LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 43

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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely update geet interrogated the chai wala parkash told he wasnt the one he is hiding something and geet will find out the chai wala told he had gone to his village for couple of months so its possible soemone must have come instaed of him geet will find out the truth geet wanted to meet gautam but gautam was helpless as he had promised his mom
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Posted: 8 years ago


Hello


I am sorry i was away from my home so apologies for my late wishes...



Happy New Year to my Readers who has followed this story and appreciated me for my work till now... Wish they had a prosperous new year ahead...






With regards
IlaTanwar
Edited by IlaTanwar - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank You Note


Hi

Thanks for liking my previous part. I am obliged who have been commenting on my this story for a while. Its been my priveldge you are following... Specially Khwaishfan to appreciate me and constantly telling about her review... and others too maansee... Nakh and neasya whoever comment...



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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 16



Mayank- Ok Sir! But Sir Geet Madam se jhuth bolna... Kya sahi hai... Aap mil lete unse...


Gautam- Nhi.. Kuch sawaalonka koi jwaab nhi hai Mayank better hoga tum usse ghr drop krne jao bas... Muje koi argument nhi chaahiye...


Mayank- Ok Sir (Feeling hopeless)...


[Mayank dropped Geet at home. Tejaswini was not at house. she was gone to grocery store for a while. She enters the house by opening with the spare keys.]


Geet(Self Talk)- Oh Aunty Ghar par nhi hai...(After sometimes) Yeh kya hai... Number... F-bar ka... F- bar kya hai... Shayad koi bar hai... May be Gautam Bhai jaante ho... Strange Bhai k aise showk... interesting let's see...


[She was looking at the desk of ACP Sir and he found a number F-Bar. She was inquisitve]


Let's Talk to Maan and this time Bhai has to come in his house... May be Aunty will understand and she will let him in seeing he is helping me in case...


[She dialled Maan's phone...]


Geet- Hello Mr Maan


Maan- Hello Miiisss... Geet! (Stressed on Miss deliberately to tease her)... Kya kar rhi ho?


Geet(frowns)- Kuch nhi aap abhi kya kar rhe hain?


[Ignore his teasing knowing it will just lead to useless banter...]


Maan(Smiles knowing her ignorance)- Well I am in a outside at the crime scene for solving the case... Do you need any help?


Geet- Haan bas I wanted to meet regarding the case. When you will be free?


Maan- Hmmm... I will be free at 7... Then we can meet...


Geet(Feeling happy)- Ok... Then can you pick up Gautam and come at my house i will wait here...


Maan- Ok... I will pick him and will come there...


Geet- and don't tell Gautam that you are taking him to his house otherwise he will not come...


Maan- Ok Madam Jaisa aap kahein.. (Laughs a little)


Geet(rolls her eyes)- Bye...


Maan(smiles)- Ok Bye then...


[Maan calls Gautam at 6 pm]


Maan- Hello Gautam!


Gautam- Haan Maan! bolo Kuch kaam tha...


Maan- Muje nhi Geet ko hai and I am picking you from your office so be ready... Ok...


Gautam(feeling weird)- Ohk... Do one thing... Just tell me where we have to meet i will reach there...


Maan- Nope i am on my way and you just wait there and wind up your work...


Gautam(Defeated by his denial)- Ok


[Maan reached there.]


Maan- Hello Gautam!


Gautam- Hello... Ok... where are we going?


Maan(rolled his eyes)- Chalo toh sahi...


[They left from office...]


Gautam(Feeling fruatrated)- Tum btaoge hum kha jaa rhe hain?


Maan- Tumhe apne aap pata chal jaayega...


Gautam(irritatingly)- Maan Kya hai yeh sab...


Maan- Nothing... Just following Geet's orders... She told me you have a tendency of eloping so she told me to make sure you are coming with me without any fuss...


Gautam(shook his head seeing the explaination of Maan and looked at front dejectedly)- Geet and you God... Kahan Fas gya main... pata nhi kya chal rha hai tum dono k dimaag mein...


Maan(Laughs)- God knows ask her jab miloge tum usse... lo aa gya humaara destination point...


Gautam- Oh... No...


[He was shocked as he doesn't realise where he was going and feeling a lump in his throat... He wasn't able to say...]


Maan! I am not coming you go and tell her i was stuck with the work... and you will tell me about what she want to tell ok...


Maan- Oh Common Gautam ab yha tak aa gye ho toh undar b aa jao... It's not a big deal...


Gautam(feeling sad)- I can't Please Maan Please tum toh smjho...


Maan(feeling his emotion)- Geet k liye aa jaao... Aur vaise b tumhe pata hai she will not tell anything without you...


