LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 41

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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update..
waiting for next update..
thank u for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Tejaswini not talking to gautam...
Mayank called geet to ps to interrogate Prakash
Geet disappointed that gautam is not there
Prakash sweating when geet said he must have mixed drugs in chai
Will the chaiwala help in finding the truth
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update
Hope geet jaldi sach ka pata laga legi

Precap ... interesting


Lets see what u have stroed in thier future

Plz becregular here

Loving this story wants to read more n more
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome story dear loved it...
completely mystery with love na loving it...
lagta hai that parkash did all this under some pressure and may later help geet and team for solving the matter...
will be waiting for the next part dear please update soon and thank you ver much for the pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello


Thanks for Liking and commenting on previous part i will be highly obliged if you comment again...


With Regards
Dhruvika
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 15



Prakash- Haan...


Geet- Mayank!... Jara ACP Sir k office k bahar jo Chai vaala thella lgaata hai usse bulaake laana... (Geet ordered Mayank to bring the Chai vaala...)


Mayank- Ok Madam! Main abhi bolta hun usse laane ko...


[Mayank told Hawaldaar Ramesh to bring the chai vaala...]


[After sometime Ramesh brought Chai vaala ininterrogation room...]


Geet- Is he the one?


Prakash- Nhi... He was not the person who gave it... (After seeing him...)


Geet- Dhyan se dekho... Yeh hi hoga...


Prakash- Nhi yeh nahi hain... voh koi aur tha... (Doesn't meeting her eyes...)


Geet- Isse das saal ho gye hain yahin kaam krte huye... Tum jhuth mat bolo... (making a stern face...)


Prakash- Haan muje pata hai ki yeh 10 saal se yhan kaam kar rha hain magar yeh vo nhi hai... (gives a curt reply)


Geet(Thinking)- Hmmm...[After sometimes, They take Prakash to his cell...]


Mayank(getting serious and confused)- I think someone is telling a lie... Prakash's behavior is really suspicous Madam...


Geet(Thinking)- Hmmm... (Self Talk) I think there is something left... what but prakash jo keh rha hai voh shayad aadha sach hai aur aadha jhuth... It's too complicated...


Chai Vaala- Mam Sahaab! (interrupting her)


Geet- Haan Bolo Kya baat hai...


Chai Vaala- Mam Sahaab! Jab ye sab hua tab main gaon tha infact mujhe gye huye 3-4 mahine huye the gye huye... bas 2-4 din huye hain yaha aaye huye...


Geet- Mtlb ki tum yha nhi the... (surprised by the revelation...)


Mayank (stunned and ask him again)- Tum sach keh rhe ho??


Chai vaala- Haan Sahab! Ek dum sach bol rha hun... Apne dhande ki kasam... ACP Sir sach mein kaafi ache insaan hai unhone meri kaafi help ki hai... Meri beti ki shaadi mein itni madad ki hai yha tak ki unki vjh se ldke vaalon ne dahej b nhi maanga aur... mere bete ki fees b vhi dete hain... Main kyu jhuth bolunga...


Geet- Theekh hai... (Thinking...) Tum ab jaa skte ho agr kuch puchna hoga toh bula lenge...


Mayank- Suno! Tumne apni jagah kisiko rkha tha kya buisness chalaane ko...


Chai vaala- Nhi sahaab! Maine kisiko nhi rkha tha agr mere peeche koi aaya hoga toh main nhi jaanta sahaab...


Mayank- Theekh hai tum jaa skte ho...


Chai vaala- Theekh hai sahaab... [He left from there...]


Geet- Mayank! Prakash se baat krke bolna ki voh sketch bnaake de chai vaale ka jisne chai di thi...


Mayank- Ji Madam...


Geet- Ok Main chalti hun...


Mayank- Main chod deta hun apko...


Geet(smiles)- No, It's ok main chali jaungi...


Mayank- Madam! Gautam sir ke order hai ki aapko drop krne ka Main chlta hun aapke saath...


Geet- Geet aap muje Geet bula skte ho madam ajeeb lgta hai...


Mayank- Ok...


Geet- Ummhh... Aapke Gautam sir kab tak aayenge...


Mayank- Sir... Ummmh... Sir pta nhi... kuch bta kar nhi gye... shayad aate hi honge... (feeling confused what to say)...


Geet(smiles)- Ok Main unka wait krti hun... unse milke hi jaungi... aur vaise bhi unhe btana toh padega naah isske baare mein...


Mayank- Ahhh... Ohk... (getting Tensed)... Geet Main cabin mein jaata hun ik case hai Sir ne bola tha dekhne ko... main yhi hun agar sir aayenge toh aa jaunga... Ok... (Geet nodded and He left from there)...


Mayank- Sir...


[He went to Gautam's cabin... to tell about the case and her decision...]


Gautam- Haan Mayank kya baat hai... maine dekha jo prakash ne kaha aur chai vaale ne kuch kaha kya... baad mein...


Mayank- Yes sir... Chai vaala 3-4 mahine ki chutti pe tha aur usne apni jgh kisiko b nhi rkha... main prakash se sketch bnane ko bola hai voh jab bnke aayega tbhi pata chalega aakhir hua kya tha...


Gautam- hmmm... Theekh hai chalo wait krte hain aakhir yeh dusra chai vaala kaun hai... aur Geet chali gyi kya tumne usse akele jaane diya... maine bola tha usse akele jaane mat dena...


[Listening to Mayank and seeing Mayank standing asked about geet. He was feeling protective...]


Mayank- Sir! I tolde her that i will drop her but she is insisting on waiting for you sir she wants to meet you before leaving from here...


Gautam- Why didn't you tell i will be late...


Mayank- I tried sir but she was adamant... she waiting outside in waiting room sir...


Gautam- Ok Main usse baat krta hun... [He calls her]


Gautam- Hello Geet!


Geet- Bhai aap kaha ho? muje aapse baat krni hai...


Gautam- Geet! Main abhi bahar hun kaamke silsile mein toh mujhe kaafi der ho jaayegi...Tum kaha ho abhi?


Geet- Bhai mein aapka wait kar rhi hun apke office mein... aapse baat krke hi jaungi...


Geet- But bhai.. main milna chaahti hun...


Gautam(Try to make her understand)- Mujhe time lag jaayega... Mayank hai voh muje details de dega... aur fir hum mil bi lenge jab main free hunga tab discuss kar lenge ok... but aaj nhi ho skta Geet...


Geet(Disappointed)- Ok Bye We will meet some other day...


Gautam- Bye Geet... (After putting the call he was feeling helpless... he was just a one room away from her and he can't meet her... he closes his eyes and composed himself...) Mayank! Go and just drop her safely...


Mayank- Ok Sir! But Sir Geet Madam se jhuth bolna... Kya sahi hai... Aap mil lete unse...


Gautam- Nhi.. Kuch sawaalonka koi jwaab nhi hai Mayank better hoga tum usse ghr drop krne jao bas... Muje koi argument nhi chaahiye...


Mayank- Ok Sir (Feeling hopeless)...





Precap:- Gautam at his own house... :)






Part 14

Part 16



Hi guys i hope you like this update too. Please guys comment and tell me how you feel about this story in 4-3 lines i will be highly obliged. specially the persons who likes my story too... Please comment i like people who give reviews even if you dont like anything you can tell me that too...


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Dhruvika


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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice part
Geet trying ti slove the case

Hope jaldi slove kar le

Missed maan here
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update..
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Y gautham is avoiding geet

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