saath aur specially voh bardaasht nhi krta koi kisi ke family pe personal remark kare toh uska hyper hona normal hai agr vo nahi hota toh jarur abnormal lgta... (laughs)


Shikha(rolling her eyes)- Haan pata pata hai...


Maan(smiles misheviously)- Kahin tum jealous feel toh nhi kar rhi k Gautam Geet ke saath gya hai aur voh tumhe drop krne nhi aaya... (raising his eyebrows)


Shikha- Oh Maan... Main aur jealous... (rolling her eyes) ... Never... and aisi koi baat nhi hai...


Maan(Teasingly)- Toh Kaisi baat hai???


Shikha(feeling flustered and annoyed)- Shut up Maan...


Maan- Tumhe koi aur dekhe toh jlta hai dil... badi mushkilon se yeh smbhlta hai dil laakhon jatan krta hai tumhe kya pata... (Sings the lines for teasing Shikha)


Shikha(smiling and blushing)- Would you just shut up Maan or else i should hit you...


Maan- Ok.. Ok... Baba nhi gaata ab... Khush...


[Here Gautam and Geet are heading to there home.]


Gautam- Hello, Mayank! (while driving Gautam calls Mayank his colleague)


Mayank- Haan Sir! Itni raat ko apka phone kuch kaam tha kya?


Gautam- Haan Mayank Sun You know Geet is working on ACP Sir's case... right... ACP Sir has spoken to her and i think we should have interrogation with prakash again... so, you have to make an arrangement for it tomorrow.


Mayank- Ok Sir! Ho jaayega... aur koi kaam sir?


Gautam- Nahi bas yhi kehna tha thnx Mayank...


Mayank- arrey Sir Thanks ki kya jarurat thi...


Gautam- Jarurat toh thi itni raat ko tumhe jagaakar kaam krne ko bol rha hun isiliye...


Mayank- Arrey Nahi sir! Aapke liye toh kuch bhi Sir... Aap bhi toh humari jarurat ke samay help krte ho... toh hum kyu nhi after all we are all a team sir...


Gautam- Ok Good Night Mayank Kal Milte hain...


Mayank- Good Night Sir...


Gautam- Lo Geet tumhra kaam ho gya... Geet... [After sometime telling her about his talks but he noticed she had gone to sleep]... Geet... Geet... Lo So gyi yeh toh... Ab kya karein... Marwaayegi yeh toh muje...


Gautam- Geet Ghar aa gya hai Get up.. [After sometime they reached at her place that means Gautam's real home where she is living with his mother. He try to wake her up...]...


Geet(murmuring in her sleep)- Hmmm...


Gautam(Sighes)- Geet! Ghar aa gya hai bed pe so jaana chalo utho abhi aur jao... vhan pe achi neend aayegi...


Geet(in sleepy voice)- Jai! Tum chote ho toh mat chedo... vaise bhi ek baar abhi jaag gyi toh muje dubaara neend nhi aayegi... [She wasn't listening to gautam and imagine him as her little brother]...


Gautam(worriedly)- Gee... Geet... Oh God ab kya karun... [Having no choice he carries her and knock the door... and Tejaswini opens the door...]


Tejaswini- Tum yha kya kar rhe ho? (Seeing Gautam in front of her...)


Gautam(Feeling Emotional)- Voh Maa... (interrupted by her...)


Tejaswini- Teharo... Maine tumse kaha tha ki iss ghar mein aane ki jarura... (noticing Gautam carrying Geet and got worried)... Yeh isse kya hua... Tum bolte kyu nhi...


Gautam(Having Tears)- Maa! Kuch nhi bas So rhi hai Thak gyi thi isiliye... Maine uthaane ki koshish ki magar yeh uthi nhi socha ki main hi isse le aaun...


Tejaswini(Feeling relieved)- Main toh dar hi gyi thi... Iss nanhi si jaan pe itni responsibility daal di hai...


Gautam- Kya Main undar aa skta hun sirf isse bed pe sulaa dun uske baad chala jaunga...


Tejaswini(Nodded and gives him side)- Haan isse apne room mein sula do araam se...


Gautam- Ji ...


Gautam- Lo aa gya tumhra room... (He took her in his room and kept her in bed)


[He was moving from there but Geet Hold his hand and he turns to see her and...]


Gautam(Smiles)- Bye and Good Night [He says to sleeping beauty... He puts his hand and cover her with duvet and left from there]


Tejaswini- Ek Minute Gautam... (She stops him to tell something)...


Gautam- Haan Maa...


Tejaswini- Main tumse kehna chaahti hun ki ho sake toh Geet se dur rho...


Gautam- But Maa... Voh... (frowning on sudden demand of her mother)...


Tejaswini- Main nhi chaahti ki usse kuch ho tumhre saath rehte huye...


Gautam(Having Tears and pleading)- Sorry Maa... Main yeh nhi kar skta... Maine usse promise kiya hai jab tak voh iss case mein hai main uske har kadam pe saath rehne ka...


Tejaswini- Nahi! Maine kaha naah Ki tum usse dur rahoge... bas... (not listening to him and getting stubborn on her demand...)


Gautam(Loosing his patience)- Kya chaahti ho Maa aur kyu kar rhi ho aisa...


Tejaswini- Main nhi chaahti jo mere saath hua vo usske saath ho... uski family b tumhri vjh se suffer kare... do you get that... (Turning her face...)...


Gautam(crying...)- Maa... Mujhe bhi utna hi dukh hai jitna ki aapko hua hai dad ke jaane ka... aap smjhti kyu nhi ho... Maine aisa kya kar diya...


Tejaswini(raising her hand)- Bas Gautam! Main Bahas nhi krna chaahti Tum bas usse dur rehna...


Gautam(breaking down)- Thik hai... Maa Jaisa aap chaaho kar lo apni marzii... [He furiously left from there...]



Precap:- Interrogation of prakash and Gautam's avoidance... :(




Part 12


Part 14


Hi guys i hope you like this update too. Please guys comment and tell me how you feel about this story in 4-3 lines i will be highly obliged. specially the persons who likes my story too... Please comment i like people who give reviews even if you dont like anything you can tell me that too...


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dhruvika1991



Thanks for reading it and glad you liked it

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Any chances of update dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shhh its shika but my mobile changed it to shikawath ufff sry my mistake
Sry again
Edited by SANJANA9167 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n note! waiting 4 update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Now geet knows the truth
Jeyraj n her father college friends
She want to go to India
Kabir denied but Nalini accept
But her dad ask her don't tell her n family identity

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Posted: 9 years ago
After MOnth geet meet tejswani in court
She talk to her want help in her husband case
She invite her house
Geet appeared in court
She meet Gotham n Maan talk to both
Nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Geet want started the case so she won't meet Maan went to police station maan told place meet night
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Posted: 9 years ago
Maaneet meet n talking to about case n families

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