Gautam- Ok...


[They enter the house]


Geet- Hiii... Mr. Maan and Gautam (Feeling happy seeing Gautam)... Come inside... Aunty ghar par nhi hai... she will come after a while... Main kuch laati hun...


[She brings coffee for them and some snacks. She settled herself opposite them...]


Maan- So, Kya btana chaahti thi tum...


[Gautam knowing all the details as he had heard himself kept silence and let Geet tell everything...]


Geet- Yahi ki that prakash told everything what happened in interrogation with prakash and i told Mayank to tell prakash to make the sketch of him... This is very suspicious i wonder who could that be...


Maan(deep thinking...)- Hmmm... Interesting bas ek baar sketch aa jaaye haath mein toh we can find the culprit easily...


Geet- Yeah... Finally we had reached at some point hope for the best...(smiles)


Gautam(feeling uncomfortable)- aaah... (hesitated for a while...) Geet is that the thing you want to share... that's great I will ask Mayank whether Prakash has cooperated or not... Ok... I have to leave now i had a work at my room...


Geet- Gautam! Aap abhi abhi yhan aaye ho aur abhi jaane ki baat todhi der ruk jaao please...


[She pleaded knowing why Gautam wants to leave]...


Gautam(feeling helpless)- Ok...


Geet(remembered about something)- Muje yaad aaya Gautam aap F- bar jaate ho i mean for partying or anything...


[Maan started laughing like manic. Geet felt amused why Maan was laughing like this and Gautam kept glaring at his behavior knowing about what he is thinking...] ...


Mr. Maan aap aise kyu hans rhe hain maine kuch galat keh diya kya? (asked feeling weird...)


Maan(composing himself)- Rehne do Geet! yeh toh joke ho gya Gautam aur F-Bar jaayenge


[Gautam was shooting daggers at him for making fun of him...]


Sorry!


[Saying sorry to Gautam]...


Haan raid maarni ho toh jarur jaa skta hai...


Gautam(still glaring)- Aisi koi baat nhi hai... I don't like such places at all... but why are you asking this...


Geet(smiles)- Voh ACP Sir ke desk pe F-bar ka number mila tha muje... i thought ACP sir doesn't have this kind of taste and I thought may be you... It's quite strange...


[She gave it to Gautam...]


Gautam- Hmm... I don't know i haven't raided and i have never heard dad had raided that bar before... Hmm... May be we should go there... and look but firstly we have to take the sketch that is the main clue here...


[He was thinking about the raid he and his father had talked about...]


Geet- and kal meri chutti...


Maan(Frowns)- Kyu?


[He felt disapppointed as she will not b working and he will not be able to meet her... Gautam looked at him suspiciously... Maan saw Gautam's stare and composed and recitfy his mistake...]


Woh I mean i thought she will be also working on the case she is the main person... that's why... (smiles...)


Geet- Bas kal ghumne ka plan hai Soch rhi hun Mumbai darshan kar lun...


Gautam(smiles at her antic)- Ok... Main dekhta hun kal hi prakash sketch bna kar de de... fir F-bar jaake dekhenge ki kuch milta hai ki nhi...


Maan(disappointed)- Yeah...







Precap:- Tejaswini's Outbursts and Gautam's hurt... :(




Part 15


Teaser at page 70



Hi guys i hope you like this update too. Please guys comment and tell me how you feel about this story in 4-3 lines i will be highly obliged. specially the persons who likes my story too... Please comment i like people who give reviews even if you dont like anything you can tell me that too...


With Regards
Dhruvika


Edited by IlaTanwar - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update 👍🏼
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
Tks fr the update yaar.. Geet cl maan to bring Gautham along to their house without his knowledge.. She share her findings with them.. Happy that they hv some leads..maan is falling for geet.. Can't wait for next part..
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Posted: 8 years ago
geet called maan to come with gautam
gautam refused to enter his house
but maan made him enter
geet asks him about bar
n gautam thought to look after it
maan is sad thinking he wont be able to see geet
lolz..he in love with her
nice part
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update Gautam was bound by his promise geet found a no and called maan who was more than glad to answer her he teased her geet wanted to meet him and Gautam but told him not to tell Gautam he is taking him his home Gautam didn't wanted to go but had no choice geet updated them abt case they r eagerly waiting for sketch geet told about f bar maan laughed as Gautam hated bar they decided to investigate the place but geet not coming maan sad he is falling for her
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice part dear..
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
NICE update

I feel it's related to geet aunt
Y she always scold gautum when he is not atfault
Maan feeling sad that geet will not come
Precap waiting for it

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